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Love apne - 27th May 2009, 08:26 PM
Zindgi rishto se bandhi hai
Rishto k bina isme aur kuch nahi hai
Har pal ye kuch shikhaati hai
Khushiya hardam badhati hai
Gam kaa katna aasaan kar deti hai
Agar apno kaa saath hota hai
Koi mere dil se jab ye poochta hai
Apno k bina zindgi kyaa hoti hai?
Ek hi baat muh se mere nikalti hai
Jeete jee ye unke bin ek narak hai
Aap sabhi yaha bohat khushnaseeb hai
Jo apne parivaar k pyaar k beech baithe hai
Pal do pal ke liye aaye hai
Sirf pyaar hi baat te jaana hai
Bin apno k kyaa jeevan hai
Koi usse pooche jo yaha tanha hai
Wo sab karna jo aapko karna hai
Bas ek baat dil mei rakhna hai
Apno ki jagah kisiko naa dena hai
Unhe dard kabhie naa dena hai
   
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27th May 2009, 08:32 PM
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Zindgi rishto se bandhi hai
Rishto k bina isme aur kuch nahi hai
Har pal ye kuch shikhaati hai
Khushiya hardam badhati hai
Gam kaa katna aasaan kar deti hai
Agar apno kaa saath hota hai
Koi mere dil se jab ye poochta hai
Apno k bina zindgi kyaa hoti hai?
Ek hi baat muh se mere nikalti hai
Jeete jee ye unke bin ek narak hai
Aap sabhi yaha bohat khushnaseeb hai
Jo apne parivaar k pyaar k beech baithe hai
Pal do pal ke liye aaye hai
Sirf pyaar hi baat te jaana hai
Bin apno k kyaa jeevan hai
Koi usse pooche jo yaha tanha hai
Wo sab karna jo aapko karna hai
Bas ek baat dil mei rakhna hai
Apno ki jagah kisiko naa dena hai
Unhe dard kabhie naa dena hai
wooooooooooooow
khanak aap toh
din ba din
acha likh rahi hai ji,,
very active topic yaar very good i like your intrest in poetry ,,,,
really
keep it up
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27th May 2009, 09:41 PM
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wooooooooooooow
khanak aap toh
din ba din
acha likh rahi hai ji,,
very active topic yaar very good i like your intrest in poetry ,,,,
really
keep it up
tc
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10th June 2009, 02:43 PM
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Zindgi rishto se bandhi hai
Rishto k bina isme aur kuch nahi hai
Har pal ye kuch shikhaati hai
Khushiya hardam badhati hai
Gam kaa katna aasaan kar deti hai
Agar apno kaa saath hota hai
Koi mere dil se jab ye poochta hai
Apno k bina zindgi kyaa hoti hai?
Ek hi baat muh se mere nikalti hai
Jeete jee ye unke bin ek narak hai
Aap sabhi yaha bohat khushnaseeb hai
Jo apne parivaar k pyaar k beech baithe hai
Pal do pal ke liye aaye hai
Sirf pyaar hi baat te jaana hai
Bin apno k kyaa jeevan hai
Koi usse pooche jo yaha tanha hai
Wo sab karna jo aapko karna hai
Bas ek baat dil mei rakhna hai
Apno ki jagah kisiko naa dena hai
Unhe dard kabhie naa dena hai
nice poem Khanak....gud thoughts...keep writing

Thanks & Regards
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10th June 2009, 06:38 PM
Hi khanak, its really very good, pyaar, rishte , apno ka ehsaas, ye sab hamari jindagi mein khtni importance rakhte hain bakhoobi byaan kiya hai tumne, ek khoobsoorat ehsaas ek khoobsoorat dil mein.


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nice poem Khanak....gud thoughts...keep writing
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Hi khanak, its really very good, pyaar, rishte , apno ka ehsaas, ye sab hamari jindagi mein khtni importance rakhte hain bakhoobi byaan kiya hai tumne, ek khoobsoorat ehsaas ek khoobsoorat dil mein.
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12th June 2009, 05:18 PM
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Zindgi rishto se bandhi hai
Rishto k bina isme aur kuch nahi hai
Har pal ye kuch shikhaati hai
Khushiya hardam badhati hai
Gam kaa katna aasaan kar deti hai
Agar apno kaa saath hota hai
Koi mere dil se jab ye poochta hai
Apno k bina zindgi kyaa hoti hai?
Ek hi baat muh se mere nikalti hai
Jeete jee ye unke bin ek narak hai
Aap sabhi yaha bohat khushnaseeb hai
Jo apne parivaar k pyaar k beech baithe hai
Pal do pal ke liye aaye hai
Sirf pyaar hi baat te jaana hai
Bin apno k kyaa jeevan hai
Koi usse pooche jo yaha tanha hai
Wo sab karna jo aapko karna hai
Bas ek baat dil mei rakhna hai
Apno ki jagah kisiko naa dena hai
Unhe dard kabhie naa dena hai
bahut khoob likha hai...... very nice

yun hi likhti rahne...
t.k.

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Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah.
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