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20th August 2014, 08:26 PM
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kuch haseeN khwaab saja bethe haiN tere sung ae koyal!
yeH qafas ab humeN jaaN se bhi piyaara lagne laga hai!
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Waaaaaahhhh !!!!! Behad hi khoobsurat khayaal !!! Beautifullllll !!! Qafas mein kisi se pyaar ho jaaye to qafas se dilkash jagah aur kaun si hogi !!! Dheron daad Hassan bhai !!!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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20th August 2014, 08:42 PM
Change of mood zarraa saheb…
qafas meiN beetay sitam, tumhe dikhaa to nahi saktay!
bas itnaa jaan loH, andar se toot ke chhuur ho chukka hooN….
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Change of mood zarraa saheb…
qafas meiN beetay sitam, tumhe dikhaa to nahi saktay!
bas itnaa jaan loH, andar se toot ke chhuur ho chukka hooN….
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Ye to pooraa 180 degree U-turn maar diya hai Hassan bhai !! Par waah !! Kya turn hai waah !! jo sitam andar se torh dein unhein koyee kaise dikhaaye !! Bahaut khoob Hassan bhai !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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20th August 2014, 09:12 PM
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Ye to pooraa 180 degree U-turn maar diya hai Hassan bhai !! Par waah !! Kya turn hai waah !! jo sitam andar se torh dein unhein koyee kaise dikhaaye !! Bahaut khoob Hassan bhai !!
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haha!
Jee bikul Zarraa saheb.... dard hotaa to hai lekin dikhta nahi hai......
kuch iss taraH ki kafiyat shair meiN biyaaN karne ki koshish ki hai..
aap ko pasand aaya .. bohat acha laga!
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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20th August 2014, 09:29 PM
doston ... lafz "qafas"par members ke khud ke kahe huwe aashaar ...
na qafas kaa kHauf jinko na chaman kii chaah rakhte
maiN guloN se puchhtaa hooN wo parinde ab kahaaN hai
Aadeil
ye qafas hai raen-basera aur maiN taaIr e dil
jo chaman se uD ke khud aa mila sayyaad se
Aadeil
kamar se baandh ke wo khinch rahaa suunaa qafas e ruuh
kise uthaanee hai azaab is sard murde baar ki
Aadeil
ab sabaa bhii azaab lagne lagii
ye qafas aashiyaanaa lagne lagaa
Aadeil
naye naye ashiyaane ko maiN saraab samjhaa
qafas qafas-aaraa samjhe maiN to azaab samjhaa
Aadeil
jabiin e khaaksii meN ek jabiin e saNg bhii aisa
yahaaN nazr e qafas jaaN aur safhaa e dahr dikhaataa hai
Aadeil
chaman meN baith ke jo kar rahaa thaa roz guloN se baat
qafas kii tiiliyoN ke saath baaNtoo wo puraani yaad
Aadeil
teri yaadoN ke qafas meiN aise jakray haiN jese
zanjeereN jo lipti haiN paaoN se humeN virsaa meiN mili hooN
Hassan
pade saiyyaad jab piichhe parinde ko samajh aaya
Qafas me'n hi raha hota bhala hota bura hota
Ufaq
mujhko rahane hi De baaho.n me yu apni daayam
Tu qafas kholke panchhi ko udaata kyun hai
Ufaq
deed e falak navardee ki lazzat chali gayi
To kyaa huya qafas me'n agar andliib hai
Ufaq
Qafas meiN qaid panchi ki khaber rakhna, ae saheb!
