Uski Zulfon Ka Basera Tha Mere Kandhoon Par Raat Bhar Unki Main Hiddat Se PagaL Sa Raha
ye lafz to sach me....kya kahu
neha ji.....bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne....
Aansu aa jate hai rone se pahle....
Har khwab toot jate hai sone se pahle....
ISHQ hai GUNAH ye to samajh gaye....
Kaash koi rok leta ye hone se pahle....
Uski Zulfon Ka Basera Tha Mere Kandhoon Par Raat Bhar Unki Main Hiddat Se PagaL Sa Raha
ye lafz to sach me....kya kahu neha ji.....bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne....
Aansu aa jate hai rone se pahle.... Har khwab toot jate hai sone se pahle.... ISHQ hai GUNAH ye to samajh gaye.... Kaash koi rok leta ye hone se pahle....
thanks a lot DR.Raj ji apki nazar shanasi ka kamal hai
Aj Ki Raat Teri Yaad Main Dobe Guzri Aj Ka Din Tere Dard Se Bojhal Sa Raha
Itni Bechan Muhabbat Thi Mere Charoon Taraf Main Tere Piyar Tere Lums Se Pagal Sa Raha
Main Ne DI Thi Wo Muhabbat JoMere Bas Main Rahi Aur Main Uski Muhabbat Ko SaiiL Sa Rahaa
Uski Zulfon Ka Basera Tha Mere Kandhoon Par Raat Bhar Unki Main Hiddat Se PagaL Sa Raha
Zindagi Shuro Hoi Uske Bina Beet Gai...... Phir B Yaron Wo Mere Lamhon Main ShamiL Sa Raha
Beautifulfull poetry chalo bahut dino baad post kiya aapne par itna acha post kiya ke shari kami door hogayi bahut khoobsoorat andaaz hai aur meaning bhi mera daad kabool farmaiye nehaji
Har Saans pe hai maut ka pehra laga hua, Kitni badi mazak hai ye zindagi ke sath
Wo kaise Log the Ya Rub Jinhone Pa Liya Tujh ko Hume To Hogaya Dushwar Ek Insaan ka Milna
Beautifulfull poetry chalo bahut dino baad post kiya aapne par itna acha post kiya ke shari kami door hogayi bahut khoobsoorat andaaz hai aur meaning bhi mera daad kabool farmaiye nehaji
thank u so muchsahi kaha apne apko tu pata hai kafi dinoo se kuch post karna chah rahi thi ab jesi hi ye kavita comp hoi tu send kardi buhat buhat shukriya apki husala afzai kaapki tawajja ki zarorat rahegi apni tarif o tanqeed se nawazte rahiyega
Aj Ki Raat Teri Yaad Main Dobe Guzri Aj Ka Din Tere Dard Se Bojhal Sa Raha
Itni Bechan Muhabbat Thi Mere Charoon Taraf Main Tere Piyar Tere Lums Se Pagal Sa Raha
Main Ne DI Thi Wo Muhabbat JoMere Bas Main Rahi Aur Main Uski Muhabbat Ko SaiiL Sa Rahaa
Uski Zulfon Ka Basera Tha Mere Kandhoon Par Raat Bhar Unki Main Hiddat Se PagaL Sa Raha
Zindagi Shuro Hoi Uske Bina Beet Gai...... Phir B Yaron Wo Mere Lamhon Main ShamiL Sa Raha
kya baat hai neha ji bohat khoob very intersting post.bohat khubsurat likha hai main to kahen or he kho gaya tha app ki ye post parte parte bohat bohat shukria hamesha aysi he post kerti rahiye,apni duaon main yaad rakhiye ga.apna khayal rakhna.ALLAH HAFIZ,
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
kya baat hai neha ji bohat khoob very intersting post.bohat khubsurat likha hai main to kahen or he kho gaya tha app ki ye post parte parte bohat bohat shukria hamesha aysi he post kerti rahiye,apni duaon main yaad rakhiye ga.apna khayal rakhna.ALLAH HAFIZ,
nawazish hai apki tu apne mere kalam ko isqabil samjha buhat shukriya apke reply k liyee thanks n ALLAH HAFIZ
neha jee...kaise hain aap....etne din kahaN gayab thi aap????
vaise aakpa gayab rahna accha raha...kyuNki aapke aate hi aapki khoobsurat shayri padne ko jo mil gaye
aati raha kijiye, gayab mat raha kijiye
god bless u
aapki dost
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
neha jee...kaise hain aap....etne din kahaN gayab thi aap????
vaise aakpa gayab rahna accha raha...kyuNki aapke aate hi aapki khoobsurat shayri padne ko jo mil gaye
aati raha kijiye, gayab mat raha kijiye
god bless u
aapki dost
bilkuL thek hoon shukar hai ALLAH PAK ka sunita ji
bas itne din ane ka bilkul b time nahi mila poetry tu aur b buhat si likhi theen but ye achi lagi post karne k liyee soo itne dinoo k bad yehi post kardi but plz sunita agar meri mistakes b point out kardo tu it will b good for me
hmm full try karongi k ati rahoon... agar apko kahin reply nahi desaki tu plz maf kardi jiyega kiya karoon ajkal kam online ho rahi hoon tu post replies reh jate hain okz friend
Wow kiya likha hai neha bahut khoob kiya andaz hai, i am sure u must be in love with some one
Uski Zulfon Ka Basera Tha Mere Kandhoon Par Raat Bhar Unki Main Hiddat Se PagaL Sa Raha
kiya line hai bahut pasand aaya keep it up
thanks a Lot sujatha jin thanks 4 ur pm 2.... Listen honey apko pm ka reply kia but i have no option to pm u b/c apne pm 4m all users ok nahi kia hai....
main apko kitna b pm karoon it is impossible 4 me jab tak ap apne options main ja ke reset nahi karogi thats y i cant reply u sweety
ur pm reply in short is "off course YES wid my pleasure"
thanks a Lot sujatha jin thanks 4 ur pm 2.... Listen honey apko pm ka reply kia but i have no option to pm u b/c apne pm 4m all users ok nahi kia hai....
main apko kitna b pm karoon it is impossible 4 me jab tak ap apne options main ja ke reset nahi karogi thats y i cant reply u sweety
ur pm reply in short is "off course YES wid my pleasure"
waiting 4 ur reply Take care
oh sorry dear i have updated it now u can send and thanks for accepting m friendship
SALAM NEHA BOHAT HI ACHI POETRY HA.BEST OF LUCK. TAKECARE ALLAHAFIZ
KOI ATA HAI YAAD BOHUT SONE SE PEHLE,
JO CHEEN LAITA HAI ANSOO MERAY RONE SE PEHLE,
PHIR REHTA HAI WOH RAAT BHAR AISAY SAMNE,
MAIN AKSAR CHAL PARTI HON USKA HAATH THAMNE,
AB NEEND BHI AYE TO MAIN SONA NAHI CHATI,
KISI QEEMAT PE BHI MAIN USKO KHONA NAHI CHATI,
HO JAYE WOH KASH MERA MUJHE KHONE SE PEHLE,
JO ATA HAI YAAD BOHUT SONE SE PEHLE.