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ik baar to mil jaa... -
3rd December 2002, 12:53 PM
Dil ki gehraion se hum kisi ka jab intezar karte hai..par woh kabhi saamne nahin aata to kai baar dil ki aah aise alfazo mein ubhar ke saamne aati hai..
Tere intezar ki inteha kya battain dost... Dhadkan saath chod gayi..nabz bhi tham gayi.. kabar mein dafna gaye log.magar aankh khuli rahi.. jism beshak mit gaya rooh ko chen na mila.. mere khuda tuhi bata..kya wafa ka yahi hai silaaa??? rooh bhatak rahi hai..teri kasak ab bhi hai.. ab aur mat tadpaa..IK BAAR TO MIL JAA... kaale libaas mein aaye doot..door leja rahe hai mujhe.. "IK BAAR TO MIL JAA"yeh khaate hai kasam phir na bulaenge tujhe chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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4th June 2004, 01:05 PM
mere varinder,
rooh bhatak rahi hai..teri kasak ab bhi hai.. ab aur mat tadpaa..IK BAAR TO MIL JAA... zindgi bhar intzaar kiya or intzaar hi zindgi ban gaya achank woh saamne aaye or kayamat ka din ban gaya. tumhari meena |
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5th June 2004, 02:42 PM
Dhadkan saath chod gayi..nabz bhi tham gayi..
kabar mein dafna gaye log.magar aankh khuli rahi.. jism beshak mit gaya rooh ko chen na mila.. mere khuda tuhi bata..kya wafa ka yahi hai silaaa??? rooh bhatak rahi hai..teri kasak ab bhi hai.. ab aur mat tadpaa..IK BAAR TO MIL JAA... kaale libaas mein aaye doot..door leja rahe hai mujhe.. "IK BAAR TO MIL JAA"yeh khaate hai kasam phir na bulaenge tujje kya baat hai kitna sucha dard hai isme. bhiya ye kya hai haan??? sakhiiiiiiii शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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Re: ik baar to mil jaa... -
6th June 2004, 10:16 PM
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kash tumne ye kaha hota... ki tu aa aur fir faisla karna lautne ke liye agar tum haq se thamte hamara hath,ham na nahi kehte rukne ke liye is bebasi se bualana tumhara sayad galat bhi nahi hai magar... kabhi kabhi jabardasti bhi karni padti hai sanam ko manane ke liye jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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6th June 2004, 11:07 PM
Ghayal ji,
Dhadkan saath chod gayi..nabz bhi tham gayi.. kabar mein dafna gaye log.magar aankh khuli rahi.. jism beshak mit gaya rooh ko chen na mila.. mere khuda tuhi bata..kya wafa ka yahi hai silaaa??? rooh bhatak rahi hai..teri kasak ab bhi hai.. ab aur mat tadpaa..IK BAAR TO MIL JAA... kaale libaas mein aaye doot..door leja rahe hai mujhe.. "IK BAAR TO MIL JAA"yeh khaate hai kasam phir na bulaenge tujhe Aap sabhi yahan bade-bade shayar hei.n Hum to student hei.n aapke. per likhte khoob hei.n Aap. Hamari dua kubool kijiye. koshish to bahut ki per Deedar-e-sanam na hua shishe mei.n aks dikha aur ghayal parwana ho gaya. lakh murrhum lagai per sukhte nahi.n hai zakhm dard ki dariya ko bahte ek Jamana ho gaya nutkhut. Humko aata hai huner dil mei.n utar jaane kaa |
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hi -
6th June 2004, 11:25 PM
vow varinder jee
kamaal ka likha hai aapne varin ji ehm intezaar ka matlib har aik ko samijh mai nahi aata us waqat tak jab khud use experiance na karle its very hard to feel any other way. aap jis gehrai se apne khiyaalaat ko lafzo mai dala hai us pe dil se wah nikal gayi aur aapke lafzo ke dard ka ehsaas hum ko cho giya. beautiful poem keep it up hamesha likhte rahiye bye |
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8th June 2004, 05:18 AM
rooh bhatak rahi hai..teri kasak ab bhi hai..
