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12th October 2014, 12:44 PM
दोस्तों आज कुछ बात चली जिसके चलते यहॉ बिताये पुराने दिन याद आ गये | उसी के चलते चंद एहसास पिरोये हैं |
Please do not search for meter in this post as their ain't any
"Kyun na puraane us ghar ko fir se sajaaya jaaye
Woh ehsaas fir se dilon me lagaaya jaaye
Yeh woh ghar hai jahaan bane kai ajnabee apne
Aao aaj fir se woh deep jalaa jaaye
Woh raushni chaand ki, mausam ka woh rukh,
Bedil Musafir ko is Kshitiz pe bulaya jaaye
Ghazalon ki mehfilen, Maikashi ka alam,
Talib ban is jagah ko Parastaar banaya jaaye
Musharraf Meena ke bikhre hon jahaan pe aashaar
Kureel aur Sifar ke nagmon ko sunaya jaaye
Banno ki Nazmen, Amanush ki ghazal,
Shimul ke gulaabon ko failaya jaaye
Mast hokar jo chaaye masti kaa mahaul
Sanj ki yaad me ek pal bitaya jaaye
Chalo puraane us ghar ko fir se sajaaya jaaye
Woh ehsaas se dilon me lagaaya jaaye"
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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12th October 2014, 12:47 PM
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Originally Posted by Pulkit_gupta
दोस्तों आज कुछ बात चली जिसके चलते यहॉ बिताये पुराने दिन याद आ गये | उसी के चलते चंद एहसास पिरोये हैं |
Please do not search for meter in this post as their ain't any
"Kyun na puraane us ghar ko fir se sajaaya jaaye
Woh ehsaas fir se dilon me lagaaya jaaye
Yeh woh ghar hai jahaan bane kai ajnabee apne
Aao aaj fir se woh deep jalaa jaaye
Woh raushni chaand ki, mausam ka woh rukh,
Bedil Musafir ko is Kshitiz pe bulaya jaaye
Ghazalon ki mehfilen, Maikashi ka alam,
Talib ban is jagah ko Parastaar banaya jaaye
Musharraf Meena ke bikhre hon jahaan pe aashaar
Kureel aur Sifar ke nagmon ko sunaya jaaye
Banno ki Nazmen, Amanush ki ghazal,
Shimul ke gulaabon ko failaya jaaye
Mast hokar jo chaaye masti kaa mahaul
Sanj ki yaad me ek pal bitaya jaaye
Chalo puraane us ghar ko fir se sajaaya jaaye
Woh ehsaas se dilon me lagaaya jaaye"
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Waah pulkit ji...bahut khoob...aapka khyaal bahut pasand aaya...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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12th October 2014, 01:08 PM
मेरे पुलकित
यह सच है कि बिते हुए पल मूड के वापस तो नहीं आ सकते लेकिन यादें हमें बिते समय में सैर तो करा ही देती है.
मानो कल की ही बात हो ऎसा लगता है...
मुझे याद है .. मैने तुम्हें बताया था कि अगर किसी ओर का लिखा हुआ पोस्ट करो तो उसका नाम भी लिखा करो... और तुमने बहुत ही सरलता से बात मान ली. और उस पल से हमारा रिश्ता शुरू हुआ. आज इस पल तक तुमने इस रिश्ते को अच्छे से निभाया है...
आज हमारी बातचीत के परिणाम स्वरूप तुमने यह प्यारी रचना लिख कर मुझे भावुक बना दिया है!!
हमेशा खुश रहो.
स्नेह
तुम्हारी दीदी.
Quote:
Originally Posted by pulkit_gupta
दोस्तों आज कुछ बात चली जिसके चलते यहॉ बिताये पुराने दिन याद आ गये | उसी के चलते चंद एहसास पिरोये हैं |
please do not search for meter in this post as their ain't any
"kyun na puraane us ghar ko fir se sajaaya jaaye
woh ehsaas fir se dilon me lagaaya jaaye
yeh woh ghar hai jahaan bane kai ajnabee apne
aao aaj fir se woh deep jalaa jaaye
woh raushni chaand ki, mausam ka woh rukh,
bedil musafir ko is kshitiz pe bulaya jaaye
ghazalon ki mehfilen, maikashi ka alam,
talib ban is jagah ko parastaar banaya jaaye
musharraf meena ke bikhre hon jahaan pe aashaar
kureel aur sifar ke nagmon ko sunaya jaaye
banno ki nazmen, amanush ki ghazal,
shimul ke gulaabon ko failaya jaaye
mast hokar jo chaaye masti kaa mahaul
sanj ki yaad me ek pal bitaya jaaye
chalo puraane us ghar ko fir se sajaaya jaaye
woh ehsaas se dilon me lagaaya jaaye"
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12th October 2014, 02:07 PM
Na jaane kitni yaadeiN juDi houi heiN SDC ke saath, Chote Bhaiya...!
Tumhaari koshish hameiN behad acchi lagi...!
Apna khayaal theek se rakhna, ok...?
Aashirvaad ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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12th October 2014, 02:08 PM
ohooo pulkit ...tumne to post bana bhi di
Bahut acche se yaadon ko piroya hain!
Sach woh arsa year 2004 ka kamaal ka tha...kitne maze karthe the hum yaha..Ek tadap si rehti thi website pe aane ki......Sab kitne busy ho gaye...
Pata nahin woh waqt fir ayega ya nahin....par us ehsaas ko mehsoos karke bada accha laga...
Mausam
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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12th October 2014, 04:09 PM
Dear Pulkit , Meena ji , Danny Sir aur Mausam ji...
Aap logon ke post per kee kuch aisa laga ki char buzurg baith kar guftagoo kar
rahe hain aut main ek adna sa balak gather karne ki koshish ka r raha hun ki , ye log
kya vichar vimarshh kar rahe hain purane zamane ki baaton ke saath ..
khair Mausam ji jo 2004 mein hota tha vo aaj 2014 mein bhi ho raha hai..
