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6th April 2003, 02:47 AM
koi to ho jo ek ghazal meray naam likhay
dil ko jo chu jaye aisa kalaam likhay likhay kuch aisa keh mu'atar ho her lafz na bhool paon jisay parh ker woh paighaam likhay [mu'atar = scented] likhay keh meray bina us ka jeena hay mushkil apna sub kuch day diya mujhay inaam, likhay meray baray main sochna aur meri yadoN main khona kerti rehti hay her pal woh yehi kaam, likhay ker day bayaaN dil ki batain sari woh mujh say aur akhir main woh piyar bhara salaam likhay |
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6th April 2003, 02:56 AM
waah!
kya khoob ghazal pesh karii hai aapne! sach meiN yaar, paD kar tabiiyat khush ho gayi. is meiN dilkashii ke saath saath khoobiyat bhi bahot hai! "meray baray main sochna aur meri yadoN main khona kerti rehti hay her pal woh yehi kaam, likhay" «-- waah! har koii yehi chahta hai waise  mubaaraq-baad qabuul ki jiye taareef ke saath, aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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6th April 2003, 04:08 PM
Romance ji,
Sach keh raha huun,aapki yeh Ghazal jis had tak pasand aayi hai woh main bayaan nahin kar paa raha huun.. Har sheyr laajawab hai,har sheyr mein chupa ik haseen khwab hai Yakeen keejiye romance ji,aapki shayri par hamein Naaz hai Ab bahut jyaada tareef kar ke aapko sharminda nahin karna chahta,to aapki in sheyron ko dohraata hua chalta huun-- likhay keh meray bina us ka jeena hay mushkil apna sub kuch day diya mujhay inaam, likhay meray baray main sochna aur meri yadoN main khona kerti rehti hay her pal woh yehi kaam, likhay ker day bayaaN dil ki batain sari woh mujh say aur akhir main woh piyar bhara salaam likhay chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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8th April 2003, 05:35 AM
aman sahab,
tareef ka shukria... aapas ki baat hay... yeh ghazal likh ker main nay aik experiment kiya hay... aur yeh jaan ker khushi howi ki aap ko yeh pasand aayi. ghayalparwana ji, aap nay to itni tareef ker di keh waqai mujhay ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha hay. Yeh mera style to nahin, bus aik idea aaya aur yeh ghazal likhi. Mujhay umeed nahin thi keh yeh itni pasand ki jaye gi. Waisay mujhay is forum ki ladies kay comments ka bhi intezaar tha laikin shayad un main say kisi ko yeh pasand nahin aayi  |
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8th April 2003, 11:11 PM
Aadab arz hai Romance sahab,
waise to aapne poori ghazal hi bohat achchi likhi hai per mujhe iska pehla sher sabse jyada achcha laga... "koi to ho jo ek ghazal meray naam likhay dil ko jo chu jaye aisa kalaam likhay" ab iske baad wo jo kuch bhi likhengi aapko pasand jaroor aayega.... sahi kaha na khair bahut achcha likha hai.... aise hi likhte rahiye aur muskurate rahiye |
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10th April 2003, 02:47 AM
bedilMusafir sahab,
tareef ka shukria. Aap nay sahi kaha, magar yehi to problem hay kay koi kuch likhta hi nahin intezaar rahay ga kisi kay likhnay ka. Phir miltay hain. |
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24th April 2003, 11:08 AM
bahut khoob!
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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3rd May 2005, 04:31 PM
koi to ho jo ek ghazal meray naam likhay
dil ko jo chu jaye aisa kalaam likhay likhay kuch aisa keh mu'atar ho her lafz na bhool paon jisay parh ker woh paighaam likhay [mu'atar = scented] likhay keh meray bina us ka jeena hay mushkil apna sub kuch day diya mujhay inaam, likhay meray baray main sochna aur meri yadoN main khona kerti rehti hay her pal woh yehi kaam, likhay ker day bayaaN dil ki batain sari woh mujh say aur akhir main woh piyar bhara salaam likhay Waaaahh! Is khoobsurat ghazal se mujhe mere dost akshat ne milvaaya thha... Just loved this one so much that cud not prevent brninging it up... Kahan hain Romance saahab.. Kucch Nazar hum chaahne waalon ki traf bhi kijiye... bahut samay hua aapko dekhe hue!! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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3rd May 2005, 05:33 PM
kaash ye sapna sabka pura ho jaaye
sabko chaahe jaannat mile, mujhe bas tera pyaar mill jaaye kutch toh mujh main bhi aisa, ki tujhe bhi likhna aa jaaye main aapki, aap ho mere ,main dill ,toh tum dhadkann kutch aisa likho, ki mujhe bhi khudd pe guroor aa jaaye par sach hai pehle aapko mujh se pyaar toh ho jaaye ..........hahahhah pyaar ho jaata hai kiya nahi jaata ......pyaar main shayri aa hin jaati hai jabardasti kutch likha nahi jaata ...........  . Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor, Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door. Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae .................................bye and tc .................. |
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