aap aa gaye.....

[khanak]

jab jab koi aahat si hui
yu laga ke aap aa gaye…
koi dastak is dil pe dekar
jaane kyu kahi chhup gaye…
jab khojne aapko nikli mai
toh jaane kyu kahi kho gaye…
dil aapke aage thak sa gaya
aakhir aap jo isse bha gaye…
chahte hue bhi kuch keh naa sake
aap jo sab ek pal mei keh gaye…
bheed mei bhi tanha thi mai
jaane kab aap apne aa gaye…
chain ki neend ab sone lagi hoo
swapn hazaaro jo aap dikha gaye…
har ek sapna dil se jeeti hu mai
rang bharne waale jo ab aa gaye…
aalsi thi nahi, bana gaye aap
in aakho mei jo aap chhup gaye…
kholne ka inhe mann nahi karta
bas issi darr se…
koi aakar agar aapko mujhse door kar gaye…

[aru]

So who is that lucky guy.. Good lines thodi si rhythming kee kami hai.,but feelings r very good

[khanak]

thanks for replying aru......... actually ye likha hi maine kab pata hi nahi chala... kuch aur sochte sochte ye likh diya......