Badla sirf ye hai ki zakhm tau ab bhi hain per chot khane wale badal gaye hain.
Meri do lines is context mein ...
Ek din main ghabra ke aaine se poich baitha ,
ya tum badal gaye ho ya mere *taasur badal gaye hain.
(facial expressions)*
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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12th October 2014, 04:20 PM
Pulkit bhaiyaa.....
Welcome to SDC once again..... aur bahot saara thank you jo aapne is ghazal ki madad se saare piuraane doston ko ikattha karne ki koshissh ki hai.... sach maniye bahot khusshi ho rahi hai aap sab ko aaj yahan dekh kar....
mujhe yaad hai jab pahle pahal main naya tha is jagah me, aapke kalaam mujhe bahot bhaate they, aap sab ko padh kar hi thoda bahot seekh paaya hoon... aur aaj jab waaps aap sab ko dekh raha hoon yahaan to dil baag baag ho gaya hai......
aate rahiyegaa......... apna khayaal rakhiye
Shaad....
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12th October 2014, 04:57 PM
Ohhh God this is Heights...
Pulkit hume Buzurg kaha jaha raha hain...
Tum to Mujhse bhi chote ho...tum bhi Buzurg ki line main aa gaye
I just cant stop myself from laughing......
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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12th October 2014, 06:54 PM
Kutch kaha nahi jaa raha bhai...poorani yaadein taaza ho gayi....
**(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)**
*·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·*
**(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)**
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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
AMAN RAHI
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12th October 2014, 08:53 PM
घर सजाने के फन में तो आप माहिर हैं सरकार
हम तो बस कुछ जरिया सा हैं आपकी मुस्कराहट बिखेरने का
आपसे दरखास्त है की आइन्दा भी सजावट में हमारा ख्याल रखियेगा
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12th October 2014, 10:33 PM
Shukriya Doston! Is jagah se ek khaas rishta hai aur woh aap logon ki wajah se hai!
Madhu ji, aapko ehsaas pasand aaye, accha laga.
Meena didi, mujhe aaj bhi woh din yaad hai jab aapne mujhe woh salaah di thi... Mujhe to doosron ka likha share karne ka shauk thha aur logon ko lagta thha maine likha hai
Danny Bhaiya - Sach, bahut si yaadein judhi hain... aur aapka chhote bhaiya kehkar aashirwad dena unme se ek bahut pyaari yaad hai
Aman bhai - Hum sab pakdhe huwe hain
Sanjay ji - Jaankar bahut khushi huwi ke yahaan mehfilen aaj bhi jamti hain... Ab aana nahin hota isiliye pata nahin rehta. Jab SDC join ki thhi tab baccha thha, dekhte dekhte baal safed hone lage hain ab
Shaad miyaan - Tumne aur Zainy sahiba ne bahut efforts kiye hain humaare is ghar ko sajaaye rakhne me aur mujhe khushi hoti hai yeh dekhkar. Bhai main khud hi nahin aa pata to doosron ko kya kahoon. FB ke zariye logon se touch bana huwa hai
Kshitiz - Ama bhai Mehmaan nawaazi ka andaaz ho to lucknowi ho varna naa ho aur humaar jodh to fevicol ka hai na
Mausam - Woh din alag thhe... roz nayi nazmen, unpe replies, logon ka unhe nikharna... birthday celebrations... that time was amazing... Baaki ab Shayri.com par 11 saal ho gaye to buzurg hi kahaa jaayega naa
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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12th October 2014, 11:26 PM
Pulkit bhaiya
Namaste
Sach kahun to main apni khushi ko lafzon mein bayaan nahiin kar paa rahaa huun.. main jab is pariwaar mein nayaa nayaa juda tha tab aap sab ko online dekhta tha aur aap sab ki likhi hui koshishon ko padh kar socha karta tha ki kya main bhi aisa likh paaunga kabhi...mujhe bahot hi khushi ho rahii haii aaj aap sab ko ek saath dekh kar... main duaa karta huun ki waapis wahi sab poorane members active ho jo pehle the ...
Aapki is koshish ke liye aapko mera salaam
Khush rahiye...apnaa khayaal rakhen
Duaaon ke saath ijaazat
Aapka
Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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13th October 2014, 12:02 AM
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Originally Posted by mausam
Ohhh God this is Heights...
Pulkit hume Buzurg kaha jaha raha hain...
Tum to Mujhse bhi chote ho...tum bhi Buzurg ki line main aa gaye
I just cant stop myself from laughing......
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Vo humein izzat baksh rahe hain....nahi....
**(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)**
*·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·*
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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
AMAN RAHI
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13th October 2014, 12:03 AM
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Originally Posted by Pulkit_gupta
Shukriya Doston! Is jagah se ek khaas rishta hai aur woh aap logon ki wajah se hai!
Madhu ji, aapko ehsaas pasand aaye, accha laga.
Meena didi, mujhe aaj bhi woh din yaad hai jab aapne mujhe woh salaah di thi... Mujhe to doosron ka likha share karne ka shauk thha aur logon ko lagta thha maine likha hai
Danny Bhaiya - Sach, bahut si yaadein judhi hain... aur aapka chhote bhaiya kehkar aashirwad dena unme se ek bahut pyaari yaad hai
Aman bhai - Hum sab pakdhe huwe hain
Sanjay ji - Jaankar bahut khushi huwi ke yahaan mehfilen aaj bhi jamti hain... Ab aana nahin hota isiliye pata nahin rehta. Jab SDC join ki thhi tab baccha thha, dekhte dekhte baal safed hone lage hain ab
Shaad miyaan - Tumne aur Zainy sahiba ne bahut efforts kiye hain humaare is ghar ko sajaaye rakhne me aur mujhe khushi hoti hai yeh dekhkar. Bhai main khud hi nahin aa pata to doosron ko kya kahoon. FB ke zariye logon se touch bana huwa hai
Kshitiz - Ama bhai Mehmaan nawaazi ka andaaz ho to lucknowi ho varna naa ho aur humaar jodh to fevicol ka hai na
Mausam - Woh din alag thhe... roz nayi nazmen, unpe replies, logon ka unhe nikharna... birthday celebrations... that time was amazing... Baaki ab Shayri.com par 11 saal ho gaye to buzurg hi kahaa jaayega naa
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apni delhi trip pe likha kalaam yaad aaya aaj.... ek sunehari yaadein.......
