khat mera

khanak · **khat mera -** 23rd July 2009, 09:46 AM

Khat kal jo likha tha kal maine
Padhkar usse fekh dena
Mat lena koi baat ko dil pe
Naadaani samajh ke bhula dena
Akeli bethi mai tanha si
Fizool ki baatei sochti hoo
Dil se jab koi baat nikle toh
Jee bhar ke hume suna dena
Kuch alag hi dhang hai mere pyaar ka
Shayad tum bhi yahi sochte ho
Pyaar se dekhne ko jee chahe to
Aas paas kahi hume dhoondh lena
Kabhie bhi mere pass koi hulchul hoti hai
Dhak se dhadak jata hai dil mera
Khwahishei aapko leke jo is dil mei hai
Kabhie unhe bhi jaan ne ki koshish kar lena

naresh_mehra110 · 29th July 2009, 11:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by khanak

Khat kal jo likha tha kal maine
Padhkar usse fekh dena
Mat lena koi baat ko dil pe
Naadaani samajh ke bhula dena
Akeli bethi mai tanha si
Fizool ki baatei sochti hoo
Dil se jab koi baat nikle toh
Jee bhar ke hume suna dena
Kuch alag hi dhang hai mere pyaar ka
Shayad tum bhi yahi sochte ho
Pyaar se dekhne ko jee chahe to
Aas paas kahi hume dhoondh lena
Kabhie bhi mere pass koi hulchul hoti hai
Dhak se dhadak jata hai dil mera
Khwahishei aapko leke jo is dil mei hai
Kabhie unhe bhi jaan ne ki koshish kar lena

Khanak ji......aakhir is khat mai aisa kiya tha ......jo aap ko udaas kar gaya aur itna udaas ki hamse bhi baat nahi kar paa rahi aap........khair koi baat nahi.......lekin hame aapka khat bahut pasand aaya.....iske ehsaaso ne mere mann ko kahi bhigoya zarur hai......aise hi likhte rahiye.....aapki rachnaye......dil ko bahut chhuti hai........khush rahiye......

khanak · 30th July 2009, 09:56 AM

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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110

Khanak ji......aakhir is khat mai aisa kiya tha ......jo aap ko udaas kar gaya aur itna udaas ki hamse bhi baat nahi kar paa rahi aap........khair koi baat nahi.......lekin hame aapka khat bahut pasand aaya.....iske ehsaaso ne mere mann ko kahi bhigoya zarur hai......aise hi likhte rahiye.....aapki rachnaye......dil ko bahut chhuti hai........khush rahiye......

shukriya nareshji meri is rachna ko aapne pasand kiya...
aapne padha aur samay nikaal kar replykiya uske liye aapka dil se dhanawaad hai
bohat jald hi dobaara likhenge.. aur aapki raay jaanne ka intzaar rahegaa....
aapki apni khanak