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Parvano ki iss basti mein - 9th April 2014, 03:00 PM

Parvano ki iss basti mein aashiyane kaha.n milte hae.n
Tutay dilo.n ki rate par pholl kaha.n khilte hae.n

Jo mehboob ko khuda se uncha samjhe
Aisa mohabbat walo k iradde kaha.n hilte hae.n

Zindagi guzar jatti hae aansu bahatay
Dosh dene wolo.n k hoth kaha.n silte hae.n


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Parvano ki iss basti mein aashiyane kaha.n milte hae.n
Tutay dilo.n ki rate par pholl kaha.n khilte hae.n

Jo mehboob ko khuda se uncha samjhe
Aisa mohabbat walo k iradde kaha.n hilte hae.n

Zindagi guzar jatti hae aansu bahatay
Dosh dene wolo.n k hoth kaha.n silte hae.n
Dear Honey ,

aapke ehsaas bahut achche lage ...keep it up.

kyun aj bhi talalshte ho mohabbat ka massiah ,
kya sirf ek hi kafi nahi nahi tha sooli charne ke liye .

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10th April 2014, 12:49 PM

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Parvano ki iss basti mein aashiyane kaha.n milte hae.n
Tutay dilo.n ki rate par pholl kaha.n khilte hae.n

Jo mehboob ko khuda se uncha samjhe
Aisa mohabbat walo k iradde kaha.n hilte hae.n

Zindagi guzar jatti hae aansu bahatay
Dosh dene wolo.n k hoth kaha.n silte hae.n
bahot sunder ehsaas hai, Honeyji.........
keep it up...........



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Parvano ki iss basti mein aashiyane kaha.n milte hae.n
Tutay dilo.n ki rate par pholl kaha.n khilte hae.n

Jo mehboob ko khuda se uncha samjhe
Aisa mohabbat walo k iradde kaha.n hilte hae.n

Zindagi guzar jatti hae aansu bahatay
Dosh dene wolo.n k hoth kaha.n silte hae.n
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