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Tera naam thaa,tera naam hai -
14th March 2005, 02:13 AM
Again i m trying something diffrent
new rythem With diffrent style:- Tera naam thaa,tera naam hai Jo mai likh ker mitaya kerta thaa Tera naam thaa,Tera naam hai Gali Gali tere naam se ek Shaks Badnaam thaa,badnaam hai Tera naam thaa,tera naam hai Wo jo ghul gaya mere maazi me Tera ehsaas hai,mere paas hai Qayamat ke tujhbin bhee mujhko Aaraam thaa,aaraam hai Tera naam thaa,tera naam hai Mushkil thaa ki kat-ti zindgi Teri raah me,teri chaah me Ek khwaab barso se aankhon ka Mehmaan thaa mehmaan hai Tera naam thaa,tera naam hai Yehi mera andaaz-e-zindgi thaa Kuch khoo diya or ro diya Tamasha bazaar-e-muhobbat me Sar-e-aam thaa,sar-e-aam hai Tera naam thaa,tera naam hai Jo bhee rahe hum bas unke he rahe Muntzir kaho ya kaafir kaho Intzaar hume usske aane ka Her shaam thaa,her shaam hai Tera naam thaa,tera naam hai Ek tere rishtey ki khaatir mai Kabhi jhuk gaya or ruk gaya Tere pehlu me zindgi guzre ye Armaan thaa,armaan hai Tera naam thaa,tera naam hai Jo paas thaa humare wo de diya Wo wafaa kahen,ya zafaa kahen Husn per marr mitna karan Asaan thaa asaan hai Tera naam thaa ,tera naam hai karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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tera naam tha tera naam hai -
14th March 2005, 02:45 AM
Wo jo ghul gaya mere maazi me
Tera ehsaas hai,mere paas hai Qayamat ke tujhbin bhee mujhko Aaraam thaa,aaraam hai Tera naam thaa,tera naam hai realy veryyy nice gr8 like allwas  yunhi likhte raho hum padte rahenge esi bahane tumhare sath rahenerose |
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bahane bhee jaroori hain -
14th March 2005, 11:13 AM
Hii rose rose rosy
Haan sahi kahaa tumne bahane bhee chaahiye saath rehne ke liye Khair .. mera likhna or tumhara padhna koi nayi baat to nahi hai Aati raho izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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Re: Tera naam thaa,tera naam hai -
14th March 2005, 11:17 AM
Jo mai likh ker mitaya kerta thaa
Tera naam thaa,Tera naam hai Gali Gali tere naam se ek Shaks Badnaam thaa,badnaam hai Tera naam thaa,tera naam hai Bahut khoob karanji!!! Wo jo ghul gaya mere maazi me Tera ehsaas hai,mere paas hai Qayamat ke tujhbin bhee mujhko Aaraam thaa,aaraam hai Appko padte rahne ka humara... Aarman tha, aarmaan hai Shalini Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye, Wo bhi ek pal ka kissa the mein bhi ek pal ka kissa hoon, Kal tumse juda ho jaaonga jo aaj tumhara hisa hoon[/color] |
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hi! -
14th March 2005, 11:33 AM
Uff......!!!
Wo jo ghul gaya mere maazi me Tera ehsaas hai,mere paas hai Qayamat ke tujhbin bhee mujhko Aaraam thaa,aaraam hai ...... haye...ye ghul jana ehsaas ka!!...touched my soul! har roz naya phul nayi khushbu hai teri rangat nyab hai, lajavab hai.. tere har lafz, har saaz ko mera salaam thaa, salaam hai! awsomme! Karan...wat 2 say....bas tum khushbu ki tarah bikhar jate ho... zehen mein! tc komal |
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14th March 2005, 03:03 PM
Jo mai likh ker mitaya kerta thaa
Tera naam thaa,Tera naam hai Gali Gali tere naam se ek Shaks Badnaam thaa,badnaam hai Tera naam thaa,tera naam hai Kya baat hai Karan? Tooo good!! Wo jo ghul gaya mere maazi me Tera ehsaas hai,mere paas hai Qayamat ke tujhbin bhee mujhko Aaraam thaa,aaraam hai Tera naam thaa,tera naam hai Aaahhhhh... Classyyy Loved this sher.... Mushkil thaa ki kat-ti zindgi Teri raah me,teri chaah me Ek khwaab barso se aankhon ka Mehmaan thaa mehmaan hai Tera naam thaa,tera naam hai Waaaaahhh.. yeh sher bhi behad khoobsurat hai!! Yehi mera andaaz-e-zindgi thaa Kuch khoo diya or ro diya Tamasha bazaar-e-muhobbat me Sar-e-aam thaa,sar-e-aam hai Waahh Waaahhh! Jo bhee rahe hum bas unke he rahe Muntzir kaho ya kaafir kaho Intzaar hume usske aane ka Her shaam thaa,her shaam hai Mtaazir yaa Kaafir.. Well hum to aapko shayar kahenge janaab! bhaut khoob!! Ek tere rishtey ki khaatir mai Kabhi jhuk gaya or ruk gaya Tere pehlu me zindgi guzre ye Armaan thaa,armaan hai Coool... Jo paas thaa humare wo de diya Wo wafaa kahen,ya zafaa kahen Husn per marr mitna karan Asaan thaa asaan hai Kya baat hai!!! Dear Karan! Fabulous piece of work dear.. Kya kahoon kaun sa sher zyada ayaa.. yahan to har ik sher ki saadgi par hum fida hain... Dost dil see daad kubool karna Ise padhkar ek sama sa bandha gaya hai... Bahut gehra asar chhodte hain tumhare shabd....Likhte Rehan Dost.. and Do TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Hii Shalini -
14th March 2005, 07:40 PM
Hii shalini
