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21st June 2011, 06:40 AM
Those who promise.. I've found many, Those who last... I've found few ! Just as all.. the droplets on leaves, Are not always ...the droplets of dew! Trust is a piece of a fragile glass, Once shattered ,it's never the same! Love is a bonding of inseparable souls, No way its akin, to playing a game! So hold on for a moment before you commit, As to rush of emotions you must never submit! Get out of yourself and stand aside, Keep your feet on the ground before you decide! Is the facade in front, IS the face behind, You must have the answer, to this question in mind! Always beware.. that life can be unkind, Never give the excuse... that.. love ..is blind! |
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9th July 2011, 06:17 PM
Those who promise.. I've found many,
Those who last... I've found few ! Just as all.. the droplets on leaves, Are not always ...the droplets of dew! wow....damn good stuff mate....  they say an empty belly and a wounded hearts are the crucibles of poetry.... empty belly...unh unh...! shall i then assume ...enigma... sat |
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6th September 2011, 01:15 PM
That's damn good.. and great thoughts you have.. above that, you know to weave those thoughts into a sparkling poem. Good one
Cheers! ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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13th October 2011, 05:25 PM
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I am humbled by your kind words. I do not believe either of the two assumptions apply ...apply ...thankfully! Thanks Once Again! Khush Rahein! Abaad Rahein! |
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13th October 2011, 05:31 PM
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KhushAamDeed! I am so humbled by your kind words. I thank You once again both for your visit as well as your kind words! You are everwelcome here! Khush Rahein! Abaad Rahein! |
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28th October 2011, 11:40 PM
beautiful....loved the flow of emotion...
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