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Hi - 23rd May 2003, 03:06 PM

Barun ji,

Welcome in Shayari.com. aapne bahoot achchha likha hai. badi khubsurti ke sath apane dard baya kiye hain aapne.agar aap ese shayri-e-dard thread mein post kiye hote to aur achchha raha hota.
vaise aapki ghazal kabeele tareef hai. esi tarah likhate rahiye aur mahfil sajaate rahiye.


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