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mazhab kae naam per honae walae fasaadaat kae naam aek ghazal |
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mazhab kae naam per honae walae fasaadaat kae naam aek ghazal -
5th December 2006, 04:30 PM
ghazghazal
Masjid ko jalaaya kertae ho Mandir ko giraaya kertae ho Nafrat ko bitta ker her dil main Chaahat ko bhagaaya kertae ho Ghaeroan ko bhi apna kerna tha Apnoan ko praaya kertae ho Ae waqt ka ajger zaalim hai Tum isko jagaaya kertae ho (ajger,,,,anaconda) Phooloan ki jaga,is gulshan main Kaantoan ko ugaaya kertae ho Achcha hai uttatae girtoan ko Girtoan ko giraaya kertae ho Naadaan ho,mohabbat ki duniya Mitti main milaaya kertae ho Tum apni wafaaoan kae khissae Behroan ko sunaaya kertae ho (behroan...deaf) Wo jis ki saza hai tum ko mili Ab wo hi dobaara kertae ho Kiya phir sae bahaaraen aayaengi? Kiyoon khawaab dikhaaya kertae ho Zindoan ka tumhaen kuch hosh nahin Khabroan ko sajaaya kertae ho ( insaan jab tak zinda rehta hai us kae liyae duniya ki cheezaen zaroori hain ,mernae kae baat usae na phooloan ki zaroorat hai na agarbattioan ki magar aksar aesa hota hai khud apnae ghar main koi takleef main hai padoasi dukhi hai kisi ko koi faraq nahin pardta magar uskae merjaanae kae baad us kae khabr per phooloan ki maalaayaen chardhaayee jaati hain jo kae mernae walae kae kisi kaam ka nahin ) Ab daekh kae apni ae haalat kiyoon ashk bahaaya kertae ho Zakhmi hai RAZ ka toota dil Kiyoon teer chalaaya kertae ho razia |
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5th December 2006, 04:41 PM
insaan jab tak zinda rehta hai us kae liyae duniya ki cheezaen zaroori hain ,mernae kae baat usae na phooloan ki zaroorat hai na agarbattioan ki
magar aksar aesa hota hai khud apnae ghar main koi takleef main hai padoasi dukhi hai kisi ko koi faraq nahin pardta magar uskae merjaanae kae baad us kae khabr per phooloan ki maalaayaen chardhaayee jaati hain jo kae mernae walae kae kisi kaam ka nahin ) razia ji bilkul sahi kaha aapne apne kalaam me har sher apne ap hi sab bayan kar raha hai bahot achha laga apdh ke aapko har bar aapki likhavat me kuch na kuch nayapn dikhai detahai dilse likhi ghazal ke liye dilse nikli dad ko kubul kijiyenga razia ji apna khayal rakhiye aapka dost dhaval |
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frnd 4 ever -
5th December 2006, 06:25 PM
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ASSALAM WALEKUM , kaash main aapko kuch keh sakti,bas itna hi kahungi.ki aap ke khayalat aapka likha ek ek lafz ,MASHA ALLAH dil ko chhu jate hain. bas aap likhte rahiye,aur hum aapko padhkar ,kuch sikhne ki koshish karenge. apna khayal rakhiye ************************** NAFRAT se MOHABBAT hai badi cheez.. is duniya main aaye ho ,to PYAR kharido. **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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20th December 2006, 10:33 PM
 Saalame ishq meri jaan jara kabool kar lo,tum hamse pyar karne ki jara si bhool karlo |
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salam |
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salam -
5th January 2007, 10:02 PM
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ae teara piyaam bhi razia |
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14th October 2007, 08:19 PM
razia ji,
kyaa likhaa hai aapne. dil chhu liyaa. aankhe num ho gayi. bus logo.N ko you.N hi aainaa dikhaate rahiye. isii tarah ki ek ghazal meri bhi hai ghazal section mei.N "Aman Ke Naam" pad kar bataaiyegaa kaisee lagee. nahta praveen |
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10th November 2007, 11:26 PM
Razia baji aapka kalaam padhkar dil laraz jaata hai....sachhi shayeri to ye hi hai jo samaj ko sudhhar ki taraf le jaye
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13th November 2007, 03:47 PM
wah wah wah..kiya baat hai
bohut khoob. mubarak ho aap ka mujeeb |
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