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15th May 2004, 01:23 AM
jnab ghayal sahab...
kais ehain...? Unse bichadkar zinda rehte,haste gaate Hum me ye hunar hota tau achha tha Doston ne sajde kiye par 'parwana' raha tanha Dua.on mein asar hota tau achha tha --------- lafzon ko dard bana kar pesh karna...asaan kam nahi hota or agar us main..qawaid..ka khiyal rakha jaye to kiya baat hay.. aap ki shayri main yeh kuch milta hay..acha lagta hay parh kar...apna kjhiyal rakhna.. agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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17th May 2004, 12:03 AM
Khan Sahib...
Ye to padne waale ki nazar aur dil e purjazbaat hota hai jo kisi ke likhe lafzon mein dard ko pehchaan sake.. Behad shukrguzaar huun aapka jo yahan aakar nacheez ki honslaafzai kee aapne.. Shukriya nawajish Varinder chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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4th December 2005, 09:27 AM
Varinder bhai,
Bahut khoob... too good infact... Meena di ne yeh rachna dikhlayi... aur sach maaniye bahut hi behtreen likha hai aapne.... aaj kal aapka aana kam hota hai... magar umeed hai aap ek baar phir aayenge.... vaise samjh sakta hoon... bhabhi ke saath masroof hain.... magar unhe bhi leke aaiyega jaroor.... Take Care Rohin |
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4th December 2005, 09:27 AM
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my dear varinder u are a friend i have always cherished. getting in touch with u have always been a pleasure nice to read this ghazal i loved these lines though whole ghazal is awesome Hamne dam tab toda jab manzil thi saamne Poora ye safar hota tau achha tha keep going and hope life is treating u well luv ya Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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