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Love kabhie naa aisa socha tha - 26th May 2009, 10:41 AM
Kabhie naa aisa socha tha
Khwaabo se woh u nikal aayegaa
Aate hi kaise ho kehkar
Batiyaana shuru kar degaa
Baat baat par hasayega woh
Chup hone hi nahi degaa
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Mujhe bolne hi nahi degaa
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Mai kyaa bolu.. ye kahegaa
Jab jab mai chillaungi tab
Chupchap so jayegaa
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Zor se daat degaa
Koi nahi jaanta k kab
Who phir normal hoyegaa
Kyaa karu mai is vyakti kaa
Kyaa koi mujhe samjhayegaa
Meri toh khushi usme basi hai
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26th May 2009, 11:44 AM
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Kabhie naa aisa socha tha
Khwaabo se woh u nikal aayegaa
Aate hi kaise ho kehkar
Batiyaana shuru kar degaa
Baat baat par hasayega woh
Chup hone hi nahi degaa
Bolte bolte itna bolega woh
Mujhe bolne hi nahi degaa
Jab mai kahungi aap kuch bolo
Mai kyaa bolu.. ye kahegaa
Jab jab mai chillaungi tab
Chupchap so jayegaa
Bolu agar koi galat baat toh
Zor se daat degaa
Koi nahi jaanta k kab
Who phir normal hoyegaa
Kyaa karu mai is vyakti kaa
Kyaa koi mujhe samjhayegaa
Meri toh khushi usme basi hai
Jag chahe hase toh hasegaa
Saare jag ko bhula degaa
Aur mujhpar raaj karegaa........
khanak
yeh toh bohot piyara likha aap ne,,
sachhi main hame itna pasand aaya,,i luv it
keep writing my dear
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yeh toh bohot piyara likha aap ne,,
sachhi main hame itna pasand aaya,,i luv it
keep writing my dear
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thanku rani........ nice to know aapko humari poetry's pasand aati hai....... thanks dear... t care.....
   
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26th May 2009, 06:07 PM
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Kabhie naa aisa socha tha
Khwaabo se woh u nikal aayegaa
Aate hi kaise ho kehkar
Batiyaana shuru kar degaa
Baat baat par hasayega woh
Chup hone hi nahi degaa
Bolte bolte itna bolega woh
Mujhe bolne hi nahi degaa
Jab mai kahungi aap kuch bolo
Mai kyaa bolu.. ye kahegaa
Jab jab mai chillaungi tab
Chupchap so jayegaa
Bolu agar koi galat baat toh
Zor se daat degaa
Koi nahi jaanta k kab
Who phir normal hoyegaa
Kyaa karu mai is vyakti kaa
Kyaa koi mujhe samjhayegaa
Meri toh khushi usme basi hai
Jag chahe hase toh hasegaa
Saare jag ko bhula degaa
Aur mujhpar raaj karegaa........
khanak ji ! aapki poem ki shabd rachna aur ehsaas bahut khubsurat hai... padh kar acha laga...aise hi likhte rahiye...

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pata nahi tujh pe meri
kis baat ka asar hone wala hai
koi raaz aaj teri zubaa se
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26th May 2009, 07:06 PM
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khanak ji ! aapki poem ki shabd rachna aur ehsaas bahut khubsurat hai... padh kar acha laga...aise hi likhte rahiye...
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pata nahi tujh pe meri
kis baat ka asar hone wala hai
koi raaz aaj teri zubaa se
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26th May 2009, 07:57 PM
hmmmmmmmmmmm khanak ji ko mera salaam,

bahut unusual samavesh tha, theth gaaoN ke shabdm suddh hindi ke shabd, english ke words, aur urdu ke lafz sabhi maujood the isme, yaad nahiN aisa pehle dekha bhi hai ya nahiN, bahut hi aadhunik shili ki kavita likhi hai aapne, iske liye aapko badhaai, pyara sa hai par ehsash halke se uljhe hue se lage, shayad sliye kyuNki uljhan hi dikhane ki kosish ki hai aapne, ek bahut pyari kossish pe mubaaraqbaad aapko. umeed karta aage aapse aur bh majedaar cheezeN padhne ko mleNgi...!!


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26th May 2009, 08:45 PM
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thanku rani........ nice to know aapko humari poetry's pasand aati hai....... thanks dear... t care.....
aise kaise pasand nahin
aayegi,,,
itni pyari pyari alfaaz jo
likhti ho aap,,,
apne jazbaat hamare
saath share karti ho
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aqeel - 26th May 2009, 08:53 PM
nice to read pl keep it up jo sab pe bpjh tha ek shaam jab nahi lauta -usi parinde ka shakho ko intzar raha
   
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shaam dhale ye soch ke baithe ham apni tasveer ke paas -saari ghazlen baithi hongi apne apne meer ke paas
   
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26th May 2009, 10:49 PM
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hmmmmmmmmmmm khanak ji ko mera salaam,

bahut unusual samavesh tha, theth gaaoN ke shabdm suddh hindi ke shabd, english ke words, aur urdu ke lafz sabhi maujood the isme, yaad nahiN aisa pehle dekha bhi hai ya nahiN, bahut hi aadhunik shili ki kavita likhi hai aapne, iske liye aapko badhaai, pyara sa hai par ehsash halke se uljhe hue se lage, shayad sliye kyuNki uljhan hi dikhane ki kosish ki hai aapne, ek bahut pyari kossish pe mubaaraqbaad aapko. umeed karta aage aapse aur bh majedaar cheezeN padhne ko mleNgi...!!
thanks ghazal....... par actually baat yahi hai..... main kuch plan karke nahi likhti...... jo words jaise bhi meri soch mei aate hai main wahi aapke saamne prastut kar deti hoo............

baat wahi jo dil se nikle......... dimag ki toh har koi sunta hai

aisa kuch mai maanti hoo.......keep writing.....
   
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[quote=Rani Aflatoon;356279]aise kaise pasand nahin
aayegi,,,
itni pyari pyari alfaaz jo
likhti ho aap,,,
apne jazbaat hamare
saath share karti ho
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nice to read pl keep it up jo sab pe bpjh tha ek shaam jab nahi lauta -usi parinde ka shakho ko intzar raha
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