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yaadoN ka kazana - 21st April 2006, 06:51 AM
Jab jab tum hum mile sama.N aashikana bana
Zuba.N chup rahi ,dil ki baato.N mai fasana bana

Dhrakane.N thirki ,umango ki sahnaaee par
Dulhan bani aarzoo ,muhhbat ka shamiyana bana

Pyaas ne li angdhayi ,aanko.N mai aas jagi
Dabi khwahish hoto.N par aayi, kaisa bahana bana

Badal ne liye rang sunhare,chand muskaraya
Kaliyan khili gulmohar ki ,kushgawar jamana bana

Gumo ko bhool SHRDDHA, ji uthi ek baar fir
Jab chle gaye to, inhi yaado.n ka kazana bana

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khoobsoorat hai - 21st April 2006, 07:07 AM
har baar kee tarah ye ghazal bhee bahut khoobsoorta banee hai likhtee rahana yoon hee

ye bahut sundar hai

Gumo ko bhool SHRDDHA, ji uthi ek baar fir
Jab chle gaye to, inhi yaado.n ka kazana bana

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kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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21st April 2006, 03:47 PM
Apne kafi achha likha he .padh kar achha laga.likhte rahiye

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Re: yaadoN ka kazana - 21st April 2006, 04:59 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by shrdh
[B]Jab jab tum hum mile sama.N aashikana bana
Zuba.N chup rahi ,dil ki baato.N mai fasana bana

Dhrakane.N thirki ,umango ki sahnaaee par
Dulhan bani aarzoo ,muhhbat ka shamiyana bana

Pyaas ne li angdhayi ,aanko.N mai aas jagi
Dabi khwahish hoto.N par aayi, kaisa bahana bana

Badal ne liye rang sunhare,chand muskaraya
Kaliyan khili gulmohar ki ,kushgawar jamana bana

Gumo ko bhool SHRDDHA, ji uthi ek baar fir
Jab chle gaye to, inhi yaado.n ka kazana bana

shrdh

janaab aap ki yaadon ka khazana bhi bahut hi healthy hai hamesha khush raha kijiye aise hi chahe yaado ko hi remind kar liya karo................
bahut achha lagaa aaj aapko iss mood mein dekhkar........
aise hi likhte rahe kuchh different moods mein bhi...........
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zindagi nahi hai tumse pyaari,,,,,,,,
tumhare liye hai jaan hamari..........
aankhon mein hamaari aansoo hain to kyaa,,
jaan se pyaari hai muskaan tumhaari........
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LOUT JATI HAI DUNIYA GAM HAMARA DEKHKAR,,,,,,,,,
JAISE LOUT JATI HAIN LAHREN KINARA DEKHKAR....
TUM KANDHA NA DENA MERE JANAZE KO..........................
KAHIN FIR ZINDA NA HO JAU TERA SAHARA DEKHKAR.....
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21st April 2006, 06:54 PM
bahut hi ucha varg ki kavita likhi hai aapne itni sundar likhte rehna aur hume sunana bhi

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22nd April 2006, 05:50 PM
Shraddha ji,

yaar ab to ji add arna hi padhega... kya class likhne lagi ho.. Expresive you always were....but now you've started decorating it beautifully too... I loved it...keep writing like this.. TC

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Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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Re: yaadoN ka kazana - 23rd April 2006, 03:00 PM
Originally posted by shrdh
Jab jab tum hum mile sama.N aashikana bana
Zuba.N chup rahi ,dil ki baato.N mai fasana bana

Dhrakane.N thirki ,umango ki sahnaaee par
Dulhan bani aarzoo ,muhhbat ka shamiyana bana

Pyaas ne li angdhayi ,aanko.N mai aas jagi
Dabi khwahish hoto.N par aayi, kaisa bahana bana

Badal ne liye rang sunhare,chand muskaraya
Kaliyan khili gulmohar ki ,kushgawar jamana bana

Gumo ko bhool SHRDDHA, ji uthi ek baar fir
Jab chle gaye to, inhi yaado.n ka kazana bana

shrdh

Waah...! Bahout khoub, Shrdh !

Shisha e dil se jo tapke, yaadon ka ek paimaana bana
Ankhon se peete peete, Mushkil dekh mastaana bana

Eisse hi likhte rahiye...!


Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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23rd April 2006, 07:54 PM
shradhaji,
Dhrakane.N thirki ,umango ki sahnaaee par
Dulhan bani aarzoo ,muhhbat ka shamiyana bana

Gumo ko bhool SHRDDHA, ji uthi ek baar fir
Jab chle gaye to, inhi yaado.n ka kazana bana

Very well written...


marane kii duaaye.n kyuu.N maa.Nguu.N jiine kii tamaannaa kaun kare
ye duniyaa ho yaa vo duniyaa ab Khvaahish-e-duniyaa kaun kare


jo aag lagaaii thii tum ne us ko to bujhaayaa ashko.n ne
jo ashko.n ke bha.Dakaaii hai us aag ko Tha.nDaa kaun kare


jab kashtii saabit-o-saalib thii, saahil kii tamannaa kisako thii
ab aisii shikastaa kashtii me.n saahil kii tamannaa kaun kare


duniyaa ne hame.n chho.Daa ai dil, ham chho.D na de kyo.n duniyaa ko
duniyaa ko samajh kar baiThe hai.n ab duniyaa duniyaa kaun kare



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25th April 2006, 10:56 AM
shrdha dost

is ghazel se aap ki zehni shugaftgi aur khushi ke ehsaas ka pata chalta hai.
yehi shayer ka kamal hota hai ke apni kaifiyet parhne wale per bhi taari ker de.
bohat khoobsurat ehsaas aur lateef se jazbaat per mabni yeh ghazel aap ki tehreeron mein ek achcha izaafa hai.
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27th April 2006, 07:37 PM
Badal ne liye rang sunhare,chand muskaraya
Kaliyan khili gulmohar ki ,kushgawar jamana bana

Gumo ko bhool SHRDDHA, ji uthi ek baar fir
Jab chle gaye to, inhi yaado.n ka kazana bana

Shradha

Beautiful creation......Waah.......Yadon ka Khazana itna khoobsurat bhi ho sakta hay tumhari Rachna padh mehsuus hua......Beautiful......keep up the good work...

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Re: khoobsoorat hai - 5th May 2006, 10:13 PM
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har baar kee tarah ye ghazal bhee bahut khoobsoorta banee hai likhtee rahana yoon hee

ye bahut sundar hai

Gumo ko bhool SHRDDHA, ji uthi ek baar fir
Jab chle gaye to, inhi yaado.n ka kazana bana

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