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Door ka sitara - [poem is in image format] -
7th June 2010, 04:17 PM
Parents are divine beings. No one can love us and care for us as selflessly as mother and father do. Yet, we take them for granted while they are alive. Even get irritated. Once they are gone we realize how priceless they were for us. Nothing can ever take the place of parents. No one can love as purely as they did. Here is a very moving poem about a man who returns home long after the parents were dead and gone. How empty he finds the home that hardly feels like home.
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7th June 2010, 04:58 PM
jindgi ka ek sach aapne byan kiya hai or aapke ye ehsas mujhe bht hi gehre tak choo gaye hai jis sawal se aksar mai jujhati hoon us ke aage ek or prashan chinh lag gya hai.................kash bita waqt laut ke aata.............
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7th June 2010, 05:04 PM
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Originally Posted by mittal_pali
Parents are divine beings. No one can love us and care for us as selflessly as mother and father do. Yet, we take them for granted while they are alive. Even get irritated. Once they are gone we realize how priceless they were for us. Nothing can ever take the place of parents. No one can love as purely as they did. Here is a very moving poem about a man who returns home long after the parents were dead and gone. How empty he finds the home that hardly feels like home.
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Bahut khoob...........
Dil se daad qubool kijiye.
God Bless You.
Ritu
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
But,
Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
# Feel The Difference #
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7th June 2010, 05:36 PM
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jindgi ka ek sach aapne byan kiya hai or aapke ye ehsas mujhe bht hi gehre tak choo gaye hai jis sawal se aksar mai jujhati hoon us ke aage ek or prashan chinh lag gya hai.................kash bita waqt laut ke aata.............
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7th June 2010, 11:57 PM
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Bahut khoob...........
Dil se daad qubool kijiye.
God Bless You.
Ritu
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14th June 2010, 08:15 AM
Good one Mittal ji...........................................
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PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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14th June 2010, 03:03 PM
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Good one Mittal ji...........................................
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thanks for repling my posts. this encourages me posting.........
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14th June 2010, 03:21 PM
mittal sahab ko mera salaam,
waise bahut kam hi muktak kavitayeN mujhe pasan aa paati haiN, par yakeen maaniye aapne jis saadgi se rishtoN ke badalte maayenoN ko dikhaya hai vo kaabil-e-tareef hai,hum sab ye dekhte hain aur dekh ke chup se ho jaate haiN,bas umeed karta huN ki aap aage v aisi pehskasheN laate raheNge...!!
Aapka GHAYAL...!!
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14th June 2010, 03:44 PM
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Parents are divine beings. No one can love us and care for us as selflessly as mother and father do. Yet, we take them for granted while they are alive. Even get irritated. Once they are gone we realize how priceless they were for us. Nothing can ever take the place of parents. No one can love as purely as they did. Here is a very moving poem about a man who returns home long after the parents were dead and gone. How empty he finds the home that hardly feels like home.
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Pali ji,
Bahut khubsuruat andaaz me dard ko byaan kiya hai,,,,,,,, Ye sahi hai ki bita waqt laut ke nahi aata,,,, Waqt ke sath sath sab badal jaate hai,,,,,shayad jo hum aaj sochte hai,,,, wo kal na soche,,,,,,Aisi hi koshish ke sath aur likhte rahiye,,,,,,,, dil se daad qubool kijiyega.......!!!!!
KAVITA NEGI
Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!!
Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!!
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14th June 2010, 04:06 PM
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mittal sahab ko mera salaam,
waise bahut kam hi muktak kavitayeN mujhe pasan aa paati haiN, par yakeen maaniye aapne jis saadgi se rishtoN ke badalte maayenoN ko dikhaya hai vo kaabil-e-tareef hai,hum sab ye dekhte hain aur dekh ke chup se ho jaate haiN,bas u
sir ji aapka aashirwad chahiye...anyway thanks. posting another now.........
meed karta huN ki aap aage v aisi pehskasheN laate raheNge...!!
Aapka GHAYAL...!!
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aapka aashirbad chahiye, sirji..........anyway thanks for replying
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14th June 2010, 04:32 PM
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Pali ji,
Bahut khubsuruat andaaz me dard ko byaan kiya hai,,,,,,,, Ye sahi hai ki bita waqt laut ke nahi aata,,,, Waqt ke sath sath sab badal jaate hai,,,,,shayad jo hum aaj sochte hai,,,, wo kal na soche,,,,,,Aisi hi koshish ke sath aur likhte rahiye,,,,,,,, dil se daad qubool kijiyega.......!!!!!
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14th June 2010, 05:50 PM
Mittal Sahab ........aapki rachna saadhgi ke libaas me .....bahut umdaa peshkash ban gai....rishton ka sach dikhati is rachna ko tahe dil se daad hazir hai...qubuul farmaayen... khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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15th June 2010, 09:30 AM
Mittal jee:
namaskaar!
saadagee bharii aapki yeh rachanaa bahot hi achChhi rahii.n! yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n aap!
KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n
duaao.n ke saath ijaazat
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15th June 2010, 07:04 PM
pali ji bahut ache aur sache ehshash bayan kiya hai apne.
khush rahiyega hamesha
dauon ke sath
dinu
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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18th June 2010, 02:18 AM
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pali ji bahut ache aur sache ehshash bayan kiya hai apne.
khush rahiyega hamesha
dauon ke sath
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18th June 2010, 02:21 AM
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Mittal jee:
namaskaar!
saadagee bharii aapki yeh rachanaa bahot hi achChhi rahii.n! yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n aap!
KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n
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Mittal Sahab ........aapki rachna saadhgi ke libaas me .....bahut umdaa peshkash ban gai....rishton ka sach dikhati is rachna ko tahe dil se daad hazir hai...qubuul farmaayen... khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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19th June 2010, 05:26 PM
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Parents are divine beings. No one can love us and care for us as selflessly as mother and father do. Yet, we take them for granted while they are alive. Even get irritated. Once they are gone we realize how priceless they were for us. Nothing can ever take the place of parents. No one can love as purely as they did. Here is a very moving poem about a man who returns home long after the parents were dead and gone. How empty he finds the home that hardly feels like home.
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bahut hi acha likha
har sabd itani gahrai liye he
saral sabdo me sab risto ko bata diya
maa baap ke bina har ghar ghar nahi begana ho jata he
do jodi niswarth aankhe kho jaty he
tub har jagah ek jesi ho jaty he
daad hajir he
sada khush raho
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20th June 2010, 11:34 PM
aap sahi keh rahi hain shakuntala ji. aajkal koi doosre ka chehra bhi nahin dekhna cahataa. khaas kar rishtedaar.
par kiya kya ja sakta hai. duniya hai,chalta hai...
jawab ke liye sukriya.
khush rahein.
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