**(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)**
*·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·*
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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
AMAN RAHI
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shukriya Pulkit -
13th October 2014, 12:11 AM
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Originally Posted by Pulkit_gupta
दोस्तों आज कुछ बात चली जिसके चलते यहॉ बिताये पुराने दिन याद आ गये | उसी के चलते चंद एहसास पिरोये हैं |
Please do not search for meter in this post as their ain't any
"Kyun na puraane us ghar ko fir se sajaaya jaaye
Woh ehsaas fir se dilon me lagaaya jaaye
Yeh woh ghar hai jahaan bane kai ajnabee apne
Aao aaj fir se woh deep jalaa jaaye
Woh raushni chaand ki, mausam ka woh rukh,
Bedil Musafir ko is Kshitiz pe bulaya jaaye
Ghazalon ki mehfilen, Maikashi ka alam,
Talib ban is jagah ko Parastaar banaya jaaye
Musharraf Meena ke bikhre hon jahaan pe aashaar
Kureel aur Sifar ke nagmon ko sunaya jaaye
Banno ki Nazmen, Amanush ki ghazal,
Shimul ke gulaabon ko failaya jaaye
Mast hokar jo chaaye masti kaa mahaul
Sanj ki yaad me ek pal bitaya jaaye
Chalo puraane us ghar ko fir se sajaaya jaaye
Woh ehsaas se dilon me lagaaya jaaye"
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Dear Pulkit....mere paas lafz nahi hai apne dil ki baat kehne ke liye...!
jab se tumhare yeh ehsaas padey hai aur pariwaar ke purane members ko dekha hai...meri aankhe num hai Pulkit.
"Awaz di hai aaj ek nazar ne, ya hai yeh ko gumaaN,
dohra rhi hai jaise fizaye bhooli hue daasta"
bahut saare pyar aur duaoN ke saath
tumhari dii
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Originally Posted by meena chheda
मेरे पुलकित
यह सच है कि बिते हुए पल मूड के वापस तो नहीं आ सकते लेकिन यादें हमें बिते समय में सैर तो करा ही देती है.
मानो कल की ही बात हो ऎसा लगता है...
मुझे याद है .. मैने तुम्हें बताया था कि अगर किसी ओर का लिखा हुआ पोस्ट करो तो उसका नाम भी लिखा करो... और तुमने बहुत ही सरलता से बात मान ली. और उस पल से हमारा रिश्ता शुरू हुआ. आज इस पल तक तुमने इस रिश्ते को अच्छे से निभाया है...
आज हमारी बातचीत के परिणाम स्वरूप तुमने यह प्यारी रचना लिख कर मुझे भावुक बना दिया है!!
हमेशा खुश रहो.
स्नेह
तुम्हारी दीदी.
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Meena dii, loveeeee uuuuuu
aaj muje pariwaar ke purane sadaya dikh rhe hai SDC par to sab aapki vajha se, agar aap mera haath pakad kar mera saath dene ka vaada na karti to shayad nye member aap sab se kabhi mil hi na paate...loveeeeee uuu diiii
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Originally Posted by Amanush...
Na jaane kitni yaadeiN juDi houi heiN SDC ke saath, Chote Bhaiya...!
Tumhaari koshish hameiN behad acchi lagi...!
Apna khayaal theek se rakhna, ok...?
Aashirvaad ke saath
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Danny Bhaiyaa....SDC ko aap sab ki jaroorat hai...pariwaar koi bhi ho, accha tabhi lagta hai jab badey apne se chottoN ke saath milkar unke saath chale aur unko sahi galat ka farak batayeN...so plsssss SDC ke liye thoda thoda waqt jaroor nikaliye apne busy schdule meiN se.
aapki chotti behan
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Originally Posted by mausam
ohooo pulkit ...tumne to post bana bhi di
Bahut acche se yaadon ko piroya hain!
Sach woh arsa year 2004 ka kamaal ka tha...kitne maze karthe the hum yaha..Ek tadap si rehti thi website pe aane ki......Sab kitne busy ho gaye...
Pata nahin woh waqt fir ayega ya nahin....par us ehsaas ko mehsoos karke bada accha laga...
Mausam
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Meri Mausam-e-bahaar, aaj maiN bahut khush hu
"lout aaye hai phir se roothi bahare,
kitna haseeN hai samma,
dunia se keh do na hamko pukare,
ham kho gye hai yahaN"
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Originally Posted by Aman_rahi
Kutch kaha nahi jaa raha bhai...poorani yaadein taaza ho gayi....
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Aman ji....kaha to hamse bhi kuch nahi ja rha...aap sabko ko yahan dekh kar...ham bahutttttttttt khush hai.
"Jivan meiN kitni veeraniyaa thi, chaaye thi kaisi udhasi,
sunkar kisi ke kadmoN ki aahat, halchal hue hai jara si,
sagar meiN jaise lehreN utthi hai, toot.ti hai khamoshiyaa"
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Originally Posted by kshitiz
घर सजाने के फन में तो आप माहिर हैं सरकार
हम तो बस कुछ जरिया सा हैं आपकी मुस्कराहट बिखेरने का
आपसे दरखास्त है की आइन्दा भी सजावट में हमारा ख्याल रखियेगा
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Dear Kshitiz...jaanti hu bahut masroof hai aap sab apni apni zindgi meiN...ham hamari aap sab se yehi iltija hai ki jaise ham apne roz ke kaam ke liye waqt nikalte hai, usi tarah har roz na sahi par routine meiN thoda thoda waqt jaroor nikaleN to SDC kabhi bhiiii veeraN nahi ho sakti.
