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Exclamation Fusoon-e-Ishq Ne Jab Deewanaa Banaya!! - 25th July 2014, 11:17 AM
Adaab Hazreen-e-mehfil-e-dard,
Aaj kal aik silsila chal raha hai FusooN-e-alfaaz....
Jis ki sarbarahi hamare janab Zarraa saheb kar rahe haiN,

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=77403

Aaj tak hum ne jitne alfaaz padh'e ya seekhe haiN (underlined),
un sab alfaazoN se mil kar yeh aik 'koshish' ki hai:-

fusooN-e-ishQ ne jab deewanaa banaya!
zeest ko ik bewafaa ne tamashaa banaya..

fusooN : magic

haal kia biyaaN ho, hum jese be-haal ka….!
rasan-e-daar khud unhoN ne apnaa banaya

rasan-e-daar : phansi ki rassi

kabhi ho jaati hai niyyat kharab, beech bazaar!
haan! bosa-e-rukhsar ne humaiN ruswaa banaya

bosa : kiss

phir chaaye khalwatoN ke baadal chaar soo!
us sung ne jab bar-mala muqadammaa banaya

khawatoN : solitude
sung : stone
bar-mala : manifestly
muqadammaa : case

zindaaN meiN zikr-e-yaar ke siwa kuch na kiya!
ussi mah-e-jabeen ke charche, jis ne paglaa banaya

ZindaaN : Prison

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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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fusooN-e-ishQ ne jab deewanaa banaya!
zeest ko ik bewafaa ne tamashaa banaya..

haal kia biyaaN ho, hum jese be-haal ka….!
rasan-e-daar khud unhoN ne apnaa banaya

kabhi ho jaati hai niyyat kharab, beech bazaar!
haan! bosa-e-rukhsar ne humaiN ruswaa banaya

phir chaaye khalwatoN ke baadal chaar soo!
us sung ne jab bar-mala muqadammaa banaya

zindaaN meiN zikr-e-yaar ke siwa kuch na kiya!
ussi mah-e-jabeen ke charche, jis ne paglaa banaya
waaah.... laajawaab, bahot khub.. daad hi daad aapko, Hassanbhai


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Beautiful collective creation of FusooN-e-alfaaz......outstanding.

Hassan you are one amongst the best.

Keep writing.
Naaz,

Thanks a lot for such a beautiful comment.

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Adaab Hazreen-e-mehfil-e-dard,
Aaj kal aik silsila chal raha hai FusooN-e-alfaaz....
Jis ki sarbarahi hamare janab Zarraa saheb kar rahe haiN,

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=77403

Aaj tak hum ne jitne alfaaz padh'e ya seekhe haiN (underlined),
un sab alfaazoN se mil kar yeh aik 'koshish' ki hai:-

fusooN-e-ishQ ne jab deewanaa banaya!
zeest ko ik bewafaa ne tamashaa banaya..

fusooN : magic

haal kia biyaaN ho, hum jese be-haal ka….!
rasan-e-daar khud unhoN ne apnaa banaya

rasan-e-daar : phansi ki rassi

kabhi ho jaati hai niyyat kharab, beech bazaar!
haan! bosa-e-rukhsar ne humaiN ruswaa banaya

bosa : kiss

phir chaaye khalwatoN ke baadal chaar soo!
us sung ne jab bar-mala muqadammaa banaya

khawatoN : solitude
sung : stone
bar-mala : manifestly
muqadammaa : case

zindaaN meiN zikr-e-yaar ke siwa kuch na kiya!
ussi mah-e-jabeen ke charche, jis ne paglaa banaya

ZindaaN : Prison
excellent composition Hassan
bahot khub

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Waaah !!! Behad hi khoobsurat ghazal se nawaaza hai Hassan bhai !! Waaqayee aap ne pardhne waalon ke dil meiN ke fusoon-e-alfaaz paida kar diya hai !!!

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Adaab Hazreen-e-mehfil-e-dard,
Aaj kal aik silsila chal raha hai FusooN-e-alfaaz....
Jis ki sarbarahi hamare janab Zarraa saheb kar rahe haiN,

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=77403

Aaj tak hum ne jitne alfaaz padh'e ya seekhe haiN (underlined),
un sab alfaazoN se mil kar yeh aik 'koshish' ki hai:-

fusooN-e-ishQ ne jab deewanaa banaya!
zeest ko ik bewafaa ne tamashaa banaya..

