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Dil Ki Hasratein -
22nd June 2003, 10:57 PM
Aaj apni arzoo pesh e khidmat hai
aaj hum apne dil ka haal sunaane baithe hain kya kahen ke kitni mushkil se arzoo dabaaye baithe hain unke na milne ke gum ne mujhe kuch is kadar badal diya ke apno se bhi hum apna chehra chupaaye baithe hain barbaadiyon ke apne kisse kya kahen kisise raakh ke dher mein sholon ko dabaaye baithe hain unko paane ki arzoo mein sari zindagi karte rahe intezaar Na maloom tha ke khuda unhe kisi aur ke liye bana baithe hain maang lenge khuda se unko ya cheen lenge unhe bus dil mein yehi zid ab to lagaaye baithe hain saari kaaynath bhi milkar hamara milan nahi rok sakti yeh hasrat yeh zid yeh junoon dil mein chupaaye baithe hain ********************* PYAASA************************ ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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22nd June 2003, 11:38 PM
pyasaji,
yah kya? itni narazgi? aapki dil ki hasratae... dar hai kahi aapko hi dukh na de... plz apna khayaal rakhiyae |
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23rd June 2003, 01:19 AM
Bhai,
aapke dard ko dekh kar meraa sar jhuk gayaa. behtareeN lafzoN ke zariye aapne dil-e-jazbaa beyaan kiyaa hai, aur meraa yakeeN maaniiye, har shab'd aapkaa pasand aayaa! "unko paane ki arzoo mein sari zindagi karte rahe intezaar Na maloom tha ke khuda unhe kisi aur ke liye bana baithe hain" «-- aaj tak, bahot hii kam rachnaaoN ko paD kar aaNkh nam huii hai, par is sher ne maa-kasam palkeN bhiigaa dii! sach meiN yaar, naa jaane kyooN aise khel woh kheltaa hai, aur kyooN hum hii har waqt haarte haiN. "maang lenge khuda se unko ya cheen lenge unhe bus dil mein yehi zid ab to lagaaye baithe hain" «-- kyaa baat hai bhai! himmat ko isii taraH jagaa ke rakhiiye.. dard baaNTne meiN, aur mehfil sajaane meiN aap kaamyaab raheN, aapke saath merii yeh shubkaamnaayeN haiN! taariif ke saath, aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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Shukriyaa -
23rd June 2003, 10:23 AM
MEENA JI,
Shukriyaa aapke reply ke liye aur haan mein naraaz bilkul bhi nahi hun aur haan agar koi dukh mujhe de de to kya kar sakta hun haina fir haina .Aur haan apna khayaal mein kya rakhunga dard hi hai jo ab mera khayaal rakh sakta hai dard ke sahaare hi jee rahe hain khair.......... ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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23rd June 2003, 12:19 PM
Wah! Wah! Wah!
Pyaasa ji, kamaal ki ghazal likhi hai aapne! Har ek sher dil ke kareeb paya hai humne.. lafzon ka bohat khoob istemaal kiya hai aapne, jazbaat bakhoobi bayaan kiye hain! Kaunse sher ki tareef karein, samajhh na aaye, kyonki har sher behad khubsoorat hai.. bas, yahi kahenge ki behad pasand aayi apki ye ghazal.. Likhne ka shukria!  |
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23rd June 2003, 12:40 PM
Banno ji,
The concept is nice, especially the 2nd & 3rd sher are to the cord. Carry on with your good work. Regards |
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23rd June 2003, 01:23 PM
kya baat hai....aapki ye jidd,junoon, hasrat, hosla aur bagavat!!!!! A best recipe for being a best "deewana"
 bahot bahot bahot hi khub kalam hai aapka... starting me jitni bebasi dikhayi de rahi hai....kalam aage badhte badhte aapka hosla aur mohabbat ko pane ki "pyaas" bhi utni hi bhadti dikhayi re rahi hai...it is too good. Keep writing like this -sanam (have a limca) jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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Shukriyaa -
23rd June 2003, 02:51 PM
AMAN JI,
Bahot bahot shukriyaa jo aapne is post par nazar daali aur reply diya . Hum dil se aapka shukriyaa adaa karte hain. Ghazal padh kar aapki palkein bheeg gayi hmmmmmmmmm DIL KO TUTNA THA TUT CHUKA MOHABBAT TO EK BAHANA THA KISISKE SAATH DIL KI DUNIYA BASAI THI BICHHDE TO SAAMEN ZAALIM ZAMANA THA KUCH AJEEB SA KISSA HAI IS CHAMAN KA BAHAAR AAYI TO SAATH PHOOLON KA JANAAAZA THA ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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bahot ache -
23rd June 2003, 04:06 PM
BAHOT HI ACHA LIKHA HAI.
