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kya dhoondhoge - 6th September 2016, 10:09 AM
kin galiyon se tum ab mahtaab dhoondhoge
toote pyaalon mein kaisi sharaab dhoondhoge

bhool jaayegi hai dastoor-e-duniyaa aisa
chand chehron mein kahan ahbaab dhoondhoge

zard mausam mein mayoos honge gulshan bhi
kin baageechon se khiltaa gulaab dhoondhoge

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warnaa mehfil mein kisko janaab dhoondhoge

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6th September 2016, 03:30 PM
dil-nawaazee ka bayaan wa'az se karna seekho
warnaa mehfil mein kisko janaab dhoondhoge


Waah!!Waahh!!..khoob kaha qasid sahab....bahot badhiya..
Sabhi ashaar bahot khoob par ye sher khaas pasand aaya...naye takhallus ke sath umda kalaam pesh kiya hai bazm me apne
hai bahut door vo aur hai.n nigaah-e-chasm teri
'Qasid' kab tak tum unka jawaab dhoondhoge


Kya baat hai! Waah......

daad qubool kariyega..

Likhte rahein....

Salamat rahein..


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kin galiyon se tum ab mahtaab dhoondhoge
toote pyaalon mein kaisi sharaab dhoondhoge

bhool jaayegi hai dastoor-e-duniyaa aisa
chand chehron mein kahan ahbaab dhoondhoge

zard mausam mein mayoos honge gulshan bhi
kin baageechon se khiltaa gulaab dhoondhoge

dil-nawaazee ka bayaan wa'az se karna seekho
warnaa mehfil mein kisko janaab dhoondhoge

hai bahut door vo aur hai.n nigaah-e-chasm teri
'Qasid' kab tak tum unka jawaab dhoondhoge
Bohat khoob qasid sahab

La-jawaab ghazal pesh kiya

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6th September 2016, 10:44 PM
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kin galiyon se tum ab mahtaab dhoondhoge
toote pyaalon mein kaisi sharaab dhoondhoge

bhool jaayegi hai dastoor-e-duniyaa aisa
chand chehron mein kahan ahbaab dhoondhoge

zard mausam mein mayoos honge gulshan bhi
kin baageechon se khiltaa gulaab dhoondhoge

dil-nawaazee ka bayaan wa'az se karna seekho
warnaa mehfil mein kisko janaab dhoondhoge

hai bahut door vo aur hai.n nigaah-e-chasm teri
'Qasid' kab tak tum unka jawaab dhoondhoge

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6th September 2016, 11:32 PM
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Waah!!Waahh!!..khoob kaha qasid sahab....bahot badhiya..
Sabhi ashaar bahot khoob par ye sher khaas pasand aaya...naye takhallus ke sath umda kalaam pesh kiya hai bazm me apne
hai bahut door vo aur hai.n nigaah-e-chasm teri
'Qasid' kab tak tum unka jawaab dhoondhoge


Kya baat hai! Waah......

daad qubool kariyega..

Likhte rahein....

Salamat rahein..
Nawaazish ka behad shukriyaa Madhu umeed hai aage bhi aisi ghazalein ban paaye jo aapki daad ka haqdaar bane...


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Bohat khoob qasid sahab

La-jawaab ghazal pesh kiya

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kin galiyon se tum ab mahtaab dhoondhoge
toote pyaalon mein kaisi sharaab dhoondhoge

bhool jaayegi hai dastoor-e-duniyaa aisa
chand chehron mein kahan ahbaab dhoondhoge

zard mausam mein mayoos honge gulshan bhi
kin baageechon se khiltaa gulaab dhoondhoge

dil-nawaazee ka bayaan wa'az se karna seekho
warnaa mehfil mein kisko janaab dhoondhoge

hai bahut door vo aur hai.n nigaah-e-chasm teri
'Qasid' kab tak tum unka jawaab dhoondhoge


waahh kyaa baat hai qasid saahab...............

behad prusukoon, pur lutf kalaam se bazm ko sajaaya hai aapne is baar... har ek sher apne aap me muammal hai aur behad hi kareene se taraashaa gaya hai.....

bhool jaayegi hai dastoor-e-duniyaa aisa
chand chehron mein kahan ahbaab dhoondhoge

dil-nawaazee ka bayaan wa'az se karna seekho
warnaa mehfil mein kisko janaab dhoondhoge

ye aashaar dil ke behad kareeb rahe....... tahe dil se daad ka nazraana pesh karta hoon, qubool kijiye ..

