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Thumbs up Ghazal: ZiNdagee kyaa haii ko'i bataaye to sahee...! - 17th November 2009, 09:58 AM

Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

baRe dinoN baad aik ChhoTii si koShiSh ko lekar bazm meiN haaZir huaa huuN.. kal raat baiThe huye zeh'n meN ik baat aayiiN.. tou lafzoN ke Zar'iiYe uNhe peSh karne kii koShiSh kii mere dil ne ! ummid kartaa aapko mere ehsaas pasaNd aayeNge! aap sab ke Qeemtee raa'ey kaa mujhe iNtezaar raheNgaa! mulA'iizaa farmaayeN!


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ZiNdagee kyaa haii ko'i bataaye to sahee
asliyat kyaa haii ko'i diKhaaye to sahee

pal meN detii KhuShi to pal meN detii hai Ghum
maamalaa kyaa haii ko'i sunaaye to sahee

sach ko deKhe ik arsaa beet gayaa hai ab
JhooTh kaa pardaa ko'i haTaaye to sahee

log kehte hain haNs ke jeelo ziNdagee
Khud ke Ghum pehle ko'i Bhulaaye to sahee

taarifoN se rauShan hum ho gaye hai.n bahot
daaG hum par bhee ko'i lagaaye to sahee


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ज़िंदगी क्या है कोई बताए तो सही
असलियत क्या है कोई दिखाए तो सही

पल में देती ख़ुशी तो पल में देती हे गम
मामला क्या है कोई सुनाए तो सही

सच को देखे इक अरसा बीत गया हे अब
झूठ का परदा कोई हटाए तो सही

लोग कहते हैं हंस के जीलो ज़िंदगी
खुद के गम पहले कोई भुलाए तो सही

तारीफों से रौशन हम हो गये है बहोत
दाग हम पर भी कोई लगाए तो सही

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17th November 2009, 10:26 AM

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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

baRe dinoN baad aik ChhoTii si koShiSh ko lekar bazm meiN haaZir huaa huuN.. kal raat baiThe huye zeh'n meN ik baat aayiiN.. tou lafzoN ke Zar'iiYe uNhe peSh karne kii koShiSh kii mere dil ne ! ummid kartaa aapko mere ehsaas pasaNd aayeNge! aap sab ke Qeemtee raa'ey kaa mujhe iNtezaar raheNgaa! mulA'iizaa farmaayeN!


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ZiNdagee kyaa haii ko'i bataaye to sahee
asliyat kyaa haii ko'i diKhaaye to sahee

pal meN detii KhuShi to pal meN detii hai Ghum
maamalaa kyaa haii ko'i sunaaye to sahee

sach ko deKhe ik arsaa beet gayaa hai ab
JhooTh kaa pardaa ko'i haTaaye to sahee

log kehte hain haNs ke jeelo ziNdagee
Khud ke Ghum pehle ko'i Bhulaaye to sahee

taarifoN se rauShan hum ho gaye hai.n bahot
daaG ham par bhee ko'i lagaaye to sahee


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ज़िंदगी क्या है कोई बताए तो सही
असलियत क्या है कोई दिखाए तो सही

पल में देती ख़ुशी तो पल में देती हे गम
मामला क्या है कोई सुनाए तो सही

सच को देखे इक अरसा बीत गया हे अब
झूठ का परदा कोई हटाए तो सही

लोग कहते हैं हंस के जीलो ज़िंदगी
खुद के गम पहले कोई भुलाए तो सही

तारीफों से रौशन हम हो गये है बहोत
दाग हम पर भी कोई लगाए तो सही

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Dhaval bhai namaste,

bahot masoom sa likha hai aapne...mujhe bahot acha laga...sacha laga..

yunhi likhte rahiye..khush rahiye..god bless...

सच को देखे इक अरसा बीत गया हे अब
झूठ का परदा कोई हटाए तो सही

तारीफों से रौशन हम हो गये है बहोत
दाग हम पर भी कोई लगाए तो सही

bahot khoob..daad...

aapka dost,
Pradhyuman


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Smile Very Touchy - 17th November 2009, 11:41 AM

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Mere Pyaare dostoN:



Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

baRe dinoN baad aik ChhoTii si koShiSh ko lekar bazm meiN haaZir huaa huuN.. kal raat baiThe huye zeh'n meN ik baat aayiiN.. tou lafzoN ke Zar'iiYe uNhe peSh karne kii koShiSh kii mere dil ne ! ummid kartaa aapko mere ehsaas pasaNd aayeNge! aap sab ke Qeemtee raa'ey kaa mujhe iNtezaar raheNgaa! mulA'iizaa farmaayeN!


