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Bol Ri Baarish... - 24th June 2015, 03:12 PM

Ek Kavita- Meri pyari saheli baarish ke naam

Bol ri baarish, bol na tu... bol kahan se aayi hai?
Kyun? cham cham cham kar ke tuune dil mein aag lagaayi hai


jhoolon par udate rehna aur pee ka dena peeng mujhe
mere soye armaanon ne aaj to lee angdaayi hai

bol ri baarish.........................

Dil ka dard, piya ki yaadein, garm chaai ki ye chuski
ye sab jaane kahan se tu phir apne saath le aayi hai

bol ri baarish............

baadal ka aanchal odhe lagti hai mujhko tu dulhan
itnaa tu jo roti hai kya aaj teri bidaayi hai?

bol ri baarish....................

sakhi ri teri boondon mein dikhta hai mujhko aks apna
kya tere piya ne bhi tujhko koi chubhti baat sunaayi hai?

bol ri baarish...............

chod de ab tu laaj sharam aur odh le aanchal masti ka
keh de saagar se jaaker gar ussey milne aayi hai

bol ri baarish .......................



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wah wah Sarika jee kamaal ki kavita hai itne pyaare ehsaas
anand aa gaya padhkar

yeh do lines to dil ko chhoo gayeen


baadal ka aanchal odhe lagti hai mujhko tu dulhan
itnaa tu jo roti hai kya aaj teri bidaayi hai?

sakhi ri teri boondon mein dikhta hai mujhko aks apna
kya tere piya ne bhi tujhko koi chubhti baat sunaayi hai?

likhti rahen
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waahh kya baat hai sarika jee.....

behad hi haseen aur naazuk sa kalam aapne bazm ko pesh kiyaa hai......

dil se niklee daad qubool karen... aur aise hi acha achaa likhtee rahen....

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Ek Kavita- Meri pyari saheli baarish ke naam

Bol ri baarish, bol na tu... bol kahan se aayi hai?
Kyun? cham cham cham kar ke tuune dil mein aag lagaayi hai


jhoolon par udate rehna aur pee ka dena peeng mujhe
mere soye armaanon ne aaj to lee angdaayi hai

bol ri baarish.........................

Dil ka dard, piya ki yaadein, garm chaai ki ye chuski
ye sab jaane kahan se tu phir apne saath le aayi hai

bol ri baarish............

baadal ka aanchal odhe lagti hai mujhko tu dulhan
itnaa tu jo roti hai kya aaj teri bidaayi hai?

bol ri baarish....................

sakhi ri teri boondon mein dikhta hai mujhko aks apna
kya tere piya ne bhi tujhko koi chubhti baat sunaayi hai?

bol ri baarish...............

chod de ab tu laaj sharam aur odh le aanchal masti ka
keh de saagar se jaaker gar ussey milne aayi hai

bol ri baarish .......................

Arry waaaaaaaaaahhhhh.....

Sarika jee..

Kaafi arse baad meHfil e ishQ ka rukh kiya to aap ky kalaam ko saamne paaya..
kia kahooN... be-panah haseeN kalaam hy ... sir ta paa jaadu hy ....

kisi aik sher ky liye kehna muskhil... tamaam ashaar hi lajwaab haiN ...
bheege hue aur barish meiN nahaaye hue....

sach kahoN to dil chu gaye aap ke alfaaz ...

aaj yahan bhi baarish hui hy ...
so phaDhne ka lutf dobaala ho gaya ...

kahiN phisal na jaaoN tere khayaaloN meiN chalte chalte!
apni yaadoN ko roko ke mere shehar meiN baarish aayi hai ...

beshumaar daad qabool kejiye ..

likhte rahiye ..


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wah wah Sarika jee kamaal ki kavita hai itne pyaare ehsaas
anand aa gaya padhkar

yeh do lines to dil ko chhoo gayeen


baadal ka aanchal odhe lagti hai mujhko tu dulhan
itnaa tu jo roti hai kya aaj teri bidaayi hai?

sakhi ri teri boondon mein dikhta hai mujhko aks apna
kya tere piya ne bhi tujhko koi chubhti baat sunaayi hai?

likhti rahen
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waahh kya baat hai sarika jee.....

behad hi haseen aur naazuk sa kalam aapne bazm ko pesh kiyaa hai......

dil se niklee daad qubool karen... aur aise hi acha achaa likhtee rahen....

