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‘Qayamat se pehle qayamat na hoti’ (paras) -
24th June 2006, 12:05 PM
Dosto...
Mayank aur Talib ji ki khuubsurat ghazalein padhkar...ek jurrat ki hai maine bhi ki iss tarahi misre pe main bhi kuchh kahoon...Talib Sir ne dare kiya and I took up the dare...lol...wo mere Ustaad hain aur main unko let down nahin kar sakti...Mushi Bhayyia aapki nazar-e-inaayat ke liye bhi ehsaan-mand hoon aapki...maine yeh kalaam likha hai tau sirf apne shayri.com ke doston ke liye...lijiey arz kiya hai... ‘Qayamat se pehle qayamat na hoti’ Jo dil ki khalish mein ye lazzat na hoti Na inqaar mein tere iqraar hota aur hem ko bhi teri zaroorat na hoti Na sharmaate surkhi-e-ruskhsaar pe ham Jo chaahat mein teri vahadat na hoti Bana lete hum kisi ko bhi apna Teri guftagu ki jo aadat na hoti Na karte tassavvur daar-o-rasan ka Jo Maut tujhse milne ki hasrat na hoti Yahan ger gale se lagaa lete ahbaab Vatan humko tujhse yuun nisbat na hoti [color=dark brown]Lazzat = enjoyment vahadat = uniqueness guftaar = conversation daar-o-rasan = scaffolding and a hangman's noose ahbaab = friends[/color] gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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24th June 2006, 12:53 PM
Parse Ji
maine mayank ji, talib ji aur appki, sab ki esi topic par likhi hue nazam padi hai, app sab to ek se bad kar ek ho. kitna badiya likhtey ho. samaj hi nahi aata ki appki rachna ki tareef kin sabdo mai karu: sach mai kamaal ki shayri kartey hai app. aur shayri bhi aise shabdo mai ki dil mai uttar jaye: mubarakbaad kabool kijiye.  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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24th June 2006, 04:24 PM
parasji,
kya kahun alfaaz nahi milrahe,sach kahun to god i really feel jealous at times ,wish i cud also be like u.har sher behad khoobsurat hai.yeh do sher to dil ko choo gaye.dil se daad kabool kijiye. Bana lete hum kisi ko bhi apna Teri guftagu ki jo aadat na hoti Na karte tassavvur daar-o-rasan ka Jo Maut tujhse milne ki hasrat na hoti |
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25th June 2006, 09:38 AM
Meri behan
is khoobsurat matle ko aap sab doston ne ek khooburat guldasta sa bana diyaa hai apni ghazloan se. aur behna tumhari ghazel ki to kyaa baat hai. choti behar mein kehna aur saadgi aur pur-kaari ke saath khoobsurat tashbihaat like "daar-o-rasan" ka istemaal kerna , yeh tum hi ker sakti ho is qader khoobsurti ke saath. yeh ghazel ek aur khoobsurat ezaafa hai tumhari takhliqaat mein. bhai bohat fakhr mehsoos kerta hai jab jab tum ko parhta hai aur aisi zabardast ghazloan se jure tumhare naam ko dekhta hai. dua hai hamesha khush raho aabaad raho aur zindagi ko isi tarah gul-o-gulzaar banati raho. musharrafhusain |
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25th June 2006, 12:59 PM
‘Qayamat se pehle qayamat na hoti’
Jo dil ki khalish mein ye lazzat na hoti Na inqaar mein tere iqraar hota aur hem ko bhi teri zaroorat na hoti Namaskar Paras Ji Pehle bhi issey title ki khoobsurat Ghazal dekhein aur abb aapki khoobsurat Ghazal dekhi......same words says so many different things.........it's really beautiful to see everyone's beautiful poetry...hamare daad kabul kijeyega...... Take care |
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25th June 2006, 08:54 PM
My Everluvly Guru Ji,
Frankly, i am just amazed at how u all took a simple line and just churned out such wonderful masterpieces. Each one amazing in their own rights and all so different in the underlying meaning. Absoposilutively brilliant My heartfelt salutations 2 u all 4 givin us such luvly gems.Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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26th June 2006, 09:47 AM
Paras Ji
Aapko Namaskaar Bahaut accha raha aapko parhna. 
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27th June 2006, 11:18 AM
Paras jee,
Namste: Sab se pahle ek achchhi koshish ke liye daad qubool keejiyegaa.. kuchh arz karna chaahta huuN par aap jaisii shaayra ke saamne kuchh kehnaa himaakat hi kahaa jaayega. Aap isko tanqeed to bilkul na leN, Matla puuri tarah wazn meN hai.. (Maaf keejiyega iss ke alaava sabhee sher beh'r se khaariz haiN, ho sakta hai meN galat bhee huuN ,) Maine matle ke dono misroN ko palat kar paRha tau mujhe zeyaadah achchha laga.. 'Jo dil kee khalish meN ye lazzat na hotee Qayamat se pehle qayamat na hotee’ Iss ke alaava yeh sher bhee khoob farmaaYa hai aap ne... Na sharmaate surkhi-e-rukhsaar pe ham Jo chaahat mein teri vahadat na hoti waah! bohat khoob, Kuchh jagah typo error hai.. Hoti: hotee Surkhi-e-ruskhsaar: surkhi-e-rukhsaar Tassavvur: Tasavvur Guftagu: guftugu Daar o rasan: scaffolding and a hangman's noose>> symbol of death and punishment -Mayank |
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27th June 2006, 01:20 PM
Meri HB GB Behna..................
