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6th May 2010, 12:54 PM
Haazreen e mehfil ek andna si koshish aap sabhi ki nazr apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyega
hamariHad'de nigaah se daikho, wo door hote hi jaa rhe hai.N
bhula rahe hai.n hum unko jitna qareeb utna wo aa rhe hai.n
mujhay pata hai ke har qadam pe waha.N to shole bichay huway hai.N
magr mein peechay hatu.N bhi kaise, ke uske aansu bula rhe hai.N
kisi ke jaane se kuch na hoga, chalegi dunya to yu.Nhi har dam
wo daikho suraj nikal rha hai, parinde bhi chehchaha rahe hai.N
adaab e mehfil ye keh rahe hai.N, ishaaro mai apni baat keh do
ghuma ke ungli mai apna pallu, wo jaate jaate dikha rahe hai.N
wo jaante hai.N meri kami ko, issi liy.N mujhse door thehre
jo wqt e ruqsat na keh sake kuch, wo apne aansu chipa rhe hai.n
jo zindagi mai hua na hasil, wo marke aslam hai meine paaya
lehd pe meri khade huway hai.n, wo rukh se parda utha rhe hai.N
aslam
you.n na samjhoge kinare pe khade rehkar tum
behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho
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6th May 2010, 03:37 PM
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Haazreen e mehfil ek andna si koshish aap sabhi ki nazr apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyega
hamariHad'de nigaah se daikho, wo door hote hi jaa rhe hai.N
bhula rahe hai.n hum unko jitna qareeb utna wo aa rhe hai.n
mujhay pata hai ke har qadam pe waha.N to shole bichay huway hai.N
magr mein peechay hatu.N bhi kaise, ke uske aansu bula rhe hai.N
kisi ke jaane se kuch na hoga, chalegi dunya to yu.Nhi har dam
wo daikho suraj nikal rha hai, parinde bhi chehchaha rahe hai.N
adaab e mehfil ye keh rahe hai.N, ishaaro mai apni baat keh do
ghuma ke ungli mai apna pallu, wo jaate jaate dikha rahe hai.N
wo jaante hai.N meri kami ko, issi liy.N mujhse door thehre
jo wqt e ruqsat na keh sake kuch, wo apne aansu chipa rhe hai.n
jo zindagi mai hua na hasil, wo marke aslam hai meine paaya
lehd pe meri khade huway hai.n, wo rukh se parda utha rhe hai.N
aslam
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aslam bhai
radhe radhe
bahut khoob......daad......teesre sher par daad vishesh rup se
aise hi likhte rahen
duaon ke saath
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6th May 2010, 05:28 PM
wo jaante hai.N meri kami ko, issi liy.N mujhse door thehre
jo wqt e ruqsat na keh sake kuch, wo apne aansu chipa rhe hai.n
jo zindagi mai hua na hasil, wo marke aslam hai meine paaya
lehd pe meri khade huway hai.n, wo rukh se parda utha rhe hai.N
Aslam Ji.....Aadaab ! yeh do ehsaas bahut khoob lage mujhe....matla bhi khoobsurat raha....tamaam ashaar tarannum me hai ......bayaani aur adaayegi bhi umdaa rahi....dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi behtar kalaam ke saath aate rahiye....khush rahen....
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
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7th May 2010, 04:16 PM
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Haazreen e mehfil ek andna si koshish aap sabhi ki nazr apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyega
hamariHad'de nigaah se daikho, wo door hote hi jaa rhe hai.N
bhula rahe hai.n hum unko jitna qareeb utna wo aa rhe hai.n
mujhay pata hai ke har qadam pe waha.N to shole bichay huway hai.N
magr mein peechay hatu.N bhi kaise, ke uske aansu bula rhe hai.N
kisi ke jaane se kuch na hoga, chalegi dunya to yu.Nhi har dam
wo daikho suraj nikal rha hai, parinde bhi chehchaha rahe hai.N
adaab e mehfil ye keh rahe hai.N, ishaaro mai apni baat keh do
ghuma ke ungli mai apna pallu, wo jaate jaate dikha rahe hai.N
wo jaante hai.N meri kami ko, issi liy.N mujhse door thehre
jo wqt e ruqsat na keh sake kuch, wo apne aansu chipa rhe hai.n
jo zindagi mai hua na hasil, wo marke aslam hai meine paaya
lehd pe meri khade huway hai.n, wo rukh se parda utha rhe hai.N
aslam
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noor sahab....kya baat hai
bahut shaandaar peshkash rahi aapki
isi meter me jab aapne shuru kiya tha maine aapse ek din pahle kiya tha....aur phir apko ye meter suggest kiya tha....khair mai to matle ke baad hi phas gaya....apne to kya baat banaii magar....
