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| View Poll Results: GHAZAL OF THE MONTH JUNE '09' IS | |||
| "AansooN se tar ho meri nazar tum ko is se kya" |
   
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19 | 76.00% |
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4 | 16.00% |
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8 | 32.00% |
| Multiple Choice Poll. Voters: 25. You may not vote on this poll | |||
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Ghazal Of The Month "june 09" |
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Ghazal Of The Month "june 09" -
1st July 2009, 03:05 AM
Har soo dikhaa_ii dete hai.n vo jalvagaar mujhe
kyaa-kyaa fareb detii hai merii nazar mujhe aayaa na raas naalaa-e-dil kaa asar mujhe ab tum mile to kuchh nahii.n apnii Khabar mujhe Daalaa hai beKhudii ne ajab raah par mujhe aa.Nkhei.n hai.n aur kuchh nahii.n aataa nazar mujhe karnaa hai aaj hazrat-e-naaseh se saamnaa mil jaaye do gha.Dii ko tumhaarii nazar mujhe yak_saa.N hai husn-o-ishq kii sarmastiyo.n kaa rang un kii Khabar unhei.n hai na apnii Khabar mujhe mai.n duur huu.N to ruuh-e-suKhan mujh se kis liye tum paas ho to kyo.n nahii.n aate nazar mujhe dil leke meraa dete ho daaG-e-"jigar" mujhe ye baat bhuulne kii nahii.n umr bhar mujhe- _Jigar Moradabadi DostoN.... jigar muraadi saheb ki yeh khoobsurat ghazal mujhe behad pasand aayi........isi liye maine socha ki kyuN na is baar aapko "nazar" alfaaz diya jaaye qafiye ke taur per.........aap sab ne bhi apni apni ghazalein behad khoobsurat likhi hain.........aap sab ko dil se daad......... Jaise ki aap sab jaante haiN...is mahine se gtm me kuch tabdiliyaN honay waali hain.... main naye rules ek baar phir bataa deti huun... .1) Names of the voters will be displayed. 2) Name of the shayar will not be displayed. 3) The shayar's name(takhallus) will be removed from the submitted Ghazal. 4)kis shayer ne kaunsi ghazal likhi hai, yeh baat result tak raaz hi rahegi.......is baare me sirf shayer aur moderators ko jaankari rahegi.... Aayiye aaj se ek naye andaaz me "Ghazal of the month" ka maza ljiiye................ PS:..Sabhi contestants se meri request hai ke kisi bhi surat me apni ghazal ke baare me kisi bhi member se koi zikr na karein,......... ALL THE BEST TO ALL THE CONTESTANTS......... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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AansooN se tar ho meri nazar tum ko is se kya |
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AansooN se tar ho meri nazar tum ko is se kya -
1st July 2009, 03:13 AM
AansooN se tar ho meri nazar tum ko is se kya yaa toote mere Dil pe Qehar tum ko is se kya tanhai mujhe das rahi hai saaNp ki tarah'N furqat se mujhe lagta hai dar tum ko is se kya roti hai shab ki be basi taqdeer se mil kar gham khuwaa'N hai mere dukh ki sehar* tum ko is se kya Qisse hamarey jab se huwey aam zubaa'N par tab sey udoowey jaa'N* hai shehar tum ko is se kya talwar ban ke yaadein barasti haiN tumhari gar kat bhi gaya mera jigar tum ko is se kya tum majma *e aghyaar* mai khushiyo k piyo jaam maiN dukh ka pee raha hu zehar tum ko is se kya tum zindagi ko dhoond rahe ho mere baghair maiN jeete ji hoo khaak basar tum ko is se kya sehar* -subha udoowey jaa'n - jani dushman majma --bheer rush , aghyaar -ghair ,anjane |
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Mujpe jaane ka tere, aisa asar hota hai |
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Mujpe jaane ka tere, aisa asar hota hai -
1st July 2009, 03:15 AM
Mujpe jaane ka tere, aisa asar hota hai rab hi jane ke dard ,kidhar kidhar hota hai aaj tak jo bi kaha,hota raha hai kharij jane kya cheez balaa, husne beher hota hai na kahu jab bi, mulakat nahi hoti hai aur keh du to ,bematlab hi zarar hota hai is kadar gehre, hue jaate hai, ristey apne kis ka, kis dil me, khuda jaane basar hota hai dekhte hi tujhe, har lafz laraz jata hai teri aankhon se kabhi, peena agar hota hai chandni dekh teri, sochta hai suraj bhi din ke dhalne me, ab kyun ,itna pahar hota hai aap bi suniye zara, meri dhadkanon ki sada bark jab girti hai, to kaisa kahar hota hai |
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Dil mein kisi ka basar mangle |
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Dil mein kisi ka basar mangle -
1st July 2009, 03:17 AM
Dil mein kisi ka basar mangle
Duaon mein aisa asar mangle Basti ho jaha sirf teri yaaden Kisi ke khayalon mein ghar mangle Na ho jaha koi bhi ajnaabi Apno ka aisa shaher mangle Tamaam roz saje ghazal-e-mehfil Zindagi se aisi umar mangle Bhulake tujhe main jee saku Jeene ke liye woh jigar mangle Ho jaau fanah yaadon mein teri Pikar jo aisa zahar mangle Khud ki aehmiyat janna ho sanam Toh mujhse meri nazar mangle |
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Har kisi ko kisi ka safar chahiye -
1st July 2009, 03:19 AM
Har kisi ko kisi ka safar chahiye
Bahana ke bas mukhtsar chahiye Samandar mai milna hai majboori uski Nadi ko bhi koi humsafar chahiye Jahan tumse mil kar kuch dair therun Bas aisi koi rehguzar chahiye Ye lafzo.n ke humpar chlenge na mantar Jo qatil bhi ho wo nazar chahiye Wo bulandi ki zomo.n mai hai, ab mera Nishana lagaane ko sar chahiye Hathelyo.n ko milaane ki zaroorat na ho Duwaao.n mai itna asar chahiye Ye dil rifaaqato.n ka mara hua Isse wapas jana hai ghar chahiye |
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1st July 2009, 10:30 PM
sabhee ne bahot hi beHteriN koShiSh kii haii!