fusooN : magic

haal kia biyaaN ho, hum jese be-haal ka….!
rasan-e-daar khud unhoN ne apnaa banaya

rasan-e-daar : phansi ki rassi

kabhi ho jaati hai niyyat kharab, beech bazaar!
haan! bosa-e-rukhsar ne humaiN ruswaa banaya

bosa : kiss

phir chaaye khalwatoN ke baadal chaar soo!
us sung ne jab bar-mala muqadammaa banaya

khawatoN : solitude
sung : stone
bar-mala : manifestly
muqadammaa : case

zindaaN meiN zikr-e-yaar ke siwa kuch na kiya!
ussi mah-e-jabeen ke charche, jis ne paglaa banaya

ZindaaN : Prison

Hassan mere bhaai.... kyaa kaamaal kar diyaa mere yaar.... bas waah hi waahhhh... kyaa kahne bahot aalaa bahot hi khoobsurat....

main aapki is khoobsurat koshish ke liye aapko dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad denaa chahta hoon... aapne jo misaal pesh ki hai is kalaam ko likh kar wo kaabile tareef hai..... bahot khoob mere bhai.... Allah tumhe aur nawaaze ... khush raho aabaad raho...

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waaah.... laajawaab, bahot khub.. daad hi daad aapko, Hassanbhai
Aadil bhai,

Teh-e-dil se mashkoor hooN aap ki inayat k liye....

Younhi milte rahiye ga,

DuaooN k saath,,

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kya baat hai hassan jee......bahut hee khoovsurat ehsaas.....reps.added
Arvind jii,

Pasandeedgi ke liye behad manooN hooN..

Milte rahiye ga,

DuaooN ke saath,,

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Hassan bhaii

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excellent composition Hassan
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Bas itna khahooN ga.. stay like this!

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IshQ jii,,


Khaak alfaaz aap ko pasand aaye,,
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Milte rahiye ga,

DuaooN ke saath,

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Zarraa saheb,

Aap ki daad aur pazeeraayi se meri koshish takmeel ko pohnch gayii!

Milte rahiye ga,,

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6th August 2014, 12:05 PM
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Hassan mere bhaai.... kyaa kaamaal kar diyaa mere yaar.... bas waah hi waahhhh... kyaa kahne bahot aalaa bahot hi khoobsurat....

main aapki is khoobsurat koshish ke liye aapko dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad denaa chahta hoon... aapne jo misaal pesh ki hai is kalaam ko likh kar wo kaabile tareef hai..... bahot khoob mere bhai.... Allah tumhe aur nawaaze ... khush raho aabaad raho...

Shaad...
Shaad Bhai,,

Pazeraayi aur duaooN ke liye manooN-o-mashkoor hooN!

Milte rahiye ga,

DuaooN ke saath,

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Hassan bhaii

namaste


alfaaz aur andaaz donon mujhe behad pasand aayen
dil se daad

aapka

Dhaval
Dhaval bhai!

Adna si koshish ki hausla afzaai k liye manooN hooN!

Milte rahiye ga,

DuaooN ke saath,

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Smile 7th August 2014, 01:16 AM
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bohat khub hassan ji bohat khub





LOVEU SAINI
Loveu jii!

Be-had shukriyaaH pazeraayi ke liye!

Milte rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,

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Adaab Hazreen-e-mehfil-e-dard,
Aaj kal aik silsila chal raha hai FusooN-e-alfaaz....
Jis ki sarbarahi hamare janab Zarraa saheb kar rahe haiN,

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=77403

Aaj tak hum ne jitne alfaaz padh'e ya seekhe haiN (underlined),
un sab alfaazoN se mil kar yeh aik 'koshish' ki hai:-

fusooN-e-ishQ ne jab deewanaa banaya!
zeest ko ik bewafaa ne tamashaa banaya..

fusooN : magic

haal kia biyaaN ho, hum jese be-haal ka….!
rasan-e-daar khud unhoN ne apnaa banaya

rasan-e-daar : phansi ki rassi

kabhi ho jaati hai niyyat kharab, beech bazaar!
haan! bosa-e-rukhsar ne humaiN ruswaa banaya

bosa : kiss

phir chaaye khalwatoN ke baadal chaar soo!
us sung ne jab bar-mala muqadammaa banaya

khawatoN : solitude
sung : stone
bar-mala : manifestly
muqadammaa : case

zindaaN meiN zikr-e-yaar ke siwa kuch na kiya!
ussi mah-e-jabeen ke charche, jis ne paglaa banaya

ZindaaN : Prison

HSN bhai, wahhh kya baat hai....alfaazoN ko bahut acchi tarah piroya hai aapne...bahut kamaal.



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HSN bhai, wahhh kya baat hai....alfaazoN ko bahut acchi tarah piroya hai aapne...bahut kamaal.
Sunita baaji,

Adna sii koshish ko had darja pazeeraayi dene ke liye behad manoon hooN!

Apna khayaal rakhiye ga,

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