Shaad....
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Arry waaaaaaaaaahhhhh.....

Sarika jee..

Kaafi arse baad meHfil e ishQ ka rukh kiya to aap ky kalaam ko saamne paaya..
kia kahooN... be-panah haseeN kalaam hy ... sir ta paa jaadu hy ....

kisi aik sher ky liye kehna muskhil... tamaam ashaar hi lajwaab haiN ...
bheege hue aur barish meiN nahaaye hue....

sach kahoN to dil chu gaye aap ke alfaaz ...

aaj yahan bhi baarish hui hy ...
so phaDhne ka lutf dobaala ho gaya ...

kahiN phisal na jaaoN tere khayaaloN meiN chalte chalte!
apni yaadoN ko roko ke mere shehar meiN baarish aayi hai ...

beshumaar daad qabool kejiye ..

likhte rahiye ..
Hassan ji itni tareef na karen ki khud par guruur aa jaye.

Shukriya.

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Ek Kavita- Meri pyari saheli baarish ke naam

Bol ri baarish, bol na tu... bol kahan se aayi hai?
Kyun? cham cham cham kar ke tuune dil mein aag lagaayi hai


jhoolon par udate rehna aur pee ka dena peeng mujhe
mere soye armaanon ne aaj to lee angdaayi hai

bol ri baarish.........................

Dil ka dard, piya ki yaadein, garm chaai ki ye chuski
ye sab jaane kahan se tu phir apne saath le aayi hai

bol ri baarish............

baadal ka aanchal odhe lagti hai mujhko tu dulhan
itnaa tu jo roti hai kya aaj teri bidaayi hai?

bol ri baarish....................

sakhi ri teri boondon mein dikhta hai mujhko aks apna
kya tere piya ne bhi tujhko koi chubhti baat sunaayi hai?

bol ri baarish...............

chod de ab tu laaj sharam aur odh le aanchal masti ka
keh de saagar se jaaker gar ussey milne aayi hai

bol ri baarish .......................

yeh muasam ka asar hai ya ishq ki khumaari
kyun ruk ke dhadhkano mien yeh aag si lagi hai

Bahut khoob Bahut khoob...aankhen band kari aur kuch jhalkiyaan de gayi band aakhon se yeh kavita mujhko...

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Ek Kavita- Meri pyari saheli baarish ke naam

Bol ri baarish, bol na tu... bol kahan se aayi hai?
Kyun? cham cham cham kar ke tuune dil mein aag lagaayi hai


jhoolon par udate rehna aur pee ka dena peeng mujhe
mere soye armaanon ne aaj to lee angdaayi hai

bol ri baarish.........................

Dil ka dard, piya ki yaadein, garm chaai ki ye chuski
ye sab jaane kahan se tu phir apne saath le aayi hai

bol ri baarish............

baadal ka aanchal odhe lagti hai mujhko tu dulhan
itnaa tu jo roti hai kya aaj teri bidaayi hai?

bol ri baarish....................

sakhi ri teri boondon mein dikhta hai mujhko aks apna
kya tere piya ne bhi tujhko koi chubhti baat sunaayi hai?

bol ri baarish...............

chod de ab tu laaj sharam aur odh le aanchal masti ka
keh de saagar se jaaker gar ussey milne aayi hai

bol ri baarish .......................



Dear Sarika.....bahuttttttttt hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne, bade saade se lafzon meiN apni baat kahi hai aapne, lafz aur bayaani dono kamaal ke rhe. yeh aik sher muje apne dil ke bahut kareeb lga:

bol ri baarish............

baadal ka aanchal odhe lagti hai mujhko tu dulhan
itnaa tu jo roti hai kya aaj teri bidaayi hai?

yu hi likhti rho...khush rho
bahut saare pyar ke saath
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Ek Kavita- Meri pyari saheli baarish ke naam

Bol ri baarish, bol na tu... bol kahan se aayi hai?
Kyun? cham cham cham kar ke tuune dil mein aag lagaayi hai


jhoolon par udate rehna aur pee ka dena peeng mujhe
mere soye armaanon ne aaj to lee angdaayi hai

bol ri baarish.........................