bahot bahot mubaaraQbaad sabhee dostoN ko! aapka ~ Dhaval |
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2nd July 2009, 02:20 PM
sabhi gazal ek se badkar ek hain.... ese hai bahut mushkil hai kisi 1 ko choose karna........ per fir bhii main apna vote bhii gupt rakhta hoon
  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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2nd July 2009, 09:43 PM
Sabhi ne behad khubsurat likha hai, is baar ki GTM me gazhals padke mazaa aa gaya aur jaisa ki dilip bhaijaan ne farmaya hai, ki kisi ek ko vote dena wakai bahut mushkil hai, phir bhi vote toh karna hi hai, so hamne bhi vote kar diya hai..........bas ab dua yahi hai ki
the best man/women wins it.................... Nalin Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe, Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe, Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka, woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe  Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com |
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all posts r nice... |
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all posts r nice... -
3rd July 2009, 08:03 AM
sabne bahut acha likha...
ummeed hai ki aage bhi aise hi likhte rehenge sab... ye meri sdc par akhri post shayad iske baad kabhi na aa paun... aap sabke sath bahut acha raha... miss u all... specially diya, sunita dii, pari,omi, sameer,purvi or dinu bhai..or baki sabko bhi... or mayank bhai or zainy ji ko sorry kyunki meri wajah se unhe kayi bar pareshani hui..sorry for that... take care u all.. bye friends |
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5th July 2009, 02:44 PM
lagta hai vicky jii aur nalin jii ko gtm ki ghazalein pasand nahi aayi...........isiliye sdc chhod ke jaane ki baat kar rahe hain...............
kyu nalin jee, vicky jii...........? kya itni buri lagi aapko ghazalein jo ghazal padhte hi aapne sdc chhodne ka faisla kar liya........ Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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6th July 2009, 01:05 AM
Zainy Jee, Aisa Toh bilkul bhi nahi hai ki mujhe gazhal pasand nahi aayi
kher me toh khud gazhal kehna nahi jaanta aur gazhal ko pirona kafi mushkil kaam hai, iske liye ek juda kism ki creativity chahiye hoti hai, so i salute all the people who write gazhals, they are far more creative then me, aur jahan tak SDC ki baat hai toh hamne SDC chori nahi hai, bas thoda aana jaana kam rahega, aur sach kahun toh pehle SDC pe kafi mazaa aata tha, kafi log online rehte hai aur kavitaon aur gazalon ka garam-narm daur chalta tha, par ajkal SDC kafi chhup si ho gayi hai, janee kyun ab woh pehle wala sukun nahi milta................ Baki, me khud kafi moody hoon, infact poem bhi tabhi likhta hun jab koi mujhe behad inspire karta hai....ya phir mere dil ko kabhi behad dard pahuche toh.................i dont write purposely, i just express my feelings...Quote:
Nalin Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe, Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe, Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka, woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com |
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8th July 2009, 04:52 PM
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maine to ye kaha tha ki shayad ab main na ke brabar hi aaun... sdc ko chhodna ya na chhodna mere haath me nhi... thoda kam me busy ho gaya hun so ab time nhi lagta.. ghazlein achi thi tabhi to voting ki... khair.. jab bhi moka milega to main aa jaunga... ok bye tc |
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8th July 2009, 07:51 PM
SAB NE ACHA LIKHA HAI YE KYSE HO SAKTA HAI KOI TO SAB SE ACHA LIKHY JAYSE MAIN LIKHTA HON ..YAR TUM LOG MUJE BHULHE GAYE KYSE DOST HO. HAYRAT HAI KISI NE YAD TAK NAHI KIA MUJE KABI. DIL TOOT GAYA MERA .KOI TUKRY UTHAYE PLZZ...