"ab samaj aaya, kitna adhoora tha aapke bin SDC ka fasana,
yu saath chal ke, haath pakad ke, haath na phir se chudana"
gunguna uthi hai SDC ki bagiya, Pulkit ne sunaya jo tarana,
khil uthi har kali, Meena dii ne dheere se kaha jara muskurana,
Danny bhaiyaa ne aakar mehfil ko chaar chaand hai lagaya,
Aman ko dekh gulshan sara kehne lga ab na tum door jana"
Sanjoo ji se ham kabhi mil nahi paaye es baat ka hame afsos rhega, wo kitne pyare ensaan rhe honge jo unki baat chalte hi unke naam par mehfil jam gye, bhagwaan unki aatma ko sakoon de.
Dear Pulkit...aapki aik awaz ne sabko SDC par phir se hazir kar diya hai...aapki es koshish ke liye ham aapke teh-e-dil se shukarguzaar hai, aur umeed karte hai ki ab sab routine meiN aaya kareNge, kyuki ham poora din kahin bhi jaaye kitne bhi busy kyu na ho...raat ko to ghar aana hi hai
ham es mehfil meiN Masoom Shayar ji ki masoom nazamoN ko bhi miss karte hai aur Sakhi ki rachnao ko bhi, Shalini ka alag andaz likhne ka yaad aata hai, accha lagega agar yeh sab bhi es bazm ka hissa bane aur apni maujoodgi se es pariwaar ki ronak badayeN.
Pulkit tum reps ke haqdaar ho
reps +++
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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13th October 2014, 12:38 AM
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Originally Posted by mausam
Ohhh God this is Heights...
Pulkit hume Buzurg kaha jaha raha hain...
Tum to Mujhse bhi chote ho...tum bhi Buzurg ki line main aa gaye
I just cant stop myself from laughing......
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Mausam...tu nalayak hi rhegi hamesha...Hamdam ji (Sanjay Sehgal) aapko izzat se bazurag bula rhe hai, kyuki aap sab bahut senior hai unse, Hamdam ji bahut acche shayar hai...aap routine meiN aao aur sabhi nye shayar ko pado aur unki hausla-afjai kijiye.
umr se chotte bade ki baat nahi hai, baat hai senior hone ki, par kauN samjaye es nalayak ko
Mausam bahut acchaaaaa lag rha hai...kitne waqt baad baat ho rhi hai SDC par
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Vo humein izzat baksh rahe hain....nahi....
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Aman ji...confuse nahi hone ka aap sab senior member izzat ke haqdaar hai, to wo aap sabko hamesha milegi Mausam to nalayak hai, esko kabhi bhi koi baat seedhi samaj nahi aati
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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13th October 2014, 12:56 AM
Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai.. pulkit bhai ka ye hi avtar jab chota hua karta tha .. aur hath pair dono chalaya karta tha.. baal khade karke .. wah kya din the.. subah aankh kholte hi SDC .. 10 saal beet gaye.. meena maa ..
Shukriya pulkit bhai.. is nazm main mujhe shamil karne ke liye.. chalte chalte ek sher badle haalaaton ke naam ..
Majboori ne aise humen majboor kar diya..
Is zindagi mai zindagi se door kar diya...
Sab apna khyaal rakheN .. khaas taur pe meena maa
Aapka apna
Kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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13th October 2014, 03:55 PM
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Originally Posted by Pulkit_gupta
दोस्तों आज कुछ बात चली जिसके चलते यहॉ बिताये पुराने दिन याद आ गये | उसी के चलते चंद एहसास पिरोये हैं |
Please do not search for meter in this post as their ain't any
"Kyun na puraane us ghar ko fir se sajaaya jaaye
Woh ehsaas fir se dilon me lagaaya jaaye
Yeh woh ghar hai jahaan bane kai ajnabee apne
Aao aaj fir se woh deep jalaa jaaye
Woh raushni chaand ki, mausam ka woh rukh,
Bedil Musafir ko is Kshitiz pe bulaya jaaye
Ghazalon ki mehfilen, Maikashi ka alam,
Talib ban is jagah ko Parastaar banaya jaaye
Musharraf Meena ke bikhre hon jahaan pe aashaar
Kureel aur Sifar ke nagmon ko sunaya jaaye
Banno ki Nazmen, Amanush ki ghazal,
Shimul ke gulaabon ko failaya jaaye
Mast hokar jo chaaye masti kaa mahaul
Sanj ki yaad me ek pal bitaya jaaye
Chalo puraane us ghar ko fir se sajaaya jaaye
Woh ehsaas se dilon me lagaaya jaaye"
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waah Pulkit Wah!
Tumhari hi baat ko aage badhate huve chand lineiN pesh haiN
Phir se ash'aar ki shamma ko jalaya jaaye
Chand yaadoN ko naya phir se banaya jaaye
Jiski Khushboo se mehakte thhe dareechay dil ke
Laut kar aao ussi bazm mein jaaya jaaye
Milte rahenge insha allah
Praveen
raah meiN hi manziloN ka zikr mat chedo Praveen
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi
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waah waah -
13th October 2014, 04:07 PM
Dear pulkit bahut khoob likha hai,
tune mujhe bhi puraane din vaapis yaad dila diye.....
great poetry ise koi behr ki zaroorat nahi ye padh kar hee aankhe chaalak jaaye. .
daad qubool karna, aur aise hi likhte raho, agli post ka intzaar rahega.
mujhe lagta hai yaha waapis aana parega ab baar baar.
regards
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13th October 2014, 04:39 PM
Dear pulkit, bahut achchhe kuchh puraani baateiN yaad aa gai ... ab jab tum pushteni ghar ko sajane chale hi aaye ho to maine socha kam hi sahi thodi roshni mai bhi kar dooN.....