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ZiNdagee kyaa haii ko'i bataaye to sahee
asliyat kyaa haii ko'i diKhaaye to sahee

pal meN detii KhuShi to pal meN detii hai Ghum
maamalaa kyaa haii ko'i sunaaye to sahee

sach ko deKhe ik arsaa beet gayaa hai ab
JhooTh kaa pardaa ko'i haTaaye to sahee

log kehte hain haNs ke jeelo ziNdagee
Khud ke Ghum pehle ko'i Bhulaaye to sahee

taarifoN se rauShan hum ho gaye hai.n bahot
daaG ham par bhee ko'i lagaaye to sahee


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ज़िंदगी क्या है कोई बताए तो सही
असलियत क्या है कोई दिखाए तो सही

पल में देती ख़ुशी तो पल में देती हे गम
मामला क्या है कोई सुनाए तो सही

सच को देखे इक अरसा बीत गया हे अब
झूठ का परदा कोई हटाए तो सही

लोग कहते हैं हंस के जीलो ज़िंदगी
खुद के गम पहले कोई भुलाए तो सही

तारीफों से रौशन हम हो गये है बहोत
दाग हम पर भी कोई लगाए तो सही

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Hello Dhaval ji,Kaise hai aap? aaj aapki likhi hui rachana padhi Dil ko chhu gai. Reply karane se apane aap ko rok nahi paai ......aur aapke kahe mutaabik apana reply sirf aapko pm mai nahi aapki is pyaari si post par bhi kar rahi hoon.

Kuchh is tarha se aaj bayaan kiya hai aapne chand baaton ko ki...... jaise laga koi zindagi ke saamane khada rahe kar zindagi ko hi aaina dikha raha hai. kuchh sawaal........ jo shaayad har insaan ke mann mai kahi na kahi kisi na kisi rang mai hote hi hai.

Aapne sach mai bahot achchha likha hai...... is par bas itana kahe sakti hoon ki ..... really very touchy ...and real.... aapne hum sab padhne waalo ke saath saath ....shaayad Zindagi ko bhi uaski sachchaai ka aaina dikha diya,....... aur uase apani haqiqat se rub-ru karwaaya. Thanks Dhaval Ji ....itani pyaari rachana share karne ke liye..... sach bahot pyaara likha hai..... yun hi likhate rahiye ......aur hammesha khush rahiye.

aur aapke sawaal ka jawaab.... ji main thik hoon ....yahaa aana nahi hota aur jab kabhi aati hoon bas sab ko padhati hoon....likhana waise bhi mujhe aata nahi aur .....jo thoda kuchh pahele likh leti thi ab woh bhi likha nahi jaata ....so maaf kijiyega ....iatan waqt yahaan se door rahi. Par main aap sabhi ko padhane to aati raheti hoon.

Aur dhaval ji ek baat kahu.... jab aapko is rachanaa mai chhupe sawaalo ke jawaab mil jaaye to hume bhi bata dijiyegaa...... shaayad humaare bhi kuchh yahi sawaal hai zindagi se.


Bhagwaan ji aapko har khushi de,

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17th November 2009, 02:00 PM

Dhaval jee,
aapki ghazal hume achhi lagi
chand lafzoN main bade khubsurti se bahot kuchh bayan kiye hai aapne
sawal to va kai kamal ka hai magar shayad jawab sochte sochte umr beet jayegi
fir bhi pata nahi chalegi zindagi aakhir hai kya ..?

apna khayal rakhiye
mahfil mein aate rahiye

DuaoN ke saath

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ज़िंदगी क्या है कोई बताए तो सही
असलियत क्या है कोई दिखाए तो सही

पल में देती ख़ुशी तो पल में देती हे गम
मामला क्या है कोई सुनाए तो सही

सच को देखे इक अरसा बीत गया हे अब
झूठ का परदा कोई हटाए तो सही

लोग कहते हैं हंस के जीलो ज़िंदगी
खुद के गम पहले कोई भुलाए तो सही

तारीफों से रौशन हम हो गये है बहोत
दाग हम पर भी कोई लगाए तो सही

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Dhaval Ji....Namaste ! bahut kamaal ka likha aapne kalaam.....sabhi ashaar zindgi ke aas-paas reh kar bahut kuch keh jaate hai....aur bahut kuch dhundne ko mazboor bhi karte hai.....har sher taarif ke kaabil hai....aise hi likhte rahiye....

itna khubsurat likhne ke liye......tahe dil se daad...hazir hai...

khush rahiye...
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17th November 2009, 07:20 PM

bahut achee agzal huyee hai sada asie hee likhte raho


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jai shree krishna, dhaval bhai

bahut din bad aapka likha huva padha. bahut hi acha laga..aapne hamesha ki tara bahut hi acha likha hai....aur aishe hi likhte raihna.....

