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khbar na thee arsa-e-zindagi itna mukthsar hoga,.........(gazal).. |
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khbar na thee arsa-e-zindagi itna mukthsar hoga,.........(gazal).. -
15th July 2006, 10:42 AM
dosto apni nai gazal kay saath hazir hoon....umeed hai ki app apnay dil main jagha dogay.....
khbar na thee arsa-e-zindagi itna mukthsar hoga, yahan yeh dam niklega wo mere yaar ka dar hoga..... tere koochay ki janib jis roz meri rawangi hogi, yaad rakhna wo safar mera aakhri safar hoga..... dekhna mujhay moot bhee aiyegi to aise aiyegi, tere qadamon ki khakh hongi or mera sar hoga..... youn tanha ho gaya tere bina is bhari dunia main, akela chala jaounga saya bhee na hamsafar hoga..... taaron kay sehar main basa lunga dunia teri khatir, wahan na kisi ka khauf hoga na kisi ka dar hoga ..... zamanay walo tum bhee dekho anjaam-e- mohabat, yahan jo bhee wafa karega uska yahi hashar hoga...... bass ik nazar jee bhar kay dekh lu apnay khuda ko, phir uskay baad shuru 'veer' ka aakhri safar hoga....... appkay jabaab ka muntzir.........raj.......... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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Re: khbar na thee arsa-e-zindagi itna mukthsar hoga,.........(gazal).. |
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Re: khbar na thee arsa-e-zindagi itna mukthsar hoga,.........(gazal).. -
15th July 2006, 10:53 AM
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appki gazal ka ek ek shabad dil ko dard mai bhigota sa lagga. en jazbatto ke jawaab mai to mubarak bhi nahi kah saktey.  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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shukria -
15th July 2006, 11:33 AM
appnay mere dard mere jajbaaton ko mehsoos kiya appka shukar guzaar hoon........
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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khber nathi -
15th July 2006, 02:41 PM
zamanay walo tum bhee dekho anjaam-e- mohabat,
yahan jo bhee wafa karega uska yahi hashar hoga...... bass ik nazar jee bhar kay dekh lu apnay khuda ko, phir uskay baad shuru 'veer' ka aakhri safar hoga....... |
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hello raj -
15th July 2006, 08:04 PM
wahhhh............................................ ........yuu tanha ho gaya tere bina iss bhari duniya mai,akela chala jaunga saya bhi na hamsafar hoga.taro ke shehar mai basaa lunga duniya teri khatir,wahan naa kisi kaa khouf hoga na darr hoga,zamane walo tum bhi dekho anzam-e-mohabat,yahan jo bhi wafa karega uska yehi hashar hoga.bas ik nazar jee bhar ke dekh loo apne khuda ko,phir uske baad shuru'veer'ka aakhri safar hoga.----------------------------------------------------------------------------kya khoob likha hai wahhhhhhhh raj jee .mujh nacheez ke dard-e-dil ko panah di app ne,ye nazam kya likhi ,iss toote hue dil ki dawaa ki app ne.
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15th July 2006, 09:57 PM
Raj,
Yun to shayri-e-Ishq mein...shayri-e-dard achhi tarah se bayan kiya hai aapne..!!!  kuch lafz... Zindagi kisi ki amanat nahi hoti, manant mein kabhi qayamat nahi hoti dil bhi sochkar lagana e-dost Ishq ki quaid mein kabhi jannath nahi hoti... -unknown.... likhte rahiyenga...aur yuhi dard-e-gum bayan karte rahiye...log kehte hai..dard batne se kum hota hai... 
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19th July 2006, 01:46 PM
mukesh ji app nay apna keemti waqt nikala or meri post par aa kar apni rai dee appka bhut bhut shukar guzaar hoon,,,,,umeed karta hoo yu he appki hosla afzai milti rahegi.......raj........