ab aur mat tadpaa..IK BAAR TO MIL JAA... kaale libaas mein aaye doot..door leja rahe hai mujhe.. "IK BAAR TO MIL JAA"yeh khaate hai kasam phir na bulaenge tujhe Ghayal Bhayyia bahut khuub hai aapke dil kee kasak...na jaane kyon aapko UNKI majboori bataane ko man kar raha hai... Tamaam umr zindagi se duur rahe Teri khushi ke liye apni khushi se duur rahe Ab is se badhkar wafa ki sazaa kya hogi Ki tere ho kar bhi tujhse duur rahe don't know the shayar...  but shayad kuch dil ko tasalli ho yeh padhkar...duaaon sahit...paras aur Sanam aapne bhi bahut hee achha jawaab diya... kash tumne ye kaha hota... ki tu aa aur fir faisla karna lautne ke liye agar tum haq se thamte hamara hath,ham na nahi kehte rukne ke liye is bebasi se bualana tumhara sayad galat bhi nahi hai magar... kabhi kabhi jabardasti bhi karni padti hai sanam ko manane ke liye daad kabuul kijiey...simply superb! gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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12th June 2004, 01:55 AM
jism beshak mit gaya rooh ko chen na mila..
mere khuda tuhi bata..kya wafa ka yahi hai silaaa??? Bahut khoob Varinder ji! "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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12th June 2004, 06:30 PM
zindgi bhar intzaar kiya
or intzaar hi zindgi ban gaya achank woh saamne aaye or kayamat ka din ban gaya. Bahut khoob keh gayi aap MEENA JI.. sach kabhi kabhi to intzaar ki itni aadat ban jaati ha ke wahi zindagi ban jaata hai aur gar koi is intzaar ko bhi cheen le tau zindagi bhi naraaz ho jaati hai.. Poorane zakhm taaza karne ka Shukriya  Varinder |
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12th June 2004, 06:31 PM
Sakhi...
Ye kuchh bji tau nahin hai,bas kuchh dard tha jo kaagaz par utar gaya bas..aur kaafi waqt bhi ho chuka hai isse kaagaz pe uttre hue, ye tau Meena ji hai jo isse phir se saamne le aayi.. Keep smiling dear Varinder |
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12th June 2004, 06:36 PM
kash tumne ye kaha hota... ki tu aa aur fir faisla karna lautne ke liye
agar tum haq se thamte hamara hath,ham na nahi kehte rukne ke liye is bebasi se bualana tumhara sayad galat bhi nahi hai magar... kabhi kabhi jabardasti bhi karni padti hai sanam ko manane ke liye Haan..tsahi kehti ho, magar janbardasti unse hi kii jaati hai na jinpar aap apna haque samjho!! Aur haque aadmi us par hi rakhta hai jiske dil mein kuchh bhi aisa na ho jo tumse chuppa ho. Jab koi khud hi dilon mein faasle paida karr de doosre ko paraya samajh kar,apne dard usse chupa kar,tau fir koi kaise kisi par haque rakh sakta hai...Woh kar sakta hai tau sirf 'minnat' aur afsos magar yehi uski pyaar ki aawaz ban jaati hai.. Tum yahan aayi..apne khyaalat aage rakhe..achha laga mujhe Khush Raho |
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14th June 2004, 05:32 AM
ghayal sahab
kaise ho? ham hazar koshish kar lain lafzon main aap jaisa asar nahi la sakte,,kiya baat hay sahab...intzar ..or dard ki kafiyat ko kaise .. ache andaz se byan kiya hay..nohay khoob sahab.. likhte rhaiye ga... agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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14th June 2004, 09:24 PM
veeru Bhai ..