Khush raho
Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.
- Chaand
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13th October 2014, 05:23 PM
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Originally Posted by Pulkit_gupta
दोस्तों आज कुछ बात चली जिसके चलते यहॉ बिताये पुराने दिन याद आ गये | उसी के चलते चंद एहसास पिरोये हैं |
Please do not search for meter in this post as their ain't any
"Kyun na puraane us ghar ko fir se sajaaya jaaye
Woh ehsaas fir se dilon me lagaaya jaaye
Yeh woh ghar hai jahaan bane kai ajnabee apne
Aao aaj fir se woh deep jalaa jaaye
Woh raushni chaand ki, mausam ka woh rukh,
Bedil Musafir ko is Kshitiz pe bulaya jaaye
Ghazalon ki mehfilen, Maikashi ka alam,
Talib ban is jagah ko Parastaar banaya jaaye
Musharraf Meena ke bikhre hon jahaan pe aashaar
Kureel aur Sifar ke nagmon ko sunaya jaaye
Banno ki Nazmen, Amanush ki ghazal,
Shimul ke gulaabon ko failaya jaaye
Mast hokar jo chaaye masti kaa mahaul
Sanj ki yaad me ek pal bitaya jaaye
Chalo puraane us ghar ko fir se sajaaya jaaye
Woh ehsaas se dilon me lagaaya jaaye"
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Quote:
Originally Posted by meena chheda
मेरे पुलकित
यह सच है कि बिते हुए पल मूड के वापस तो नहीं आ सकते लेकिन यादें हमें बिते समय में सैर तो करा ही देती है.
मानो कल की ही बात हो ऎसा लगता है...
मुझे याद है .. मैने तुम्हें बताया था कि अगर किसी ओर का लिखा हुआ पोस्ट करो तो उसका नाम भी लिखा करो... और तुमने बहुत ही सरलता से बात मान ली. और उस पल से हमारा रिश्ता शुरू हुआ. आज इस पल तक तुमने इस रिश्ते को अच्छे से निभाया है...
आज हमारी बातचीत के परिणाम स्वरूप तुमने यह प्यारी रचना लिख कर मुझे भावुक बना दिया है!!
हमेशा खुश रहो.
स्नेह
तुम्हारी दीदी.
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Originally Posted by Amanush...
Na jaane kitni yaadeiN juDi houi heiN SDC ke saath, Chote Bhaiya...!
Tumhaari koshish hameiN behad acchi lagi...!
Apna khayaal theek se rakhna, ok...?
Aashirvaad ke saath
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Originally Posted by mausam
ohooo pulkit ...tumne to post bana bhi di
Bahut acche se yaadon ko piroya hain!
Sach woh arsa year 2004 ka kamaal ka tha...kitne maze karthe the hum yaha..Ek tadap si rehti thi website pe aane ki......Sab kitne busy ho gaye...
Pata nahin woh waqt fir ayega ya nahin....par us ehsaas ko mehsoos karke bada accha laga...
Mausam
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Pulkit bhaiyaa.....
Welcome to SDC once again..... aur bahot saara thank you jo aapne is ghazal ki madad se saare piuraane doston ko ikattha karne ki koshissh ki hai.... sach maniye bahot khusshi ho rahi hai aap sab ko aaj yahan dekh kar....
mujhe yaad hai jab pahle pahal main naya tha is jagah me, aapke kalaam mujhe bahot bhaate they, aap sab ko padh kar hi thoda bahot seekh paaya hoon... aur aaj jab waaps aap sab ko dekh raha hoon yahaan to dil baag baag ho gaya hai......
aate rahiyegaa......... apna khayaal rakhiye
Shaad....
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Quote:
Originally Posted by mausam
Ohhh God this is Heights..
Pulkit hume Buzurg kaha jaha raha hain...
Tum to Mujhse bhi chote ho...tum bhi Buzurg ki line main aa gaye
I just cant stop myself from laughing......
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Originally Posted by Aman_rahi
Kutch kaha nahi jaa raha bhai...poorani yaadein taaza ho gayi....
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Quote:
Originally Posted by kshitiz
घर सजाने के फन में तो आप माहिर हैं सरकार
हम तो बस कुछ जरिया सा हैं आपकी मुस्कराहट बिखेरने का
आपसे दरखास्त है की आइन्दा भी सजावट में हमारा ख्याल रखियेगा
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Aman_rahi
Vo humein izzat baksh rahe hain....nahi....
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Originally Posted by Pulkit_gupta
Shukriya Doston! Is jagah se ek khaas rishta hai aur woh aap logon ki wajah se hai!
Madhu ji, aapko ehsaas pasand aaye, accha laga.
Meena didi, mujhe aaj bhi woh din yaad hai jab aapne mujhe woh salaah di thi... Mujhe to doosron ka likha share karne ka shauk thha aur logon ko lagta thha maine likha hai
Danny Bhaiya - Sach, bahut si yaadein judhi hain... aur aapka chhote bhaiya kehkar aashirwad dena unme se ek bahut pyaari yaad hai
Aman bhai - Hum sab pakdhe huwe hain
Sanjay ji - Jaankar bahut khushi huwi ke yahaan mehfilen aaj bhi jamti hain... Ab aana nahin hota isiliye pata nahin rehta. Jab SDC join ki thhi tab baccha thha, dekhte dekhte baal safed hone lage hain ab
Shaad miyaan - Tumne aur Zainy sahiba ne bahut efforts kiye hain humaare is ghar ko sajaaye rakhne me aur mujhe khushi hoti hai yeh dekhkar. Bhai main khud hi nahin aa pata to doosron ko kya kahoon. FB ke zariye logon se touch bana huwa hai
Kshitiz - Ama bhai Mehmaan nawaazi ka andaaz ho to lucknowi ho varna naa ho aur humaar jodh to fevicol ka hai na
Mausam - Woh din alag thhe... roz nayi nazmen, unpe replies, logon ka unhe nikharna... birthday celebrations... that time was amazing... Baaki ab Shayri.com par 11 saal ho gaye to buzurg hi kahaa jaayega naa
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Originally Posted by Dhaval
Pulkit bhaiya
Namaste
Sach kahun to main apni khushi ko lafzon mein bayaan nahiin kar paa rahaa huun.. main jab is pariwaar mein nayaa nayaa juda tha tab aap sab ko online dekhta tha aur aap sab ki likhi hui koshishon ko padh kar socha karta tha ki kya main bhi aisa likh paaunga kabhi...mujhe bahot hi khushi ho rahii haii aaj aap sab ko ek saath dekh kar... main duaa karta huun ki waapis wahi sab poorane members active ho jo pehle the ...
