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Karishmaat-e-tasavvur - 10th April 2004, 01:48 PM

Khamoshi, tanhaayi, tasavvur, dard-e-dil sanam
diya hai saath sabne har waqt har dam…

Karishmaat-e-tasavvur

aaj phir kyon intezzar hone laga hai
wo dil-sitan kyon yaad aane laga hai

lamhaat jo humne guzaare bhi nahin
kyon dil unse beqaraar hone laga hai

iss dar se tau wo guzraa bhi nahin
ye dil iss qadar kyon dhadakne laga hai

palakein jo un tak uthhi bhi nahin
wo rafta rafta un mein samaane laga hai

wo waade jo humne kiye bhi nahin
un tute waadon pe kyon ranj hone laga hai

daman jo kabhi haath aaya bhi nahin
uski khushboo se dil mehekane laga hai

vasl-e-yaar tau 'paras' hua bhi nahin
tau gham-e-hijraan kaise hone laga hai….....


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Adaab Kabool Kijiye... - 10th April 2004, 03:00 PM

Salam Muhtrhama Parasstar ji.....Apne is kubhsuraat se kaalam ke liye is nacheez ki daad kabool farmaiye...Harf ba harf tareef-e-kabil hai ......Mashallah ....Ab is umeed ke sath apse ijazat ke Talaabgaar hain inshallah agey bhi kuch aise kalaam hamare nazr-e-haya ke tajweez hunge...Shukriya...Kudha Hafiz...


EK ANJAAN SA SHAKS...
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Re: Karishmaat-e-tasavvur - 10th April 2004, 06:17 PM

Khamoshi, tanhaayi, tasavvur, dard-e-dil sanam
diya hai saath sabne har waqt har dam…

PARAS
aap ka yeh sher dil par se kuch yun ho kar guzra hai jaise sehra se ho kar hawaon ke bawandar guzar gaye hon....mere paas wo alfaaz nahin hai jinhe mein is sher ki tareef mein saza sakun....aur neeche likhi gazal kuch yun asar kar gayi hai jaise jakhmi dil par yaadon ka marham koi laga gaya ho....jaise mano tanhai ki vedna mein pal do pal ka sukoon koi baksh gaya ho,,,, bahoot khoob....


aaj phir kyon intezzar hone laga hai
wo dil-sitan kyon yaad aane laga hai

lamhaat jo humne guzaare bhi nahin
kyon dil unse beqaraar hone laga hai

iss dar se tau wo guzraa bhi nahin
ye dil iss qadar kyon dhadakne laga hai

palakein jo un tak uthhi bhi nahin
wo rafta rafta un mein samaane laga hai

wo waade jo humne kiye bhi nahin
un tute waadon pe kyon ranj hone laga hai

daman jo kabhi haath aaya bhi nahin
uski khushboo se dil mehekane laga hai

vasl-e-yaar tau 'paras' hua bhi nahin
tau gham-e-hijraan kaise hone laga hai….....

bahoot khooob....aapne jab bhi likha hai seedha dil par asar hua hai,,,,,har sher laajawab hai,,,kisi ek ki tareef duje ke saath naainsafi hogi.....aapki shayri mein ek wo kasak hai jise mehsoos to har koi kar sakta hai magar bayan karna sabke bas ki baat nahin.....meri daad kubool kijiye....aise hi likhte rahiye....is kaarwan mein aapke hamsafar ban kar ham bhi chand ghadi ko sukoon paa jate hai.....hamesha khush rahiye ,,apna khayal rakhiye....
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Hi... - 11th April 2004, 07:55 PM

Parastaar....ap kai kalaamo mai har bar ek naya pann mehsus hota hai...iss liye jab bhii padhne ka mauka milta hai...ek naye aehsas se wasTa hota hai....jisse ki apkai kalaam mai har bar dilchsspii banni rahti hai...ye achhe shayr ya shayra ka huunaR hoTa hai...Tahe dil se daad kabul kare....aur bhii aage apse yu hii padhne ko milta rahega iss ummid kai saath...Izazat sanju ko!!