@ TOPIC YAAR SAB NE NICE AND ACHA LIKHA HAI LAKIN AIK HAI JIS NE BOHAT ACHA LIKHA HAI SAB HE DOST HEIN PER FAISLA BI TO KERNA HAI NA ES LIYE APP SAB KO KISI AIK KO BEST KEHNA HOGA CHALO MAIN KEH DETA HON MERI TRARF SE BEST HAI MAIN KHUD.  NICE WELDONE. AB APP LOGON KI BARIH AI K KIS NE SAB SE ACHA LIKHA HAI APNI APNI PASSND BATEN .KHUSH RAHEN SAB..DUAON MAIN YAAD RAKHIYE GA KHUDA HAFIZ. |
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8th July 2009, 08:09 PM
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9th July 2009, 02:48 PM
DostoN....meri aapse guzarish hai ke aap pehli ghazal " AansooN se tar ho meri nazar tum ko is se kya"...
ko filhaal vote na karein....mujhe ya baat pata chali hai ke is member ne apne doston ko apni ghazal ke baare me bataya hai,for voting...i have proofs.... mai dusre moderators se discuss karungi ke kya kiya jaaye... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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9th July 2009, 04:25 PM
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Mujhe nahi lagta ke aap sahiN hai, Main itna surely keh sakta huN ke is member ne apni gazal kounsi hai yeh nahi bataya hoga... kyunki yeh member mera bhi dost hai... Rahi baat sirf Invite karne ki to usse yeh sabit nahi hota ke usne use apni gazal per vote karne ke liye kaha hai, main surlly keh sakta hun charo gazal kis kiski hai... kis member ne kounsi gazal likhi hai .. agar aap janna chahe to mujhe Pm ker den main bata dunga....... aur phir bhi aap aisa action lenge to us member per kya guzrengi zara aap hi khudko uki jagah rakhker soch lijiye... main sure hun usne apni gazal ke bare mein kisi se nahi bataya hai... kyunki main bhi uska dost huN aur aap mera vote dekh sakte hai maine kisko kiya hai..... main janta hun usne use sirf invite kiya tha but Rizi bhi surely nahi keh sakta tha ke woh hi uski gazal hai.... Phirse ek baar soch lijiye main kya kehna chah raha hun....  Agar maine kisi ko vote ke liye invite kiya aur use apnio gazal ke bare mein nahi bataya to kya uska andaz sahi nahi ho sakta ke yehi meri gazal hai... aur usne mera naam le liya to kya main ne use bataya hi hai kya.. nahi woh itna to janta hai ke mainne participent kiya hai.... une mera naam le liya to kya galat ho gaya...  
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9th July 2009, 05:08 PM
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I am sure all SDC loving members will dissent from your extreme reaction. BUT EVEN IF MYSELF BE ALONE TO SAY: kindly consider this post as my formal dissent ..further kindly allow me to say that rather than performing as a facilitating moderator...a behaviour akin to school master was betrayed. I do not know who the accused is.but i can make out from the quality of the ghazal that he is not an ordinary member. a great disservive seems to have been done to him. I SINCERELY HOPE THE HARM IS NOT IRREPARABLE. I dont think anyone should be in any evidence finding detective business here...anyway it will be one members word agaist another...but even if the guilt is proved was the reaction congruent to the supposed crime? there would have been more decorum if this matter was handled more delicately and in private realm. public flogging se kisi ko kya haasil ho gaya-- aur sochiye agar koi jurm hua hi na ho to? in the long run today will be a sad day for SDC family sorry |
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9th July 2009, 06:01 PM
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chocboy saheb.....i am more concerned about my members dignity....thats the reason why, i have neither mentioned his/her name on the thread,nor have i mentioned anything about that proof......but i did talk to the contestant personally before posting this matter here,......even if it is proved that the proofs are genuine,and even if we have to remove that ghazal from the contest, nobody will ever know who that contestant was,we will not be declaring the name of that contestant........nobodys reputation will ever be hurt... but i cant even oversee,those proofs,'coz other contestants are also equally important to me... I have mailed all the details to mayank jii......let him come and decide...what is to be done.... I request you all to wait until he comes back thanks Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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9th July 2009, 06:39 PM
well moHterma Mayank jee appko hi support kerieN ge jaanta hoN woh jab bhi aaieN aur kiya chara hai unke pass siwaaey appki baat maanane ke ???
maiN ne kuch din pehle appko reply kiya tha jis meN app ne likha tha keh "islaH-e-Sukhun" banana bewakoofi hogi , jisko pehle to edit nahieN kiya gaya aur mayank jee ne approve ker diya mager mere jawab jaane ke baad mere jawab aur appke jawab ko bhi edit ker diyaa gaya smajh yeh nahieN aata keh SDC per saare masaail meN app ki shirakat kiyoN hoti hai sirf ? aur kitne aHbaab app ki waja se SDC choR daiN ? appko aman passand nahieN hai ? well appne jo ukhaaRna hai kisi bhi rukan ka app uKhaaR laiN even to mayank too , ban kerna hai khushi se kijiye . |
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9th July 2009, 07:31 PM
Zainy..........main as a member baat karna chahti hoon, main ek MODERATOR ki hasiyat se baat nahi kar rahi.
