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ghir ke aaya tha toofan kaisa yeh - 27th January 2005, 03:46 AM

ghir ke aaya thaa toofaan kaisa yeh
lekar chala gaya imtehaan kaisa yeh

ek waqt tha jab haste, thakte na thay
roota bhi nahi ab dil, bejaan kaisa yeh

na khushi, na tamanna, na aarzoo koi
zindagi ka ek hissa veeraan kaisa yeh

haste waqt doost sab "zeba" se milay
zamana ab hogaya beimaan kaisa yeh


zeba likti rahegi.....................
   
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27th January 2005, 08:55 AM

Zeba ji......

aapki pehle ki kayi posts maine padi aur aapki ye post is forum mein dekhte hi zubaan pe aaya......


"Zeba likhti rahegi....."


phir aapki post ko khole ke pada to aap hi thi......


sach mein bahut aachi nazm pesh ki hai......

ghir ke aaya thaa toofaan kaisa yeh
lekar chala gaya imtehaan kaisa yeh

ek waqt tha jab haste, thakte na thay
roota bhi nahi ab dil, bejaan kaisa yeh



Bazm mein aapka Isteqbaal karta hoon.....



aate rahiye aur likhte rahiye.....

aapka dost......



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aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......

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Namaskar Zeba ji - 27th January 2005, 10:43 AM

Zeba kitna pyara naam hay

this is for the first time I have read something written by you and it is so beautiful..........

ghir ke aaya thaa toofaan kaisa yeh
lekar chala gaya imtehaan kaisa yeh

ek waqt tha jab haste, thakte na thay
roota bhi nahi ab dil, bejaan kaisa yeh

na khushi, na tamanna, na aarzoo koi
zindagi ka ek hissa veeraan kaisa yeh

haste waqt doost sab "zeba" se milay
zamana ab hogaya beimaan kaisa yeh

har ek lafz bahut khubsurat hay.sada kush rahiye
   
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27th January 2005, 11:11 AM

Very nice Words...Loved thmm...aage bhi likhti rahiyega...


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Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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27th January 2005, 11:49 AM

Hi Zeba Ji,

Itne seedhe alfazo mein nihayat khoobsurat kalaam likh daala aapne. Bohot pasand aaya parh ke. Humari daad qabool kare aur bas uhi likhte rahiye.


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27th January 2005, 10:10 PM

Bahut khoob Zeba ji....

Meri shubhaamnaaeiN aapke saath...aap yooNhi likhte raheiN.


Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.

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31st January 2005, 07:14 AM

raghi ji, sukanya ji, gupta ji candy ji aur channd ji, aap sab logon ka shukriya ada karti mere is naye kalaam ko sarahne ke liye. bohot dinoo ke baad shaeri me aa kar bohot accha lag raha hai.
behat shukriya ke saath zeba yeh wada karti hai likhti rahegi....
   
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27 - 31st January 2005, 05:46 PM

Hi,
Zeba

well very weel and good work keep always same written and all freinds are wait for your new post.

By take care

By freind


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Very Good - 31st January 2005, 07:15 PM

Salam-0-Allecum Zeba Ji,

Very good,,Aap Ki Ghazal Buhat Pasand Aai,
Aap Zaroor Likthi Rahi.
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ooroj ji, irfan ji,
aap ka behad shukriya meri is gazal ko sarahne ke liye.
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17th March 2005, 02:52 AM

Excellent work Zeba ji.. Keep writing!
   
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Re: ghir ke aaya tha toofan kaisa yeh - 17th March 2005, 09:15 AM

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ghir ke aaya thaa toofaan kaisa yeh
lekar chala gaya imtehaan kaisa yeh

ek waqt tha jab haste, thakte na thay
roota bhi nahi ab dil, bejaan kaisa yeh

na khushi, na tamanna, na aarzoo koi
zindagi ka ek hissa veeraan kaisa yeh

haste waqt doost sab "zeba" se milay
zamana ab hogaya beimaan kaisa yeh


zeba likti rahegi.....................

zeba,
haste waqt doost sab "zeba" se milay
zamana ab hogaya beimaan kaisa yeh

kadwa par sach hi hai......

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