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20th April 2003, 08:55 AM
dil dhadhakte hi, teri yaad bahut aati hai
tera chehra ban hothon pe, thehar jaati hai kya mohabbat hai tujhse milke, jaan jaati hai raat chup chaap dabe paon, chali jaati hai band nazro se to hota hai, yeh safar mumkin hum aur tanhayi magar phir bhi, hasi aati hai aisi harqat ko kabhi usne bhi, jaana hoga kal woh guzri thi, humhe aaj udhar paati hai zikr dil kiya jo humne kisi, musafir se ulfat humko dekhe kis gaon tak le jaati hai haal dil ka kahiye to hai baarish jaisa boond padate hi baat honthon se nikal jaati hai dil dhadhakte hi, teri yaad bahut aati hai tera chehra ban hothon pe, thehar jaati hai kya mohabbat hai tujhse milke, jaan jaati hai raat chup chaap dabe paon, chali jaati hai...... Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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20th April 2003, 07:03 PM
Salaam mast,
very interesting poem. band nazro se to hota hai, yeh safar mumkin hum aur tanhayi magar phir bhi, hasi aati hai...... tc ws Rani Par woh yeh nahi jaante ki yeh bhi ek adaa hai gam chupaane ki. |
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26th April 2003, 09:13 PM
Bahut aachaa laga rani ji aapko is nacheez ka likha pasand aaya...yeh sher mere bhi dil ke bahut kareeb hai kyonki kuch mayino mein sach mein raat chup chaap dabe paon chali jaati hai......
-mast Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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Dear Anu Jee, Keise hein aap? Bohot khub likhha hein aapne. Ek gana yaad aa gaayi, Akele na jaana humein chhodkar tum tumharein beena hum vala keya jiiyengein akele na jaana.......I like this song very much. Tahe dilse shukriya aapka kyu ke aapke liye hi aaj mein ishein padsaki.
 Yunhi likhte rahiyega. Khush rahiye yeh Duwa hamesha rahegi. Take care. God bless you. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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14th April 2004, 03:56 AM
Shimul ji bahut bahut shukriya ki aapko yeh nazm pasand aayi waise ek secret yeh bhi hai ki yeh mere dil ke bhi bahut kareeb hai...aapka gaana bhi bahut sundar hai...yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
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14th April 2004, 05:49 PM
Anu,
Bahut khoob likha hai! lekin yeh lines tau bus... band nazro se to hota hai, yeh safar mumkin hum aur tanhayi magar phir bhi, hasi aati hai aisi harqat ko kabhi usne bhi, jaana hoga kal woh guzri thi, humhe aaj udhar paati hai Insaan ne yeh tasavvur bhi kya cheez ijaad ki hai,...dil ko khoob dhokha diya jaa sakta hai... tanhaayi dil zaar zaar kare... unke khayaal aate hee duur chali jaati hai Hai na  paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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14th April 2004, 11:49 PM
Shukriyaa paras ji....
bahut sahi kaha aapne tasaavvur hi to hai jiske zariye insaan aapne aap ko aapne khayalaat ko pesh kar sakta hai.... aur us par aapka sher dil cheer gaya tanhaayi dil zaar zaar kare... unke khayaal aate hee duur chali jaati hai shayar bhi yeh sawaal kare... khuli kitaab band aakhon se padhi jaati hai Likhte rahiYeGaa Duaaon ke saath -Mast |
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hi -
15th April 2004, 02:02 PM
very nice mast ji bohat pyari nazm likhi hai ap nein aise hi likhte rahein
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14th June 2004, 03:24 AM
Guess kar raha hoon aapka naam...asif ji bahut bahut shukriyaa ki aapne padha aur pasand kiya...
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20th June 2004, 11:01 AM
dil dhadhakte hi, teri yaad bahut aati hai
tera chehra ban hothon pe, thehar jaati hai - Is sher ka bayaan lajawaab raha! Ghazal ke is ek sher ko hi na jaane kitne baar paR chuke hain magar phir bhi mann karta hai ki paRte raho.. behad khubsoorat! band nazro se to hota hai, yeh safar mumkin hum aur tanhayi magar phir bhi, hasi aati hai aisi harqat ko kabhi usne bhi, jaana hoga kal woh guzri thi, humhe aaj udhar paati hai - Aur in ashaar me to aapne mohabbat me doobe dil ki beqaraari ko bakhoobi pesh kiya hai.. behtareen! Mast ji.. Maaf kijiyega, Shayri e ishq forum me humaara aana nahi hota.. aaj bhoole bhaTke aaye hain to aapki is umda ghazal par nazar paRi.. bohat achha likha hai aapne.. Tareef kubool kijiyega.. |
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20th June 2004, 09:06 PM
Afshan ji shukrguzaar to mujhe hona chahiye jo aapne is nazm ko padha aur samjha...Bahut aacha laga yeh jaan kar..yeh nazm mere dil ke bhi bahut kareeb basi hai...