1. jisko jo gazal acchi lagegi woh usko hi vote karega. 2. Jis member ki yeh gazal hai woh mera bahut hi jayada aziz hai. yeh jaante hue bhi maine usko vote nahi kiya. kyuNki muje kuch khamiyan nazar aaye uski gazal meiN. 4. muje sabhi participant ke naam maloom haiN kyuNki maiN bhi SDC ki MODERATOR hoon. agar aisi baat hoti to kya main usko vote nahi kar sakti thi??? 5. maine 4th gazal ko vote kiya hai...yeh baat members bhi jaante hoNge kyuNki ab voting visible hai. 6. phir kya fark padta hai kisi ne bataya hai apne frndz ko ya nahi bataya. yeh meri rai thi as a member.......baaki tum MODERATOR ho. baaki MODs se baat kar lena, kya khayal hai unka....vaise aur baaki MODERATOR aur hai kaun kaun jo on-line rehte haiN, shayad SUNITA VIRENDER (myself), MAYANK jii aur TUM. mere khayal se yeh sahi nahi hai jo tum keh rahi ho aur......kuch bhi kehne se phele yeh sochna chahiye ki us members ki kya feelings hoNgi yeh padne ke baad.....agar mere saath aisa hua hota to shayad main ................????? kuch aur nahi kehna chahti. mere khayak se GTM contest ki band kar dena chahiye....har baar koi naya lafda taiyaar ho jata hai. agar mere es review ke baad mujhe BAN karna hai to beshak karwa dijiye khushi se muje koi afsos nahi hoga. kyuNki muje behad afsos hua hai ek MOD. ke aise behaviour se jo doosro.n ke emotions nahi samaj sakta .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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9th July 2009, 09:31 PM
SALAM JI SALAM.
ARY YE SAB KYA HO RAHA HAI KOI MUJE BATAYE GA,K MERE VOTE SE KYA HO GAYA HAI.ZAINY MEDAM AIK BAAT KAHON MIND NA KAREN GA.DISHA MERI KAREEB 1 SAAL SE DOST HAI MUJE PATA HAI WO KIS TARAH OR KIS TYPE KA LIKHY GI MAIN NE SARI GAZAL PARHI THI MUJE PTA THA K DISHA HE APNI GAZAL MAIN .N KA KABI KABI ISTMAL KERTI HAI.OR ES KI URDU BI THORI KAMZOR HAI JAYSE K APP NE ES KI GALTIAN NIKALNI THI.I M RIT. AGER KUCH GALAT KAHA TO APP BATAO MUJE BAS ES NE KAHA THA K TUM AJ KAL SDC PER Q NAHI AA RAHE WAHAN AIK NEW TOPIC HAI MAIN NE KAHA MAIN ATA HON .ES LIYE AYA WERNA MAIN NE NAHI ANA THA BAS MUJE PATA HAI K APP LOG BAS ADMIN OR MODERATORS HONE K NATEY APNI BAAT KO HE SAI KAHO GY.KOI KUCH BI KAHY APP NE NAHI SUNENI . APP JO MARZI KARO MUJE KUCH FARQ PARTA MAIN NE KUCH GALAT NAHI KIA OR NA HE MAIN NE KISI K KEHNE PER VOTE DIA MUJE PATA HAI WO JAYSI HAI NA US NE MUJE BATA,OR MAIN NE NAAM ES LIYE CHANGE KIA THA K US NE BAAD MAIN KAHA K TUM NE YE KYA KIA HAI MERA NAAM Q LIKHA WO MERI GAZAL NAHI HAI MAIN NE KAHA DISHA MUJE PATA HAI GALTIAN TUMHARI GAZAL MAIN HE HOTI HEIN.PHR ES NE KAHA K MERA NAAM NAHI LIKHNA THA AB WO SAMJH GY K MAIN NE TUMHEN KAHA HAI.OR AYSA HE HUA.MUJE NAHI THA PATA MERI CHOTI SI GALTI SE ITNI BAAT CHALI JAYE GI. SAB KO MERI TARAF SE SORRY OR DISHA APP KO BOHAT BOHAT SORRY MERI WAJA SE APP KI MEHNAT ZAYA HO GAI . AB APP LOG KHUDBATAO MAIN NE KYA GALAT KAHA OR KYA GALAT KIA.APP KI JO MERZI HAI JO KERNA CHAHEN KAREN.THEEK HAI,HO SAKE TO MUJE MAAF KIJIYE JO WAPIS AYA SDC PER.Q K PAHLE MUJ PE ILZAM THA K MAIN COPY PAST KERTA HON..ES LIYE MAIN CHALA GAYA THA.KHYR AB TO ANE K LIYE KUCH RAHA HE NAHI APP LOG MUJE BANNED KERDO GY I KNOW.KOI BAAT NAHI BAS APP LOG KHUSH RAHO JAYSE BI KHUDA APP SAB KO SALAMAT RAKHE .AMEEN. OR APP SAB KO KHUSH RAKHE. AMEEN. ALLAH HAFIZ... |
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9th July 2009, 10:31 PM
Hello All my dear family members.....