Aapki is koshish ke liye aapko mera salaam
Khush rahiye...apnaa khayaal rakhen
Duaaon ke saath ijaazat
Aapka
Dhaval
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Originally Posted by prasaxena
waah Pulkit Wah!
Tumhari hi baat ko aage badhate huve chand lineiN pesh haiN
Phir se ash'aar ki shamma ko jalaya jaaye
Chand yaadoN ko naya phir se banaya jaaye
Jiski Khushboo se mehakte thhe dareechay dil ke
Laut kar aao ussi bazm mein jaaya jaaye
Milte rahenge insha allah
Praveen
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Originally Posted by Chaand
Dear pulkit, bahut achchhe kuchh puraani baateiN yaad aa gai ... ab jab tum pushteni ghar ko sajane chale hi aaye ho to maine socha kam hi sahi thodi roshni mai bhi kar dooN.....
Khush raho
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Dosto pulkit ki yeh ghazal aur aap sab ke reply padha kar meri hii likhi ek line mujhe yaad aayi jo SDC ki is post ki feelings bayan kar rahi hai..
Ashq behte hee rahe aankho.N se barsaat ki tarha,jab yaad kiya sab ko yaha aa kar pichhli mulaaqat ki tarah
regards
manu
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13th October 2014, 05:46 PM
Manu bhai
Kem chho
Bahot khoob huzoor
Duaaon ke saath ijaazat
Aapka
Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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13th October 2014, 06:11 PM
Namaste Pulkit miyaaN,
amaa kya samaa baaNdha hai, sadke jauuN tumhaare
puraane dostoN ko yahaaN dekh kar dil baaGh-baaGh ho gaya
Meena Didi pranaam
Manu saahab,Aman bhai, Danny bhai, mausam,chaand aur kunal bhai! kya baat hai waqaye meiN puraane din yaad aa gaye, Pulkit bhai aapka bohat shukriya yeh qalaam kehne aur post karne ke liye
sach hai ke har ek ki ziNdagi meiN aisa waqt aata hai jab duniyadaari ke jhameloN aur parivaar ki zimmedaariiyoN ko nibhaate nibhaate waqt kahaaN chala jaata hai ehsaas nahiiN ho paata
mujhe b hi yaad haiN voh din jab raat bhar yahaaN baiTha karta tha aur jab taq kuch na kuch likh kar post nahiiN kar leta neeNd nahiiN aati thi
ummeed hai ke aap sab se kam se kam duaa salaam to hoti rahegi
khush rahiye
rab raakha
maikash
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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13th October 2014, 06:42 PM
aadaab !
bahut arse ke baad SDCp er puraany member dekh ker yaqeenan beHad khushi ho rahi hai app sab se iltejaa hai youNhi aaty rahiye . app sabhi se SDC ki ronaq hai
pulkit saHb appki is kavish ko dhero daad bahut umda
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14th October 2014, 12:18 AM
पुलकित जी नमस्ते
एक अरसे बाद आपको पढ़ा सच पुराने दिनओ की यादें ताज़ा हो गयी
वो वक़्त सामने से गुज़र गया जब सरे यहाँ अपनी रखा लिखा करते थे पढ़ा करते थे
चलें अब माहोल में तबदीली आई है तोह रौनक जमेगी
आपने बहुत अच्छी रचना पिरोइ है
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14th October 2014, 12:56 AM
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Originally Posted by Pulkit_gupta
दोस्तों आज कुछ बात चली जिसके चलते यहॉ बिताये पुराने दिन याद आ गये | उसी के चलते चंद एहसास पिरोये हैं |
Please do not search for meter in this post as their ain't any
"Kyun na puraane us ghar ko fir se sajaaya jaaye
Woh ehsaas fir se dilon me lagaaya jaaye
Yeh woh ghar hai jahaan bane kai ajnabee apne
Aao aaj fir se woh deep jalaa jaaye
Woh raushni chaand ki, mausam ka woh rukh,
Bedil Musafir ko is Kshitiz pe bulaya jaaye
Ghazalon ki mehfilen, Maikashi ka alam,
Talib ban is jagah ko Parastaar banaya jaaye
Musharraf Meena ke bikhre hon jahaan pe aashaar
Kureel aur Sifar ke nagmon ko sunaya jaaye
Banno ki Nazmen, Amanush ki ghazal,
Shimul ke gulaabon ko failaya jaaye
Mast hokar jo chaaye masti kaa mahaul
Sanj ki yaad me ek pal bitaya jaaye
Chalo puraane us ghar ko fir se sajaaya jaaye
Woh ehsaas se dilon me lagaaya jaaye"
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Wah ..Bohat khoob Pulkit jee...
Aapki wajah se ek baar phir sabhi puraane dost yaha ikatthe huye hain..
Thanks to you!