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Uljhe hue ho miyaaN.. isi liye sawaaL hi sawaal hai kyuN,... khair sawaal hi sahi .. ghazal acchi lagi mujhe.... aise hi likhte rahoo

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Dhawal Bhai.......... AadaaB

Kafi achche ashaar likhe hai aapne kafi asardar lage gazal ka mazmoon aam hain per aapne behad khaas kar diyaa use......Ek behad achchi koshish per dil se daad kabool kijiye... YouN hi likhate rhaiye..

Khush rhaiye..
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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

baRe dinoN baad aik ChhoTii si koShiSh ko lekar bazm meiN haaZir huaa huuN.. kal raat baiThe huye zeh'n meN ik baat aayiiN.. tou lafzoN ke Zar'iiYe uNhe peSh karne kii koShiSh kii mere dil ne ! ummid kartaa aapko mere ehsaas pasaNd aayeNge! aap sab ke Qeemtee raa'ey kaa mujhe iNtezaar raheNgaa! mulA'iizaa farmaayeN!


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ZiNdagee kyaa haii ko'i bataaye to sahee
asliyat kyaa haii ko'i diKhaaye to sahee

pal meN detii KhuShi to pal meN detii hai Ghum
maamalaa kyaa haii ko'i sunaaye to sahee

sach ko deKhe ik arsaa beet gayaa hai ab
JhooTh kaa pardaa ko'i haTaaye to sahee

log kehte hain haNs ke jeelo ziNdagee
Khud ke Ghum pehle ko'i Bhulaaye to sahee

taarifoN se rauShan hum ho gaye hai.n bahot
daaG hum par bhee ko'i lagaaye to sahee


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ज़िंदगी क्या है कोई बताए तो सही
असलियत क्या है कोई दिखाए तो सही

पल में देती ख़ुशी तो पल में देती हे गम
मामला क्या है कोई सुनाए तो सही

सच को देखे इक अरसा बीत गया हे अब
झूठ का परदा कोई हटाए तो सही

लोग कहते हैं हंस के जीलो ज़िंदगी
खुद के गम पहले कोई भुलाए तो सही

तारीफों से रौशन हम हो गये है बहोत
दाग हम पर भी कोई लगाए तो सही

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Dhaval Kem cho

yaar tumharee ghazal humesha kuch naya batatai hai... sach mein bahut achi hai yeh ghazal bhi... saare sher apne mein rozmarra ki baat batate hain... aise hi likhte raho... taec kaer


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kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai

jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...


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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

baRe dinoN baad aik ChhoTii si koShiSh ko lekar bazm meiN haaZir huaa huuN.. kal raat baiThe huye zeh'n meN ik baat aayiiN.. tou lafzoN ke Zar'iiYe uNhe peSh karne kii koShiSh kii mere dil ne ! ummid kartaa aapko mere ehsaas pasaNd aayeNge! aap sab ke Qeemtee raa'ey kaa mujhe iNtezaar raheNgaa! mulA'iizaa farmaayeN!


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ZiNdagee kyaa haii ko'i bataaye to sahee
asliyat kyaa haii ko'i diKhaaye to sahee

pal meN detii KhuShi to pal meN detii hai Ghum
maamalaa kyaa haii ko'i sunaaye to sahee

sach ko deKhe ik arsaa beet gayaa hai ab
JhooTh kaa pardaa ko'i haTaaye to sahee

log kehte hain haNs ke jeelo ziNdagee
Khud ke Ghum pehle ko'i Bhulaaye to sahee

taarifoN se rauShan hum ho gaye hai.n bahot
daaG hum par bhee ko'i lagaaye to sahee


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Dhaval jii,
Namaskaar!

Wah Kya baat hai, bahut achhi Ghazal likhi hai aapne.
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Dil se daad haazir hai..
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BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA

DIL KO CHOO GAYA


JINDAGY KI HAQIKAT HE


JINDAGY BAHUT HIASAN HO JATY HE

JUB APANO ME APANAPAN PA JATY HE

JINDAGY BEHAD HERAN HO JATY HE

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Dhaval Sahab,

Bahot achchha likha hai aapne, har sher zindagi ke bahot kareeb se guzartaa hai,

Tahe dil se mubarakbaad kubul kijiye

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Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

baRe dinoN baad aik ChhoTii si koShiSh ko lekar bazm meiN haaZir huaa huuN.. kal raat baiThe huye zeh'n meN ik baat aayiiN.. tou lafzoN ke Zar'iiYe uNhe peSh karne kii koShiSh kii mere dil ne ! ummid kartaa aapko mere ehsaas pasaNd aayeNge! aap sab ke Qeemtee raa'ey kaa mujhe iNtezaar raheNgaa! mulA'iizaa farmaayeN!