Main jo bhi keh raha hu woh aap sabke parivaar jan ki haisiyat se keh raha hu... Main nahin janta ki woh kaun hai ya kiski gazal hai. Maine toh abhi tak sabhi gazlein padhi bhi nahin hain... Na vote kya hai.... But kuchh baaton se hurt hua isliye aana pada... Zainy Sister... Agar koi member apne doston se kehkar vote mangta bhi hai, toh bhi isme humein koi kada rukh nahin apnana chahiye.. Main nahin manta ki is gazal ko itne vote "sirf" isliye mile honge ki usne vote maange..... Aur agar isi wajah se vote mile hain toh aap hi bataiye sis, kya ye competition khud ko bada aur dooro ko chhota saabit karne ke liye bana hai? Kya koi prize hai??? Ya kuchh bhi aisa jise paakar koi khush ho.. Haan shayad hai.. Apne doston aur is parivaar ki nazron mein khud ko achha shayar saabit karne ka mauka hai.... But koi bhio vote maangkar toh khud ko sabki nazro se gira hi lega na. Toh hum kyu rokein usse?????? Sunita Di... Agar koi bachha cheating kar raha ho, ya, examiner ko galatt fehmi hi ho jaaye ki cheating ho rahi hai, toh exam cancel kar dena solution to9h nahin hai. Un bachhon ki sochiye jo dil se padhai karte hain aur bade mann se exam dete hain... Unhe saza dena insaaf toh nahin.... Mujeeb Ji... Mayank bhai Zainy ko hi support karien zarooru nahin.. But Zainy ke emotions bhi kahin na kahin sahi bhi toh hain. Aap toh jaante hi hain ki Mods khud toh particip[ate karte nahin aur woh ye jo kuchh bhi karte hain, hum sabke liye hi na.. Isme unka khud ka toh koi bhi swarth nahin... Toh kyu hum baar baar unpar ungliyan uthate rehte hain????????? Rizi Ji... Please apne font change karein aure sabs CAPS mein na likhein. Kuchh samajh nahin aaya.... CHOCBOY: Ur english is a very funny language......  The privacy of the name has been implemented to keep the contest unbiased. Let us all respect this fact and play the game with rules..... Lets just end this issue with a simple pledge that we shall all abibe by the rules. Else begin games at Chit Chat with ur own rules. Trust me, no one will stop U.......... |
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9th July 2009, 10:40 PM
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Sunita Di... Agar koi bachha cheating kar raha ho, ya, examiner ko galatt fehmi hi ho jaaye ki cheating ho rahi hai, toh exam cancel kar dena solution to9h nahin hai. Un bachhon ki sochiye jo dil se padhai karte hain aur bade mann se exam dete hain... Unhe saza dena insaaf toh nahin.... Dear Amit.......aap kaise keh sakte haiN ki es member ne cheating ki hai, agar galat-fehmi ho jaye to student object ko karega hi na....yahan har koi mehnat karta hai, koi bhi membar paise dekar gazal nahi likhwata hoga...sabhi khud jod-tod kar likhtey haiN ! maine to yehi kaha hai ki kisi ke kehne se koi fark nahi padta, har koi apni marzi se vote deta hai. aur maang kar koi etne vote hansil nahi kar sakta, aapki yeh baat mujhe sahi lagi...aur es baat mein dum hai. maang kar hum 2-3 vote le sakte haiN maximum, par etne jayada impossible muje nahi lagta ki hume es baat ko yoon yahan uchalna chahiye tha.....jaise ki us gazal ki voting mannna karke...muje yehi baat buri lagi. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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9th July 2009, 10:46 PM
I completely agree with u Di.. Aur maine toh baat shuru is yahi keh ke ki thi ki humein is issue ko public nahin karna chahiye.....
