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mere sabhi dosto ko meraa pyaar bharaa namaskaar.....
 ....aaj mai apnii nayii rachnaa ke saath ayii huu asaa kartii hu ye aaplogo ke dil me thorii sii jagah banaalegii......hamesaa kii tarah aap mere kamiyoo ko zarur bataiyegaa..mughe aaplogoo ke reply kaa intzar rahegaa......tumne jo choraa haath merii shaashe hii tham gayii jaise ye jindagii chalte chalte thahr gayii.... dekhaa thaa jo sapnaa wo sapnaa bikhar gayaa tere jaane se har lamhaa thahr gayaa... bastii thii jin aakho me terii pyarii sii muurat aaj jamayaa hai aasuuoo ne wahaa Deraa.... abb iss jindagii ko kyo mai jiitii huu kyo har roz ek nayii maut martii huu.... tujhe kiyaa thaa wadaa bass isliye hastii hu warnaa abb to mai har shaash pe hii martii hu aapki dost ~saloni  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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4th June 2007, 12:22 PM
Nice words Saloni... Accha likha hai aapne... Zara shabdon ke uccharan ko saaf rakhiye, aapki kavita aur khoobsurat lagegi... Eg.. Saans in place of Shaansh....
TC... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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saloni jee namaskaaR: baRii achHii kosiSh kii hai aapne..aor aap mehnat bhii kartii hai apnii teHreer ko beHterin banaane ke liYe.. baRii khuShii huii..yuuNhii liKhte raheN aage bhii...khuSh raheN..apnaa khayaal raKheN..duaoN ke saath ijaazaT aapka dost Dhaval |
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sabse pahle aapko pahlii barr aapne thread pe dekh ke hume bahut khusi hui....aur hume padhne ke liye aur salah dene ke liye bahut bahut sukriya.. mai aapnii galtiyo ko sudharne kii purii koshish karugii... asa kartii hu aap age bhii humko padhke hume humarii galtiyo ke baare me batate rahege... ..ese hii sath dete rahiyegaa aapki dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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4th June 2007, 04:36 PM
dear saloni...accha likha hai, rajveer ji aur pulkit ne jo kaha hai un baato.n ko jarra gaur karna...aap aur behtar likh payengi...yu hi aati rahiye mahfil mei.n
kush rahiye aapki diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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4th June 2007, 06:31 PM
Dear Saloni..
Bahut hi khoobsoorti se ehsaason ko pesh kiya hai tumne.. Aise hi apni likhaavat me aur khoobsoorati laati raho.. Khush raho.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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4th June 2007, 07:55 PM
abb iss jindagii ko kyo mai jiitii huu kyo har roz ek nayii maut martii huu.... tujhe kiyaa thaa wadaa bass isliye hastii hu warnaa abb to mai har shaash pe hii martii hu saloni jee bohot achchhe khayaal ko aap ne bayaaN kiya hai.. yeh Sher to mujhe pasand aaya.... yuuN hii likhati raheN... aap kii Roman sudhar rahii hai.. lekin abhii safar kaa aaghaaz hii haii Take careMayank |
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pranaam, kaise hai aap?....aap ka sath ho to yakinan hum aur achaa likhege.. hum to chal diye in anjani raho pe tere sahare kii talash me..... bass aap ese hii mokaa nikal ke hume padhte rahiye...sach me aapke reply ko dekh ke hume bahut khusi hotii hai...... asaa kartii hu aapka saath banaa rahegaa aapki choti~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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mai kaha iss kabil hu wo to aapki nazar hii esii hai...jo aapko ye khubsurat lagaa...aur aapjase dost ho to mahnat to karnaa hii padtaa hai...aap bass ese hii sath dete rahiyegaa.. aapki dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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wah kya baat bhot acha likha ahi tumne dil ko chu ghya bhot acha lagga padhkar meri daab kabul karna aise hi likhte rehna khush rehna apna khiyal rakhna tumari dost preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya  kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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Aadab saloni ji, kesi hai aap? kya baat hain,MASHA ALLAH, APKI Nazm ka ek_ek ashaar bohot hi umda raha, is mukammal nazm ke liye,,dilse daad de rahe hain,,kabul kijiyega khush rahiye. apna khayal rakhiye. ALLAH HAFIZ apki dost HASSONI, ( HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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5th June 2007, 03:43 AM
Hi Saloni,