mazloom ki aah farsh to kia arsh tak hilaa deti hai
Hassan
Rooh ka dard kisiii ko nazar nahii aataa
Qafas me qaid ye bulbul bahot tadaptee hai
Shaad
shaq o gumaaN ke qafas khud bana liye hum ne
falak ko choomte girne ka jo n dar hota
Zarraa
sabhi hum nasheen e chaman mere deiN qafas ki haNs ke mubaarakeiN
mujhe baaghbaaN saiyaad ki hai barhe jatan se safaayee de
Zarraa
shehar meiN badhati khusk saali ko dekhte
parindoN ka aik tolaa sir joD ke betha hai
num aankhoN se kar raha hai aah o fugaaN
Qafas meiN do waQt ka rizQ to naseeb ho jata tha
Hassan
ik khooon me bheege qafas ko dekh kar sochaa kiye
Mar mar miTey kitne parinde zindagee ke waaste
Shaad
ae insaan hum haiN aadi e qafas azaadi nahi humeN matloob
yeHi guzar basar hai apna! bahir nikle to mar na jayeN gay
Hassan
na chaman rahaa na qafas rahe ye parinde aaj yateem hue
mere saamne ye ujaR gayaa mere saamne wo tabaah hue
Aadeil
par katartaa kyuN hai ae saiyaad tu
jab qafas hi hai thikaanaa ban gayaa
Aadeil
sajaane do qafas-aaraa ko phir aaj
qafas meN bhii zaraa si taazgii ho
Aadeil
qafas-ba-dosh hi to saiyaad ka azaab rahaa
mera to aaj qafas-zaad phir khitaab rahaa
Aadeil
tiiliyaaN ginte ginte chaman tang hue
waaN bayaabaaN hue yaaN qafas zang hue
Aadeil
shor-e-parind sun, ki kahiN ittihaam mera
leke qafas na aaye ho saiyaad baaG meN
Aadeil
Kis tarah maiN todta qafas ka aasraa
Aye kaash key yaad hota ghar ka raastaa
N@zneen
kuch haseeN khwaab saja bethe haiN tere sung ae koyal
yeH qafas ab humeN jaaN se bhi piyaara lagne laga hai
Hassan
qafas meiN beetay sitam, tumhe dikhaa to nahi saktay
bas itnaa jaan loH, andar se toot ke chhuur ho chukka hooN
Hassan
aap sabhi shora ka behad mamnoon o mashqoor hoon ki aap ke khoobsurat qalaam se "qafas" ko bhi gulshan bana diya Aadeil bhai ne phir se aashaar ki ek anjuman bana di, unhone 13 aashaar farmaaye.
jin meherbaanon ne tashreef laakar hum shora ki hausla afzaayee kari aur jin saathiyon ne is koshish ko pardhne ki izzat bakshi, un ka bhi tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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20th August 2014, 10:47 PM
dostoN ... is baar hum 1 naheen balki 2 lafzon par ek saath ghaur karenge ye donon lafz saath mil kar ek jumle ki shakl ikhtiyaar kar lete hain, so hum us jumle par bhi ghaur karenge
ye 2 lafz hain "nasheb" aur "faraaz" aur in se jumla banta hai "nasheb-o-faraaz".
chaliye, is mushkil se dikhne waale jumle ko deconstruct karte hain ... ye asal mein bilkul hi aasaan sa hai
nasheb = descent / lows / downward slope / utaar / neeche jaana
o = and / aur
faraaz = ascent / highs / upward slope / chardhaav / oopar aana
hence, "nasheb-o-faraaz" simply means "descent and ascent", "lows and highs", "utaar aur chardhaav"
hum "nasheb-o-faraaz" ke equivalent jumlon ko hindi aur english mein aam bolchaal mein istemaal karte rehte hain, jaise "lows and highs" ya "utaar-chardhaav".
ye jumla kis khoobsurti se kisi bhi safar ya raah ki daastaan keh jaata hai.
ye jumla aksar metaphorically use hota hai, zindagi ke safar ya zindagi ki raah ke liye .... ya zindagi se jurhe pehluon ke safar/raah ke liye .... jaise ki mohabbat ka, junoon ka, hayaat ka, rishton ka, hasraton ka, armaanon ka wagairah wagairah wagairah ....
kisi bhi safar ke nasheb-o-faraaz hi use kathin bhi banaate hain magar dilchasp bhi ... maayoos bhi karte hain magar umeed bhi jagaate hain ... nasheb-o-faraaz se kuchh log dar bhi jaate hain par kuchh usey chunauti ki tarah lete hain ... nasheb-o-faraaz thakan bhi paida karte hain magar hausla bhi mazboot karte hain ... kuchh logon ko nasheb-o-faraaz ki fikr sataati hai aur kuchh log us se beparwaah rehte hain ...
par jo kuchh bhi ho ...nasheb-o-faraaz se guzar ke hi insaan ko zindagi aur us ke pehluon ki asli pehchaan ho paati hai, asli samajh aa paati hai.
is baar hum "nasheb-o-faraaz" par shayari karenge aur saath saath shayari par guftagoo bhi karenge har baar ki tarah.