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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waah!! |
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waah!! -
20th July 2006, 12:04 AM
Veer ji ,
Aap ki ghazal ka har har lafz dard ka pehlu zaahir karta hai .Aapki ghazal ke yeh ashaar to kuchh zyada hi dil ke qareeb rahe. youn tanha ho gaya tere bina is bhari dunia main, akela chala jaounga saya bhee na hamsafar hoga..... zamanay walo tum bhee dekho anjaam-e- mohabat, yahan jo bhee wafa karega uska yahi hashar hoga...... Always keep it up. Allah aapko khush rakhe Aameen . Aapki Dost |
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23rd July 2006, 07:52 PM
hi veer sahib main humesha se ap ki poetry parrhti aye hoon lekin kabhi reply kernay ki zaroorat mehsoos nahi ki kionki aur bohat se log aap ki poetry ki tareef ker detay hain is liye socha meray na kernay se koi farq nahi parrega lekin ye ghazal mujhay itni achi lagi k main reh hi nahi saki aap ki tareef kiye baghair wesay mujhay aap ki her ghazal bohat bohat pasand hai aur aap ki poetry main zaroor parrhti hoon bohat touchy hoti hai keep it up
apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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hi -
28th July 2006, 10:37 AM
kirti ji main apko aksar apni post par pata hoon...app mere takreeban har qalaak ko parhti ho or sarahti bhee ho....gar app yu hee hosla afzai karti rahi ....to koshish karounga ki or acha likh saku....appmeri post par i raj tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hai..........raj......
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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11th August 2006, 06:28 PM
Raj,
Yun to shayri-e-Ishq mein...shayri-e-dard achhi tarah se bayan kiya hai aapne..!!! kuch lafz... Zindagi kisi ki amanat nahi hoti, manant mein kabhi qayamat nahi hoti dil bhi sochkar lagana e-dost Ishq ki quaid mein kabhi jannath nahi hoti... -unknown.... likhte rahiyenga...aur yuhi dard-e-gum bayan karte rahiye...log kehte hai..dard batne se kum hota hai... tuliska ji bhut dino se app nazar nahi i app ho kahan.....appko mere dard ka ehsaas hua appne mere dard ko apne dil main jagha dee......main tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hoon....umeed karta hoon appka saath hamesha rahega.......raj...... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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hi -
15th August 2006, 04:05 PM
mohtrma koi to ho ji mujhe appka naam to nahi maloom.....lakin app ne jis andaaz se meri gazal ki tareef ki hai wo mujhe bhut acha lagga........appka main tahe dik se shukarguzaar hoon........umeed karta hoon yu hee appka saath bana rahega......raj......
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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22nd August 2006, 06:32 PM
Veer ji ,
Aap ki ghazal ka har har lafz dard ka pehlu zaahir karta hai .Aapki ghazal ke yeh ashaar to kuchh zyada hi dil ke qareeb rahe. youn tanha ho gaya tere bina is bhari dunia main, akela chala jaounga saya bhee na hamsafar hoga..... zamanay walo tum bhee dekho anjaam-e- mohabat, yahan jo bhee wafa karega uska yahi hashar hoga...... Always keep it up. Allah aapko khush rakhe Aameen . Aapki Dost rafat ji appko meri gazal pasand i main tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hoon......umeed karta hoon yu hee appka saath milta rahega........raj........ ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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22nd August 2006, 11:31 PM
wah veer ji aapki shayri ne to jadu kar diya hai........... kya likhte ho aap...
maanta hoon apko ek chhota sa sher arz karta hu ummid hai aap apna pyar denge. chala jaunga itni door tujhse ki dhundhte firoge... waha na to teri gali hogi na tera shahar hoga...... |
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hi -
30th August 2006, 10:27 AM
wah veer ji aapki shayri ne to jadu kar diya hai........... kya likhte ho aap...
maanta hoon apko ek chhota sa sher arz karta hu ummid hai aap apna pyar denge. akshay ji appko raj ka parnaam.....app pehli daffa eri post par reply kar rahe ho raj appka dono haath jor kar sawagat karta hai...appko meri gazal pasand i or appne bhee ek share likha iske jawaab main so main appka tahe dil se shukarguzaar hoon appka share bhut pyara hai....yu hee appke saath ki kamna karta hoon.......raj....... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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