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~O~Koi Achhi Saza De Dena~O~ - 23rd September 2008, 04:47 PM

Kuchh dard to youn hi mil jate hain ,
kuchh apnone toffe main de dete hain ....
Hum to khusi dena chahate hain sabko ..
Fir kyun sab gham ke khariddar ban jate hain ....


Mahfil Main sab ko Diya ki salam.....
kuchh dard jab had se gujar jate hain to ,aapke pass aajati hun

Hume to nagme thik se likhna bhi nehin aate ....Jo bhi galti hui hogi dilse maaf kijiyega ....






Bhulna chahate Ho Mujhe To Beshak Bhool Jana

Apne Hatoon Ke Lakeer Se Meri Naam Mita Dena


Har Jagah Tere Pehechan Liye Ghumti Hun maiN
Main Kya Hun Tera Yeh Aaj Tu Mujhe Bata deNa

Main Manti huN Tujhse Mohabbat Karna Jurm Hai
Usii Jurm Ki Mujhe "Koi Acchi Saza De Dena"


Is Jeevan Ka Har Pal Tere Hi Naam Kar Di Hai
Tu Usse Gujraa Hua Kal Samjh Kar Bhoola deNa


Apne Zakhom Ko Chhupake,Tere Bin Kaise jiooN
Tere Pyar Ko Kaise Dilse Mitaoon,Ye Bata Dena


Tumko Bhool Pana Mere Liye Namumkeen Hai
Mumkin Hai Agar Meri Saari YaadeiN Mitaa Dena





Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai


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Kuchh dard to youn hi mil jate hain ,

kuchh apnone toffe main de dete hain ....
Hum to khusi dena chahate hain sabko ..
Fir kyun sab gham ke khariddar ban jate hain ....


Mahfil Main sab ko Diya ki salam.....
kuchh dard jab had se gujar jate hain to ,aapke pass aajati hun

Hume to nagme thik se likhna bhi nehin aate ....Jo bhi galti hui hogi dilse maaf kijiyega ....







Bhulna chahate Ho Mujhe To Beshak Bhool Jana
Apne Hatoon Ke Lakeer Se Meri Naam Mita Dena

Har Jagah Tere Pehechan Liye Ghumti Hun maiN
Main Kya Hun Tera Yeh Aaj Tu Mujhe Bata deNa

Main Manti huN Tujhse Mohabbat Karna Jurm Hai
Usii Jurm Ki Mujhe "Koi Acchi Saza De Dena"

Is Jeevan Ka Har Pal Tere Hi Naam Kar Di Hai
Tu Usse Gujraa Hua Kal Samjh Kar Bhoola deNa

Apne Zakhom Ko Chhupake,Tere Bin Kaise jiooN
Tere Pyar Ko Kaise Dilse Mitaoon,Ye Bata Dena

Tumko Bhool Pana Mere Liye Namumkeen Hai
Mumkin Hai Agar Meri Saari YaadeiN Mitaa Dena








diya ji bahot hi achha likha hai aapne dard ko shabdo me bahot hi achhi tarah se ubhara hai sach me dil ko chhu gai aapki ye gazal padhte padhte aankh me aansu aa gaye dua karte hai aise hi likhte rahe aur hamesha khush rahe
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23rd September 2008, 05:04 PM

Bahut khoob. darad pada to dil ne uf kaha, achha likha hai likhte rahe,

kuch dard gam ban dhal jayenge
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23rd September 2008, 07:06 PM

good,achcha likha hai apne,share karte rahe,aap dard ubhar kar dikh raha hai shayri me,sukriya


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good,achcha likha hai apne,share karte rahe,aap dard ubhar kar dikh raha hai shayri me,sukriya
Baagi ji bahot bahot sukriya ..khus to hum bhi rahena chahate hain per naseeb ko manzoor nehin ....aap kahte ho to muskura dete hain ....