aap apne qalaam mein "nasheb" aur "faraaz" ka alag alag istemaal bhi kar sakte hain, bas donon lafz qalaam mein shaamil hone chaahiye. aap in lafz ke natural variations jaise "nasheboN","faraazoN" ka bhi istemaal kar sakte haiN. aur ya phir in 2 lafzon ko "nasheb-o-faraaz" ke jumle ki shakl mein istemaal kar sakte hain.
hence, you can say shayari with the phrase "nasheb-o-faraaz" in it, or the words "nasheb" and "faraaz" can come separately as well (along with its natural variations) but both the words should be present in your shayari.
in case of any doubts or clarification or counter point, request you to please express the same.
jo dost in 2 lafzon / jumle par aur roshni daal sakte hain, ya is ke kuchh aur pehloo saamne laa sakte hain, un se guzaarish hai ki wo aisa kar ke seekhne ka aur bhi zyada mauka dein hum sab ko.
ab dekhte hain ki kaise kuchh maane huwe shora ne apne aashaar mein in ka istemaal kiya hai ...
"NASHEB-O-FARAAZ" EK JUMLE KI TARAH
ik tum ke tum ko fikr-e-nasheb-o-faraaz hai
ik hum ke chal parhe to baharhaal chal parhe
- Kaifi Azmi
jo rah-e-ishq meiN qadam rakkheiN
wo nasheb-o-faraaz kya jaaneiN
- Daagh Dehlevi
rah-e-junooN ke nasheb-o-faraaz meiN "mohsin"
khirad ka phool bhi saNg-e-giraaN se kam to n tha
- Mohsin Naqvi
uljhe to sab nasheb-o-faraaz-e-hayaat meiN
hum the ki un ki zulfoN ke kham dekhte rahe
- Naushad Ali
kya nasheb-o-faraaz thi "tanveer"
zindagi aap ne guzaar hi di
- Habeeb Tanveer
raah-e-ulat n jis ne tay ki ho
wo nasheb-o-faraaz kya jaane
- Jaleel Manikpuri
ise vaasta kya kam-o-besh se
nasheb-o-faraaz-o-pas-o-pesh se
- Iqbaal ki nazm "saaqi-naamah" se
ranjish-o-iltifaat-o-naaz-o-niyaaz
hum ne dekhe bahaut nasheb-o-faraaz
- Hali
"NASHEB" AUR "FARAAZ" ... 2 ALAG LAFZ KE TAUR PE
nasheb-e-hasti se afsos hum ubhar n sake
faraaz-e-daar se paighaam aaye haiN kya kya
- Kaifi Aazmi
nasheb-e-dar ki mahek raaste sajaane lagi
faraaz-e-baam ke mahtaab dil meiN dhalne lage
- Nasir Kazmi
Khuda kare ki mile tujh ko manzil-e-maqsood
faraaz pa ke nasheboN pe bhi nazar rakhna
- Rasikh Irfani
is jumle / 2 lafzon par ghaur karne ka silsila hum agle 6 din tak jaari rakkhenge ... yani 26 August raat 9:00 PM India time ya 3:30 PM GMT
to chaliye, ab hum "nasheb-o-faraaz" ke nasheb-o-faraaz se guzar jaate hain ek doosre ka haath thaam kar
duaon ke saath
zarraa
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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21st August 2014, 09:32 AM
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Kis tarah maiN todta qafas ka aasraa
Aye kaash key yaad hota ghar ka raastaa
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Waaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! Naaz,
kitnii khubsurti se aur asaan lafzoN meN ek gehrii baat bayaaN kii hai......
dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad.
DuaaoN ke saath, Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 09:37 AM
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kuch haseeN khwaab saja bethe haiN tere sung ae koyal!
yeH qafas ab humeN jaaN se bhi piyaara lagne laga hai!
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waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!! laajawaab, kya khub bayaani huii hai...
dheroN daad, Hassanbhai
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Change of mood zarraa saheb…
qafas meiN beetay sitam, tumhe dikhaa to nahi saktay!
bas itnaa jaan loH, andar se toot ke chhuur ho chukka hooN….
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! behad khubsurat, Hassanbhai....
hamaari jaanib se dheroN daad aapko.....
duaaoN ke saath, Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 10:36 AM
shab ke hone tak yahaaN aaftaab nasheb meN Garq huva
maah na niklaa, tum na aaye, ye samaa taarik* rahaa
(*dark)
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 11:05 AM
nasheb-e-chashm-e-tamaashaa* mujhe banaaye kyuN?
faraaz-e-daar-o-rasan* kii havas jagaaye kyuN?