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Shukriyaa -
23rd June 2003, 11:08 PM
AFSHAN JI,
Shukriyaa aapka jo aapne hamare dard ko padhkar reply diya aur hamare dard ki tareef ki waise yeh ghazal nahi hai shaayad dil ki awaaz kahunga mein isko. Aur mein jab bhi kuch likhta hun to mujhe hoshs nahi rehta hai ke kya likh raha hun bus likh deta hun .Khair koi baat nahi jaane bhi do yeh baatein ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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23rd June 2003, 11:11 PM
ARNAB JI,
Thanks for replying . ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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29th June 2003, 06:46 PM
MITAJI ,
Thanks for replying to my post and thanks for liking it ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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29th June 2003, 08:30 PM
waa pyaasa ji waw
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Thanks -
29th June 2003, 08:41 PM
DIL SE SHIKAST JI,
I mean SANAM JI shukriyaa jo aapne hamari post par nazar daali aur reply bhi diya chaliye hamari zid junoon hasrat hausla aur baghaawat best recipe for a DEEWANA hi sahi lekin koi naam to mila humein DEEWANA to hun hi mein AASHIQ jo thehre hum hehehehehehe aur chhote hi sahi lekin shayar to hain hum bus likh lete hain jo dil mein hasrat hoti hai woh haina ? Aur haan shuru mein bebeasi hoti hai aur baad mein hausla badhta hi jaata hai DEEWANE ka apni mohabbat ko paane ke liye bebasi aur deewangi aur SHAYRI is the best recipe for a perfect MAJNU kyun theek kaha na maine ? Apne pyaar ko paane ki pyaas kise nahi hoti kyunki HAR KISIKO NAHI MILTA YAHAN PYAAR ZINDAGI MEIN KHUSH NASEEB HAI WOH JINKO HAI MILI YEH BAHAR ZINDAGI MEIN And thanks for LIMCA heheheheheheheehe ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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bahut dard hai dost.. |
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bahut dard hai dost.. -
29th June 2003, 11:03 PM
Vah Pyaasa ji,
Vah.. Bahut khoob likha aapne.. "unko paane ki arzoo mein sari zindagi karte rahe intezaar Na maloom tha ke khuda unhe kisi aur ke liye bana baithe hain" Vaah! bahut dard hai aapki is nazm mein.. aur bahut hi lajawaab likhi hai yeh aapne.. Keep up the good work.. "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Dil Ki Hasratein. -
30th June 2003, 02:03 AM
Hello, I hope you are well. I am new here.
Aapka Sher parke aisa laga ke meri dilki halat aap beyan kar rehe hein. I just felt that. It's really wonderful. Would you please tell me when is your birthday? Only month & date will do. I really wanted to know if you please let me? I will be greatful. Mine is 4th November. Thanks. Take care. God bless. Best regards, Shimul. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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1st July 2003, 01:24 AM
SACHIN JI,
Thanks reply dene ke liye ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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THANKS -
1st July 2003, 11:03 PM
PRIYAJI,
shukriyaa jo aapne hamari ghazal par nazar daali aur reply bhi diya . ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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THANKS -
3rd July 2003, 03:29 PM
SHIMUL JI,
Thanks SHIMUL ji for liking and replying to my ghazal and ya u wanted to know my birth date is on 27th JULY ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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