apko vo matla sunata hu ,,shayad kabhi poori na ho sake
apka ek sher shayad kabhi sdc ke top ten ashaar ghusit hoga to ye jaruur shamil hoga usme
adaab e mehfil ye keh rahe hai.N, ishaaro mai apni baat keh do
ghuma ke ungli mai apna pallu, wo jaate jaate dikha rahe hai.N bus zara isko yun karke dekhiye
adaab e mehfil ye keh rahe hai.N, ishaaro mai baat apni keh do
ghuma ke ungli mai apna pallu, wo jaate jaate dikha rahe hai.N
bahut class sher hai ye........phir se daad..
lagta hai jaise hasrat mohaani sahab ko bhi aapne peeche chor diya ho....
ye sher to dil le gaya....
kash ye sher maine likha hota...i am damn envious about this sher...now its gone forever
is sher ko mai 'chupke chupke' wale legendary sher se kam nahi samaj raha hu.....
pjir se daad apko
ek word bhi faltu nahi isme...aur aisi strong rabt jaise fewikwick ka jod ho.....
wah wah nahi ye sher pad kar hai hai nikal gayi
yun samjiye ki ek aah nikal gayi
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8th May 2010, 10:57 AM
kisi ke jaane se kuch na hoga, chalegi dunya to yu.Nhi har dam
wo daikho suraj nikal rha hai, parinde bhi chehchaha rahe hai.N
adaab e mehfil ye keh rahe hai.N, ishaaro mai apni baat keh do
ghuma ke ungli mai apna pallu, wo jaate jaate dikha rahe hai.N
wo jaante hai.N meri kami ko, issi liy.N mujhse door thehre
jo wqt e ruqsat na keh sake kuch, wo apne aansu chipa rhe hai.n
Bohat khoob Aslam sahab...yeh 3 ashar bohat pasand aaye mujhe....yuhi likhte rahiye...
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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8th May 2010, 05:47 PM
aslam saheb aadaab,
aapki i's ghazal par nazar padi, padhne laga to baar baar padha...
ek behtreen peshkash pe daad-o-mubaraqbaad, qubuul kijiyega....
neeche kuchh ashar quote kar raha hooN jo ki behad umda lage aur dil ke kuchh khaas kareeb rahe...
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kisi ke jaane se kuch na hoga, chalegi dunya to yu.Nhi har dam
wo daikho suraj nikal rha hai, parinde bhi chehchaha rahe hai.N
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behad khoobsurat, maza aa gaya padhne ka....
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e mehfil ye keh rahe hai.N, ishaaro mai apni baat keh do
ghuma ke ungli mai apna pallu, wo jaate jaate dikha rahe hai.N
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wah....kya baat hai...exceptionally beautiful..
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jo wqt e ruqsat na keh sake kuch, wo apne aansu chipa rhe hai.n
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yeh bhi achha hai...
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zindagi mai hua na hasil, wo marke aslam hai meine paaya
lehd pe meri khade huway hai.n, wo rukh se parda utha rhe hai.
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wah....behad khoobsurat.......
maine aapko pehle bhi padha hai...lekin jo baat aaj dekhi hai, kya batauN saheb maza aa gaya....bahut badhiya janaab..yuN_hi likhte rahiye...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
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8th May 2010, 07:36 PM
Aslam
Maine tumhari ghazal ko kayi martba padha .. aur har miCre ko padha .. har ek lafz aisa lagta hai tumne sajaya hai .. mujhe bas ye kehna hai .. ki aapne door tak noor faila diya hai apne aashaaroN ka ...
khamoshi ko samajhiye aur mujhe ijazat dijiye...
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KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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8th May 2010, 09:11 PM
Bheeg jate hai khabi palak tanhai me
Darte hai dukh koi jaan na le,
Pasand karte hai barish me chalna
Taki rote hue koi pahchan na le
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9th May 2010, 01:03 AM
Bahot hi Khoobsoorat! Aslam ji, daad qubuul ho!