* look at spectacle with slanted eyes
** eminence of crucifixion
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 11:18 AM
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shab ke hone tak yahaaN aaftaab nasheb meN Garq huva
maah na niklaa, tum na aaye, ye samaa taarik* rahaa
(*dark)
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nasheb-e-chashm-e-tamaashaa* mujhe banaaye kyuN?
faraaz-e-daar-o-rasan* kii havas jagaaye kyuN?
*looking at spectacle with slanted eyes
** eminence of crucifixion
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waaaaaaaaaaah!
Adil bhai! Aik ke baad aik khoobsorat ashaar pesh kiye aap ne!
Daad beshumaar ka tohfaa qabool kejiye!
Younhi fusoon meiN jalwa-gar hoty rahiye!
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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21st August 2014, 11:29 AM
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waaaaaaaaaaah!
Adil bhai! Aik ke baad aik khoobsorat ashaar pesh kiye aap ne!
Daad beshumaar ka tohfaa qabool kejiye!
Younhi fusoon meiN jalwa-gar hoty rahiye!
DuaooN ke saath,
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Hassanbhai,
aapka teh-e-dil se shukr guzaar hooN....
duaaoN ke saath,
Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 11:46 AM
safeer, nasheb-o-faraaz to hai umr kii haqiiqat
faraaz-e-koh-saar* bhii to nasheb se hi utHte aaye
* height of mountain
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 12:08 PM
muhabbat nasheb-o-faraaz kii na hotii
mazaa bhii na aataa udaasii na hotii
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 12:54 PM
wo bachpan tha faraaz aur nasheb javaani thii
fareb ye bhii, ki budhaape kii zindagaanii thii
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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wo bachpan tha faraaz aur nasheb javaani thii
fareb hua ki budhaape kii zindagaanii thii
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Waaaaaahhhhhh!!!! Aadeil sahab ...kya baat hai...mindblowing
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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Ek koshish ...main ye pehli baar try kar raha hoon..corrections and suggestions are most welcome
Niyaz-o-naz-o-nasheb-o-faraaz-o-ranj-o-gham
Musaahib, zindagi inke baghair kya hai ?
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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Ek koshish ...main ye pehli baar try kar raha hoon..corrections and suggestions are most welcome
Niyaz-o-naz-o-nasheb-o-faraaz-o-ranj-o-gham
Musaahib, zindagi inke baghair kya hai ?
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waah waah wahh sir!
Aap ka yeH alag andaaz bohat acha laga!
Dil se nikli dherooN daad pesh-e-khidmat hai,
MeHfil ki rounaQ younhi badhaatay rahiye,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Jiju meaning bhi bata do thodi aasaani hogi
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desire and pride ,ups and downs, anger and sadness
Comrade ,what is life without them ?
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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wo bachpan tha faraaz aur nasheb javaani thii
fareb ye bhii, ki budhaape kii zindagaanii thii
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waaaaaaaaaaaah!
Adil bhai... Kamaal hai lajawaab hai bemisaal hai yeH verse!
Daad hi daad,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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21st August 2014, 01:35 PM
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desire and pride ,ups and downs, anger and sadness
Comarade ,what is life without them ?
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English version ne ziada mazaa diya saaheb!
You must try some English poetry...
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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21st August 2014, 01:36 PM
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Ek koshish ...main ye pehli baar try kar raha hoon..corrections and suggestions are most welcome
Niyaz-o-naz-o-nasheb-o-faraaz-o-ranj-o-gham
Musaahib, zindagi inke baghair kya hai ?
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
Ananthji,
kya khub kahaa....
sahi meN ye sab cheezoN ke bagair zindagii be-zaar hoti.......
waaahhhh... behadd khubsurat khayaal se aapne iis mehfil ko navaazaa hai.
daad hi daad meri jaanib se...
Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 01:38 PM
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Waaahhhhh! bahot khoob, ek se badhkar ek sher, waise yaar is thread ka naam badal kar fusooN-e-aadeil rakh dena chahiye
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haa haaa haaa... Naaz,
daad dene ka ye andaaz bhii pasand aayaa.. Thanks dear
vaise bilkul fursat meN hooN iis liye yahiN dataa hooN
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 01:40 PM
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desire and pride ,ups and downs, anger and sadness
Comrade ,what is life without them ?