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ZiNdagee kyaa haii ko'i bataaye to sahee
asliyat kyaa haii ko'i diKhaaye to sahee

pal meN detii KhuShi to pal meN detii hai Ghum
maamalaa kyaa haii ko'i sunaaye to sahee

sach ko deKhe ik arsaa beet gayaa hai ab
JhooTh kaa pardaa ko'i haTaaye to sahee

log kehte hain haNs ke jeelo ziNdagee
Khud ke Ghum pehle ko'i Bhulaaye to sahee

taarifoN se rauShan hum ho gaye hai.n bahot
daaG hum par bhee ko'i lagaaye to sahee


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ज़िंदगी क्या है कोई बताए तो सही
असलियत क्या है कोई दिखाए तो सही

पल में देती ख़ुशी तो पल में देती हे गम
मामला क्या है कोई सुनाए तो सही

सच को देखे इक अरसा बीत गया हे अब
झूठ का परदा कोई हटाए तो सही

लोग कहते हैं हंस के जीलो ज़िंदगी
खुद के गम पहले कोई भुलाए तो सही

तारीफों से रौशन हम हो गये है बहोत
दाग हम पर भी कोई लगाए तो सही

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Wah Dhaval Jii,,

Kamal hai,
Aik dam zaberdast,
Hur aik shair dil ke aar paar ho gaya,
Maqta boht hi dard-bhara lagaa....

Likhte rahiye aur apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,,

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Dhaval,

Bahot hi umdaa shaayri likhi hai aapne....parhke bahot achha lagaa....jab koi aapna unchaaiyo.N ko chhoo'ta hai to bahot khushi hoti hai....
Daad to pahale hi de chukii hu....chalo fir se dedeti hu...Meri taraf se daad kabool kijiye....

Likhte raho....

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seedhe saadhe alfaz me bohat kuch bayaan kiya hai aapne.....kaash kisi ko in sawaloN ke jawaab pata hotey.....

aapki ghazal bohat acchi lagi mujhe..

yuhi likhtey rahiye...
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Dhaval bhai namaste,

bahot masoom sa likha hai aapne...mujhe bahot acha laga...sacha laga..

yunhi likhte rahiye..khush rahiye..god bless...

सच को देखे इक अरसा बीत गया हे अब
झूठ का परदा कोई हटाए तो सही

तारीफों से रौशन हम हो गये है बहोत
दाग हम पर भी कोई लगाए तो सही

bahot khoob..daad...

aapka dost,
Pradhyuman

Pradhyuman bhaa'ii:

namaste!

aapne merii koShiSh ko paRhaa aur pasaNd kiyaa mujhe bahot hi KhuShi hu'ii! aapki daad sar'aaNKhoN par! yuuNhi saath dete raheN aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Mere Pyaare dostoN:


Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

baRe dinoN baad aik ChhoTii si koShiSh ko lekar bazm meiN haaZir huaa huuN.. kal raat baiThe huye zeh'n meN ik baat aayiiN.. tou lafzoN ke Zar'iiYe uNhe peSh karne kii koShiSh kii mere dil ne ! ummid kartaa aapko mere ehsaas pasaNd aayeNge! aap sab ke Qeemtee raa'ey kaa mujhe iNtezaar raheNgaa! mulA'iizaa farmaayeN!


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ZiNdagee kyaa haii ko'i bataaye to sahee
asliyat kyaa haii ko'i diKhaaye to sahee

pal meN detii KhuShi to pal meN detii hai Ghum
maamalaa kyaa haii ko'i sunaaye to sahee

sach ko deKhe ik arsaa beet gayaa hai ab
JhooTh kaa pardaa ko'i haTaaye to sahee

log kehte hain haNs ke jeelo ziNdagee
Khud ke Ghum pehle ko'i Bhulaaye to sahee

taarifoN se rauShan hum ho gaye hai.n bahot
daaG hum par bhee ko'i lagaaye to sahee


******************************

ज़िंदगी क्या है कोई बताए तो सही
असलियत क्या है कोई दिखाए तो सही

पल में देती ख़ुशी तो पल में देती हे गम
मामला क्या है कोई सुनाए तो सही

सच को देखे इक अरसा बीत गया हे अब
झूठ का परदा कोई हटाए तो सही

लोग कहते हैं हंस के जीलो ज़िंदगी
खुद के गम पहले कोई भुलाए तो सही

तारीफों से रौशन हम हो गये है बहोत
दाग हम पर भी कोई लगाए तो सही

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Dhaval jii,

Kaise hain aap? wah wah kya kahe .... jo bhi kahe woh kum hi hoga ...

