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1st April 2016, 12:40 PM
logon tumhaara saath yahin tak naseeb thaa,
har shay ne mujhe door kiyaa jo kareeb thaa.
mujhko qubool naa kiyaa, na kiijiye saahab,
kahnaa mujhe aashiq, na ye kahnaa raqeeb thaa.
ek shakhs mujhe chhoR gayaa yoon hi bewajah,
wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.
haan aaj dushmani hai tujhe mujh se sitamgar,
ek daur wo bhi thaa ke main teraa habeeb thaa.
beshaq meri muhabbaton me thee nahii kamii,
sach ye bhii hai main us ghaDee muflis Gareeb thaa.!!
Shaad....
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logon tumhaara saath yahin tak naseeb thaa,
har shay ne mujhe door kiyaa jo kareeb thaa.
mujhko qubool naa kiyaa, na kiijiye saahab,
kahnaa mujhe aashiq, na ye kahnaa raqeeb thaa.
ek shakhs mujhe chhoR gayaa yoon hi bewajah,
wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.
haan aaj dushmani hai tujhe mujh se sitamgar,
ek daur wo bhi thaa ke main teraa habeeb thaa.
beshaq meri muhabbaton me thee nahii kamii,
sach ye bhii hai main us ghaDee muflis Gareeb thaa.!!
Shaad....
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adaab shaad ji....
bahut khushi huyi bazm me aapki taza ghazal dekhkar kai baar padhi par thodi masroofiyat ke chalte subah se ab vaqt mila aane ka maufi chahoongi...yun to main kah bhi kya sakti hoon kalaam ki tareef me..aapka likha hamesha hee mere dil ko bahut pasand aata hai...
par aaj matla padhte hee ek chubhan sii mahsoos huyi....
dard aur bebasi ke ehsaas bakhoobhi bayaan huye hain ..aur jo asar matle ne dil pe chhoda maqta use aur ghahra kar gaya....
daad qubool kijiyega is behatreen peshash par..padhne ka mauka dete rahein....
zor e kalam aur zyada ho..
khush rahein..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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1st April 2016, 06:09 PM
Shaad sahab
Kya khoob ghazal kaha aapne
Qafiya ka intakhaab behtareen tha
4th sher bohat hi La-jawaab laga
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2nd April 2016, 05:05 PM
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adaab shaad ji....
bahut khushi huyi bazm me aapki taza ghazal dekhkar kai baar padhi par thodi masroofiyat ke chalte subah se ab vaqt mila aane ka maufi chahoongi...yun to main kah bhi kya sakti hoon kalaam ki tareef me..aapka likha hamesha hee mere dil ko bahut pasand aata hai...
par aaj matla padhte hee ek chubhan sii mahsoos huyi....
dard aur bebasi ke ehsaas bakhoobhi bayaan huye hain ..aur jo asar matle ne dil pe chhoda maqta use aur ghahra kar gaya....
daad qubool kijiyega is behatreen peshash par..padhne ka mauka dete rahein....
zor e kalam aur zyada ho..
khush rahein..
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behad shukriyaa aapka madhu saahibaa............... aap ne is darjaa kalaam ko pasand kiyaa aur apne khuloos se hame nawaaza uske liye main aapka behad shukrguzaar hoon........ aapka sath yunhi bana rahe...
aati rahiyegaa.....
Shaad.........
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2nd April 2016, 05:07 PM
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Shaad sahab
Kya khoob ghazal kaha aapne
Qafiya ka intakhaab behtareen tha
4th sher bohat hi La-jawaab laga
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nacheez ki jaanib se behad shukriyaa..................................
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10th April 2016, 09:52 AM
Bahuy sundar Shoiab bhai.......har lafz mein zaadogiri hai......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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11th April 2016, 06:15 PM
Bohot bohot khoob Shaad bhai.....kya baat hai.....waaaah
Nacheez ki daad kubul farmaiyega
Aapka apna
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12th April 2016, 08:07 AM
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logon tumhaara saath yahin tak naseeb thaa,
har shay ne mujhe door kiyaa jo kareeb thaa.
mujhko qubool naa kiyaa, na kiijiye saahab,
kahnaa mujhe aashiq, na ye kahnaa raqeeb thaa.
ek shakhs mujhe chhoR gayaa yoon hi bewajah,
wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.
haan aaj dushmani hai tujhe mujh se sitamgar,
ek daur wo bhi thaa ke main teraa habeeb thaa.
beshaq meri muhabbaton me thee nahii kamii,
sach ye bhii hai main us ghaDee muflis Gareeb thaa.!!