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waahh kyaa baat hai qasid saahab...............

behad prusukoon, pur lutf kalaam se bazm ko sajaaya hai aapne is baar... har ek sher apne aap me muammal hai aur behad hi kareene se taraashaa gaya hai.....

bhool jaayegi hai dastoor-e-duniyaa aisa
chand chehron mein kahan ahbaab dhoondhoge

dil-nawaazee ka bayaan wa'az se karna seekho
warnaa mehfil mein kisko janaab dhoondhoge

ye aashaar dil ke behad kareeb rahe....... tahe dil se daad ka nazraana pesh karta hoon, qubool kijiye ..

Shukriyaa

Shaad...........
Apni is ghazal par aapki kami khal rahi thi aur dekhiye ki aap aa hi gaye....mamnoon ki aapko mera likha pasand aaya aur aapse har baar ki tarah aage bhi saath ki umeed rakhta hoon....


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kin galiyon se tum ab mahtaab dhoondhoge
toote pyaalon mein kaisi sharaab dhoondhoge

bhool jaayegi hai dastoor-e-duniyaa aisa
chand chehron mein kahan ahbaab dhoondhoge

zard mausam mein mayoos honge gulshan bhi
kin baageechon se khiltaa gulaab dhoondhoge

dil-nawaazee ka bayaan wa'az se karna seekho
warnaa mehfil mein kisko janaab dhoondhoge

hai bahut door vo aur hai.n nigaah-e-chasm teri
'Qasid' kab tak tum unka jawaab dhoondhoge

Qasid sahab adaab !
Lajawaab likha hai aapne. Behad khoosuarat peshkash. Likhte rahiye.

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kin galiyon se tum ab mahtaab dhoondhoge
toote pyaalon mein kaisi sharaab dhoondhoge

bhool jaayegi hai dastoor-e-duniyaa aisa
chand chehron mein kahan ahbaab dhoondhoge

zard mausam mein mayoos honge gulshan bhi
kin baageechon se khiltaa gulaab dhoondhoge

dil-nawaazee ka bayaan wa'az se karna seekho
warnaa mehfil mein kisko janaab dhoondhoge

hai bahut door vo aur hai.n nigaah-e-chasm teri
'Qasid' kab tak tum unka jawaab dhoondhoge

Anu bhai...kya kamaal ka likha hai, aik se aik umda sher kahe hai aapne, dil se daad hazir hai...aur haa jo sher muje sabse khaas lga uska jikar karna jarrori hai yeh sher mere dil ke khaas kareeb rha:

bhool jaayegi hai dastoor-e-duniyaa aisa
chand chehron mein kahan ahbaab dhoondhoge

pyar aur duaoN ke saath

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Janaab Sagar sahab aap ko waapis dekhkar behad aacha lag raha hai aate rahiye aap jaisi shakshiyat ki is bazm mein bahut zaroorat hai...khaaksaar ko tavajoo dene ka shukriyaa mere bhai


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Anu bhai...kya kamaal ka likha hai, aik se aik umda sher kahe hai aapne, dil se daad hazir hai...aur haa jo sher muje sabse khaas lga uska jikar karna jarrori hai yeh sher mere dil ke khaas kareeb rha:

bhool jaayegi hai dastoor-e-duniyaa aisa
chand chehron mein kahan ahbaab dhoondhoge

pyar aur duaoN ke saath
Didi behad aacha laga ki aapko yeh ghazal pasand aayi, umeed hai aage bhi haal-e-dil ki adaayegi aapka dil chuti rahe.....aate rahiye aur saath dete rahiyegaa


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