Dard ko bhoolake hum muskura denge
aakhon ke aansu ko kaise chhupayenge



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diya ji bahot hi achha likha hai aapne dard ko shabdo me bahot hi achhi tarah se ubhara hai sach me dil ko chhu gai aapki ye gazal padhte padhte aankh me aansu aa gaye dua karte hai aise hi likhte rahe aur hamesha khush rahe
Krenil ji sukriya ...koshish to ehi ki achhi likhun ..baki aap ko pasand aaye ehi bahot hai ...dard jab hadse gujar jate hain
younhi kuchh likh dete hain




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Aadaab Diya Ji.......Aaj aapka yeh kalaam padha bahut accha laga padhkar aapke ehssa dil chulenewale rahe aur ese hi likhti raha kijiye aur accha likh payengi aap waqt nikalke auro ko bhi padha kare to kafi madad milegi aapko aur dua karta hoon ki koi dard aapke paas na rahe.........aapke kalam par meri daad hazir hai kubool kijiye





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Kuchh dard to youn hi mil jate hain ,

kuchh apnone toffe main de dete hain ....
Hum to khusi dena chahate hain sabko ..
Fir kyun sab gham ke khariddar ban jate hain ....


Mahfil Main sab ko Diya ki salam.....
kuchh dard jab had se gujar jate hain to ,aapke pass aajati hun

Hume to nagme thik se likhna bhi nehin aate ....Jo bhi galti hui hogi dilse maaf kijiyega ....







Bhulna chahate Ho Mujhe To Beshak Bhool Jana
Apne Hatoon Ke Lakeer Se Meri Naam Mita Dena

Har Jagah Tere Pehechan Liye Ghumti Hun maiN
Main Kya Hun Tera Yeh Aaj Tu Mujhe Bata deNa

Main Manti huN Tujhse Mohabbat Karna Jurm Hai
Usii Jurm Ki Mujhe "Koi Acchi Saza De Dena"

Is Jeevan Ka Har Pal Tere Hi Naam Kar Di Hai
Tu Usse Gujraa Hua Kal Samjh Kar Bhoola deNa

Apne Zakhom Ko Chhupake,Tere Bin Kaise jiooN
Tere Pyar Ko Kaise Dilse Mitaoon,Ye Bata Dena

Tumko Bhool Pana Mere Liye Namumkeen Hai
Mumkin Hai Agar Meri Saari YaadeiN Mitaa Dena





"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"


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wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
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24th September 2008, 02:39 PM

Wah diyaji.............kya likha hai aapne..... dard ko shabdo me aise baya kiya hai ki sach me dil ko chhugayi aapki yeah shayri......

Bohot achhe likhte rahiye aur khush rahiye.............


Na jane kyu hame aasu bahana nahi aata,
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hi diya... lo tumahare kehne par main is thread mein aa gaya hun... umeed hai... ki aap khush hongi... aapki shayri dard k mamle mein lajawaab hai... really... u r great...

dard ko apne jab chhupaya maine....
aankh na royi to kya dil rulaya maine...
ye saja jo kabhi di thi usne mujhe ...
wo bhool gaya fir bhi use nibhaaya maine.... vicky....

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Bahut khoob. darad pada to dil ne uf kaha, achha likha hai likhte rahe,

kuch dard gam ban dhal jayenge
kuch chita tak sath jayenge( NM)

Sukriya raj ji bas chhoti si koshish hai aap younhi saath dete rahiye ......

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25th September 2008, 01:08 PM

kosish acchi thi likhte rahe yu hi.

aj fir man udas hai or ankhe nam hai
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25th September 2008, 01:55 PM

Meri Pyari Roshni....socha na tha ki meri diya ki bhi gamo.n se pahchaan hai, pata chala aaj to dukh hua par dear yehi zindgi hai....yahan sukh hai to uske saath dukh bhi hai....phoolo.n ke saath kaante bhi hain...shayri acchi lagi...shayri ke saath dard ki bayaani khoob ki hai....likhti raho.

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kabhi aansu to kabhi khushi bechi...
humne akele mein tanhai bechi...

chand saanse hain kharidne k liye...
roj marti hui jindgi bechi...

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Aadaab Diya Ji.......Aaj aapka yeh kalaam padha bahut accha laga padhkar aapke ehssa dil chulenewale rahe aur ese hi likhti raha kijiye aur accha likh payengi aap waqt nikalke auro ko bhi padha kare to kafi madad milegi aapko aur dua karta hoon ki koi dard aapke paas na rahe.........aapke kalam par meri daad hazir hai kubool kijiye
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Wah diyaji.............kya likha hai aapne..... dard ko shabdo me aise baya kiya hai ki sach me dil ko chhugayi aapki yeah shayri......