Yunhi mehfil mein aate rahiYeGaa aur Sunte Likhte RahiYeGaa -mast |
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Re: raat chup chaap.... -
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aapki ye kavita bhut pasand aayi ,very touchy dil ko suhana banane k liye sukriya shrdh 
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21st February 2006, 12:04 AM
shraddha ji...
shukriya to aapko mujhe kehna chahiye ki aapne iske rang aur khusboo ko do saal ke baad bhi mehsoos kiya aate rahiYeGaa -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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21st February 2006, 01:30 AM
Mast bhai,
bilkul mast likha hai... kya baat hai badi 'masti' si chai hui hai./... Yunhi khushnuma likhte rahiye... Apna khayal rakhein Rohin |
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wah -
21st February 2006, 10:40 AM
haal dil ka kahiye to hai baarish jaisa
boond padate hi baat honthon se nikal jaati hai bashir badra kee bahut shayree sunee aur parhee bhee jante ho kyon jaisee nazuk baat tum ne yahan kee waisee baat woh karte hain bahut hee khoob soorat hai ye ahsas bahut pyara wah kalam se nahee dil se niklee hai kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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21st February 2006, 08:56 PM
bade bhaiya raat to dabe paun chali jati hai,par hum to aise hi reh jate hain.tanha bikhre hue se,aapka kalaam bas sar aankhon pe.darkhwast bas itni si hai is nacheez bande ki,ki aap bas yunhi aate rahiye aur mehfil sajate rahiye.
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25th February 2006, 08:33 PM
Anil sahab...aapne to satwaan asmaan naseeb karvaa diya nacheez ko janab bashir badra ka zikr mere is chote se kucche mein karke aapne bahut bada sanmaan diya hai shukrguzaar hoon aur umeed karta hoon ki aage bhi aapka dil yunhi lubhaata rahuNGaa
-aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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25th February 2006, 08:35 PM
lucky haan kabhi kabhi patjhad ke baad bhi pate usi tarah sukhe rehte hai ki mano kabhi mausam badla hi nahi par dil mein kahi kabhi ek ehsaas rehta hai ki mausam badlegaa
tum bhi bas yunhi saath dete RehNaa -tumhara apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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Hi mast |
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Hi mast -
26th February 2006, 02:27 PM
Hi mast how r u?
Aap ne bahut badhiya likha hai...aap ki kalam ne muje raat pe kuch likhne k liye inspire kar diya .... Thanx 4 sharing ur valuable creation. My "Raat" is inspired from ur "Raat chup chaap............." But ur is too gud..... Thanx ,take care. |
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24th March 2006, 05:31 PM
Shukriya manu...aapki "Raat" ko maine padha sach maaniye bahut khoobsurat hai aur behad aacha laga ki aapko mere lafzon mein apne kalaam ki shuruvaat dikhaayi di..aage bhi yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa
-aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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mast -
24th March 2006, 05:34 PM
mast mujeh ayad aye bashir tumahree shayree se aur janta hoon ek din log kisee kee shayree parh ke kahenge tum mast jaisee shayree karte ho bahut achha likhte ho
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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24th March 2006, 07:08 PM
mast ji
bahut khubsurat poem hai muje achhi lagi isi tarah likhte rahna or share karte rahna bye tc |
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23rd April 2006, 04:32 AM
Anil ji aapne to bahut badhi hasti se tulna kardi...aapka aabhaari hoon aur umeed karta aapko aage bhi yunhi behlaata rahunGaa aur aap yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa
-aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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23rd April 2006, 04:34 AM
Surbhi ji...
Aap yaha aaye aur mujhe sarahaa iske behad khushi hai aur umeed hai ki aage likha bhi aapko pasand aata raheGaa -aapka apnna Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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23rd April 2006, 05:16 PM
bahut ache hai sabhi sher.acha laga aapko padhkar.likhterahiye yunhin
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23rd April 2006, 05:18 PM
Shukriya..aapne apna naam to nahi bataaya..
par umeed karta hoon aage bhi aap yunhi mehfil mein saath dete rahiYeGaa -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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23rd April 2006, 09:12 PM
Anu bhai,
Andaaz to janaab ke tab bhi itne hi romaani thhe... kya baat hai... aur hon bhi kyun naa... bhaabi ka saath to kaafi puraana hai.... very touching...Loved it anu bhai Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Shukriya Pulkit...bahut der ho gayi tumhare reply ka jawaab diye hue isliye maafi chahta hoon deri ka....aur hameshaa ki tarah shukriyaa saath dene ka
tumhara apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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mast bhai............mohabat ki baateN jab akele mein socho to aisa hi hota hai...........bahut accha laga aapke yeh pyar bhare ahsaas padkar. yoon hi likhtey rahiye aur mahfil mein aate rahiye. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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ek baar fir aapne puraani yadoon se rubaroo karvaa diYaa...shukriya sunita ji har pal is qadr saath dene ka
yunhi yeh majraa barqaraar rahe...isi dua ke saath ijaazat -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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26th November 2014, 06:01 PM
Mast ji...bohot bohot khoob likha hai aapne.
aapki nayi peshkash ka intazar lamba na ho... Is dua ke sath....dheero daad Apka apna Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
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26th November 2014, 06:16 PM
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aapke saath aur daad ka behad shukriYaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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