Yuhi likhte rahiye....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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14th October 2014, 12:57 AM
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Shaad miyaan - Tumne aur Zainy sahiba ne bahut efforts kiye hain humaare is ghar ko sajaaye rakhne me aur mujhe khushi hoti hai yeh dekhkar. Bhai main khud hi nahin aa pata to doosron ko kya kahoon. FB ke zariye logon se touch bana huwa hai
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Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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14th October 2014, 07:01 AM
bahut pyaree aur sahee baat kahee hai yahan kayee logon ne shayari men apana pahala kadam rakkhaa thaa sab yaad dilaa diyee tum ne
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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14th October 2014, 09:43 AM
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bahut pyaree aur sahee baat kahee hai yahan kayee logon ne shayari men apana pahala kadam rakkhaa thaa sab yaad dilaa diyee tum ne
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Anil ji..................shukriya, aapne SDC par vapis aakar hame beintehaa khushi di hai
regards
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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Warm Welcome dii -
14th October 2014, 09:46 AM
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Originally Posted by Nira
पुलकित जी नमस्ते
एक अरसे बाद आपको पढ़ा सच पुराने दिनओ की यादें ताज़ा हो गयी
वो वक़्त सामने से गुज़र गया जब सरे यहाँ अपनी रखा लिखा करते थे पढ़ा करते थे
चलें अब माहोल में तबदीली आई है तोह रौनक जमेगी
आपने बहुत अच्छी रचना पिरोइ है
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Nira dii.........SDC par vapisi ke liye aapka teh-e-dil se suwagat hai...
regards
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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Warm Welcome Manu ji -
14th October 2014, 09:51 AM
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Originally Posted by acharya_mj
Dear pulkit bahut khoob likha hai,
tune mujhe bhi puraane din vaapis yaad dila diye.....
great poetry ise koi behr ki zaroorat nahi ye padh kar hee aankhe chaalak jaaye. .
daad qubool karna, aur aise hi likhte raho, agli post ka intzaar rahega.
mujhe lagta hai yaha waapis aana parega ab baar baar.
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Manu ji....SDC par vapisi ke liye aapka teh-e-dil se suwagat hai...ab SDc par aane ka silsilla jaari rakhiyega...aap sabke aane se SDC par kitni ronak hai...ab phir se SDC ko veeran mat hone dijiyega.
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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14th October 2014, 10:05 AM
@pulkit....yeh kya baat Hui 11 saal guzare to buzurg ho Gaye....nahiñnnnnnnn.aise apne aapo
underestimate mat karoKaro
@Aman.....izzat hi bakshi hongi....par buzurgo wali izzat mujhe to attack hi aagaya.haha
@Sunitadi....aap na bahot bolti hain...sabke saamne to nalayak mat kahiye.....waise agar main buzurg to aap.....hahaha..aise kuch bhi mat boliye..seniority ke rank se Umar ka kya sambandh.........waise aapka afsoos sahib hain sanjj se milna reh gaya aapka........
@ sanjayji....shukriya itni izzat bakshne ke liye....par lafz Zara kuch acche istemal Karna next time....jaise ki attack na aaye ....aap Sunitadi KO buzurg keh sakte hain mujhe aur pulkit KO nahin....woh bechara pata nahin kya hua hain Jo kuch na bola.....
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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14th October 2014, 12:12 PM
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Dosto pulkit ki yeh ghazal aur aap sab ke reply padha kar meri hii likhi ek line mujhe yaad aayi jo SDC ki is post ki feelings bayan kar rahi hai..
Ashq behte hee rahe aankho.N se barsaat ki tarha,jab yaad kiya sab ko yaha aa kar pichhli mulaaqat ki tarah
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waahh waahhh kya baaat hai manu bhaiyaa..... aaj zamaane ke baad aapko yahaan dekh kar dil khush ho gayaa hamaaraa...... bahot accha likha aapne ek line me hi haale dil bayaan kar diyaa hai..... likhte rahen, aate rahen
Shaad....
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14th October 2014, 12:16 PM
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Shaad miyaan - Tumne aur Zainy sahiba ne bahut efforts kiye hain humaare is ghar ko sajaaye rakhne me aur mujhe khushi hoti hai yeh dekhkar. Bhai main khud hi nahin aa pata to doosron ko kya kahoon. FB ke zariye logon se touch bana huwa hai
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bahot shukriyaa aapka pulkit bhai jo aap aisaa samajhte hain...... wese hamne bas apni zimmedaariyon ko nibhaanne ki koshish ki hai aur karte rahenge....
duaaon me yaad rakhiyega...
Shaad...
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14th October 2014, 03:21 PM
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दोस्तों आज कुछ बात चली जिसके चलते यहॉ बिताये पुराने दिन याद आ गये | उसी के चलते चंद एहसास पिरोये हैं |
Please do not search for meter in this post as their ain't any
"Kyun na puraane us ghar ko fir se sajaaya jaaye
Woh ehsaas fir se dilon me lagaaya jaaye
Yeh woh ghar hai jahaan bane kai ajnabee apne
Aao aaj fir se woh deep jalaa jaaye
Woh raushni chaand ki, mausam ka woh rukh,
Bedil Musafir ko is Kshitiz pe bulaya jaaye
Ghazalon ki mehfilen, Maikashi ka alam,
Talib ban is jagah ko Parastaar banaya jaaye
Musharraf Meena ke bikhre hon jahaan pe aashaar
Kureel aur Sifar ke nagmon ko sunaya jaaye
Banno ki Nazmen, Amanush ki ghazal,
Shimul ke gulaabon ko failaya jaaye
Mast hokar jo chaaye masti kaa mahaul
Sanj ki yaad me ek pal bitaya jaaye
Chalo puraane us ghar ko fir se sajaaya jaaye
Woh ehsaas se dilon me lagaaya jaaye"
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Dear Pulkit,
aapne es rachana ko likh ker un dino ko bahut yaad dila di.. so uske liye aapko dhanyvaad deta hun.. yah vo period tha jisne mere ander us funkaar ko panapane ka mauka diya.. jindagi ko vo hasin lamha jo taummra bana rahega.. mai Shayri (SDC) web site ka shukra gujar hun jisne mere ander chhupe hunar ko ek plateform diya.. aur aap jaise bahumukhi pratibha ke dhani shayro..( pulkit ji, dhaval ji, sunita virender ji, meena ji, kshitij ji, parastaar ji, shimul ji, banno ji, pari ji, chaand ji, mausam ji, maikash, kureel ji, etc..list lambi hai ..ek ek ka naam likhu to bhi shyad list puri na ho) ne hamari pahchan se hume rubru keraya.. aap sab ke pyaar aur sadhuvaad ke liye sada aabhari rahunga..
shubhkamnaao sahit,
Akant...
