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19th September 2003, 04:54 PM
din tere khayalon mein beet jata hai
raat tere khawabon mein gujar jati hai tasveer teri niharte hai jab ham... har shay jahan ki thehar jati hai wo bholi nigahen wo maasoom surat dil mein bas gayi hai wo moorat dikhti hai wo hi chavi har kahin jis aur bhi nazar jati hai yeh kis ne aanchal failaya hai meri zindagi ko mehkaya hai raatein jaag uthti hai meri wo julfein jab bikhar jati hai kitna pyara ehsaas hai alfazon mein mithas hai gazal ban uthti hai koi wo tasveer jab ubhar aati hai chahat ke phool khile hai raahon mein chirag jale hai apna kehte hai jab wo hamen uzdi zindagi sawar jati hai. -Manoj Kureel karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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20th September 2003, 05:36 AM
Dear Manoj Jee, Wah bohot khub likhha hein aapne.
Sapna toh nehi hein na? I really hope not. Really a nice one. Thanks. likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless. Shimul. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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20th September 2003, 01:21 PM
SHIMUL JI
BEHAD SHUKRGUZAR HAI HAM AAP KE IS PYARE REPLY KE LIYE....JI NAHIN ,,,YEH SAPNA NAHIN HAI...YEH HAI TO HAQEEQAT ,MAGAR DARTA HOON KAHIN SAPNE KI TARAH BIKHAR NA JAYE....AAP KI HAUSLAAFZAI KE LIYE SHUKRIYA -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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20th September 2003, 01:57 PM
Humesha ki tarah is baar bhi bahut accha likha hai. The words used are really beutiful. Keep it Up..
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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20th September 2003, 02:00 PM
Dear Manoj Jee, Sukriya. Waise yehi toh problem hein shayed.
Sapna hota toh kabhi na tootne ki daar hoti. Yeh haqikat wali baat hi toh problems dete hein. Sapne kabhi kabhi haqikat meh badal jate hein aur aisa na ho yehi duwa ke sath mein abhi chalti hu. Actually I have a really bad headache. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless. Shimul. Ha, aap kamiyab ho yeh bhi humari duwa rahega. Allah aapka Pyaar ko salamat rakhe, aur hamesha khush rakhe. Jo bhi Pyaar karne wale hein unsabke liye bhi yehi duwa hein. Ameen. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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Hi -
21st September 2003, 06:01 PM
Manoj ji bahaut acacha likha hai aapne, hum bahaut samaye baad aaye hain lekin ab aaye hot o dekha ki aap to mashoor shayer bante ja arah ehain. Hum to yaad hai naa aapko. Aur bataiye sab kaisa hai. Sorry hume apni ek friend ki shaadi mai LA jana para isiliye nahi likh paaye, lekin ab aaye hain to bahaut kuch likhenge, ok!!!
Take care. Luv Rimjhim Isn't that true??? ;-) |
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22nd September 2003, 12:12 PM
pulkit bhai
shukriya itne pyar bhare hausla afzai ke liye...likhte rahiye -manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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22nd September 2003, 12:18 PM
shimul ji
ham dil se aap ke aabhari hai,,,aap ne hamare liye dua ki aur itne apnepan se hamare jazbaton ko samjha,,bahot acha lagta hai jab koi pyar bhare do lafz kehta hai,,aur aap ne to hamare bhale ke liye dua mangi hai,,,aap bahot achi insaan hai,,,mein aap ka dil se aabhari hoon.. aap bhi apna khayal rakhiyega.. take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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Re: Hi -
22nd September 2003, 12:22 PM
RIMJHIM JI
aap ko bhala kaise bhool sakta hoon mein? mujhe achi tarah yaad hai is site par sabse pehle aap hi thi jo meri dost bani....aur aap ko padh kar hi meine likhna shuru kiya...magar aap achanak kahan gaayab ho gayi? aur ab aaj aap ko dekha to behad khushi hui.khair....umeed hai aap ka saath aage bhi bana rahega...likhti rahiye ..aur hausla afazai ke liye tahe dil se shukriya... take care -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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