Bohot achhe likhte rahiye aur khush rahiye.............

Sukriya Pooja ji
aap ke Reply dekh ke hume bahot khusi hui ..aap youn saath dete rahiye ....humesha khus rahiye


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Meri Pyari Roshni....socha na tha ki meri diya ki bhi gamo.n se pahchaan hai, pata chala aaj to dukh hua par dear yehi zindgi hai....yahan sukh hai to uske saath dukh bhi hai....phoolo.n ke saath kaante bhi hain...shayri acchi lagi...shayri ke saath dard ki bayaani khoob ki hai....likhti raho.

kush raho
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Dard to kisiko nehin chorti Di ...bin bulaye aajati hai ...Dukh to thi hi nehin zindegi main per muft main khud invite kar di ...ab thori bahot bhugatna to paregi .....Per aap ho na to aapke Roshni ab khus hai ....
Thori bahot dard ko bayaan karne ki koshish ki thi ...aap ko pasand aayi ....Ab mujhe khusi mil gayi
Meri Pyari di aap na hote to sayad main 2line likh na pati ...aap humesha mere saath dijiyega ..


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27th September 2008, 02:43 AM

diya sahibaa !

dina ba din lafz zubaaN pakad rahe haiN , lahjaa durust ho raha hai aur Qalaam parwaan chadd rahe haiN !

inshaa allah vo din bhi aayega jab aap baa behar kaafiyaa radeef ke saath ghazal likhengi !

yakinan ye koshish e kadR kabil e tareef hai !

kuch ashaar nihaayati masoom aur dil ke behad kareeb nazar aaye !

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27th September 2008, 03:01 PM

Diya SahiiBa!! ....

BehTareeN Aur JazbaaTi QalaaM Pesh Kiya Aapne... Kabhi Kabhi Zindagi Is Mod Par Bhi Chood Deti hai!!

ye baaT Shayad Hum Aur aaP na Samjh Paye!!...

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28th September 2008, 01:16 AM

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Kuchh dard to youn hi mil jate hain ,

kuchh apnone toffe main de dete hain ....
Hum to khusi dena chahate hain sabko ..
Fir kyun sab gham ke khariddar ban jate hain ....


Mahfil Main sab ko Diya ki salam.....
kuchh dard jab had se gujar jate hain to ,aapke pass aajati hun

Hume to nagme thik se likhna bhi nehin aate ....Jo bhi galti hui hogi dilse maaf kijiyega ....







Bhulna chahate Ho Mujhe To Beshak Bhool Jana
Apne Hatoon Ke Lakeer Se Meri Naam Mita Dena

Har Jagah Tere Pehechan Liye Ghumti Hun maiN
Main Kya Hun Tera Yeh Aaj Tu Mujhe Bata deNa

Main Manti huN Tujhse Mohabbat Karna Jurm Hai
Usii Jurm Ki Mujhe "Koi Acchi Saza De Dena"

Is Jeevan Ka Har Pal Tere Hi Naam Kar Di Hai
Tu Usse Gujraa Hua Kal Samjh Kar Bhoola deNa

Apne Zakhom Ko Chhupake,Tere Bin Kaise jiooN
Tere Pyar Ko Kaise Dilse Mitaoon,Ye Bata Dena

Tumko Bhool Pana Mere Liye Namumkeen Hai
Mumkin Hai Agar Meri Saari YaadeiN Mitaa Dena



DIYA DIYA DIYA YEH AAJ AAPNE KYA KEH DIYA
DARD MEIN MUSKURANE KA HOSLA DE DIYA.......EXCILLLENT ....BAHUT KHOOB,
EK SHER AAPKI NAZAR KERTA HU,
:TOOTI HUI MUNDAIR PER EK JALTA HUA CHIRAG(DIYA)
MAUSAM SE KEH RAHA HAI ZARA AANDHI CHALA K DEKH......NOT MINE.
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shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
   
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29th September 2008, 02:34 PM

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diya sahibaa !

dina ba din lafz zubaaN pakad rahe haiN , lahjaa durust ho raha hai aur Qalaam parwaan chadd rahe haiN !

inshaa allah vo din bhi aayega jab aap baa behar kaafiyaa radeef ke saath ghazal likhengi !

yakinan ye koshish e kadR kabil e tareef hai !

kuch ashaar nihaayati masoom aur dil ke behad kareeb nazar aaye !

