aapki tazza tareeN gazal padi behad acchi lagi...vakai bahut JOSH meiN likhi hai tabhi to gazal ka har sher aik se badkar aik hai...dil se mubarakbaad hazir hai kabool karo ji....par mere chottu ko kahiN kho mat dena...muje apna chottu bahut aziz hai...JOSH ka suwagat hai dil se
god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
Nihaytii khoohsoorat ghazal kahi aapne .. maza aa gaya parh ke ...
kucu ashaar to ghazab ka andaaz samete hue the
Ke dosatoN ne thaa kahaa tuu pyaar karnaa naa kabhee
Jab vaar ye kartaa hai to jaataa kabhee Khaalee nahiiN
wo chaahatee hongee mujhe Khud se bhi zyaadaaH haii yaqeeN
Shaayad tabhee ussne mi’ree kasmeN kabhee Khaayee nahiiN
Ye Zindagee ik raaz haii meeThaa bhi haii kaDwaa bhi haii
dil se jiyo to baat kya!! par dil hi to raaZee nahiiN
Uljhaa nahiiN haaraa nahiiN Shikwaa nahiiN taNhaa nahiiN
maiN “JOSH” huuN maayoos ho kar Zindagee kaaTee nahiiN
haii joSh meiN to joSh kee baateN nah kar ey! “JOSH” tuu
Shaayar hai tuu Shaayar hi reh daryaa hai tuu maajhee nahiiN
Kya kahne ..naye josh aur naye andaaz ko humara sallaam..
inshaallah aur achha likhiye
Bahut achhe kallam par daad humaari jaanib se bhi qubool farmaaeiN
Apna khyaal rakhiye
Khush rahiye
Shaayar hai tuu Shaayar hi reh daryaa hai tuu maajhee nahiiN
andaaz
Last edited by kshitiz; 13th January 2013 at 12:06 PM..
Nihaytii khoohsoorat ghazal kahi aapne .. maza aa gaya parh ke ...
kucu ashaar to ghazab ka andaaz samete hue the
Ke dosatoN ne thaa kahaa tuu pyaar karnaa naa kabhee
Jab vaar ye kartaa hai to jaataa kabhee Khaalee nahiiN
wo chaahatee hongee mujhe Khud se bhi zyaadaaH haii yaqeeN
Shaayad tabhee ussne mi’ree kasmeN kabhee Khaayee nahiiN
Ye Zindagee ik raaz haii meeThaa bhi haii kaDwaa bhi haii
dil se jiyo to baat kya!! par dil hi to raaZee nahiiN
Uljhaa nahiiN haaraa nahiiN Shikwaa nahiiN taNhaa nahiiN
maiN “JOSH” huuN maayoos ho kar Zindagee kaaTee nahiiN
haii joSh meiN to joSh kee baateN nah kar ey! “JOSH” tuu
Shaayar hai tuu Shaayar hi reh daryaa hai tuu maajhee nahiiN
Kya kahne ..naye josh aur naye andaaz ko humara sallaam..
inshaallah aur achha likhiye
Bahut achhe kallam par daad humaari jaanib se bhi qubool farmaaeiN
Apna khyaal rakhiye
Khush rahiye
Shaayar hai tuu Shaayar hi reh daryaa hai tuu maajhee nahiiN
Kshitiz Bhaa'ii:
namaste!
Ghazal ke baare meiN aapse bahot kuChh seeKhne ko milaa... aapne jo baat seeKhaaii wo dil ko Chhu gayii aur ek dam saheeh baat kahii thee aapne... maiN koShiSh karuungaa aage aur bhee behtar tareeQe se liKh sakuuN... aap aise hi saath dete rahiyengaa ees safar meiN... aapki daad dil se QabUl haii !
aapki tazza tareeN gazal padi behad acchi lagi...vakai bahut JOSH meiN likhi hai tabhi to gazal ka har sher aik se badkar aik hai...dil se mubarakbaad hazir hai kabool karo ji....par mere chottu ko kahiN kho mat dena...muje apna chottu bahut aziz hai...JOSH ka suwagat hai dil se
god bless u
sister:
Pranaam
ab aap JOSH JI keh kar merii KhiNchaaii kar raheN haii... taKhallus nayaa hai maiN to wahii ka wahii huuN pooraanaa aur mujhe to dil meiN jaGah milii hai to Kho jaane ka Dar kaisaa ?? aapkaa aaShirwad saath raheN hameShaa yahee chaahataa huuN... Ghazal pasaNd aayii aapko jaan kar bahot hi KhuShii huii mujhe
aaj aapki es ghazal ko padhaker bahut hi khushi huyi.. beshak ek achchhe shayr ke gun aap mein aa gaye hain. aapne jo baate likhi apani sher ke madhyam se bahut hi kabile tarif hain. her ek sher apane aap mein lajvaab hai. kis kis sher ki tarif karu aur kis ko chhodu... so badhayi aapke 'josh' ke liye..
shubhkamnao sahit
apaka
Akant...
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
aaj aapki es ghazal ko padhaker bahut hi khushi huyi.. beshak ek achchhe shayr ke gun aap mein aa gaye hain. aapne jo baate likhi apani sher ke madhyam se bahut hi kabile tarif hain. her ek sher apane aap mein lajvaab hai. kis kis sher ki tarif karu aur kis ko chhodu... so badhayi aapke 'josh' ke liye..
shubhkamnao sahit
apaka
Akant...
Akant Bhaiya;
Pranaam
aapkaa merii Ghazal par aanaa mere liye bahot hi KhuShii kee baat haii... mujhe aaj bhee yaad hai ki jab maiN nayaa nayaa thaa ees pariwaar meiN tab aapka ek PM aayaa thaa .. jiss mein kis tarah liKheN usski jaankaaree thee.. kyuuNki uss waQt mujhe kuChh bhee ilm nahiiN thaa... Shayri lafz kyaa hotaa hai wo maiN jaantaa nahiiN thaa.. aapko merii Ghazal pasaNd aayiiN bahot achChhaa lagaa... saath dete rahiyengaa aage bhee
Wah re mere chhotu kyaa addaa hai kyaa byaanii hai..tum to ustaad ho gye ho bhai...sach much chhaa gye ho...bhut der se reply kar raha hoo.n so muaaf kar dena lakin bhut behtreen...Raj..
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
Wah re mere chhotu kyaa addaa hai kyaa byaanii hai..tum to ustaad ho gye ho bhai...sach much chhaa gye ho...bhut der se reply kar raha hoo.n so muaaf kar dena lakin bhut behtreen...Raj..
Big B
Pranaam
Aapko meri koshish par dekh kar hamesha hi khushi hoti haii..bas saath dete rahiye aage bhi