Kya haal haiN kayi dinoN baad dikhe waise hum khud hi yahaN pe nahi the .. Aur ye kya dikhte hi ye udaas mahol kyoN bade gumzada dikh rahe ho bhai .. likhte to tum hamesha se hi achha ho bas nazar jara kam aate ho .. waise bhi achhi cizeiN duniyaN kii nazaroN se chup ke hi raheiN to achha hai nazar lagne ka khatra kam ho jata hai .. fir bhi kabhi kabhar rabta farmaya karo bahut achha likha hai iss baar bhi .. tareef Qabool karo Apna khyaal rakho |
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16th June 2004, 11:55 PM
koshish to bahut ki per Deedar-e-sanam na hua
shishe mei.n aks dikha aur ghayal parwana ho gaya. lakh murrhum lagai per sukhte nahi.n hai zakhm dard ki dariya ko bahte ek Jamana ho gaya Aisi gehri baat karne waala koi mamoolishakhs tau nahin ho sakta...Bahut khoob kaha aapne Nutkhut jii.. Yahan koi bada chata nahin hai .sab barabar an aur sab ik doosre se seekhte hain..Aapne yaha aakar is kalaam ko pada jo bahut pehle likha tha maine..isse pasand kiya aur meri honsla afzai ki..in san ke liye shukrguzaar huun aapka Varinder chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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16th June 2004, 11:58 PM
Romana ji..
Aaj aapko yaha dekhkar sach mein bahut achha laga, aap tau jaise id ka chaand ho gayi hain..ja fir keh lijiye Aamir Khan ho gayi hai jo bas 6 mahino ke baad hi screen par dikhta hai.. Apne nacheez ke dard ko pehchaana..usse samjha aur pasand kiya..ab kis kis baat ka shukriya karoon Bas yahi kehta hua izzazat chahoonga ke hume yaad rakhne ka shukriya Varinder |
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17th June 2004, 12:03 AM
Tamaam umr zindagi se duur rahe
Teri khushi ke liye apni khushi se duur rahe Ab is se badhkar wafa ki sazaa kya hogi Ki tere ho kar bhi tujhse duur rahe 'Dil ko behlaane ke liye ghalib khyaal achha hai'...Mujhe is shayar ka naam maloom hai ..lol. Paras ..main sachaii mein vishwaas rakhta huun..Jhoothi tassali to assali hi hui naa.. Par tumhari baa samajhta huun main..hansla dena chahti ho haiya ko.. Shukriya...isse padne ka aur pasand karne kaa Varinder chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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22nd July 2004, 11:51 PM
Khan Bhai Aur Kshitiz Bhai,
Aap jaise doston ki wajah se hi likh raha huun main, ye aap ki haunsla afzai hi hai jo ab tak kalam se naata juda hai.. Aap logon se hi seekha hai shayri ko aur aap se hi seekhta rahoonga. Nacheez ka saath nibhaane ka shukriya Varinder chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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24th July 2004, 03:38 PM
hello varinder ji
apke ye lafz"EK BAAR TO MIL JA" bahut kasa chortey hain dil per aur dil hamara bhi tarap jata hai kisi se yeh kehne ko ki ..kash ab to koi ek baar aaker mil jaye jiski rah me palkeyin bichaye baithey hain..... bahut hi pyari,,rachna... |
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25th July 2004, 06:50 PM
Varindar saahab...
Namaskaar.. rooh bhatak rahi hai..teri kasak ab bhi hai.. ab aur mat tadpaa..IK BAAR TO MIL JAA... kaale libaas mein aaye doot..door leja rahe hai mujhe.. "IK BAAR TO MIL JAA"yeh khaate hai kasam phir na bulaenge tujhe Kya kahna... koyi lafz nahi hai jo yah jataa sake ki yah sher hame kitni achchhi lagi... Kaafi kasaak nazar aa rahi hai hame aap ki yah qalam meN... Daad qabul kijiye... MayanK |
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