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10th May 2007, 05:48 PM
Yeh kuch ehsaas maine Sunita Di ko reply karte hue kaafi der pehle likhe the.. bas mann kiya aap sab ke saath share karne ka to naya thread bana diya. Umeed karti hun aap sab ko pasand aayenge.
"Is kambakhT dard se najaad paana iTna bhi aasaan nahi..
SaaT samndar paar hain.. phir bhi dhoond hi leTa hai yeh humey..
Socha Tha.. na mehsoos karenge bas aaj ke baad kuch bhi hum..
Yeh kahan paTThar hone deTa hai humey..
AaTa hai jab bhi saaamne "ChaahaT" ke.. rooh ke Tukde Tukde kar jaaTa hai..
Phir khud baand ke bhi jaaTa hai ek naya josh humey.."
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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10th May 2007, 05:58 PM
namaskar priya didi,
waah bahut khub likha hai apne. share karne ke liye shukriya. sach kaha hai apne. aise hi likthe rahiye.
tc
manish
Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...
Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....
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10th May 2007, 08:17 PM
namaskaaR priya didi:
aap apneY dil ke ehsaaSoN ko baRii hi gehraaYii ke saath peSh karte haiN ..achHaa lagaa paRH ke
yuuNhi liKhte raheN..
khuSh raheN ..apnaa khayaal raKheN
duaoN ke saath ijaazaT
aapke chhoteY bhaiyaa
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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11th May 2007, 10:08 AM
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Originally Posted by chaahat
Yeh kuch ehsaas maine Sunita Di ko reply karte hue kaafi der pehle likhe the.. bas mann kiya aap sab ke saath share karne ka to naya thread bana diya. Umeed karti hun aap sab ko pasand aayenge.
"Is kambakhT dard se najaad paana iTna bhi aasaan nahi..
SaaT samndar paar hain.. phir bhi dhoond hi leTa hai yeh humey..
Socha Tha.. na mehsoos karenge bas aaj ke baad kuch bhi hum..
Yeh kahan paTThar hone deTa hai humey..
AaTa hai jab bhi saaamne "ChaahaT" ke.. rooh ke Tukde Tukde kar jaaTa hai..
Phir khud baand ke bhi jaaTa hai ek naya josh humey.."
~Priya
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dear priya main tere ahsaaso.n ko bahut acchi tarah samaj sakti hoon....!
kush raho bahgwaan tumhey har musibat se mukabla karne ki sahkti de
tumhari dii
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th May 2007, 01:04 PM
Aadab Priya Ji,
Kaisi Hain Aap?
Masha Allah,bohot Hi Pyarisi Nazm Pesh Ki Hai Apne.
"Is kambakhT dard se najaad paana iTna bhi aasaan nahi..
SaaT samndar paar hain.. phir bhi dhoond hi leTa hai yeh humey..
Hame yeh ashaar be_hadd pasand aya
Allah apko kamiyab kare.
AAMIN
APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE
ALLAH HAFIZ
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( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!
**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´
Apki dost
Sweet HASSONI,
( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi )
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( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!
**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
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13th May 2007, 01:17 AM
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Originally Posted by chaahat
Yeh kuch ehsaas maine Sunita Di ko reply karte hue kaafi der pehle likhe the.. bas mann kiya aap sab ke saath share karne ka to naya thread bana diya. Umeed karti hun aap sab ko pasand aayenge.
"Is kambakhT dard se najaad paana iTna bhi aasaan nahi..
SaaT samndar paar hain.. phir bhi dhoond hi leTa hai yeh humey..
Socha Tha.. na mehsoos karenge bas aaj ke baad kuch bhi hum..
Yeh kahan paTThar hone deTa hai humey..
AaTa hai jab bhi saaamne "ChaahaT" ke.. rooh ke Tukde Tukde kar jaaTa hai..
Phir khud baand ke bhi jaaTa hai ek naya josh humey.."
~Priya
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Priya ji
bahut ghahrayi se likhe hain dilke jazbaat. dil ke kareeb lage inke ehsaas. yunhi likhti rahiyega. take care.
nira
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30th May 2007, 08:36 PM
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namaskar priya didi,
waah bahut khub likha hai apne. share karne ke liye shukriya. sach kaha hai apne. aise hi likthe rahiye.
tc
manish
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Bahut bahut shukriya Manish jo tumhe yeh pasand aayi...
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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30th May 2007, 08:38 PM
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namaskaaR priya didi:
aap apneY dil ke ehsaaSoN ko baRii hi gehraaYii ke saath peSh karte haiN ..achHaa lagaa paRH ke
yuuNhi liKhte raheN..
khuSh raheN ..apnaa khayaal raKheN
duaoN ke saath ijaazaT
aapke chhoteY bhaiyaa
dhaval
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Bahut bahut shukriya Dhaval mere ehsaas ko samajhne aur saraahne ke liye..
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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31st May 2007, 12:27 PM
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Yeh kuch ehsaas maine Sunita Di ko reply karte hue kaafi der pehle likhe the.. bas mann kiya aap sab ke saath share karne ka to naya thread bana diya. Umeed karti hun aap sab ko pasand aayenge.
"Is kambakhT dard se najaad paana iTna bhi aasaan nahi..
SaaT samndar paar hain.. phir bhi dhoond hi leTa hai yeh humey..
