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20th June 2013, 01:00 PM
Naazreen o Mehfil ko shaad ka aadaab... bahot zamaane ke baad ek choti si koshish ke saath khidmat me pesh huaa hoon.... ummeed karta hoon koshish ko pasand kijiyegaa aap sab.....
Miltee haiN ChaahteN kahaaN khaana-kharaab meiN,
Bujhte haiN Kayee Shams yahaaN Roz Aab meiN.
Khana- kharaab= wretcehd, or destroyed (person)
Shams= Sun
Aab= Water
Pehle to utartee bhi thii Laali janaab meiN,
Dikhti nahi surkhi abhi Range -Shabaab meiN.
Surkhi- Redness
Shabaab- Glory/ jawaani
Chaahat meiN bahaaroN ki jo bhi Mahv-e-khwaab haiN,
KaanTon meiN pal rahe hain wo Zauqe Gulaab meiN.
Mahv-e-khwaab= Busy in dreaming
Jo ishq ki talaash meiN nikle they GharoN se,
Chaukhat pe Maikade ki haiN Doobe sharaab meiN.
Maikadah= Bar , Wo jagah jahaan sharaab pilaayi jati hai..
Kya tarqe- ta'Alluq hi Faislaa hai tumhaaraa,
yooN bhi to sukooN aa raha tha Izteraab meiN.
Tare Ta'Alluq= Breaking all relations
Sukoon= Relax, raahat
Izteraab= uneasiness, bechaini, ghabrahat.
Poocha kareN hain logg jab bhi Ishq ki baateN,
Aye Shaad tum kaho, ke kaheN kyaa jawaab meiN.
Meanings are Provided for beginners and Urdu learners......
Shaad....
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21st June 2013, 10:57 PM
PURE GOLD .... 24 carrat
Shaad ... Mere dost ....bas pehli baat jo zehen mein aayee wo likh di hai oopar ..., kyunki sach kahoon to daad dene ke liye alfaaz saath naheen de rahe .... Jo main mehsoos kar raha hooN shaayad usee ko speechless hona kehte hain .... this is one of the best contemporary shayaris that I have come across !
Meri sabhi daad aur mubaarakbaad to hain hi tumhaare liye ....sabhi duaein bhi tumhein deta hooN ki tum wo makaam haasil karo ki jiski khwaabon mein bhi ummeed naheen ki jaatee hain kyunki tum deserve karte ho....
Khush raho ... Aabaad raho .... Zarraa
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22nd June 2013, 10:35 AM
Shaad bhaii:
namaste!
huzoor umdaah Ghazal aur umdaah soch !! mazaa aa gayaa .. dil se daad hi daad... yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan ko badhaate rahiye aage bhee
KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
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22nd June 2013, 02:04 PM
shoaib bahi.................bahut sundar kalaam laga aapka................ dheron daad
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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PURE GOLD .... 24 carrat
Shaad ... Mere dost ....bas pehli baat jo zehen mein aayee wo likh di hai oopar ..., kyunki sach kahoon to daad dene ke liye alfaaz saath naheen de rahe .... Jo main mehsoos kar raha hooN shaayad usee ko speechless hona kehte hain .... this is one of the best contemporary shayaris that I have come across !
Meri sabhi daad aur mubaarakbaad to hain hi tumhaare liye ....sabhi duaein bhi tumhein deta hooN ki tum wo makaam haasil karo ki jiski khwaabon mein bhi ummeed naheen ki jaatee hain kyunki tum deserve karte ho....
Khush raho ... Aabaad raho .... Zarraa
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aapki beintehan muhaabbbat aur khuloos se nachez behad mashkoor o mamnoon hai.... aapke pyaar, daad aur duaaaon ka itnaa aasraa hai kke aana jaana banaa hua hai..... kalam chaltii bhi hai to yaqeenan isme kahin na kahin aaap dostoN ka hi haath hai.l.... guzaarish hai kke aage bhi saath banaae rakhiyegaa.... apna khayaal rakkhen... khush raheN.....
Shaad.....
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25th June 2013, 01:17 PM
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Shaad bhaii:
namaste!
huzoor umdaah Ghazal aur umdaah soch !! mazaa aa gayaa .. dil se daad hi daad... yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan ko badhaate rahiye aage bhee
KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
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aapki aamad aur zarranawaazi ke liye tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon Dhaval bhai....
aap doston ka saath aur pyaar banaa rahe bas isi kaamna ke saath aapka abhinandan karta hoon.... apna khyaal rakhiye.. khush rahiye
Shaad......
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25th June 2013, 01:18 PM
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shoaib bahi.................bahut sundar kalaam laga aapka................ dheron daad
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bahot bahot shukriyaa aapka Aru bhai....................... aate raheN..
Khush rahiye
Shaad.....