matle se maqte tak ...........har misra khoobsurat............ek gehraai............ek pukhtagi............... aaj ashaar nahi hain ki tumhari taaref mein kutch bayan kar sakooon................. zehan mein aaj kai roz baad kutch aaya tumhe padte hue.....to likhta chaloon............... 'Qayamat se pehle qayamat na hoti’ tu jo us roz yun be-gairat na hoti........... zindagi, zindagi ki tarah chand roz jee lete....... tere ashaaron mein jo karwaahat na hoti....... mayane raqabat-e-raqeeb ke bhi samajhte......... tujhse gar is kadar mohabaat na hoti............. shayad ye sehar aakhiri muqaam hai ^AMAN^.... warna 'Qayamat se pehle qayamat na hoti’..... khush raho..........meri behna.......... tumhara apna.................... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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28th June 2006, 04:44 AM
Dear Sunita jee...
pehli baar shayad aap meri kisi post pe aayi hain...aur daad bhi kitne khuubsurat tareeke se dee hai...umda sukhanwaaron ke beech is nacheez shayra ka naam lekar...tahe dil se shukriya apka...khayaal rakhein apnaa gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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28th June 2006, 04:46 AM
Sweet Akelijaan...
aap jab bhi aatin hain pyaare se jawaab se man moh leti hain...yoonhi saath deti rahieygaa...ok gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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28th June 2006, 04:54 AM
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gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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29th June 2006, 06:00 PM
Namaskaar Sukanya ji...
Mujhe laga yeh misra hi qayamat dhaa raha hai...ispe likhna bahut achha laga...shukriya daad ke liye gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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29th June 2006, 06:04 PM
My EverSugary Shishye...
kya baat hai...naukri aur chhokriyon se chutti nahin milti ki tum shakl bhi nahin dikhaa sakte yahan...you should come and visit your old friends at the bazm...thanks for the wonderlicious reply... take care gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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1st July 2006, 12:33 PM
Wah Wah Wah Wah ki dil ki gehraayiyon se awaaaz kuch aisi aa rahi hai ki
Teri aarzoo par yun hairat na hoti jo sanam humko tumse mohabbat na hoti Sakhi tumhari har ghazal dil par woh zakhm kar jaati hai ki bas kya kahen... Khud hi gungunaate hai aur khud hi muskuraate hai iski bhi ek dhun si ban gayi hai..as usual yuh to puri nazm mashaallah thi par ek sher tha ki dil ko aab tak cheer raha hai maano Quote:
-aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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1st July 2006, 12:36 PM
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1st July 2006, 02:47 PM
Qayamat se pehle qayamat na hoti’
Jo dil ki khalish mein ye lazzat na hoti Na inqaar mein tere iqraar hota aur hem ko bhi teri zaroorat na hoti waaaaaah.... its so true paras... well written... Na sharmaate surkhi-e-ruskhsaar pe ham Jo chaahat mein teri vahadat na hoti Bana lete hum kisi ko bhi apna Teri guftagu ki jo aadat na hoti beautifullll..... Na karte tassavvur daar-o-rasan ka Jo Maut tujhse milne ki hasrat na hoti Yahan ger gale se lagaa lete ahbaab Vatan humko tujhse yuun nisbat na hoti well said.... Dear Paras, Read all three of this qayamat series... sabhi bahut acche thhe and this one is veyr well expressed too... Pehle do sher mujhe bhut acche lage.... Likhti raho bass aise hi... TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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3rd July 2006, 11:35 AM
Vipin jee…
Nawazish aapki…aapne waqt nikala aur mujhe padhaa… -------- Mayank Sahab… Bahut meherbaani, ki aapne meri galatiyon ki or dhyaan diya aur mujhe saraha bhi…aage se gaur karoongi…lekin beher ki na tau samajh hai…na main promise hee kar sakti hoon ki aage beher mein hee hogi meri shayri…lekin aap zaroor tanz o tanqeed se nawaazte rahiegaa…apna khayaal rakhieyga… gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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3rd July 2006, 11:38 AM
'Qayamat se pehle qayamat na hoti’
tu jo us roz yun be-gairat na hoti........... zindagi, zindagi ki tarah chand roz jee lete....... tere ashaaron mein jo karwaahat na hoti....... mayane raqabat-e-raqeeb ke bhi samajhte......... tujhse gar is kadar mohabaat na hoti............. shayad ye sehar aakhiri muqaam hai ^AMAN^.... warna 'Qayamat se pehle qayamat na hoti’..... Bahut khuub Aman Veere... yeh jawaabi shayri bhi mashallaah kahi aapne... sabse achha yeh sher laga mujhe... zindagi, zindagi ki tarah chand roz jee lete....... tere ashaaron mein jo karwaahat na hoti....... shukriya...mera saath dene ke liye hamesha ki tarah...duaaon ke saath gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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3rd July 2006, 11:40 AM
Shukriya Anu...
Khud hi gungunaate hai aur khud hi muskuraate hai tumne tau gaate gaate yeh lines kahi hongi...i can imagine it...lol...aur kaise hai sab...khuub garmi hai na mumbai mein...how are you keeping...take very good care of yourself...ok gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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3rd July 2006, 11:42 AM
Arre meri Meena jee...
khamoshiyon ki shehzaadi...jee apna khayaal rakhiegaa gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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3rd July 2006, 11:44 AM
Pulkit...
Der aaye durust aaye...lekin koyi baat nahin...bade aadmi ho gaye ho na... BIG SHOT...can't expect ki hum adna shayaron ko padhne ka time bhi milta hogaa...Phir bhi tum aaye...take care... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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3rd July 2006, 03:03 PM
aap Parastaar Devi hain to aapke shihshya bhi to Big Shot hone chaahiye naa
 lol.... ek line yaad aa gayi.... humaar kavita ka jaaga naseeba ke gaavat hai dekho parastaar devi hehehehehe..... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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