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hi - 12th April 2004, 09:25 PM

are parastaar sahiba
how r u?
ham aik dam thik hain...bas kuch masroof the..isi wajah se aap ko shikayat ka moka mil gya...warna ham dosron kis hikayat karne wale dosron ko yeh moka nahin dete..k woh hmari shikayat karain...lekin...hmari koshish rhai k is doran acha likha hwa zaror parhain...or use reply bhi karain...aaj aap ka likha parha...
acha laga...aik sher to bohat hi acha laga...

vasl-e-yaar tau 'paras' hua bhi nahin
tau gham-e-hijraan kaise hone laga hai….....

tamana...or shikayat ka milap dikha is sher main...acha likha hay
umid hay ainda bhi aise hi likhti rahin gi


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14th April 2004, 04:19 AM

paras bahut khoob likha hai bahut pasand aaya par na jaaane kyun laga ki tum ghazal ko adhuuraa sa chod gayi ho aur tum jaanti ki ise pura karne mein mujhe kitna aanand aata hai to aapke aage ke jazbaat kuch yun likhe hai....

phir hua yun bhi ki dil diya bhi nahin
kyon humhe yaar phir ghum sataane laga hai

paa'ey daar is dil ka kona nahin
ek goshah phir dil dukhaane laga hai

guzar gaya jo ism uskaa jaana nahin
ek 'parastaar' yeh dil bataane laga hai

Duaaon ke saath
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18th April 2004, 06:14 AM

Ek Anjaan sa Shakhs hamaare kalaam kee iss tarah se tareef kar jaaye...tau bataayieye aur kya chahiye iss kalam ko...bus phirse tej kar lee hai...kuch likheinge...aap padhiegaa zaroor...

paras

Manoj...

kuch dard kuch sukoon...kuch tau diya humne apne dost ko...daad ke liye shukriyaa...aapko pasand aata hai hamara likhna...shayad yahi sun ne ke liye hum bhi likhe jaate hain...ki manoj kuch iss andaaz se bayaan kar jaayeinge tau hausle aur buland honge...kyon...?

paras


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18th April 2004, 06:18 AM

Sanjoo...

wahi gham, wahi tanhaayi, wahi ghise pite se jazzbaat...phir bhi aap kehte hain ki hamare har kalaam mein nayapan hota hai...tau hum yoonhi khud ko re-invent karte raheinge...tum padhte rehna plz...

paras

Khan Bhai...

Shukriyaa...aap yoonhi hausla badhaate raheinge tau hum achha likhne kee koshish karte reheinge...

sada muskuraate rahiye...paras


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18th April 2004, 06:23 AM

Yeh lo Mast Sahib...

ab aap hamare poore kalaam ko adhuura kaheinge tau hum kya karein...lol...lekin haan poore likhe ko bhi aap aur poora kar dein tau bahut achha lagta hai...bhagwan hamein in adhoore kalaamon kee kshamta dein aur aap unhein poora karte rahieygaa...theek hai?

aur poora bhi kiss andaaz se?

phir hua yun bhi ki dil diya bhi nahin
kyon humhe yaar phir ghum sataane laga hai

paa'ey daar is dil ka kona nahin
ek goshah phir dil dukhaane laga hai

guzar gaya jo ism uskaa jaana nahin
ek 'parastaar' yeh dil bataane laga hai


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

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20th April 2004, 02:22 AM

Dear parastaar,

kai se aap ? like manojbhai ki tarah aap bhi legend hai. is shayris mai kai words ka meaning i do not understand. plz can u explain i will appreciate.