Bhulna chahate Ho Mujhe To Beshak Bhool Jana
Apne Hatoon Ke Lakeer Se Meri Naam Mita Dena

Har Jagah Tere Pehechan Liye Ghumti Hun maiN
Main Kya Hun Tera Yeh Aaj Tu Mujhe Bata deNa

Tumko Bhool Pana Mere Liye Namumkeen Hai
Mumkin Hai Agar Meri Saari YaadeiN Mitaa Dena

to filhaal mubaraQbaad
aur ..
daad Qabool farmaayeiN !

Kshitiz ji,

sukriya ...aap jab bhi koi salah dete hain hume bahot achha lagta hai ...aur thori achha likhne ka irada pakka hota hai ....aap younhi humesha saath dijiyega ...ho sakta hai kal koi chamatkar ho aur meri gazal main aap ko ek bhi galti nazar na aaye ....aisa to sayad nehin hogi ...per koshish jari hai .........

Daad dilse kabool hai

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Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai


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29th September 2008, 02:38 PM

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Diya SahiiBa!! ....

BehTareeN Aur JazbaaTi QalaaM Pesh Kiya Aapne... Kabhi Kabhi Zindagi Is Mod Par Bhi Chood Deti hai!!

ye baaT Shayad Hum Aur aaP na Samjh Paye!!...

TareeF Qabool KAre!

Amrit ji


Aap ne sahi kaha ...kabhi kabhi zindegi hume us mod per le aati hai jo humne kabhi soche bhi nehin....Har halat main jine ki koshish karte hain...aap ko humare Qalam pasand aayi ...yeh humareliye khusi ki baat hai ...jab bhi kabhi koi galati naraz aaye humae batadijiyega ...nehin to SDC pe ek chulbuli sayar ki kami reh jayegi .........
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DIYA DIYA DIYA YEH AAJ AAPNE KYA KEH DIYA
DARD MEIN MUSKURANE KA HOSLA DE DIYA.......EXCILLLENT ....BAHUT KHOOB,
EK SHER AAPKI NAZAR KERTA HU,
:TOOTI HUI MUNDAIR PER EK JALTA HUA CHIRAG(DIYA)
MAUSAM SE KEH RAHA HAI ZARA AANDHI CHALA K DEKH......NOT MINE.
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Tarih ji

Dilse Sukriya aada karna chahati hun aapke ...aap apne waqt nikalke humare thread ko dekhe aur Reply kiye ....Aap jaise kahan dard ko bayaan kar pate hain hum...sirf ek koshish hi kiye hain....

Aap ke sher Hume bahot pasand aayi..........Younhi Hosla dete rahiye ...Aap bhi mahfil ko Roshan karte rahiye ...

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3rd October 2008, 10:45 PM

diya ji apki koshsih achi hai yun bhi dil se jo kama kiya jaye usmein jajbat ho usmein yaisa kuch hota hi hai jo sabke dil tak pahunche aur aap kamyaab rahi is gazal ko sabke dil tak pahunchane min.

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31st October 2008, 08:27 PM

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diya ji apki koshsih achi hai yun bhi dil se jo kama kiya jaye usmein jajbat ho usmein yaisa kuch hota hi hai jo sabke dil tak pahunche aur aap kamyaab rahi is gazal ko sabke dil tak pahunchane min.

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aap younhi humari hosla badhate rahiye ...Hum koshish karenge aur bhi achha likhein ...aur aapko pasand ho ..

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diya me sdc me nayi hu maine aapki likhi hui ghazal pasand aayi bohut acha likha hai zindahi me gam bhi hai aur khushi bhi lekin gam ne mujhse dostin ki hai isliye yeh gazal bohut jyada pasand aayi
   
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