Dil ka dard, piya ki yaadein, garm chaai ki ye chuski
ye sab jaane kahan se tu phir apne saath le aayi hai

bol ri baarish............

baadal ka aanchal odhe lagti hai mujhko tu dulhan
itnaa tu jo roti hai kya aaj teri bidaayi hai?

bol ri baarish....................

sakhi ri teri boondon mein dikhta hai mujhko aks apna
kya tere piya ne bhi tujhko koi chubhti baat sunaayi hai?

bol ri baarish...............

chod de ab tu laaj sharam aur odh le aanchal masti ka
keh de saagar se jaaker gar ussey milne aayi hai

bol ri baarish .......................


Wah Sarika ji, kya chulbula kalaam pesh kiya hai.. Kitne rang bhare haiN issmeiN..!
Sirf waah waah nikal rahi hai.
Bohot khuub. yuNhi likhte rahiye.


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Bol ri baarish, bol na tu... bol kahan se aayi hai?
Kyun? cham cham cham kar ke tuune dil mein aag lagaayi hai


jhoolon par udate rehna aur pee ka dena peeng mujhe
mere soye armaanon ne aaj to lee angdaayi hai

bol ri baarish.........................

Dil ka dard, piya ki yaadein, garm chaai ki ye chuski
ye sab jaane kahan se tu phir apne saath le aayi hai

bol ri baarish............

baadal ka aanchal odhe lagti hai mujhko tu dulhan
itnaa tu jo roti hai kya aaj teri bidaayi hai?

bol ri baarish....................

sakhi ri teri boondon mein dikhta hai mujhko aks apna
kya tere piya ne bhi tujhko koi chubhti baat sunaayi hai?

bol ri baarish...............

chod de ab tu laaj sharam aur odh le aanchal masti ka
keh de saagar se jaaker gar ussey milne aayi hai

bol ri baarish .......................

maine pahle bhi kaha awwesome aur ab bhi kahoongi...beautiifullll...kitne pyaar se sajaya hai aapne is kavita ko jaise kisi ne bageeche ke tarah tarah ke phool chunkar ek sath rakh diye hon..aur utna hee nazuk.sach meiN barish ki roomaniyat aur muhabbat samayi hai isme..
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Bahut khoob Bahut khoob...aankhen band kari aur kuch jhalkiyaan de gayi band aakhon se yeh kavita mujhko...

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Dear Sarika.....bahuttttttttt hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne, bade saade se lafzon meiN apni baat kahi hai aapne, lafz aur bayaani dono kamaal ke rhe. yeh aik sher muje apne dil ke bahut kareeb lga:

bol ri baarish............

baadal ka aanchal odhe lagti hai mujhko tu dulhan
itnaa tu jo roti hai kya aaj teri bidaayi hai?

yu hi likhti rho...khush rho
bahut saare pyar ke saath
diii

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30th June 2015, 07:05 AM

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Ek Kavita- Meri pyari saheli baarish ke naam

Bol ri baarish, bol na tu... bol kahan se aayi hai?
Kyun? cham cham cham kar ke tuune dil mein aag lagaayi hai


jhoolon par udate rehna aur pee ka dena peeng mujhe
mere soye armaanon ne aaj to lee angdaayi hai

bol ri baarish.........................

Dil ka dard, piya ki yaadein, garm chaai ki ye chuski
ye sab jaane kahan se tu phir apne saath le aayi hai

bol ri baarish............

baadal ka aanchal odhe lagti hai mujhko tu dulhan
itnaa tu jo roti hai kya aaj teri bidaayi hai?

bol ri baarish....................

sakhi ri teri boondon mein dikhta hai mujhko aks apna
kya tere piya ne bhi tujhko koi chubhti baat sunaayi hai?

bol ri baarish...............

chod de ab tu laaj sharam aur odh le aanchal masti ka
keh de saagar se jaaker gar ussey milne aayi hai

bol ri baarish .......................

Simply beautiful bhabhi!!!! Loved it, how beautifully you have written those feelings.. Dil se dheron daad

Naam batao jisne chhubti baat sunaai, arzi lagate hain supreme court me : D


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Simply beautiful bhabhi!!!! Loved it, how beautifully you have written those feelings.. Dil se dheron daad

Naam batao jisne chhubti baat sunaai, arzi lagate hain supreme court me : D
Chill Devar ji

aapko to pata hai bhabhi aapki jhansi ki raani hai to koi usey chubhti baat kaise sunayega?...................

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