Maine ye bhi toh kaha na ki ho sakta hai ki examiner ko galatfehmi ho jaaye..... mujhe toh sirf aapke ek baat padhke dukh hua.... Ki koi aapko bann karna chahe toh kar de.... Di ye ek parivaar hai.. Haine.. Agar bachhe jhagda karein tohbade sambhaal lete hain.. Agar bade jhagda karein toh joint families nuclear ban jaati hain... Parivaar toot jaate hain.. Aapne emothional hokar bahut badi baat keh di didi...... Aur agar main apni badi behen ko jaanta hu, toh aap bhi maante ho ki woh baat galat thi.... Di... Plz apne woh alfaaz wapis lelo.. Kuch unsocial elements ki wajah se already kaafi daraarein aa gayi hain.. Humein milkar iski such shaanti ko wapis laana hai aur waapis isse utna hi rangeen banana hai... Di plz jaane ki baat mat karo... And Zainy sister, plz aap bhi maan jao.. Chalo dono hug karo. Aur mujhe bhi ek hug do.... Lets get over this small issue and reunite to improve this beautiful little family of ours..... |
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9th July 2009, 11:03 PM
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excillent.....bahut khoobsurat andaaz hai....best of luck Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./ |
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10th July 2009, 08:05 AM
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zainy jii..ye sab kya ho raha hai.... agar aise hum kisike bhi kehne se kisiko vote karein ya na karein to humara apna wajood kya hai.... koi shakhs jyada se jyada kitne bandon ko keh sakta hai ki mujhe vote karein... agar apko lagta hai uski 16 votes hi cheating se hai ye galat hai na... kam se kam ye to soch lo ki aap is bar kispe ungli uthaa rahi ho... mujhe pata hai ki yahan pe sdc ki importance sdc members se jyada hai to ghalat bhi nhi hai...kyun khel humesha khilaadi se bada hota hai.... mujhe firse kisi controversy ka hissa nhi banna tha..but is bar apne iljaam ghalat shakhs pe lagaya hai... sunita di ne jo bhi kaha sahi kaha....she is always respectable to me... diya ki ghazal ka to mujhe pata hi nhi tha is baar kyunki main to pehle hi yahan pe kam aata hun...or fir use hi vote kar baitha... shayad uske ehsaas mujhe pasand aaye... mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki ab aapko fir se main aapka dushman lag raha hun... or mayank bhai bhi ab sirf ek hi kaam karne aayenge.... wo bhi sabko pata hai... wo kabhi time pe mojood nhi hotey... yahaan ye kahein ki invisible ho jate hai koi bhi problem dekhke... main ye nhi kehta ki mods har bar ghalat hotey hain but kabhi kabhi ho jate hain....kyunki halat humesha ek se nhi hote... sdc pe mujhe lagbhag ek sal honey wala hai..but aajtak mujhe ye ek parivar hoke bhi parivar nhi laga... sorry to say that... yahan pe mods ke liye kisi ki member ki importance nhi hai.... sdc sirf ek makaan banke reh gaya hai... ghar to kabka toot gaya ... jarurat padi to fir aaunga.... vicky |
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10th July 2009, 12:37 PM
its good. all ghazals are nice. I voted !
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10th July 2009, 08:40 PM
UNFAIR UNFAIR UNFAIR
Zainy ji, yeh kya baat hui, is baat ka kya sabut hai ki ap jo keh rahi hain woh ekdum sahi hain, me issay pehle bhi kafi cheezen SDC pe hote huye dekha hun, if ur really concerned about dignity of member then have a look around u will see, how members dignity is messed up? anyways, me toh sirf yahi kehna chahta hun ki is tarah se ap contest ke bech me logon se yeh appeal kar rahi hain ki kisi ek gazhal pe vote na karein, yeh toh bilkul bhi wajib nahi hain, agar apko kisi se koi shikayat hai, toh ap unse PM pe baat karein, yun saari mehfil ke beech me ap kisi pe ilzaam nahi laga sakti, sirf ap moderator hain toh apko is baat ka koi haq nahi ke ap kisi ko be-abroo karein................ mujhe apki yeh line padke ki gazhal pe koi vote na karein, mujhebahut dukh hua.. Zainy ji, me apko bahut manta hun, apki bahut respect karta hun, infact mujhe toh yeh lagta tha ki jo shaqs itna khubsurat likhta hai woh man ka bhi khubsurat hoga............. ap is tarah se bhari mehfil me kisi ko be-abroo kareingi socha nahi tha................. kuch gazhalon ka andaaz-e-bayan hi aisa hota hai ki ap turant samajhlete hain ki yeh gazhal ki shaqs ki likhi huyi hain................. me bhi gazhal padke samajh gaya tha ki yeh gazhal kisne likhi hai............. aur jis person ki yahan baat ho rahi hai, woh meri dost hain aur me jahan tak jantahun woh aisi bilkul bhi nahi hai, bahut hi nek-dil imnadaar aur shareef hain...................... Please moderators, do the justice............... Quote:
Nalin Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe, Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe, Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka, woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com |
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10th July 2009, 10:40 PM
mein yaha sirf itna hi kehna chahoonga ki agar jis shayer ko yaha accused kiya ja raha hai..agar usne mujhe vote kerne ko nahi kaha toh I M SURE usne kisi ko bhi vote kerne ko nahi kaha honga..kyonki mein use bahut achchhe se jaanta hu woh shayer aisa hargees nahi ker sakta...
waise bhi aapne dekha honga ki mein pehli baar kisi matter mein aap sabke beech hu..kya kerta mujhe lagta hai woh shaks bikul be gunaah hai..isi liye bolna bada... fe amaan allah... Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./ |
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11th July 2009, 07:19 AM
Amit Bhai, apki baat sahi hai ki, SDC ek pariwar hai aur sabko ek-saath rehna chahiye, par ek saath ka matlab yeh bilkul bhi nahi ki kisi bhi tarah ka injustice sehen kar liya jaayega, jahan tak me samjhta hun ki yeh bahut badi baat hai ki ap kisi member par cheating ka ilzaam laga dein woh bhi ek contest ke darmiyaan, aur woh bhi us member par jo ki SDC se kafi waqt se judi hain, ek umda shayraa hain aur abhi tak is contest ko lead kar rahi hain.............
