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Raat Phir Aaj Khwaab Ki Hogi..! - 28th September 2015, 02:04 PM

Ek halki phulki peshkash... kaafi pehle likhi thi .. aapke nazar kar raha hun..


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28th September 2015, 03:00 PM

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Ek halki phulki peshkash... kaafi pehle likhi thi .. aapke nazar kar raha hun..


रात फिर आज ख्वाब की होगी..
ख्वाब में उस गुलाब की होगी..

यूँ चले आओगे जो महफ़िल में..
किरकिरी माहताब की होगी..

हैं अगर वो शरीक-ए-ग़म मेरे..
कैसी हालात जनाब की होगी..

तुमसे हम मिल ही जायेंगे आखिर..
ये कहानी किताब की होगी..

आशिक़ों, जां ली जायेगी जिसके..
हाथ शीशी तेज़ाब की होगी...

है सिफर भी रेयाज़ी* का हिस्सा..
शायरी भी हिसाब की होगी..

*गणित (mathematics)

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wahhhh kya baat hai

Kunaal ji....aap kamaal ka likhte ho...bas aik shiqayat hai aapse ki aap aaj-kal kam nazar aate ho sdc par...maiN chahti hu ki etna khoobsurat likhne wala shayar har roz bazm meiN hazir ho...taaki nye shayar aapse bahut kuch seekh sakeN.

aapki shayri ki tareef kya kare ham...aapke likhe lafz khud bolte hai...bazm meiN aate rha kijiye. accha lagta hai aap jaise shayroN ko padna.

aik aur baat ki aap hindi meiN post karte hai kuch member aise bhi haiN jo hindi nahi pad paate to wo etne khoobsurat kalaam padne se reh jaate hai so please agar aap bura naa maane to roman hindi meiN bhi likh diya kijiye

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28th September 2015, 04:37 PM

waahh kkyaa baat hai kunaal bhai...... behad ummdah kalaam peshe nazar kiyaa hai aapne......

har ek sher me rawaani badhti hi jaati hai..... aur gahraai bhi hoti jaati hai... bas yun samajh len dil tak utar gayee ye ghazal.... likhte raha kijiye....

aate rahiyega..

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28th September 2015, 07:13 PM

waah!kya kahne.....
dil se daad is khoobsoorat ghazal par......

khush rahein..



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28th September 2015, 11:41 PM

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Bahut khoobsurat rachna hay.Hisaab hisaab mein tumne ek behad khoobsurat ghazal likh dali

तुमसे हम मिल ही जायेंगे आखिर..
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namaste Kunaal bhai,

yooN to nasr'nigaari par khaaksaar ki pakaD kaafi mazboot hai lekin aapki is kaavish ne bezabaaN kar diya hai, yaqeen kijiye

sukhan'fehmii meiN zabaan ki dhaar ka badaa qaay'il hooN aur aapne is Ghazal meiN kuch ash'aar aise baaNdhe haiN ke paDh kar voh khushi haasil hui jo bachpan meiN ek rupaiiya milne par hua karti thi

mujh na-ehl ki daad qabool farmaiiye, aap jaise nau'jawaan sho'ra ki "aisi" fiqr-e-fann dekh kar dil do-baala ho jaata hai



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Ek halki phulki peshkash... kaafi pehle likhi thi .. aapke nazar kar raha hun..


रात फिर आज ख्वाब की होगी..
ख्वाब में उस गुलाब की होगी..

यूँ चले आओगे जो महफ़िल में..
किरकिरी माहताब की होगी..

हैं अगर वो शरीक-ए-ग़म मेरे..
कैसी हालात जनाब की होगी..

तुमसे हम मिल ही जायेंगे आखिर..
ये कहानी किताब की होगी..

आशिक़ों, जां ली जायेगी जिसके..
हाथ शीशी तेज़ाब की होगी...

है सिफर भी रेयाज़ी* का हिस्सा..
शायरी भी हिसाब की होगी..

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यूँ चले आओगे जो महफ़िल में..
किरकिरी माहताब की होगी..

तुमसे हम मिल ही जायेंगे आखिर..
ये कहानी किताब की होगी..

Waah kya baat hai Kunaal Bhai. Dil Khush ho gaya Ghazal padh kar. Maiksh Bhai ne to sab kuch keh hi diya hai. Aur KaavishoN ka intezaar rahega.