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17th August 2010, 04:21 AM
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aslam bhai
radhe radhe
bahut khoob......daad......teesre sher par daad vishesh rup se
aise hi likhte rahen
duaon ke saath
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ye ghazal maine may mai kahi thi aur pata nhi kya hua ki is par reply nahi kar saka shayad un dino meiN site par aaya nhi honga aaj ittefaaq ye ghazal yaad aa gyi to isko talaash kia aap sabhi logoN se jinhone meri is ghazal par apni qeemti aara se mujhay nawaaza hai maafi chahta huN is takeer ke liyN umeed hai ki meri is khata ko aap log darguzar farma dainge................
Janaab aapka tahe dil se shukurguzaar huN ki aapne meri koshish ko pasnd kia bhut shukriya.... yuN hi hosla baDhaate rahiye
aslam
you.n na samjhoge kinare pe khade rehkar tum
behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho
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17th August 2010, 04:23 AM
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wo jaante hai.N meri kami ko, issi liy.N mujhse door thehre
jo wqt e ruqsat na keh sake kuch, wo apne aansu chipa rhe hai.n
jo zindagi mai hua na hasil, wo marke aslam hai meine paaya
lehd pe meri khade huway hai.n, wo rukh se parda utha rhe hai.N
Aslam Ji.....Aadaab ! yeh do ehsaas bahut khoob lage mujhe....matla bhi khoobsurat raha....tamaam ashaar tarannum me hai ......bayaani aur adaayegi bhi umdaa rahi....dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi behtar kalaam ke saath aate rahiye....khush rahen....
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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Naresh sahab jaise ki meiN tehreer kar chuka huN ke takheer ke liyN maazrat.........aapka tahe dil se mashkoor huN ke aapne adna koshsish ko rahakar meri hosla afzaaii ki bhut shukriya janaab
aslam
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17th August 2010, 04:48 AM
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noor sahab....kya baat hai
bahut shaandaar peshkash rahi aapki
Bhut shukriya Zidd sahab nawaazish..........aapse bhi maazrat janaab is gustaakhi ki ke bhut aur bhut takheer se reply kar raha huN hope aap is khata ko nazr andaaz kar dainge
isi meter me jab aapne shuru kiya tha maine aapse ek din pahle kiya tha....aur phir apko ye meter suggest kiya tha....khair mai to matle ke baad hi phas gaya....apne to kya baat banaii magar....
apko vo matla sunata hu ,,shayad kabhi poori na ho sake
jii yaad hai aur aapka matla bhi jo ki ab ek behetreen ghazal ki shakal ikhteyaar kar chuka hai mashaAllah kya rawaaN dawaaN ghazal kahi hai aapne
apka ek sher shayad kabhi sdc ke top ten ashaar ghusit hoga to ye jaruur shamil hoga usme
adaab e mehfil ye keh rahe hai.N, ishaaro mai apni baat keh do
ghuma ke ungli mai apna pallu, wo jaate jaate dikha rahe hai.N bus zara isko yun karke dekhiye
adaab e mehfil ye keh rahe hai.N, ishaaro mai baat apni keh do
ghuma ke ungli mai apna pallu, wo jaate jaate dikha rahe hai.N
Zidd sahab ye aapka baDakpan hai jo aapne mujhay is zumreh mai la kar khada kar dia hai mere liyN isse baDi aur kya khushi ki baat ho sakti hai ki SDC par mujh jaise haqeer se shayar ka sher yahaN moujood sukhan fehem aur khoona mashq shayroN ki aala mayaari soch ke saath barabari kare is izzat afzaaii ke liyN mere pass lafz nhi haiN jinse mai aapka shukriya ada kar sakuN bas itna hi keh sakta huN ki dil mai ek khaas jagh hai aapke liyN bhut nawaazish, saath hi saath meiN yahaN ke mod se ye bhi guzaarish karunga ki wo mere is sher ko usi shakal mai tabdeel kar deiN jaisi ki tajweez Zidd sahab ne di hai inaayat hogi
bahut class sher hai ye........phir se daad..
lagta hai jaise hasrat mohaani sahab ko bhi aapne peeche chor diya ho....
ye sher to dil le gaya....