Ap khud sochiye koi umda shayaraa bhala vote maang-maang kar apni dignity ko yun barbaad toh nahi karengi........... Main is mamle me ek post pehle bhi de chuka hun, aur ab yeh dusri post bhi likh raha hun, kyunki yeh baat mujhe bahut hurt huyi hai aur mujhe yeh nagawaar hai ki is tarah meri dost diya par koi bhi ilzaam lagaye. Meri dost diya ki sharafat ka issay bada saboot aur kya doon ki, cheating ka ilzaam unpe lagaya gaya, aur beech mehfil me unhe beabroo kiya gaya, par unhone palat ke koi bhi jawab nahi diya, unhone apni dignity maintain karke rakhi hai........... Aur Sach Kahun is incident ke baad toh ab mujhe lagta hai ki, SDC - GTM ka haal indian parliament jaisa ho gaya hai, jahan bina kisi baat ke kisi pe bhi tohmat lagayi jaa rahi hai, mera mann toh SDC se pehle hi thoda ukhda hua tha, par ab toh is incident ne mujhe sochne par majbur kar diya hai................ Quote:
Nalin Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe, Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe, Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka, woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com |
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11th July 2009, 08:52 AM
koi jawab to de do sabki baaton ka... moderators aise ghum hai jaise bharey saawan me baadal ghum ho jate hain.... kya aapke paas ab kehne ko kuch nhi hai... zainy ji plzz show us the proof.... aapne wo ilzaam kyun lagaya...
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11th July 2009, 01:19 PM
Vicky ji aur Nalin ji........the list of friends given by both of you has one thing common......the name on the top.............which is very interesting
kya apko nahin lagta ke top par Sunita ji ka naam hona chahiye tha? List of Freinds of Vicky ji specially diya, sunita dii, pari,omi, sameer,purvi or dinu bhai..or baki sabko bhi... or mayank bhai or zainy ji ko sorry kyunki meri wajah se unhe kayi bar pareshani hui..sorry for that... List of Freinds of Nalin ji DIYA_JALE bROKEN hEART sUNITA jI Ek_Gazhal (Purvi Ji) Praneeta Lamha & Muskaan Arora ........................Apka dost ........................Fezan . . Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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11th July 2009, 01:51 PM
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diya meri best frnd hai or use main kabhi khona nhi chahta...or sunita di ko didi bolta hun..so wo meri apni hui..to wo kabhi mujjhse door nahi jayengi itna bharosa hai mujhe... insaan ko aapno se jyada doston ke khone ka gham hota hai..ye bat mujhse behtar shayad hi koi samjh sake.... wo song suna hai aapne.. ki baaki sab sapne hotey hain apne to bus apne hotey hain... diya ko maine tabhi frst prefernce di hai kyun dii gar rooth bhi gayi to unhe main mana lunga but diya ko khoney ka risk main nhi le sakta... baki aap sunita di or diya se bhi pooch lo... or mujhe nahi lagta maine diya ka naam pehle likh ke ghalat kiya isliye... diya or mere rishte ko koi kuch bhi kahega to mujhe bura lagega..or fir jab mujhe bura lagta hai to fir sabko pata hai kya hota hai... ok thanks have a nice day... |
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11th July 2009, 01:56 PM
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Fezan jee, jo sawal aapne yahaN uthaye hai uska jawab aapko achhi tarah maloom hai gar yaad nahi aaraha hai to maiN yaad dilati hun http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=63270 tab aapko sunita di ki naam per Ghazal likhne ka khayal nahi aaya.........how interesting kisika dost hona ya kisika naam frnd list mein top mein rakhna koi gunah hai kya ? aap is msg se kya batana chahate hai ehi ki yeh dono mere dost hai tabhi yahaN aaye hai..? baki logoN ke baaremeiN aapki kya khayal plz vo bhi bata dijiye maiN khamosh hu iska matlab yeh nahi ki maine koi gunah kiya hai .....sirf meri Di ke khatir chup hu main (Sry Di aapke mana karne ke baad bhi main is thread per aayi hun kya karooN ab mujhse raha nahi jata am sry)  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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11th July 2009, 02:11 PM
