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[nuri]

Hello, everyone

I have recently written a story about a guy named Sohail, whose life revolves around two females... one named Diya, and another named Maiya.

It has taken me a very long time to write, and i hope that you will take some time to read it, even though it is long, and let me know what you all think.

I have made it a zip file, so i dont know if there will be any problems in downloading or opening it. Please let me know. I was not able to post it as a 'thread' becuz it was too long, i think.

Thanks, for ur time... best regards.

~Nuri

[nuri]

I suppose i shouldve been more specific about the plotline... so you can tell whether it will interest you or not....

Sohail and his best friend had made a promise: to care for each other and their families no matter what. Sohail is left to the care of his best friend's daughter~Diya....

Diya is brought back to London, from Pakistan, with Sohail. He is sure what to do, but knows that he has to try and give her the love of a father, and of a family. Since he is single, it is difficult for him to understand the little girl. This is when he decides to get a governess, hopefully looking for an old maid, that wouldnt get in his way. But when he does find a governess that is willing to stay under the same roof, and teach and comfort Diya, she turns out to be a beautiful young woman~Maiya.

So, that's the basic outline. It has a lot of laughs, and most of my friends who read it thought it was very nice. I hope that you will all like it too...

~thanks... nuri

[SMAH]

post your story in two different segments or threads. then it wont be too long. divide it up into as many as it takes.

i dont want to buy winzip. hope you know what i m saying.

smah