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ghir ke aaya tha toofan kaisa yeh -
27th January 2005, 03:46 AM
ghir ke aaya thaa toofaan kaisa yeh
lekar chala gaya imtehaan kaisa yeh
ek waqt tha jab haste, thakte na thay
roota bhi nahi ab dil, bejaan kaisa yeh
na khushi, na tamanna, na aarzoo koi
zindagi ka ek hissa veeraan kaisa yeh
haste waqt doost sab "zeba" se milay
zamana ab hogaya beimaan kaisa yeh
zeba likti rahegi.....................
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27th January 2005, 08:55 AM
Zeba ji......
aapki pehle ki kayi posts maine padi aur aapki ye post is forum mein dekhte hi zubaan pe aaya......
"Zeba likhti rahegi....."
phir aapki post ko khole ke pada to aap hi thi......
sach mein bahut aachi nazm pesh ki hai......
ghir ke aaya thaa toofaan kaisa yeh
lekar chala gaya imtehaan kaisa yeh
ek waqt tha jab haste, thakte na thay
roota bhi nahi ab dil, bejaan kaisa yeh
Bazm mein aapka Isteqbaal karta hoon.....
aate rahiye aur likhte rahiye.....
aapka dost......
**(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)**
*·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·*
**(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)**
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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
AMAN RAHI
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Namaskar Zeba ji -
27th January 2005, 10:43 AM
Zeba kitna pyara naam hay
this is for the first time I have read something written by you and it is so beautiful..........
ghir ke aaya thaa toofaan kaisa yeh
lekar chala gaya imtehaan kaisa yeh
ek waqt tha jab haste, thakte na thay
roota bhi nahi ab dil, bejaan kaisa yeh
na khushi, na tamanna, na aarzoo koi
zindagi ka ek hissa veeraan kaisa yeh
haste waqt doost sab "zeba" se milay
zamana ab hogaya beimaan kaisa yeh
har ek lafz bahut khubsurat hay.sada kush rahiye
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27th January 2005, 11:11 AM
Very nice Words...Loved thmm...aage bhi likhti rahiyega...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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27th January 2005, 11:49 AM
Hi Zeba Ji,
Itne seedhe alfazo mein nihayat khoobsurat kalaam likh daala aapne. Bohot pasand aaya parh ke. Humari daad qabool kare aur bas uhi likhte rahiye.
Luvs,
Salim
If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul
Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you.
We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly
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27th January 2005, 10:10 PM
Bahut khoob Zeba ji....
Meri shubhaamnaaeiN aapke saath...aap yooNhi likhte raheiN.
Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.
- Chaand
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31st January 2005, 07:14 AM
raghi ji, sukanya ji, gupta ji candy ji aur channd ji, aap sab logon ka shukriya ada karti mere is naye kalaam ko sarahne ke liye. bohot dinoo ke baad shaeri me aa kar bohot accha lag raha hai.
behat shukriya ke saath zeba yeh wada karti hai likhti rahegi....
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31st January 2005, 05:46 PM
Hi,
Zeba
well very weel and good work keep always same written and all freinds are wait for your new post.
By take care
By freind
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Very Good -
31st January 2005, 07:15 PM
Salam-0-Allecum Zeba Ji,
Very good,,Aap Ki Ghazal Buhat Pasand Aai,
Aap Zaroor Likthi Rahi.
Take Care,
Allah Hafiz
Sooraj
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17th March 2005, 02:38 AM
ooroj ji, irfan ji,
aap ka behad shukriya meri is gazal ko sarahne ke liye.
thanks
zeba
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17th March 2005, 02:52 AM
Excellent work Zeba ji.. Keep writing!
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Re: ghir ke aaya tha toofan kaisa yeh -
17th March 2005, 09:15 AM
Quote:
Originally posted by Zeba
ghir ke aaya thaa toofaan kaisa yeh
lekar chala gaya imtehaan kaisa yeh
ek waqt tha jab haste, thakte na thay
roota bhi nahi ab dil, bejaan kaisa yeh
na khushi, na tamanna, na aarzoo koi
zindagi ka ek hissa veeraan kaisa yeh
haste waqt doost sab "zeba" se milay
zamana ab hogaya beimaan kaisa yeh
zeba likti rahegi.....................
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zeba,
haste waqt doost sab "zeba" se milay
zamana ab hogaya beimaan kaisa yeh
kadwa par sach hi hai......
meena
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