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Fezan ji......bada ajeeb sa laga aapka yeh post kar, kuch bhi samaj nahi aaya ki aap kya kehna ya batana chah rahe haiN...  vaise maine to kabhi bhi aisa nahi socha ki mera naam kis ki list mein opper hai aur kis ki list mein neeche hai. mujhe to bas yeh padkar accha lagta ki main en sabke kareeb hoon, aur en sabki list mein mera naam hota hai, es se badkar mere liye kuch nahi. dil mein izzat aur pyar hona chahiye, naam aage peeche hone se koi fark nahi padta....khaas kar muje to nahi fark padta aur na hi maine aisa kabhi socha hai....! VICKY aur DIYA, jis baat ka koi matlab hi nahi hai uska jawaab dene ki bhi jaroorat nahi hoti. mujhe esi liye es baat ka jawaab dena pada ki kahiN ek aur panga na khada ho jaye....so pls es LIST wale topic ko band kar dijiye. FEZAN jiii, aap bhi pls es baat ko khatam kijiye...yeh betuki baat hai, mere liye naam aage peeche hona koi mayne nahi rakhta....! aap apni LIST mein mera naam TOP par likhna .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th July 2009, 02:11 PM
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Nalin Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe, Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe, Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka, woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com |
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11th July 2009, 02:32 PM
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ham ne to dil jalaa ke sar-e-aam rakh diyaa Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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11th July 2009, 06:16 PM
main bahut dino se yaha sab hote dekh raha hun so socha aja main b apne dil ki kah hi deta hun
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11th July 2009, 06:35 PM
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bura to mujeh aapki hi bata ka laga aap itni jaldi sabr kaise kho sakti hai aur ise GTM ko band karne ki baat galat hai .... GTM galat nahi hia ... humm galat hai ...!! ye bas aapko hi nahis abse kah raha hun ] aur jaha tak mujhe zainy ji sahi lagi..... par iska matlab nmahi ki diya galat hai .. galatfahmi ... jaldbaji... ya bahut se karan ho sakte hia confusion ke ..... plz sirf un dono ko bat karne de ........ ye theek hia aap diya ke dost hai.......... lekin diya ko bat karne de pahle.... bhagwaan uski madad karta hai jo khud ki madad kare.. iska matlab yeh hia ki pahle banda khud kare fir uski help hoti hai ... diya ko kahne nahi dete ho aur aise babaal machaye ja rahe hai ...... is baat ka fark sirf diya aur zainy ji pe pad raha hia... bol koe ja raha hia ... [b] aur yaha bahut log sirf poetry ke liye aate hia.. in sab cheezo ke liye nahi .... ye mera dost woh dost iska list mai naam pahle baad main yaar aap log poetry kaise likhte ho... poetry mai itni badi badi baten aur yha pe itni si baat pe jane kya kya babaal.. even character pe ungli ..... zainji ji ......... ise orgnize karti hia maien dekah hia woh kitni mehnat karti hai... woh kisi dost ke liye nahi karti ....woh sabke liye karti hai .... mai unki said enahi le raha kyunki mai is site pe personaly kisi ko b nahi janta aur na hi koe relation banane ki koshish karta hun taki mai sirf poetry karu ........ par yaha poetry hoti kaha hai ... kya ksis thread pe ksis ghzal ya poem pe aise itne bade koe comment karta hai .... nahi .... nahi par jaha bahas huee ki sab aa jate hai ... yaar ye net hai .......... maien bhi bahut ladayee ki hai bahut relation banaye hai... end of teh day ... aapke pas sirf aapka fan aapka hunar bachta hai... use sambhalo..... aur plx ye sab band karo..... diya if u r hurt . i m sorry ........ main hi mafi mang leta hun tumse ... plz yaha sab ko roko .... itna bada dil hona chi chahiye tumhara agar tum poet ho to ab jis ke jii me.n aaye vahii paaye raushanii ham ne to dil jalaa ke sar-e-aam rakh diyaa itni badi baat likhi hi tumne dil jaalne ki baat ki hai ... aisa kar bhi do... kyunki mai tumko begunah manta hun .......... aur maien tumko vote kiya hia... main tums eumeed to yahi karta hun ... zainy ji se hos akta hai galatfahmi huee ho.......... baat kaise b ho sakti hia......... par itni badi nahi hai ..... haan tumhurt huee ho to i m sorry ......... maine kabhi is tarah poetry form pe sorry nahi likha but i ms aying to u... jabki mere in sab se kuch b lena dena nahi hai.. tumhaar b in cheezo se kuch lena dena nahi to tum b saf maf karo bhool jao.. aur plz aap sab fir se mil jul kar rahe.. ek acha mahol banaye mujeh nahi pata maien kya kya likh diya hai... jo dil mai aaya likh diya hai ........ bas mujeh lagta hia har koe yaha likhne ke liey pahle aata hai baki sab baad mai hota hai ...... isliye pahle is jagah ko likhne ke kabil to banaye fir aage ki baten kare if i hurt soemoen i m sorry regards janumanu |
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