Cum he aati ho humari mehfil me nazar Khair... I keep trying new things .. And luckyly i always get very good responce for that Ek naya chehra nazar aana humari mehfil me Humare Liye to badi khushi ki baat hai Aati rahiye.. mehfil sajati rahiye izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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Hi komal -
14th March 2005, 07:42 PM
har roz naya phul nayi khushbu hai
teri rangat nyab hai, lajavab hai.. tere har lafz, har saaz ko mera salaam thaa, salaam hai! Wah wah .. pakki shayar ho gayi ho Kuch bhee banaa deti ho likh deti hai .. Khair Khusbu ki tarah bikhar jaate hain zehan me To tumhara zehan bhee kissi garden se cum to nahi breath of my poertys CHali aayi...! Izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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hii pulkit |
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hii pulkit -
14th March 2005, 07:45 PM
Tumhara to pata nahi
lekin hum tumhare replly dene ke andaaz per fida ho gaye I always use to believe Every good Poerty deserve the same A diffrent explination of Diffrent qataa's I m sure few people will definatly admire Your style As it tells How deeply you read the poertys or shayad You are the one who takes lods of time to read Which is the best way really and thats why its my pradictation After 18 months You will be Writing very good poertys Izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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HI karan! -
14th March 2005, 07:47 PM
he he he he..kuch bhi bana leti hu sahi bola...!
Well..belated Happy B;day!...usi din wish nahi kar payi..as i had off...par mene paigaam bheja tha..isse pehel ki u go offline again!..i thout i wd wish u! tc komal |
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14th March 2005, 10:35 PM
jaan tumper nisaar kerta houn
Mai nahi jaanta duaa kya hai hum hain mushtaaq or wo bezaar ya ilaahi ye maazraa kya hai Very good ghazal of ghaalib.. In the voice of chitra and jagjeet I love chitra one this one with .. dil he to hai na sangokhist Khair .. thanx that you remember my b'day my dear dear fav. kid I like ghalib as well.. if you wish I have complete ghazals of ghaalib I mean .. those which he have written singer's ne sirf 4-5 qataa's gaaye hain not complete ones aati raho .. mehfil sajaati raho breaths of my poerty izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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Bahut khub karan.... |
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Bahut khub karan.... -
15th March 2005, 12:44 AM
Jo mein likh ke mitaya karta tha....
tera naam tha, tera naam hai.... Bahut khub Karan, Kaash ki isi tarah zehan se bhi naam mitaana mumkin hota... Wo jo ghul gaya mere maazi me Tera ehsaas hai,mere paas hai Qayamat ke tujhbin bhee mujhko Aaraam thaa,aaraam hai Laajawaab... Mohabbat.... Naina Main zameen pe tanha, aur woh aasmaano mein... |
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hii naina |
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hii naina -
15th March 2005, 03:20 PM
iss sher ko sabne accha kaha hai
shayad koi khaas baat hogi khair.. Mujhe to saari poetry he khaas lagti hai Dil se jo likhta houn La-jawab kaha tumne magar mere khyaal se tumhare paas jawab hai her baat ka izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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17th March 2005, 12:44 AM
Hi Karan,
Each word of your shayri is superb, and mind blowing har roz jisko karti hun yad woh shaks khus khas hai rehta hai mere khawabon ki duniya mein woh mera pyar tha, pyar hai karti hun jisko yad main ghanto har ghari woh mujhe bhul gaya par har waqt mera saya uske sath tha, sath hai Yar these are some feelings which instantly run in my mind after reading your shayri, pls dont mind abt me posting them also Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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hii Nidhi |
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hii Nidhi -
17th March 2005, 07:27 PM
tumhari himmat kaise hui meri Shayri per kuch arz kerne ki
hain... aage se aisa kiya to aisa sabak sikhaunga ki humesha yaad rakhogi samjhi...  darr gayi?hmmm Are Pagal.. kya formality lagaa rakhi hai.. Feelings humesha best hoti hain.. kaisee bhee hon saamne rakh diya karo.. issme poochne waali kya baat hai? Mehfil meri nahi hai.. tumhari he hai.. tum chali aati ho chaandni ki ronak liye or mujhe accha laga .. Ki tumne jo mehsoos kiya likh diya.. or likha karo... Accha likhti ho Nidhi at her very best now smile please okey .. izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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