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wahhhh kya baat hai

Kunaal ji....aap kamaal ka likhte ho...bas aik shiqayat hai aapse ki aap aaj-kal kam nazar aate ho sdc par...maiN chahti hu ki etna khoobsurat likhne wala shayar har roz bazm meiN hazir ho...taaki nye shayar aapse bahut kuch seekh sakeN.

aapki shayri ki tareef kya kare ham...aapke likhe lafz khud bolte hai...bazm meiN aate rha kijiye. accha lagta hai aap jaise shayroN ko padna.

aik aur baat ki aap hindi meiN post karte hai kuch member aise bhi haiN jo hindi nahi pad paate to wo etne khoobsurat kalaam padne se reh jaate hai so please agar aap bura naa maane to roman hindi meiN bhi likh diya kijiye

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waahh kkyaa baat hai kunaal bhai...... behad ummdah kalaam peshe nazar kiyaa hai aapne......

har ek sher me rawaani badhti hi jaati hai..... aur gahraai bhi hoti jaati hai... bas yun samajh len dil tak utar gayee ye ghazal.... likhte raha kijiye....

aate rahiyega..

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waah!kya kahne.....
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khush rahein..
Aapka bhi shukriya ..

Aap aaye aur tareef ki aapka shukriya

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Ek halki phulki peshkash... kaafi pehle likhi thi .. aapke nazar kar raha hun..


रात फिर आज ख्वाब की होगी..
ख्वाब में उस गुलाब की होगी..

यूँ चले आओगे जो महफ़िल में..
किरकिरी माहताब की होगी..

हैं अगर वो शरीक-ए-ग़म मेरे..
कैसी हालात जनाब की होगी..

तुमसे हम मिल ही जायेंगे आखिर..
ये कहानी किताब की होगी..

आशिक़ों, जां ली जायेगी जिसके..
हाथ शीशी तेज़ाब की होगी...

है सिफर भी रेयाज़ी* का हिस्सा..
शायरी भी हिसाब की होगी..

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Ek halki phulki peshkash... kaafi pehle likhi thi .. aapke nazar kar raha hun..


रात फिर आज ख्वाब की होगी..
ख्वाब में उस गुलाब की होगी..

यूँ चले आओगे जो महफ़िल में..
किरकिरी माहताब की होगी..

हैं अगर वो शरीक-ए-ग़म मेरे..
कैसी हालात जनाब की होगी..

तुमसे हम मिल ही जायेंगे आखिर..
ये कहानी किताब की होगी..

आशिक़ों, जां ली जायेगी जिसके..
हाथ शीशी तेज़ाब की होगी...

है सिफर भी रेयाज़ी* का हिस्सा..
शायरी भी हिसाब की होगी..

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behad khoob rehi yeh aapki halki phulki peshkash.......
pata nahi agar yeh halki phulki hai tou bhari kisay kehte heiN.

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beautiful Kunaal ,

bohut pasand aayi. kam shabdon mein kya dilkash samaa bandha hai.


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Bahut khoobsurat rachna hay.Hisaab hisaab mein tumne ek behad khoobsurat ghazal likh dali

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Iss hisaab mein puure marks .Keep it up..few lines

Mil jate bhuule raste Jahaan
Hasil manzil kathin raah par hogi

Mehnat Zindagi ka sabab Yahan
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Take care
Shukriya di ..

aapke marks mil gaye aur kya chaiye ,,.. aapki likhi lines dil ke qareeb raheNgi ,,

aap bhi apna khyaal rakhiye ..

Aapka apna

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namaste Kunaal bhai,

yooN to nasr'nigaari par khaaksaar ki pakaD kaafi mazboot hai lekin aapki is kaavish ne bezabaaN kar diya hai, yaqeen kijiye

sukhan'fehmii meiN zabaan ki dhaar ka badaa qaay'il hooN aur aapne is Ghazal meiN kuch ash'aar aise baaNdhe haiN ke paDh kar voh khushi haasil hui jo bachpan meiN ek rupaiiya milne par hua karti thi

mujh na-ehl ki daad qabool farmaiiye, aap jaise nau'jawaan sho'ra ki "aisi" fiqr-e-fann dekh kar dil do-baala ho jaata hai



