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Arrow Wounded Souls - 16th June 2010, 04:39 PM

wounded souls

whoosh whoosh
pock a pock a pock
whoosh
the sound of incoming

wounded souls
torn up and twisted
alongside guts
and shattered limbs

his face was white
like a china doll’s
fighting for breath
against the wind
losing blood
inside and out

as the pain drained away
between the shock
and the angels
he said:
Tell Momma I love her?


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11th May 2011, 07:56 PM

as the pain drained away
between the shock

touching and sad...
nice lines

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