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25th June 2013, 05:19 PM
bhot acha likhte hai sameer ji aap
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bhot acha likhte hai sameer ji aap
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Main aapka behad shukrguzaar hoon jo aapko aisaa lagta hai Nisha jii.....
aur jo kuch bhi thoda bahot seekh paya hoon wo sab aap doston ki mehrbaani hai....
aati rahiyega.. hausalaa afzaai kartii rahiyegaa....
Shukriyaa.......
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27th June 2013, 11:54 AM
Miltee haiN ChaahteN kahaaN khaana-kharaab meiN,
Bujhte haiN Kayee Shams yahaaN Roz Aab meiN.
Khana- kharaab= wretcehd, or destroyed (person)
Shams= Sun
Aab= Water
Pehle to utartee bhi thii Laali janaab meiN,
Dikhti nahi surkhi abhi Range -Shabaab meiN.
Surkhi- Redness
Shabaab- Glory/ jawaani
Chaahat meiN bahaaroN ki jo bhi Mahv-e-khwaab haiN,
KaanTon meiN pal rahe hain wo Zauqe Gulaab meiN.
Mahv-e-khwaab= Busy in dreaming
Jo ishq ki talaash meiN nikle they GharoN se,
Chaukhat pe Maikade ki haiN Doobe sharaab meiN.
Maikadah= Bar , Wo jagah jahaan sharaab pilaayi jati hai..
Kya tarqe- ta'Alluq hi Faislaa hai tumhaaraa,
yooN bhi to sukooN aa raha tha Izteraab meiN.
Tare Ta'Alluq= Breaking all relations
Sukoon= Relax, raahat
Izteraab= uneasiness, bechaini, ghabrahat.
Poocha kareN hain logg jab bhi Ishq ki baateN,
Aye Shaad tum kaho, ke kaheN kyaa jawaab meiN.
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7th July 2013, 06:18 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Naazreen o Mehfil ko shaad ka aadaab... bahot zamaane ke baad ek choti si koshish ke saath khidmat me pesh huaa hoon.... ummeed karta hoon koshish ko pasand kijiyegaa aap sab.....
Miltee haiN ChaahteN kahaaN khaana-kharaab meiN,
Bujhte haiN Kayee Shams yahaaN Roz Aab meiN.
Khana- kharaab= wretcehd, or destroyed (person)
Shams= Sun
Aab= Water
Pehle to utartee bhi thii Laali janaab meiN,
Dikhti nahi surkhi abhi Range -Shabaab meiN.
Surkhi- Redness
Shabaab- Glory/ jawaani
Chaahat meiN bahaaroN ki jo bhi Mahv-e-khwaab haiN,
KaanTon meiN pal rahe hain wo Zauqe Gulaab meiN.
Mahv-e-khwaab= Busy in dreaming
Jo ishq ki talaash meiN nikle they GharoN se,
Chaukhat pe Maikade ki haiN Doobe sharaab meiN.
Maikadah= Bar , Wo jagah jahaan sharaab pilaayi jati hai..
Kya tarqe- ta'Alluq hi Faislaa hai tumhaaraa,
yooN bhi to sukooN aa raha tha Izteraab meiN.
Tare Ta'Alluq= Breaking all relations
Sukoon= Relax, raahat
Izteraab= uneasiness, bechaini, ghabrahat.
Poocha kareN hain logg jab bhi Ishq ki baateN,
Aye Shaad tum kaho, ke kaheN kyaa jawaab meiN.
Meanings are Provided for beginners and Urdu learners......
Shaad....
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dil o dard zindagi ke aap
khub baya kiye hai ....
~@ :Shaad shaheb ....
Subhanallah ,,,,
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8th July 2013, 12:43 AM
Sameer miyaaN,
aadaab aur sat sri akaal
bhai pehle ek baat wajeeh kar dooN ke in dinoN, ,mera khuda gawaah hai ke mere paas zahar khaane ka waqt bhi nahiiN hai, Gham-e-rozgaar meiN is qadar uljhaa hua hooN ke puuchhiye mat
bawajood iske aaj idhar aana hua aur aapki yeh beshqeemati Ghazal padhne ka sawaab haasil hua
ab chooNke waqt ki khaasi kami rehti hai aur yeh bhi qataii mumkin tha ke maiN Ghazal padhne ke baad yeh soch kar chal paDta ke "chalo miyaaN fursta meiN jawaab likhe deNge"
lekin.....adab-e-arooz ka sewadaar hone ke naate yeh gaNwaara na hua ke aapko "dil ki gehraaiiyoN" se daad diye bina chala jaata aur duuje aapki qalam ne majboor kar diya ke aapko aapke haq se nawaaza jaaye
to miyaaN daad to "Tikaa" hi lijiye aur saamne hote ho gale lag ke milta
Kya Ghazal ataa ki hai mashah-allah!
mashq jaari rakhiye, meherbaani hogi
rab raakha
maikash
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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9th July 2013, 03:29 PM
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dil o dard zindagi ke aap
khub baya kiye hai ....