Shaad....
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Kehte hai ki jab dard ki intehaa ho to lafz khud asardaar hone lagte hai, huu-ba-huu vaisi hi qalak ka asar chod gayi hai aapki yeh ghazal.
ek shakhs mujhe chhoR gayaa yoon hi bewajah,
wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.
Dil ke malaal hai sab dil ki nagawaari har marasim ko tod dene waali majaal rakhti hai, kasak mein kitna asr hai is imteehaan se dil roz guzarta hai kabhi kargar hokar to kabhi sogwaar reh kar....
aapki is ghazal ko nacheez ka salaam.
Qasid
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रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
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Bahuy sundar Shoiab bhai.......har lafz mein zaadogiri hai......
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aapkaa bahut bahut shukriyaa Aru bhai.............................
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16th April 2016, 11:52 PM
Bohut pasand aayi aapki ghazal..
Daad kabool farmaiiye.
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Bohot bohot khoob Shaad bhai.....kya baat hai.....waaaah
Nacheez ki daad kubul farmaiyega
Aapka apna
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aapki daad aur duaaen sar aankhon par bhushan saahab ......... bahut bahut shukriyaa... aate rahiyegaa
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Kehte hai ki jab dard ki intehaa ho to lafz khud asardaar hone lagte hai, huu-ba-huu vaisi hi qalak ka asar chod gayi hai aapki yeh ghazal.
ek shakhs mujhe chhoR gayaa yoon hi bewajah,
wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.
Dil ke malaal hai sab dil ki nagawaari har marasim ko tod dene waali majaal rakhti hai, kasak mein kitna asr hai is imteehaan se dil roz guzarta hai kabhi kargar hokar to kabhi sogwaar reh kar....
aapki is ghazal ko nacheez ka salaam.
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behad inaayat aur behad shukriyaaa aapkaa mast saahab
jis andaaz se aapne kalaam ko apnaaya aur pasand kiyaa uske liye main aapkaa tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon....
tashreef laate rahiyegaa aur apnaa khayaal rakhiyegaa
shaad.....
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17th April 2016, 10:12 AM
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Bohut pasand aayi aapki ghazal..
Daad kabool farmaiiye.
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa aapkaa sarikaa ji........
passnd karne ke liye aur aapki daad ke liye tahe dik se shukrguzaar hoon....
aate rahiyegaa.....
shaad....
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19th April 2016, 08:03 AM
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logon tumhaara saath yahin tak naseeb thaa,
har shay ne mujhe door kiyaa jo kareeb thaa.
mujhko qubool naa kiyaa, na kiijiye saahab,
kahnaa mujhe aashiq, na ye kahnaa raqeeb thaa.
ek shakhs mujhe chhoR gayaa yoon hi bewajah,
wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.
haan aaj dushmani hai tujhe mujh se sitamgar,
ek daur wo bhi thaa ke main teraa habeeb thaa.
beshaq meri muhabbaton me thee nahii kamii,
sach ye bhii hai main us ghaDee muflis Gareeb thaa.!!
Shaad....
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umdaah.. hamesha ki trh wahi roshni, wahi dard or wahi ek dil.. Shaad..
itne arse baad apki gazal padhi wahi sukoon dubara mehsus kiya dil mein.. yuhi likhte rahe kush rahe abaad rahe..
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
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umdaah.. hamesha ki trh wahi roshni, wahi dard or wahi ek dil.. Shaad..
itne arse baad apki gazal padhi wahi sukoon dubara mehsus kiya dil mein.. yuhi likhte rahe kush rahe abaad rahe..
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bahut bahut shukriaa janaab.................... aap jaise dost hi sahaaraa hain udaas raahon ke......... aate rahiyegaa.
Shaad........
