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Aankhon Aankhon Mein -
30th January 2006, 05:53 PM
HIIII FRIENDS ,,,
Jo baaten aankhon aankhon mein hoti hain,,,,
Unhe koun kaise rok lega..........
Aankhon ki baaten aankhen hi samjhen,,,,,,,
Milne se koun rok lega........
kyon ki "UNHONE" ki thi ye baaten pehle,,,,,
Ab "ZAMANAA" bankar hame kyon rok legaa.....
samet sakte ho tum “JEET” apni mutthi main ...
hamain to pehle hee aadat hai "HAAR" jaane ki….
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Re: Aankhon Aankhon Mein -
16th February 2006, 07:11 PM
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Originally posted by khoonigazzal
HIIII FRIENDS ,,,
Jo baaten aankhon aankhon mein hoti hain,,,,
Unhe koun kaise rok lega..........
Aankhon ki baaten aankhen hi samjhen,,,,,,,
Milne se koun rok lega........
kyon ki "UNHONE" ki thi ye baaten pehle,,,,,
Ab "ZAMANAA" bankar hame kyon rok legaa.....
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wow great,,,
kyaa kehna hai aapka
yu hi lage raho
LOUT JATI HAI DUNIYA GAM HAMARA DEKHKAR,,,,,,,,,
JAISE LOUT JATI HAIN LAHREN KINARA DEKHKAR....
TUM KANDHA NA DENA MERE JANAZE KO..........................
KAHIN FIR ZINDA NA HO JAU TERA SAHARA DEKHKAR.....
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Re: Re: Aankhon Aankhon Mein -
27th February 2006, 08:30 PM
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Originally posted by harjeet singh
wow great,,,
kyaa kehna hai aapka
yu hi lage raho
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thanx
samet sakte ho tum “JEET” apni mutthi main ...
hamain to pehle hee aadat hai "HAAR" jaane ki….
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27th February 2006, 08:36 PM
wonderful man........................by the way ways ur name
meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi
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27th February 2006, 08:48 PM
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Originally posted by mehul jain
wonderful man........................by the way ways ur name
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thanx for your kind inspiration.......
i also like your gazals and always tries to read but now a days i am slightly busy
fir milenge..........
Tum kaha door tum ho pass mere
Tum ho dard ki khlish mai
Mere ehsas ki tapish mai
Nahi tanha mai ek pal,Tum ho saath mere
Mausam ke badlate roop mai
Barish ki har ek bund mai
Dhup mai chaya banker
Tanhaee mai saya banker ,tum ho saath mere
samet sakte ho tum “JEET” apni mutthi main ...
hamain to pehle hee aadat hai "HAAR" jaane ki….
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28th February 2006, 07:44 AM
hmm jeet ji aapko meri gazal ki e line itni achhi lagi hume pata nahi tha
Tum kaha door tum ho pass mere
Tum ho dard ki khlish mai
Mere ehsas ki tapish mai
Nahi tanha mai ek pal,Tum ho saath mere
Mausam ke badlate roop mai
Barish ki har ek bund mai
Dhup mai chaya banker
Tanhaee mai saya banker ,tum ho saath mere
aapke letter mai ise padh kar achha laga
shrdh
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1st March 2006, 03:48 PM
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Originally posted by shrdh
hmm jeet ji aapko meri gazal ki e line itni achhi lagi hume pata nahi tha
Tum kaha door tum ho pass mere
Tum ho dard ki khlish mai
Mere ehsas ki tapish mai
Nahi tanha mai ek pal,Tum ho saath mere
Mausam ke badlate roop mai
Barish ki har ek bund mai
Dhup mai chaya banker
Tanhaee mai saya banker ,tum ho saath mere
aapke letter mai ise padh kar achha laga
shrdh
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thanx janaab har achhi rachna dilon per raaz karti hai woh chahe kisi ki bhi likhi ho
or khushkismati se aapki hai woh.........aise hi hame bhi yaad karte rahiyega aap
bye
LOUT JATI HAI DUNIYA GAM HAMARA DEKHKAR,,,,,,,,,
JAISE LOUT JATI HAIN LAHREN KINARA DEKHKAR....
TUM KANDHA NA DENA MERE JANAZE KO..........................
KAHIN FIR ZINDA NA HO JAU TERA SAHARA DEKHKAR.....
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