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meri ye koshish meri pyaari dost NAAZ aur MEGHNA ke naam karti hu.....meri dost MEGHNA kuch bure daur se guzar rahi hai..uske dard se muje bhi bahut taklif hoti hai...shayad use hamari taklif ka andaza bhi nahi hai...
rahi baat NAAZ ki....wo bewakoof ladki bhi kabhi kabhi chup chup ke roti hai aur ye samajti hai ki hume pata nahi chalta....hai na NAAZ??... in dono paagal ladkiyon ko apni is ghazal ke zariye apne ehsaas batana chahti hu......... apne dil ki haalat hume bhi bataa to zara, us bewafaa ki yadein dil se mita to zara, usne chaha hi nahi kabhi shiddat se tuje, jo jaa chuka hai use dil se bhoola to zara, khamosh rehkar ghum ko apne nasoor na bana, mujrim hai tera ab de use sazaa to zara, tere zakhmo se hota hai dard humko bhi, gar andaza hai tuje to de dawaa to zara, chup chup ke akele ashkon ke saagar na bahaa, dede apna har dard hume de dosti ka sila to zara, teri muskurahat ek anmol khazana hai hamara, ae dost, thoda sa ise humpar luta to zara..............  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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22nd May 2009, 11:16 PM
bahut pyari naishate di hai dosto ko apne lamha ji
bahut khubsuart ahsass.. naaz aur meghna aap doino ko muskurana hi hoga...  sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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24th May 2009, 02:05 PM
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Hats off to you......... really very very inspiring poem aur tumhare dil me.n dosto.n ke liye kitni jagah hai,unki kya ehmiyat hai,vo bhi saaf dikhti hai........ aur kyaa kahu.n...... haan, naaz jee aur meghna jee se itna kehna chahungi ke, "kismat se milti hai zindgi aur kismat se hi 'Lamha', jaan lo inki keemat samay rehte,inhe ddor jaate der nahi.n lagti...." khush rahiye Lamha jo hai aapki Dost...... God bless you all! khush raho lamha... tumhari dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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24th May 2009, 04:18 PM
Lamha Dear..........
Apne doston ke liye Aapke ahsaas dekh bahut khushi hui........... Naaz my best friend, main Meghana jii ko to nahi janta...... But Naaz agar yeh sahi hai to phir tumhe yeh sab bhoolna hi padenga, and Meghana jii aapko bhi hamari dost ki baat maanni hai padengi.... Lamha dear aapne apne ahsaason se jo nasihat di hai wakai kabile tarif hai aapka andaze bayan bhi bahut achcha laga...... Yunhi likhate rahiye...... Doston ke sath khush rahiye.... Aapki dosti salamat rahe bus yehi dua karunga... Doston ke sath apna bhi khayal rakhiye... 
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24th May 2009, 06:44 PM
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Lamha dear i really appreciate ur feelings 2wards me as a frnd bt nt my personal life being displayed publicly.........i had bad x'perience bt tht was past & m not a sort of gal who cry over some gud for nthng guy, ladkon ki kya kami hai......so chill m happy & ready to fall in love again, waise ghazal bht achchi likhi hai tumne
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25th May 2009, 03:40 PM
[quote=N@zneen;356029]Lamha dear i really appreciate ur feelings 2wards me as a frnd bt nt my personal life being displayed publicly.........i had bad x'perience bt tht was past & m not a sort of gal who cry over some gud for nthng guy, ladkon ki kya kami hai......(Ahem ahem........... )so chill m happy & ready to fall in love again, (Mere barey mein kya khayal hai
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25th May 2009, 03:50 PM
Yahan bahut kuch likha tha............. Lekin as alwayz mera likha har bar censor board se pass nahi hota.....
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26th May 2009, 06:15 PM
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thank u soooooooooo much dear........keep supporting...... "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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26th May 2009, 06:19 PM
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thank u soooooooooo much RITU.....aapne har baar mera hausla badhaya hai aur mera saath diya hai uske liye tahe dil se shukra guzar hu....itna pyara 'sher' likhne ke liye thanx dear....yuhi apni dua'e, apna saath aur apna pyaar banaye rakhna....thanx a ton... "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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26th May 2009, 06:21 PM
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thanx SAMEER, izzat afzai ka tahe dil se shukriya.....yuhi apna saath banaye rakhna dear................. "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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26th May 2009, 06:22 PM
Well well well................ i have no words to appreciate you my dear !
i cant bound you in words my dear................. hats off to you........... apne andar ke kalakar ko kabhi sone mat dena.........  Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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26th May 2009, 06:22 PM
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NARESH ji...............muje padhne ke liye aur support karne ke liye aapka tahe dil se shukriya.....yuhi apni dua'e hum par banaye rakhiyega.....thanx a lot..... "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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26th May 2009, 06:26 PM
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I m sorry,agar maine tumhe hurt kiya hai to..... aur haaaa....mai bhi yahi chahti hu ki tum fir se in stupid ladko ke chakkar me pado... ...i want u to fall in love again....thanx sweetie.............thank u sooooooooo much... hamesha khush raho....ALLAH tumhe is jahan ki saari khushiya de..................AAMEEN.... "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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NAAZ......................tera dimaag to kharaab nahi ho gaya na?? "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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26th May 2009, 06:30 PM
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thank u soooooooooooooooooooooo much SHAAN...........yuhi apna saath banaye rakhna............. "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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maine sirf teri sachche feelings dekhi jo bht touching hai & m truly greatful for ur frndshp.......hurt nhi hui thi bt was bit uncomfortable thts it |
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thanx sweetie........................................... ............ "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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