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lOG hAR mOD pAY rUK rUK kAY sAMBHALTAY kYON hAIN
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lOG hAR mOD pAY rUK rUK kAY sAMBHALTAY kYON hAIN - 2nd December 2004, 01:28 AM

Log har mod pay ruk ruk kay sambhaltay kyon hain,
Itnay dartay hain tho phir ghar say nikaltay kyon hain !

Main na jugnu hoon diya hoon na koi taara hoon,
Roshni vaalay meray naam say jaltay kyon hain !

Neend say mera taaluq hi nahin barso sein,
Khawab aa aa kay meri chaht pay tehiltay kyon hain !

Mod hota hai jawaani ka sambhalnay kay liyey,
Aur sab log yahin aa kay pisaltay kyon hain !

Log har mod pay ruk ruk kay sambhaltay kyon hain,
Itna dartay hain to phir ghar say nikaltay kyon hain !


Sans leta hoon main to Zakhmo ko hawa lagti hai,
Tu hi bata A Zindagi, Tu meri kya lagti hai
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12th November 2007, 12:49 PM

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Log har mod pay ruk ruk kay sambhaltay kyon hain,
Itnay dartay hain tho phir ghar say nikaltay kyon hain !

Main na jugnu hoon diya hoon na koi taara hoon,
Roshni vaalay meray naam say jaltay kyon hain !

Neend say mera taaluq hi nahin barso sein,
Khawab aa aa kay meri chaht pay tehiltay kyon hain !

Mod hota hai jawaani ka sambhalnay kay liyey,
Aur sab log yahin aa kay pisaltay kyon hain !

Log har mod pay ruk ruk kay sambhaltay kyon hain,
Itna dartay hain to phir ghar say nikaltay kyon hain !


Main na jugnu hoon diya hoon na koi taara hoon,
Roshni vaalay meray naam say jaltay kyon hain !

Mod hota hai jawaani ka sambhalnay kay liyey,
Aur sab log yahin aa kay pisaltay kyon hain !

well ritten gd ji,yeh ashaar bahut pasand aaye.yunhin likhte rahen


yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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12th November 2007, 10:50 PM

jo hukam akeli ji aapka koshish karenge shayad aapko pasand aaye hamara likha. aap hamari likhai per waqt dete hai uska tahe dil se shukrya.
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Yeh poem bhi apki nahi hai sir....
   
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Yeh poem bhi apki nahi hai sir....
Hamara to kuch bhi nahi hai sir aap ye kyo sochte hai kisab kuch hamara hai ya aapka hai.
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Hamara to kuch bhi nahi hai sir aap ye kyo sochte hai kisab kuch hamara hai ya aapka hai.
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Jo likha hai uskaA mazaa kyon nahi lete
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