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Apna Ye Haal - 6th May 2003, 07:34 PM

Milne Ke pahle Kya Haal Hua Woh Kya Jaane
Baad Bichadne ke Kya Haal Hua Woh Kya Jaane
Milne Ke Waqt bus Woh Yahi Kahte Rahe
kaise mein Aayee Woh Kya Jaane


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It is better to lose your pride
with someone you love
rather than lose that someone
you love with your usless pride.

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6th May 2003, 08:13 PM

nice written keep up the good work!!!!


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Milne Ke pahle Kya Haal Hua Woh Kya Jaane
Baad Bichadne ke Kya Haal Hua Woh Kya Jaane


achcha likha hai...

likhte rahiye aur muskuraate rahiye...


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