1.dil-sitan
2.ranj
3.lamhaat
4.gham-e-hijraan
   
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20th April 2004, 05:45 PM

Khamoshi, tanhaayi, tasavvur, dard-e-dil sanam
diya hai saath sabne har waqt har dam…

kya baat hai aapa
kasam se kamaal sher hai ye
laga mere dil ki baat apke sher mein hai.

aaj phir kyon intezzar hone laga hai
wo dil-sitan kyon yaad aane laga hai

kya baat hai aapki jitni tarif karun kam hai.

woh jab yaad aye bhut yaad aaye hai na.
aap bhi bhut yaad aate ho kyun aate ho itna yaad

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21st April 2004, 09:56 AM

Dearest Pappu...

That is kind of taking it too far...lol...a legend...? glad you think that way...gives me himmat to go on...
yeh lo tumhaare liye phir se meanings likh rahi hoon

1.dil-sitan - lover
2.ranj - distress
3.lamhaat - moments
4.gham-e-hijraan - sorrow of separation

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21st April 2004, 10:01 AM

jee haan sakhi ji...

Gam-e-zi.ndagii ke a.ndhere me.n hamane
chiraag-e-muhabbat jalaae bujhaae

vo jab yaad aaye...bahut yaad aaye...

achha achha banaao nahin...malum hai...tabhi tau itna humse milti ho...kitne logon ke haath mithi bheji...malum hai?

lekin phir bhi tum meri gudiya rahogi...

tumhari aapa


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Appke Kayal ho gaye - 21st April 2004, 10:37 AM

Dear/Respected paras ji,

I am a new user at Shayri.com . But i m not new in the world of Shayari. I read out your your latest Ghazal Aur main Aapka Kayal Go gaya

Kya Dard hai aapke nagmon mein. kuchch aisa hi dard mere dil mein bhi hai.
I have posted my GHazal "Are Meri Kismat"

please have look at it and plz reply sooonn


Shukriya...........


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Dear Paras - 21st April 2004, 10:39 AM

Kya khoob likhte ho. ek ek lafj dil ki gahraiiyo.n me.n utar jaata hai. hume.n shayri itni nahi.n aati lekin jitna samajhte he.n achha lagta hai.

Bago.n me.n saba.n ko justjoo teri hai
Jis phool ko sunghta hu.nboo teri hai
Chehre se to ashna.n nahi.n he.n ankhe.n
Awaaj jaroor suni hui teri hai

her lafj aisa jaise khud-ba-khud bol raha ho. Thanks.


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Re: Appke Kayal ho gaye - 1st May 2004, 06:16 AM

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Dear/Respected paras ji,

I am a new user at Shayri.com . But i m not new in the world of Shayari. I read out your your latest Ghazal Aur main Aapka Kayal Go gaya

Kya Dard hai aapke nagmon mein. kuchch aisa hi dard mere dil mein bhi hai.
I have posted my GHazal "Are Meri Kismat"

please have look at it and plz reply sooonn


Shukriya...........
Dear Gumnaam Sahib...

aap jaise umda shayar yadi hamari shayri ke kaayal ho jaayein tau bataao is naacheez ko aur kya chahiye...chalo hamara likhna safal hua...jii aapki ghazal humne padhi aur hamein bahut hee pasand aayi...

apna khayaal rakhieyga...aur kuucha-e-kalam mein shirkat karte rahieygaa...

paras


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Re: Dear Paras - 1st May 2004, 06:20 AM

Shukriya tau mujhe aapka karna chahiye...

Bago.n me.n saba.n ko justjoo teri hai
Jis phool ko sunghta hu.nboo teri hai
Chehre se to ashna.n nahi.n he.n ankhe.n
Awaaj jaroor suni hui teri hai

kya andaaz hai daad dene ka bhi...loved it...aap aate rahieyga hamare dard ki pukaar pe...shukriya...

paras


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
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hello - 1st May 2004, 05:27 PM

parastrar ji
really a nice and hearttoching ,,creation!sach ha kisi ke intezar mein humey is qader kho jatey hain,,ki kuch yaad hi nahi rehta.
apki is rachna ne hamre dil ko choo liya...
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