Bahot accha likha hai aapne, har sher se dard chhallakta hai, aapki dost Reshma, Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi, Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
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5th June 2007, 07:57 PM
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kesii hai aap? aapko aapne thread pe dakh ke hume bahut khusii hui... ...aur aapka sath rahe to ham aur achaa likhne kii kosis karte rahege... aur dii agr aap hume"aap" na kahe to hume bahut achaa lagegaa...aap se risto me durii aajatii hai...aur mai aapne dii se durr nahii jaanaa chaahtii... ...aapki choti sis~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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5th June 2007, 08:02 PM
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sabse pahle aapko bahut bahut sukriyaa jo aapne hume padhaa aur reply kiyaa...hume aapko yahaa dekh ke bahut khusii huii....umid kartii hu aapka ye pyarr bharaa sath hamesaa banaa rahegaa.....aur aap hume aage bhii padhtii rahegiii.... aapna khayal rakhiyegaa khush rahiyegaa.. aapki dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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abb kya kahu.......aap ko time mill gaya hume padhne ka ye jaan ke khusii ke saath bahut dher saara aschary bhii hua..hame lagaa hamesaa kii tarah iss barr bhii aap kahege...kii mai bussy thaa... aapko yahaa dekh ke mai bahut bahut khush hu..... ......aur aap ese hii meraa hoslaa badhaane ate rahege ..to aur bhi jyadaa khusii hogii... ......aapko pasand ayi to matlab maine kuch to sudhar kii hai....age bhii aur achaa likhne kii koshish karugii...agar aapkaa saath banaa rahe... aapki dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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aapko pahlii bar aapne thread pe bahut khusii hui...aapka bahut bahut sukriya hume padh ke reply karne kaa...uhii hume padhte rahiyega... aapkii dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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dear dard bhara kalaam pada dil mein dard ki lahar uthi ek...aur dil ka dard ankho tak pahunch gya g8t work pe daad sakhi with love शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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7th June 2007, 02:48 PM
aapke jazbaton ki main kadr kart hoon saloni..dekho ghazal ya kavita wahi hoti hai jo dil se nikle aur dil tak pahuche...mujhe aapke khayalaat behad ache lage hain...alfaaz to likhte likhte aa hi jaaenge ,..words ke adjustment me thoda sudhaar ki zarurat hai ..bas mehnat karo inshallah jald kaamyaab ho jaogi..khush raho..
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preet.. kaisii ho tum?? tumko apni post pe dekh kar hamesa ki tarah bahut khushi hui...ese hii sath dete rahna apna khayal rakhna.. tumhari dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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aapka mere post pe ana hii bahut badii bat hai...aur apne hume padh ke pasand kiya hume bahut khushi hui.. ese hii padhte rahiyegaa hame..aapki dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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11th September 2007, 02:46 PM
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reshma jii, aapko pahli bar apne post pe dekh ke bahut khushi huii...ese hii humara sath dete rahiyegaa.. aapki dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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kaisi hai aap? bass hum me kaha wo bat hai ,wo to aapki hii nazar hai jo aapko pasand aya... bass hume uhii padhte rahiyega.. apna khayal rakhiyegaa. aapki dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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aapko mere khayal pasand aaye hume bahut acha lagaa... bass aapka sath uhii rahe to yakinan aur achaa hum likhege.. aapki dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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16th September 2007, 09:05 PM
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Aapki dost Reshma, Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi, Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
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bahut bahut shukriya .....bass ese hii sath dete rahiyegaa...darasal mai thoda study me bussy hu..iss liye reply nahi kar paayi.. aapki dost, saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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