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20th April 2016, 03:15 PM
Bahut hi shandaar aur khoobsurat kalaam......bhut pasand aaya hamen......bs padhe ja rhe hain aapko baar baar....dhero mubarakbaad shaad sahab
Bahut gumraah karna chahta hai aaina mujhko !
Magar wo apni hi fitrat se hardam haar jaata hai !! (Pankaj Mishra 'Nawaab')
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21st April 2016, 08:22 AM
originally posted by Sameer shaad
ek shakhs mujhe chhoR gayaa yoon hi bewajah,
wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.
kya zabardast shair hai......Lajwaab.
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Bahut hi shandaar aur khoobsurat kalaam......bhut pasand aaya hamen......bs padhe ja rhe hain aapko baar baar....dhero mubarakbaad shaad sahab
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behad inaayat hai aapki pankaj bhai................ tashreef laate rahiyegaa..
Shaad.......
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originally posted by Sameer shaad
ek shakhs mujhe chhoR gayaa yoon hi bewajah,
wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.
kya zabardast shair hai......Lajwaab.
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bahut bahut shukriyaa aapki muhabbaton ke liye rajinderseep bhai.................
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22nd April 2016, 10:24 PM
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Bahut Khoobsurat Rachna hay.Har ek lafz khoobsurat aur dard ke moti piroye hay.
Keep up the good work.
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logon tumhaara saath yahin tak naseeb thaa,
har shay ne mujhe door kiyaa jo kareeb thaa.
mujhko qubool naa kiyaa, na kiijiye saahab,
kahnaa mujhe aashiq, na ye kahnaa raqeeb thaa.
ek shakhs mujhe chhoR gayaa yoon hi bewajah,
wo waqt rukhsatii ka bhi kitnaa ajeeb thaa.
haan aaj dushmani hai tujhe mujh se sitamgar,
ek daur wo bhi thaa ke main teraa habeeb thaa.
beshaq meri muhabbaton me thee nahii kamii,
sach ye bhii hai main us ghaDee muflis Gareeb thaa.!!
Shaad....
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28th April 2016, 09:15 PM
Shaad bhai
Namaste
Aapko padhnaa hameshaa se achchha lagtaa hai... bahot behterin andaaz ..dil se daad aur duaaen
Aapka
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Shaad
Bahut Khoobsurat Rachna hay.Har ek lafz khoobsurat aur dard ke moti piroye hay.
Keep up the good work.
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sukanya dee..... thanks for coming
bahut khushi hui aaj aapko is post par dekh kar aur sabse acchaa ye jaankar lagaa ke apako ye choti si koshish pasandaa gayee.... shukriya tahe dil se
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Shaad bhai
Namaste
Aapko padhnaa hameshaa se achchha lagtaa hai... bahot behterin andaaz ..dil se daad aur duaaen
Aapka
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Dhaval bhai.... bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka jo aapne waqt diyaa aur ise padhaa pasand kiyaa... aate rahiyeagaa......
aapkee daad tahe dil se kubool................
Shaad........
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25th July 2016, 01:48 AM
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Kaise hain aap?
Aaj bahauat-bahaut samay baad yahan aana hua aur in panktiyon per dhyaan gaya.............jo bahaut hee salikey se kahin gayi hai.
Inhe parhna sach mein sukhad raha........yoonhi likhtey rahein
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Kaise hain aap?
Aaj bahauat-bahaut samay baad yahan aana hua aur in panktiyon per dhyaan gaya.............jo bahaut hee salikey se kahin gayi hai.
Inhe parhna sach mein sukhad raha........yoonhi likhtey rahein
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Vipin bhaiya aadaab......
kaise hain aap, arse baad aaj apko jo bazm me maujood paaya to yaqeenan mere khushi ka thikana nahi rahaa...
muaafii ka talabgaar hoon jo aapki is post par itnii derii se nazar gayee....
aapki daad sar aankhon par, aur guzaarish hai ke aapka aana jaana yunhii bana rahe.... aate rahiyegaa
Shaad.......
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1st November 2016, 10:02 AM
wahh wahh bohat umda Ghazal Janaab har ek sher purlutf
Mera daman jalega tau jalogai tum bhi yeh samajhte ho,phir aag lagate kyu ho
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