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goyaa chiNgaariiyoN meiN hawaa baaNdh raha hooN -
2nd December 2015, 07:28 AM
kuch youN hai tere vasl ki umm’eed kaa aalam
sholoN ke pairahan* meiN hawa baaNdh raha hooN pairahan* = libaas, Dress maqaam-e-Ghazal kya hai subah-dam ko, dekhiye? filhaal to, ashqoN ko giraah* baaNdh raha hooN giraah* = gaaNTh, knot Subject title is not a typo, just an alternative. is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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2nd December 2015, 09:25 AM
Waaahhhhh!!...umda janaab....
Meri janib se daad qubool kijiyega in beshkeemti ashaar par.... Salamat rahein... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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2nd December 2015, 09:36 AM
bohat shukriya Madhu jee
maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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2nd December 2015, 02:28 PM
har ashar lajwaab hai maikash jee..............................
Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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3rd December 2015, 12:52 AM
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taa'bedaar hooN jee, bohat shukriya is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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3rd December 2015, 07:10 AM
Outstanding....kal padaa tha isey magar dusra sher choti si akal Mein aaj ghusa iss liye aaj daad dene aayi....... ��
Bohut gehre alfaaz hain.... Maikash bhaiyaa aapne kabhi seekhi hain shayari Ki bareekiyan? Ya phir bhagwaan ne tarasha Hua heera hi bheja hai upar se? Sarika |
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3rd December 2015, 09:23 AM
wahhhh....bahut khoob Maikash ji, aapke khayal hamesha hi bahut umda aur alag hote hai.
 .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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3rd December 2015, 05:34 PM
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waahh janaab waahhh do sher me hi qatl kar denaa koi aap se seekhe.... jab jab aapke kisii kalaam pe nazar jaati hai to yaqeen jaaniye aisaa lag ta hai ke mere andar ke andaar ke saare jazbaaton ko aapne lafzon ka jaama pahnaa diyaa hai.... aisaa lagta hai ke jo kah na sake wahi aapne arz kar diyaa.... subhaan Allah ye hunar bhi sabko ataa nahi hai mere bhai... Allah ka karam hai aap par... lughaat pe aapki pakad dekh kar waaqai bahut tajjub hotaa hai aur khushi bhii..... aindah bhi aapke aasharon ko padh sakne ki ummeed karta hoon .. ate rahiyegaa aur apna khayal rakhiye..... Shaad......... |
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5th December 2015, 05:57 AM
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Sarika behen, tumhari yeh mukhtsar si baat shayad pichhle 17-18 saal ke mere tukbaNdii ke safar ki "sabse badi" kamaai hai! shayri ki baariikiyoN se abhi maiN meeloN door hooN is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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8th December 2015, 03:35 AM
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rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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Shaad miyaaN aadaab bhai aapke is khat ne la-jawaab sa kar diya hai in chaar misroN ki auqaat harGhiz bhi itni na thi jo aapki is darjaa mohabbat milti aap jaise jigar ke TukDoN ki duaaoN aur hauNslaa afzaai hai jo maNzir-e-aam par kuch kehne ki himmat ho paati hai vagarnaa jo maqaam aap jaise sho'raa ko haasil hai, kuch kehte nai ban'ta maiN to bhai aap jaise maahiroN se khud seekh raha hooN, jitna bhi maal haaTh aaye, kam hai  aapki be-panaah mohabbat, izaat-afzaaii aur duaaoN ke liye aapka karzdaar hua bohat shukriya mere bhai, khush raheiN, aabaad raheiN rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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Waah -
18th December 2015, 09:28 PM
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filhaal to, ashqoN ko giraah* baaNdh raha hooN Waah Maikash Bhai lajawaab! Khaaksaar Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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23rd December 2015, 03:43 AM
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bohat shukriya Praveen bhai, taa'bedaar hooN is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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