kitni tareef karenge sahab aap bhi kya gazab kar rahe haiN kahaN wo asaateza aise ustaad shayar jinki qalam ki nokoN ne aise aise mojzoN ko janm dia hai ke jinko paD aur sun kar log daantoN tale ungli daba laiN aur aap hamare ek chote se khyaal ko us payedaan par kada kar rahe haiN, kya keh sakta huN sahab bas yahi ke aapne shayd itni badi baat keh di jo mujhe hamesha aur hamesha yaad rahegi, shayad itna bada compliment mujhay nahi mila hai jo ki mujhay hamsha hi yaad rahega, aisa keh kar aapne meri zimmedaari aur baDha dia hai meiN apni tor par poori koshish karunga ke aage bhi aapki in sochoN par khara utruN
kash ye sher maine likha hota...i am damn envious about this sher...now its gone forever
is sher ko mai 'chupke chupke' wale legendary sher se kam nahi samaj raha hu.....
pjir se daad apko
ek word bhi faltu nahi isme...aur aisi strong rabt jaise fewikwick ka jod ho.....
wah wah nahi ye sher pad kar hai hai nikal gayi
yun samjiye ki ek aah nikal gayi
regards
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aapke is dil se gehraaii liye mohabbatoN se labreiz tabsare ke liyN aapka meiN intehaaii shukurguzaar huN aur ek baar phir se aapse maazrat khwaah huN is dair se reply ke liyN nawaazish karm meherbaani hamesha hi aise tabsaroN se nawaazte rahiye
aslam
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behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho
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kisi ke jaane se kuch na hoga, chalegi dunya to yu.Nhi har dam
wo daikho suraj nikal rha hai, parinde bhi chehchaha rahe hai.N
adaab e mehfil ye keh rahe hai.N, ishaaro mai apni baat keh do
ghuma ke ungli mai apna pallu, wo jaate jaate dikha rahe hai.N
wo jaante hai.N meri kami ko, issi liy.N mujhse door thehre
jo wqt e ruqsat na keh sake kuch, wo apne aansu chipa rhe hai.n
Bohat khoob Aslam sahab...yeh 3 ashar bohat pasand aaye mujhe....yuhi likhte rahiye...
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Zainy saheba bhut shukriya is hosla afzaaii............yuN hi hosla baDhaati rahiyega aur takheer ke liyN maazrat.....hope u will not mind, shukrya
aslam
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behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho
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17th August 2010, 05:04 AM
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aslam saheb aadaab,
aapki i's ghazal par nazar padi, padhne laga to baar baar padha...
ek behtreen peshkash pe daad-o-mubaraqbaad, qubuul kijiyega....
neeche kuchh ashar quote kar raha hooN jo ki behad umda lage aur dil ke kuchh khaas kareeb rahe...
behad khoobsurat, maza aa gaya padhne ka....
wah....kya baat hai...exceptionally beautiful..
yeh bhi achha hai...
wah....behad khoobsurat.......
maine aapko pehle bhi padha hai...lekin jo baat aaj dekhi hai, kya batauN saheb maza aa gaya....bahut badhiya janaab..yuN_hi likhte rahiye...
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VIkram jii ghzal ki pazeeraii ke liyN aapka tahe dil se shukruguzaar huN aap jaise log jab hosla baDhaate haiN to bepanah musarrat hoti hai umeed hai aage bhi aap yuN hi apni mohbbat se nawaazenge
aslam
you.n na samjhoge kinare pe khade rehkar tum
behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho
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17th August 2010, 05:09 AM
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Aslam
Maine tumhari ghazal ko kayi martba padha .. aur har miCre ko padha .. har ek lafz aisa lagta hai tumne sajaya hai .. mujhe bas ye kehna hai .. ki aapne door tak noor faila diya hai apne aashaaroN ka ...
khamoshi ko samajhiye aur mujhe ijazat dijiye...
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Kunaal sahab aapki is izzat afzaii ka tahe dil se maamnoon huN ghazal aapko itni achi lagi bhala isse ziyada khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai ki qaari uski yuN tareef kare bhut bhut shukriya sahab aapki khamoshi mere zehen ke dareechoN ko par karti huii meri ruh tak mai utr gayi yuN hi nawaazte rahiye shukrya janaab
aslam
you.n na samjhoge kinare pe khade rehkar tum
behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho
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Bheeg jate hai khabi palak tanhai me
Darte hai dukh koi jaan na le,
Pasand karte hai barish me chalna
Taki rote hue koi pahchan na le
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MashaAllah bhut hi khoob....................
aslam
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17th August 2010, 05:22 AM
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Bahot hi Khoobsoorat! Aslam ji, daad qubuul ho!