Rab kare aap ke qalam ki zahaanat din do-gunii raat-cha'gunii tarraqi kare

duaaoN meiN yaad rakhiyega

khush rahiye

dua'go
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Maikash bhai salaam

aapko apne khaak alfaaz ki parijaai karte dekh main apne khuloos ka izhaar nahi kar sakta .. yaqiin janiye mujhe meri is ghazal se itni umeed nahi thi .. par ab sochta huN ki waqa'ii meri kalam ne zaroor kuch accha bikhera hoga .. aur aapne bohat badi baat keh di 1rs wali.. maine apne guftgu pe bhi iska zikra kiya hai .. aapne mere khaak alfaaz ko ek maqaam de diya hai .. aapka behad shukrguzaar huN

umeed hai aage bhi raabta aise hi ban rahega ..

apna khyaal rakhiye aur aate rahiye

aapka dost

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6th October 2015, 04:16 PM

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bahut umdah likha hai kunaal bhai..............................
shukriya sir..

bade din baad aapko dekh raha huN .. aap mere aashiyane maiN tashreef laaye ye badi baat hai ..

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यूँ चले आओगे जो महफ़िल में..
किरकिरी माहताब की होगी..

तुमसे हम मिल ही जायेंगे आखिर..
ये कहानी किताब की होगी..

Waah kya baat hai Kunaal Bhai. Dil Khush ho gaya Ghazal padh kar. Maiksh Bhai ne to sab kuch keh hi diya hai. Aur KaavishoN ka intezaar rahega.

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aapko pasand aayi khaaksar ki ghazal maiN mutmaiN huN ye jaan ke .. jaldi hi maiN apni taaza ghazal yahN pesh karunga jo maine abhi tak kahiN nahi pesh ki hai .. phir se shukriya aap aaye

Khyal rakhiye apna

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kirkiri mehtaab ki hogi......Wah Wah mazaa aa gaya kunaal behad umdaa ghazal huyi hai daad qubool farmiyeGaa
kabhi kabhi hum kuch aisa likh dete haiN jo bas ek lafz ek sher ko kahin se kahiN le jaata hai .. aapne jis jumle ka zikra kiya ye kuch aisa hi hai .. is 'kirkiri' ko jab maine use kiya aur pehli baar kisi ko sunaya .. usne mujhe kaha ki ye kirkiri jahan chaspa kiya hai tumne .. poori ghazal keh di hai ek hi misre maiN .. aaj yahaN ye saaf hota nazar aa raha hai ..

aapka shukriya aap aaye

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Ek halki phulki peshkash... kaafi pehle likhi thi .. aapke nazar kar raha hun..


रात फिर आज ख्वाब की होगी..
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यूँ चले आओगे जो महफ़िल में..
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आशिक़ों, जां ली जायेगी जिसके..
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- सिफर

behad khoob rehi yeh aapki halki phulki peshkash.......
pata nahi agar yeh halki phulki hai tou bhari kisay kehte heiN.

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khyaal rakhiye apna

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Wah !

Kya likha hai jenab. Qaatilana adaa..

Bohot baDhiya laga kalaam, aur yeh do ash'aar dil ke zyaada qareeb rahe.

Likhte rahiye.
Bohat shukriya janaab..

jo sher aapne chaspa kiye hai ghazal se yahan mere bhi bs wahi fav haiN.. ap aaye khaak bande ki parijaa'ii ki behad khushi hui ..

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bahut sundar likhaa hai kunaal
haan anil yaar ..

lipistick powder bindi sab laga ke sundar banaya hai hota kaise nahi .. hahahaha ..

aap aaye bada maza aaya jaldi milte haiN kahiN ..

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beautiful Kunaal ,

bohut pasand aayi. kam shabdon mein kya dilkash samaa bandha hai.
Shukriya Bhabhi

Yahi to shayri hai .. lafz kam aur baat kahaani .. mujhe nahi maloom maiN kitna safal hua .. par khushi hai ki sabki bharpoor muhabbat dekhne ko mili yahaN ..

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21st October 2015, 09:20 AM

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ek halki phulki peshkash... Kaafi pehle likhi thi .. Aapke nazar kar raha hun..


रात फिर आज ख्वाब की होगी..
ख्वाब में उस गुलाब की होगी..

यूँ चले आओगे जो महफ़िल में..
किरकिरी माहताब की होगी..

हैं अगर वो शरीक-ए-ग़म मेरे..
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तुमसे हम मिल ही जायेंगे आखिर..
ये कहानी किताब की होगी..

आशिक़ों, जां ली जायेगी जिसके..
हाथ शीशी तेज़ाब की होगी...

है सिफर भी रेयाज़ी* का हिस्सा..
शायरी भी हिसाब की होगी..

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kyaa kahne ... Waah

khoobsurat ghazal ke liye dilee mubaaraqbaad !!!!!!!




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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