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Love Tasveer - 5th August 2003, 01:46 PM
CHEHREPE ASHQOO KI LAKEER SI BAN GAYI
JO NA CHAAHA THA VO TAKDEER SI BAN GAYI
HUMNE TO CHALAAI THI RET PE UNGLI
GAUR SE DEKHA TO UNKI TASVEER SI BAN GAYI

KON KEHTA HAI KI VO DOOR HAI MUJHSE
HAR PAL VO MERI PALKO MEIN REHTI HAI
HAR SAANS MEIN USSI KI KHUSHBOO HAI YAARO
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hi - 5th August 2003, 01:49 PM
Tassavur mein mere aakar,aankho se aansoo bhar jaate ho tum
Khwaaboo mein mere aa kar mujhko bohat staate ho tum
Kehte hain log ki shraab pee kar,bhulla sakte ho har kissi ko
Magar jab bhi pee lete hain hum,Aur bhi yaad aate ho tum
   
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5th August 2003, 07:12 PM
Dear Mohit,
I hope you are well. Mujhe bhi yehi bolna tha lekin aapne pehle hi boldee?
Yeh Sharab ki baate.
Waise aapse shayed nehi, lekin keya fark parta hein, kisiko bhi boldu toh.
Waise kaun hein woh? Hume bhi toh batao!
Hum kuch karna sake toh duwa toh zaroor karenge.
Aur karte bhi hein. Ab Khuda ko jeise manjur, humara kaam toh hum karke jate hein.
Take care. God bless.
Shimul.

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Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
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6th August 2003, 07:00 AM
Ahan kya baat hai .Mr. aj kal bahut acha likhne lage ho
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hi - 6th August 2003, 07:55 PM
hi mohit ji
good work again
i love your shayri
can you send me some?
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hi - 7th August 2003, 09:22 AM
Hi Shimul ji
kya bolna tha aapko bhi
aur kya maine pehle he bol diya?
aur vaise bhi aapko usse kya lena
agar dua karni he hai to yaar mere pass
hone ki dua karo coz.,mere liye sabse important
pass hona hai.
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7th August 2003, 09:32 AM
Dear Mohit, Keya hogaya aapko? Keisi baate karte ho?
Agar paas hote aap toh aap ko mein aapka asal chehra dekha deti. Aap jo dekha te ho woh aap ho nehi.
Anyway, I have read all of your shyri's/
And what I thought about all I will tell you when we talk next time.
Take care. God bless.
Shimul

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7th August 2003, 09:37 AM
nahin asi koi baat nahin hai.tab bhi acha likhte the ap aur ab bhi.bas ye mera naya style hai. ankhen khol kar dekho vada post par reply kar chuki hoon aur do nayi post bhi likh chuki hoon.first dukhan nu sadda humsafar bana dita .pado then saath post pado
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hi - 7th August 2003, 09:38 AM
Oye hello kya main dikhta hu aur kya main nahi hu
aur aapne mere ko kab aur kha dekh liya
and vaise bhi maine aapse baat nahi karni
aapko bola tha maine!!!
main aapse bohat nraaz hu and rahunga
   
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Sad Khawaab - 7th August 2003, 11:25 AM
Kuch kahoongi to woh gustaakhi hogi.. par yeh gustaaki kare bina raha bhi nahi jayega..

"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko,
de gaye aansoon in mein tum..

Kaise chalkaa doon yeh aansoo,
in mein bhi to rehte ho tum..


Aapne baut hi acha likha!


"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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7th August 2003, 04:16 PM
Dear Mohit, Keya hua hein? Mujhe pata hein lekin meine bataya tha na? Achhe bache jid nehi kiya karte hein.
Aur aap toh ek achhe bache ho ish liye thikh ho jao toh achha rahega. Come & talk to me soon.
Ok? Take care. God bless.
Shimul.

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