~@ :Shaad shaheb ....
Subhanallah ,,,,
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Behad shukrguzaar hoon aapkajo aap aisaa samjahte hain..... Accha laga ye jaankar ke ye sada si koshish aapko pasand aayii... aate raheN...
Shaad.....
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9th July 2013, 03:35 PM
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Sameer miyaaN,
aadaab aur sat sri akaal
bhai pehle ek baat wajeeh kar dooN ke in dinoN, ,mera khuda gawaah hai ke mere paas zahar khaane ka waqt bhi nahiiN hai, Gham-e-rozgaar meiN is qadar uljhaa hua hooN ke puuchhiye mat
bawajood iske aaj idhar aana hua aur aapki yeh beshqeemati Ghazal padhne ka sawaab haasil hua
ab chooNke waqt ki khaasi kami rehti hai aur yeh bhi qataii mumkin tha ke maiN Ghazal padhne ke baad yeh soch kar chal paDta ke "chalo miyaaN fursta meiN jawaab likhe deNge"
lekin.....adab-e-arooz ka sewadaar hone ke naate yeh gaNwaara na hua ke aapko "dil ki gehraaiiyoN" se daad diye bina chala jaata aur duuje aapki qalam ne majboor kar diya ke aapko aapke haq se nawaaza jaaye
to miyaaN daad to "Tikaa" hi lijiye aur saamne hote ho gale lag ke milta
Kya Ghazal ataa ki hai mashah-allah!
mashq jaari rakhiye, meherbaani hogi
rab raakha
maikash
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Aadaab huzoor Aadaab.....
kahaan tashreef rakhte hain aajkal..... Allah miyaaN, maikash bhai aapke deedaar ko aankheN taras gaiN theeN... wo to accha hua aapne khud hi waajeh kar diyaa warna hum shiqaayatoN ka chittha khol kar baith jaate... Lol
Well bahot accha lagaa aapki daad paakar.. sar aankhOn pe qubool hai ye muhabbat aapki bade bhai.....
Ummeed karta hoon aage bhi aap mehfil me tashreef laate rahenge.... khush rahiye...
Shaad......
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14th July 2013, 03:48 PM
wah zabardast
zindabaad
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19th July 2013, 02:05 AM
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Aadaab huzoor Aadaab.....
kahaan tashreef rakhte hain aajkal..... Allah miyaaN, maikash bhai aapke deedaar ko aankheN taras gaiN theeN... wo to accha hua aapne khud hi waajeh kar diyaa warna hum shiqaayatoN ka chittha khol kar baith jaate... Lol
Well bahot accha lagaa aapki daad paakar.. sar aankhOn pe qubool hai ye muhabbat aapki bade bhai.....
Ummeed karta hoon aage bhi aap mehfil me tashreef laate rahenge.... khush rahiye...
Shaad......
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amaa yaar puucho mat, ek project meiN aTkaa hua hooN, jaise hi khatm hota hai maiN baaqaayda haazir rahooNga, Ramadan ka mubarak maah chal raha hai aapse guzaarish hai ke duaaoN meiN khaaksaar ko do-ek pal ke liye yaad rakhiye, shayad khuda-qareem meherbaan ho jaaye aur maiN in museebatoN se nijaat paa sakooN
agli baar namaaz ataa kareiN to is khat ko zahan meiN rakhiyega
apna phone number mere facebook par pm kar dijiye, aapke shahar meiN shayad aana ho agle kuch haftoN meiN, aapse zaroor milna chahooNga
rab raakha
maikash
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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amaa yaar puucho mat, ek project meiN aTkaa hua hooN, jaise hi khatm hota hai maiN baaqaayda haazir rahooNga, Ramadan ka mubarak maah chal raha hai aapse guzaarish hai ke duaaoN meiN khaaksaar ko do-ek pal ke liye yaad rakhiye, shayad khuda-qareem meherbaan ho jaaye aur maiN in museebatoN se nijaat paa sakooN
agli baar namaaz ataa kareiN to is khat ko zahan meiN rakhiyega
apna phone number mere facebook par pm kar dijiye, aapke shahar meiN shayad aana ho agle kuch haftoN meiN, aapse zaroor milna chahooNga
rab raakha
maikash
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Insha Allaah................ Zaroor mere bhai.
apna khayal rakhiye..... khush rahiye
Shaad....
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wah zabardast
zindabaad
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aapkii behad inaayat huii mujh haqeer par Neetu ji....
tashreef laate rahiyega... shukriyaa.
Shaad....
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