Mann
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bhut nawaazish Mann sahab hosla afzaaii ka bhut bhut shukriya
aslam
you.n na samjhoge kinare pe khade rehkar tum
behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho
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17th August 2010, 09:45 AM
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Haazreen e mehfil ek andna si koshish aap sabhi ki nazr apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyega
hamariHad'de nigaah se daikho, wo door hote hi jaa rhe hai.N
bhula rahe hai.n hum unko jitna qareeb utna wo aa rhe hai.n
mujhay pata hai ke har qadam pe waha.N to shole bichay huway hai.N
magr mein peechay hatu.N bhi kaise, ke uske aansu bula rhe hai.N
kisi ke jaane se kuch na hoga, chalegi dunya to yu.Nhi har dam
wo daikho suraj nikal rha hai, parinde bhi chehchaha rahe hai.N
adaab e mehfil ye keh rahe hai.N, ishaaro mai apni baat keh do
ghuma ke ungli mai apna pallu, wo jaate jaate dikha rahe hai.N
wo jaante hai.N meri kami ko, issi liy.N mujhse door thehre
jo wqt e ruqsat na keh sake kuch, wo apne aansu chipa rhe hai.n
jo zindagi mai hua na hasil, wo marke aslam hai meine paaya
lehd pe meri khade huway hai.n, wo rukh se parda utha rhe hai.N
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namaskaar aslam ji, aapki gazal ki tareef karna mere bas ki baat nahi, har lafz etna napa tulla, masha-allah aap to janaab bahut khoob likhtey haiN....hats off to ur poetry.
god bless u
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th August 2010, 06:45 PM
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Haazreen e mehfil ek andna si koshish aap sabhi ki nazr apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyega
hamariHad'de nigaah se daikho, wo door hote hi jaa rhe hai.N
bhula rahe hai.n hum unko jitna qareeb utna wo aa rhe hai.n
mujhay pata hai ke har qadam pe waha.N to shole bichay huway hai.N
magr mein peechay hatu.N bhi kaise, ke uske aansu bula rhe hai.N
kisi ke jaane se kuch na hoga, chalegi dunya to yu.Nhi har dam
wo daikho suraj nikal rha hai, parinde bhi chehchaha rahe hai.N
adaab e mehfil ye keh rahe hai.N, ishaaro mai apni baat keh do
ghuma ke ungli mai apna pallu, wo jaate jaate dikha rahe hai.N
wo jaante hai.N meri kami ko, issi liy.N mujhse door thehre
jo wqt e ruqsat na keh sake kuch, wo apne aansu chipa rhe hai.n
jo zindagi mai hua na hasil, wo marke aslam hai meine paaya
lehd pe meri khade huway hai.n, wo rukh se parda utha rhe hai.N
aslam
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Aslam,
wahhhhhhhhhhh..... beautiful creation... keep up the good work... keep writing....keep smiling..........
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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19th August 2010, 02:46 PM
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Originally Posted by noor_noor
Haazreen e mehfil ek andna si koshish aap sabhi ki nazr apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyega
hamariHad'de nigaah se daikho, wo door hote hi jaa rhe hai.N
bhula rahe hai.n hum unko jitna qareeb utna wo aa rhe hai.n
mujhay pata hai ke har qadam pe waha.N to shole bichay huway hai.N
magr mein peechay hatu.N bhi kaise, ke uske aansu bula rhe hai.N
kisi ke jaane se kuch na hoga, chalegi dunya to yu.Nhi har dam
wo daikho suraj nikal rha hai, parinde bhi chehchaha rahe hai.N
adaab e mehfil ye keh rahe hai.N, ishaaro mai apni baat keh do
ghuma ke ungli mai apna pallu, wo jaate jaate dikha rahe hai.N
wo jaante hai.N meri kami ko, issi liy.N mujhse door thehre
jo wqt e ruqsat na keh sake kuch, wo apne aansu chipa rhe hai.n
jo zindagi mai hua na hasil, wo marke aslam hai meine paaya
lehd pe meri khade huway hai.n, wo rukh se parda utha rhe hai.N
aslam
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ji bhaut khoob................
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26th August 2010, 05:55 PM
Bohat khoob Aslam Miya kya kehne janab aapke...............har sher khoobsurat hai par makhta lajawab raha.
jo zindagi mai hua na hasil, wo marke aslam hai meine paaya
lehd pe meri khade huway hai.n, wo rukh se parda utha rhe hai.N
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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