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Shayad Mein Teri Zaat Mein Shamil Nahi Raha - 4th June 2008, 07:44 PM

Aslam u Alaikum ,

Dosto , aik or dil se aye awaz ko likh ker laya hon ..................dua kerta hon app ko passand aye


shayad mein teri zaat mein shamil nahi raha
dil mein khaloos ankh mein kajal nahi raha

chup chap aa ker dekh to berpa qayamtien
baazi-e-ishq se mujhy kuch hasil nahi raha

usne andheri rat ki taqdeer bakhsh di
sorij hamary mad-e-muqabil nahi raha

derya bhi saath saath hai paani ki piyas bhi
jeeny ka ab yakeen jo kamil nahi raha

sochon ke imtehan mein "Mujeeb" hum rahy
yeh sar to reh gya koi qatil nahi raha


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4th June 2008, 08:02 PM

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Aslam u Alaikum ,

Dosto , aik or dil se aye awaz ko likh ker laya hon ..................dua kerta hon app ko passand aye


shayad mein teri zaat mein shamil nahi raha
dil mein khaloos ankh mein kajal nahi raha

chup chap aa ker dekh to berpa qayamtien
baazi-e-ishq se mujhy kuch hasil nahi raha

usne andheri rat ki taqdeer bakhsh di
sorij hamary mad-e-muqabil nahi raha

derya bhi saath saath hai paani ki piyas bhi
jeeny ka ab yakeen jo kamil nahi raha

sochon ke imtehan mein "Mujeeb" hum rahy
yeh sar to reh gya koi qatil nahi raha


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Bhai Jab bhi likhte ho Gazab hi likhte ho...

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Mann mein tujhe Basae Baitha HooN
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Aslam u Alaikum ,

Dosto , aik or dil se aye awaz ko likh ker laya hon ..................dua kerta hon app ko passand aye


shayad mein teri zaat mein shamil nahi raha
dil mein khaloos ankh mein kajal nahi raha

chup chap aa ker dekh to berpa qayamtien
baazi-e-ishq se mujhy kuch hasil nahi raha

usne andheri rat ki taqdeer bakhsh di
sorij hamary mad-e-muqabil nahi raha

derya bhi saath saath hai paani ki piyas bhi
jeeny ka ab yakeen jo kamil nahi raha

sochon ke imtehan mein "Mujeeb" hum rahy
yeh sar to reh gya koi qatil nahi raha


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sochon ke imtehan mein "Mujeeb" hum rahy
yeh sar to reh gya koi qatil nahi raha
Mujeeb sahab Assalam-o-Alaykum janaab ek baar phir baht khobsoorat kalaam se aapne mehfil ko roshan kiya hai aapki is gazal ka ek ek sher mujhe khud apne pe likha hua laga dil ko chu gaya likha aapka ese hi likhtey rahiye aur hamesha khush rahiye.....Ameen
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wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
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5th June 2008, 01:40 PM

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Aslam u Alaikum ,

Dosto , aik or dil se aye awaz ko likh ker laya hon ..................dua kerta hon app ko passand aye


shayad mein teri zaat mein shamil nahi raha
dil mein khaloos ankh mein kajal nahi raha

chup chap aa ker dekh to berpa qayamtien
baazi-e-ishq se mujhy kuch hasil nahi raha

usne andheri rat ki taqdeer bakhsh di
sorij hamary mad-e-muqabil nahi raha

derya bhi saath saath hai paani ki piyas bhi
jeeny ka ab yakeen jo kamil nahi raha

sochon ke imtehan mein "Mujeeb" hum rahy
yeh sar to reh gya koi qatil nahi raha


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6th July 2008, 12:09 AM

sochon ke imtehan mein "Mujeeb" hum rahy
yeh sar to reh gya koi qatil nahi raha

salaam aaj tak waqt ki masrufiyat ki wajah se aap ke kalaam par nazar nahi daali
thi lekin ab hum aap ke har kalaam par gaur karenge kyunki

inmein bahot kuch hai jis se humein bhi seekhne ko milega
main aapko apni khaami batata hoon
main jab bhi kuch likhta hoon to bahot kam sochta hoon
bahot kam gaur karta hoon 5 se 7 min mein main apni gazal poori karta hoon

lekin aap ko pad kar lagta hai ki aap in sheron ko apna din apni raatein saunp chuke ho
aap ko pad kar ek baat to zaahir hoti aisa kahin mehsoos nahi hota hai ki aap ne koi bhi sher mechanically likha ho
ek ek lafz dil ki sada lagta hai
ho sake to mujhe maaf karna kyunki zara waqt ki kami ki wajah se main ne aap ke kalaam par gaur nahi kiya
lekin aaj se ek wada jab bhi hum SDC visit karenge to sab se pehle aap ke naksh ko dhoodenge

shukriya itne behtar kalamon ke liye
aaj se hum acche dost hue


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sochon ke imtehan mein "Mujeeb" hum rahy
yeh sar to reh gya koi qatil nahi raha

salaam aaj tak waqt ki masrufiyat ki wajah se aap ke kalaam par nazar nahi daali
thi lekin ab hum aap ke har kalaam par gaur karenge kyunki

inmein bahot kuch hai jis se humein bhi seekhne ko milega
main aapko apni khaami batata hoon
main jab bhi kuch likhta hoon to bahot kam sochta hoon
bahot kam gaur karta hoon 5 se 7 min mein main apni gazal poori karta hoon

lekin aap ko pad kar lagta hai ki aap in sheron ko apna din apni raatein saunp chuke ho
aap ko pad kar ek baat to zaahir hoti aisa kahin mehsoos nahi hota hai ki aap ne koi bhi sher mechanically likha ho
ek ek lafz dil ki sada lagta hai
ho sake to mujhe maaf karna kyunki zara waqt ki kami ki wajah se main ne aap ke kalaam par gaur nahi kiya
lekin aaj se ek wada jab bhi hum SDC visit karenge to sab se pehle aap ke naksh ko dhoodenge

shukriya itne behtar kalamon ke liye
aaj se hum acche dost hue

appki is innayat ne mera likhna aur bhi khushnuma bana diya ... yakeen maaniye appke is jawab ne mera dil jeet liya ... app jese her pedhne waala ho to shayad ... likhne waale kabhi rok hi na paaien khud ko ...

app ki tareef ne mujhe baagh baagh ker diya ...

mujhe meri auqaat se bhi zyada alfazo se nawaza hai aapne , behad shukriya appka


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8th July 2008, 04:30 PM

janaab mujeeb saheb !

bahut hi behtareen ghazal chaspa ki yahaN aapne !

isse nazar karte waQt jane kyuN laga jaise pehle bhi mukhatib ho chuka huN !
khair
derya bhi saath saath hai paani ki piyas bhi
jeeny ka ab yakeen jo kamil nahi raha

sochon ke imtehan mein "Mujeeb" hum rahy
yeh sar to reh gya koi qatil nahi raha

inn ashaaroN ne dil me kuch khaas jagah bana li!
tareef Qabool ho!


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