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
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14th October 2014, 07:20 PM
Pulkit jee..aapka kalaam to khoobsurat hai hee, par us se badi khoobsurti ye hai kee sab log apne purane din yaad kar rahe haim.,..aap sbko ek saath dekhkar bahut khushi ho rahi hai...beete dino kee yaadein mujhe bhi taaza ho gayi.....ye ek anootha sangam hai.,ye kalaam to jaise kumbh ka mela ho gaya hai...,sb bichde hue fir se mil gaye hain...
Bahut bahut shukriya aap sabhi ka, isi tarah aate rahiye ap sab...
Thanx
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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14th October 2014, 07:39 PM
Sub'hanAllah!! reading thread........ hard to not get nostalgic!! I can't believe my eyes... can't express my joy.... as I used to read during free time older and older threads n poetries, used to wonder where are these stars... the founding members..people who carried the flames and lit up the mehfil when we weren't even aware of this site... bayhad khushee ka mawqa haye waqaii!! Hats off to all!! Best wishes to all!
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14th October 2014, 07:56 PM
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@pulkit....yeh kya baat Hui 11 saal guzare to buzurg ho Gaye....nahiñnnnnnnn.aise apne aapo
underestimate mat karoKaro
@Aman.....izzat hi bakshi hongi....par buzurgo wali izzat mujhe to attack hi aagaya.haha
@Sunitadi....aap na bahot bolti hain...sabke saamne to nalayak mat kahiye.....waise agar main buzurg to aap.....hahaha..aise kuch bhi mat boliye..seniority ke rank se Umar ka kya sambandh.........waise aapka afsoos sahib hain sanjj se milna reh gaya aapka........
@ sanjayji....shukriya itni izzat bakshne ke liye....par lafz Zara kuch acche istemal Karna next time....jaise ki attack na aaye ....aap Sunitadi KO buzurg keh sakte hain mujhe aur pulkit KO nahin....woh bechara pata nahin kya hua hain Jo kuch na bola.....
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Hi Mausam....
Aap kaisi hain ...humne tau ki thi dillagi ,
..tum dil se kyun laga baithe.
Chalo hum aapko buzurg nahin kehte apne senior keh dete hain ,umr mein main aap se bara hun , aap mujhe buzurg keh liziye
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Rahi baat izzat bakhshane ki tau chalo poetry mein aapko apna senior tau keh sakte hai..
Pulkit mind nahin karega kyon ki vo janta hai senior or senior citizen (Buzurg) main kafi farak hai ...vaise ho sake tau humour section mein senior citizen ki love story zaroor paiye.
Vaise main abhi senior citizen ban.ne se koson door hun ..
Baki pulkit ki is ghazal ne raunaq laga di yahan per aur mujhe bahut sare seniors ke bare parne ka mauka mila ...
Gar aaye hai sab laut kar ab jane.nahin doonga,
Mil ke sab mehfilein sajao yehi iltiza karunga.
With warm regds,
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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14th October 2014, 10:53 PM
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Hi Mausam....
Aap kaisi hain ...humne tau ki thi dillagi ,
..tum dil se kyun laga baithe.
Chalo hum aapko buzurg nahin kehte apne senior keh dete hain ,umr mein main aap se bara hun , aap mujhe buzurg keh liziye
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Rahi baat izzat bakhshane ki tau chalo poetry mein aapko apna senior tau keh sakte hai..
Pulkit mind nahin karega kyon ki vo janta hai senior or senior citizen (Buzurg) main kafi farak hai ...vaise ho sake tau humour section mein senior citizen ki love story zaroor paiye.
Vaise main abhi senior citizen ban.ne se koson door hun ..
Baki pulkit ki is ghazal ne raunaq laga di yahan per aur mujhe bahut sare seniors ke bare parne ka mauka mila ...
Gar aaye hai sab laut kar ab jane.nahin doonga,
Mil ke sab mehfilein sajao yehi iltiza karunga.
With warm regds,
Sanjay Sehgal
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Sanjay ji....Mausam ki baate aisi hi hoti hai...eska acche lafzoN se matlab hai ki eski umr ke bare meiN kuch mat khiye, esko apne aapko chotta kehlvana bahut pasand hai, so next time acche lafz
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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14th October 2014, 11:10 PM
Waah mazaa aa gaya yahaan sab doston ko ikhatta hota dekh
Dear Dhaval, tumhaara bhi SDC ke members ko jodhe rakhne me kam contribution nahin hai... Accha lagta hai jaankar ke kaise woh period tumhe bhi yaad hai... aur haan zaroor judhenge log... Main bhi koshish karoonga sabko jodhne ki...
Sunita Didi, yahaan aise rishte bane hain jo sagon se bhi sage hain... Meri kismat acchi rahi hai ke dost itna pyaar dete hain... Ek awaaz pe sab chale aaye Ek awaaz me to biwi bhi nahin aati
Hum aa nahin paate magar SDC se door nahin hain. Koshish aage bhi zaari rahegi.
Kunal, woh 11 saal pehle ka avataar thha pata nahin kahaan se animated gif download ki thhi Yeh avataar bhi umr ke hissab se change kar lena chaahiye ab.
Praveen ji, waah... Mere liye to aap humesha SDC ke pehle moderator rahenge Bahut accha laga aapko yahaan dekhkar aur aapke aashaar ne chaar chaand laga diye... Khayal rakhiye apna
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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