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Question dost - 8th September 2005, 04:30 PM

tum bhi khafa ho loog bhi burhum hein dosto
ab ho chala yaqin keh bouray hum hein dosto
kis ko hamare hal se nisbut hai kya karein
aankhein to dushmanooN ki bhi purnum hein dosto
apne siwa humaray na hoonay ka ghum kise
apni talaash mein to humein hum hein dosto
kuch aaj shaam hi se hai dil bhi bujha bujha
kuch shahr ke chiragh bhi mudhum hein dosto
iss shahr-e aarjo se bhi baahar nikal chalo
ab dil ki raunaqein bhi koi dum hein dosto
sub kuch sahi Faraz per itna zaroor hai
dunya mein aise loog bauhut kum hein dosto
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hi! - 8th September 2005, 04:46 PM

Its brillient!..u write very nice..plz do keep it up!
i'l b waiting 4 ur next kalaam!
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Hiiiiii - 9th September 2005, 08:06 AM

A simply suparb poetry .. But i think it is written by ahmad faraaz sahab.. Isn't it?
You could post this in shayri-e-ustaad or shayri-e-mashoor shayar...
Still A very gud poetry..
he use to be one of the fav. writer of jagjeet singh..
he relishes the oppertunity to sing ahmad faraaz as his poetries are too melodious and Easy to sing..
They represent the melody in itself

singer's do not need to work allot to sing these...

chalo .. chalte hain phir milte hain
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9th September 2005, 01:46 PM

Again.... A Beautiful...ghazal...! Bahut achchha laga parhkar...

or shukriya karan Saahab...is jaankari ke liye.

Someonly 1 ji...aaki choice pasand aayi...per khushi hogi agar aap ....post ke actual writer ka naam bhi saath likhieN....taaki hamari jaankaari bhi barh sake.

Shukriya...is post ke liye.

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