Socha Tha.. na mehsoos karenge bas aaj ke baad kuch bhi hum..
Yeh kahan paTThar hone deTa hai humey..
AaTa hai jab bhi saaamne "ChaahaT" ke.. rooh ke Tukde Tukde kar jaaTa hai..
Phir khud baand ke bhi jaaTa hai ek naya josh humey.."
~Priya
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priya jii,
abb kya kahe..?
bahut achi koshis thi aapki..dil ko chu gayi aapki ye dard bhari paskash......
har ek sab se aapne dard tapkaye hai....last two line bahut achii thi..
aapna khayal rakhiyega.
khush rahiyega.
aapki dost~
saloni
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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7th June 2007, 06:11 PM
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dear priya main tere ahsaaso.n ko bahut acchi tarah samaj sakti hoon....!
kush raho bahgwaan tumhey har musibat se mukabla karne ki sahkti de
tumhari dii
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Di aapko saath dekh ke humesha khushi aur himmat dono milte hain..
Humesha yunhi saath rahiyega.. Bahut bahut shukriya!!!
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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8th June 2007, 07:03 PM
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Aadab Priya Ji,
Kaisi Hain Aap?
Masha Allah,bohot Hi Pyarisi Nazm Pesh Ki Hai Apne.
"Is kambakhT dard se najaad paana iTna bhi aasaan nahi..
SaaT samndar paar hain.. phir bhi dhoond hi leTa hai yeh humey..
Hame yeh ashaar be_hadd pasand aya
Allah apko kamiyab kare.
AAMIN
APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE
ALLAH HAFIZ
()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!
**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´
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Hassony ji..
Aapne mere dil ke ehsaason ko smajha aur saraaha uske liye bahut bahut shukriya..
Aapko yahan dekh ke bahut khushi hui..
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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8th June 2007, 07:05 PM
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Priya ji
bahut ghahrayi se likhe hain dilke jazbaat. dil ke kareeb lage inke ehsaas. yunhi likhti rahiyega. take care.
nira
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Nira ji..
Bahut bahut shukriya mere ehsaason ko samjhne aur pasand karne ke liye..
Aapka yahan aane ke liye tahe-dil-se shukriya ada karti hun..
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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8th June 2007, 10:19 PM
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Yeh kuch ehsaas maine Sunita Di ko reply karte hue kaafi der pehle likhe the.. bas mann kiya aap sab ke saath share karne ka to naya thread bana diya. Umeed karti hun aap sab ko pasand aayenge.
"Is kambakhT dard se najaad paana iTna bhi aasaan nahi..
SaaT samndar paar hain.. phir bhi dhoond hi leTa hai yeh humey..
Socha Tha.. na mehsoos karenge bas aaj ke baad kuch bhi hum..
Yeh kahan paTThar hone deTa hai humey..
AaTa hai jab bhi saaamne "ChaahaT" ke.. rooh ke Tukde Tukde kar jaaTa hai..
Phir khud baand ke bhi jaaTa hai ek naya josh humey.."
~Priya
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Priya di aapke ashaar me ek ajeeb sa ahsaas or derd chupa huaa mahsoos hota hai.. per ye zindagi hai.
Tera yun paas aake phir bichar jaane ka,
Bhegi aankho ko yun mujhese chupane ka
tume to aas hain unke laut aane ka,
mujhe to aaj bhi yakeen nahi uske jaane ka.
Aap hamesha hanste or muskurate rahne
take care
SHAAN
Gamo ki kader karo or unke sath jiyu,
Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah.
........Shaan......
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13th June 2007, 05:37 PM
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priya jii,
abb kya kahe..?
bahut achi koshis thi aapki..dil ko chu gayi aapki ye dard bhari paskash......
har ek sab se aapne dard tapkaye hai....last two line bahut achii thi..
aapna khayal rakhiyega.
khush rahiyega.
aapki dost~
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Saloni ji..
Aapko yahan dekh ke bahut khushi hui... mere ehsaason ko samjhane aur saraahe ke liye bahut bahut shukriya dost..
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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27th May 2008, 09:17 AM
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Priya di aapke ashaar me ek ajeeb sa ahsaas or derd chupa huaa mahsoos hota hai.. per ye zindagi hai.
Tera yun paas aake phir bichar jaane ka,
Bhegi aankho ko yun mujhese chupane ka
tume to aas hain unke laut aane ka,
mujhe to aaj bhi yakeen nahi uske jaane ka.
Aap hamesha hanste or muskurate rahne
take care
SHAAN
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Bahut likha hai Shaan aapne... Aapne to yahan aake chaar chaand hi laga diye..
Bahut bahut shukriya!
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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27th May 2008, 12:30 PM
Kahan koi aisa mila jispe duniya luta dete,
yahan to har kisi ne dhoka diya kis-2 ko bhula dete,
yeh to hum hain jo chupa lete hain gumon ko muskura kar,
agar mehfil mein biyan karte to mehfilein rula dete.
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Kahan koi aisa mila jispe duniya luta dete,
yahan to har kisi ne dhoka diya kis-2 ko bhula dete,
yeh to hum hain jo chupa lete hain gumon ko muskura kar,
agar mehfil mein biyan karte to mehfilein rula dete.
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Bahut khoob likha dost aapne!
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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9th July 2008, 12:55 PM
dard aur jindagi ek hi sikke ke pahloo hai.
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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