Besbab to na tha

[shrdh]

Originally posted by bhavnayen
kyon khwabo me aana chhod diya tumne kya khata hui mujhse kyon dil bahlana chhod diya tumne,,
aadhi raat ke sannate me ,
khwabon ka ana jana hai,
ahat si hoti mere dil me ,,
unka jaha thikana hai,,
kaha nahi tumse kuchh bhi,
kya bhul hui mujhse kahane me,,
kyon khwabon me ana chhod diya tumne,,,,,



BHAYNAYEN

bhavnayen kya naam hai aapka aapko yaha dekhkar bhaut kushi hui

aapke is sher ne hamari si kavita mai ronak laa di

aane k liye sukriya
shrdh

[shrdh]

Originally posted by surbhi_lov1
hi my dear shrdh
bahut hi khub likha hai muje achha laga likhti rahna
bye tc

sweet surbhi
aap aayi hume behad kushi hui aise hi aap aati rahengi si umeed ke saath

with love
shrdh

[shrdh]

Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Subhe uthte hi bhule geet gungunana besbab to na tha
Dil ka unhi rahon par bhatak aana besbab to na tha

tum mujhe chhup chhup kar dekh rahe the.
Mera aaine mai dekh sharmana besbab to na tha

Teri tasveer bas gayi hai in aankho main
Har shay mai tera najar aana besbab to na tha

Waaaaaaaahhh....

Sharaddha,

Humesha ki tarah hi khoobsurat bayaani hai... accha laga tumhe ghazal ke andaaz me likhta huwa dekh...sabhi aashaar khoob thhe... magar oopar waale kucch khaas lage.... aise hi likhti raho... do tc

pulkil tumhe jab bhi apni kisi kalam par dekha hai apni hi rachna ko fir se padha hai
tumhari taarfi se ek achha sa ehsas hamesha raha hai
thnx for being with me

shrdh

[GKS]

Aadaab Shrdhaa ji,
aaj jab mai aap logo ko doobaara padh raha hun to aapki yeh kavita ko mai peeche nahi chorna chaahta.
aakhir aapki is kavita ki yaad aana "besabab to na tha" bahut si yaadon ko yaad dilaaya hai aapke in shabdo ne.ek baar fir yaadon ke galiyaaron se guzar rahaa hun aaj.

[shrdh]

guru di kahte kahte ji par aa ye theek hai na sab

hehehehe tum na dadi kahe dena but ji mat lagana bhaut bahir hai yaar

thnx for going through again

love u
shrdh