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Dhoonda tumhein har bahaar mein, sehra mein ... Milein aakhirkaar kisi ki bad duaa me
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Post Dhoonda tumhein har bahaar mein, sehra mein ... Milein aakhirkaar kisi ki bad duaa me - 16th September 2004, 08:55 PM

Dhoonda tumhein har bahaar mein, sehraa mein
Milein aakhirkaar kisi ki bad-duaa mein

Dhoowa uth raha hai naa jaane kyun
Shayad jala aur bhi koi tumhare jafa mein

[Jafa = zulm/situm/cruelity]

Shama jal jal ke dekhti apni maanda safar
Intizaar karoge hone kaa gor jahaan mein

[Shama = candle] [Maanda = remaining] [Gor = dafan/2 b burried in soil]

Aaj to lahoo-e-mashooq se chuqur tumhari shauhrat
Dooboge khud hi apni banaayi duniyaa mein

[Lahoo-e-Mashooq = lovers' blood] [Chuqur = gehra/deep]

Nahin hoga 'Abdullah' tum se waabasta ab
Dhoond raha hoon apna ashk bhi tumhare darya mein

...Abdullah...


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17th September 2004, 02:52 PM

Hi Abdulla Ji

Bohot hi pyari nazm pesh ki hai aapney. Humari daad qaboor karey itni umda nazm kay liye


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very nice gazal... buhut umda...! keep sharing....

khush rahyey...


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18th September 2004, 01:07 PM

Hii candyboy & ManPaki
how r u? I hope fine....
well 1st of all thanks alot for reading the post....
& app ko yeh pasand aayi,,, made me v happy...
aap ka bahut shukriya for the appreciation.


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Re: Dhoonda tumhein har bahaar mein, sehra mein ... Milein aakhirkaar kisi ki bad duaa me - 9th November 2004, 05:54 AM

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Dhoonda tumhein har bahaar mein, sehraa mein
Milein aakhirkaar kisi ki bad-duaa mein

Dhoowa uth raha hai naa jaane kyun
Shayad jala aur bhi koi tumhare jafa mein

[Jafa = zulm/situm/cruelity]

Shama jal jal ke dekhti apni maanda safar
Intizaar karoge hone kaa gor jahaan mein

[Shama = candle] [Maanda = remaining] [Gor = dafan/2 b burried in soil]

Aaj to lahoo-e-mashooq se chuqur tumhari shauhrat
Dooboge khud hi apni banaayi duniyaa mein

[Lahoo-e-Mashooq = lovers' blood] [Chuqur = gehra/deep]

Nahin hoga 'Abdullah' tum se waabasta ab
Dhoond raha hoon apna ashk bhi tumhare darya mein

...Abdullah...
Very nice...... daad kuboul kijiye


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9th November 2004, 09:46 AM

Abdullah ji....

daad kabool farmaye is naacheejh ki......

Dhoonda tumhein har bahaar mein, sehraa mein
Milein aakhirkaar kisi ki bad-duaa mein

Dhoowa uth raha hai naa jaane kyun
Shayad jala aur bhi koi tumhare jafa mein

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9th November 2004, 06:24 PM

Bahoot umda likha hai...

Koyi lafz nahihaijo iss qalam kipuri taareef kar sake..

Daad kabul kijiye..

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30th November 2004, 12:40 AM

Aap sab ko yeh pasand aayi ,,,, mujhe bahut khushi hai....... & bahut bahut shukriya appreciation ka...


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