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Superb, Ananthji....
very true...
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 01:42 PM
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waaaaaaaaaaaah!
Adil bhai... Kamaal hai lajawaab hai bemisaal hai yeH verse!
Daad hi daad,
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aapka bahot bahot shukriya, Hassanbhai.....
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 01:47 PM
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waah waah wahh sir!
Aap ka yeH alag andaaz bohat acha laga!
Dil se nikli dherooN daad pesh-e-khidmat hai,
MeHfil ki rounaQ younhi badhaatay rahiye,
DuaooN ke saath,
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English version ne ziada mazaa diya saaheb!
You must try some English poetry...
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bohat bohat shukriya Hassan bhai....may be someday i will try
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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21st August 2014, 01:51 PM
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Maine tumhara ye sher offline mein padhi thi...its just unbeatable...jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai simply outstanding.
reps nahin deparahi hun i've to spread some.
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Thanks a lot, dear...
tumne itnii saraahnaa kii, reps mil gaye
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 01:52 PM
nasheb se na Darr, wo bhii manzil kii aur hai
achchhaa hai, faraaz warnaa sakHti-e-raah* tha
*difficulty in the path
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 02:08 PM
uDaa, to faraaz meN paroN ne sambhaalaa
nasheb meN, sabaa kaa sahaaraa nahi tha
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 02:13 PM
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Waaaaaahhhhhh!!!! Aadeil sahab ...kya baat hai...mindblowing
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Ananthbhai,
aapka bahot bahot shukriya, jo aapko hamaaraa ye sher pasand aaya..
duaaoN ke saath,
Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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21st August 2014, 02:17 PM
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
Ananthji,
kya khub kahaa....
sahi meN ye sab cheezoN ke bagair zindagii be-zaar hoti.......
waaahhhh... behadd khubsurat khayaal se aapne iis mehfil ko navaazaa hai.
daad hi daad meri jaanib se...
Adil
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Superb, Ananthji....
very true...
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bohat bohat shukriya Aadeil sahab...thanx
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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21st August 2014, 02:20 PM
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Awesome.....bahot khoob jiju, reality par behad umdaa sher banaya hai aapne
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thanx ...shukriya saali sahiba................
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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21st August 2014, 03:07 PM
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nasheb se na Darr, wo bhii manzil kii aur hai
achchhaa hai, faraaz warnaa sakHti-e-raah* tha
*difficulty in the path
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Waaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!! Bohat khoob dheron daad Aadeil sahab
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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21st August 2014, 03:08 PM
arz-o-samaa* haiN naqsh nasheb-o-faraaz ke
milke ufaq pe de jo sabaq irtikaaz** ke
* earth & sky
** convergence (moving toward union from different directions)
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 03:09 PM
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uDaa, to faraaz meN paroN ne sambhaalaa
nasheb meN, sabaa kaa sahaaraa nahi tha
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!! Ek se badhkar ek...great lines Aadeil sahab
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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21st August 2014, 03:10 PM
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Waaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!! Bohat khoob dheron daad Aadeil sahab
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bahot bahot shukriya aapka, Ananthji...
hamaari jaanibse dheroN duaaeN....
Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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21st August 2014, 03:13 PM
zindagi yuhi imtihaan leti rahegi aksar
kabhi zindagi jeena ka koi falsafa mil jaaye
Faraaz aaye to sabr na kho dena yaaroN
Na jaane nasheb ka saath fhir kahan mil jaaye
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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21st August 2014, 03:19 PM
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!! Ek se badhkar ek...great lines Aadeil sahab
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Thanks a lot, bhaisaab .............
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 03:20 PM
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zindagi yuhi imtihaan leti rahegi aksar
kabhi zindagi jeena ka koi falsafa mil jaaye
Faraaz aaye to sabr na kho dena yaaroN
Na jaane nasheb ka saath fhir kahan mil jaaye
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
aapne to jaise hamaare sher ka interpretation hi kar diya
laajavaab........... bahot khub....
dheroN dheroN daad, hamaari jaanibse, Ananthji.....
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 03:52 PM
irtikaaz-e-zaat* meN kiskaa faraaz kiskaa nasheb
aaj wo uncha hua kal jo maa-tahtii** tha tera
*convergence of castes
** subordinate (मा-तहती)
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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