Har sher ek lesson de raha hai aur ... kisi ek ko choose karna na insaafi hogii ....

Ghazal behaad aachi lagii .. yu hi aate rahe aaur mehfil ko char chaand lagatey rahye....

Take care

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Hello Dhaval ji,Kaise hai aap? aaj aapki likhi hui rachana padhi Dil ko chhu gai. Reply karane se apane aap ko rok nahi paai ......aur aapke kahe mutaabik apana reply sirf aapko pm mai nahi aapki is pyaari si post par bhi kar rahi hoon.

Kuchh is tarha se aaj bayaan kiya hai aapne chand baaton ko ki...... jaise laga koi zindagi ke saamane khada rahe kar zindagi ko hi aaina dikha raha hai. kuchh sawaal........ jo shaayad har insaan ke mann mai kahi na kahi kisi na kisi rang mai hote hi hai.

Aapne sach mai bahot achchha likha hai...... is par bas itana kahe sakti hoon ki ..... really very touchy ...and real.... aapne hum sab padhne waalo ke saath saath ....shaayad Zindagi ko bhi uaski sachchaai ka aaina dikha diya,....... aur uase apani haqiqat se rub-ru karwaaya. Thanks Dhaval Ji ....itani pyaari rachana share karne ke liye..... sach bahot pyaara likha hai..... yun hi likhate rahiye ......aur hammesha khush rahiye.

aur aapke sawaal ka jawaab.... ji main thik hoon ....yahaa aana nahi hota aur jab kabhi aati hoon bas sab ko padhati hoon....likhana waise bhi mujhe aata nahi aur .....jo thoda kuchh pahele likh leti thi ab woh bhi likha nahi jaata ....so maaf kijiyega ....iatan waqt yahaan se door rahi. Par main aap sabhi ko padhane to aati raheti hoon.

Aur dhaval ji ek baat kahu.... jab aapko is rachanaa mai chhupe sawaalo ke jawaab mil jaaye to hume bhi bata dijiyegaa...... shaayad humaare bhi kuchh yahi sawaal hai zindagi se.


Bhagwaan ji aapko har khushi de,

Aapki dost: Gudia

Jay Ambe
GuDiyaa jee:

namaste!

maiN ek dam Theek huuN aap sab dostoN ki duaaoN se... aapko meri koShiSh par deKh kar bahot hi Khushi huii... aapne meri koShiSh ko itani baareeqee se paRhaa sukooN milaa..! aapse darKhaaSt yahee haii ki bazm meiN jab bhee waQt mileN aa jaayaa kareN!,, yuuNhi paRhte raheN aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

ShuKriyaa!

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

baRe dinoN baad aik ChhoTii si koShiSh ko lekar bazm meiN haaZir huaa huuN.. kal raat baiThe huye zeh'n meN ik baat aayiiN.. tou lafzoN ke Zar'iiYe uNhe peSh karne kii koShiSh kii mere dil ne ! ummid kartaa aapko mere ehsaas pasaNd aayeNge! aap sab ke Qeemtee raa'ey kaa mujhe iNtezaar raheNgaa! mulA'iizaa farmaayeN!


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ZiNdagee kyaa haii ko'i bataaye to sahee
asliyat kyaa haii ko'i diKhaaye to sahee

pal meN detii KhuShi to pal meN detii hai Ghum
maamalaa kyaa haii ko'i sunaaye to sahee

sach ko deKhe ik arsaa beet gayaa hai ab
JhooTh kaa pardaa ko'i haTaaye to sahee

log kehte hain haNs ke jeelo ziNdagee
Khud ke Ghum pehle ko'i Bhulaaye to sahee

taarifoN se rauShan hum ho gaye hai.n bahot
daaG hum par bhee ko'i lagaaye to sahee


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Dhaval jee,
aapki ghazal hume achhi lagi
chand lafzoN main bade khubsurti se bahot kuchh bayan kiye hai aapne
sawal to va kai kamal ka hai magar shayad jawab sochte sochte umr beet jayegi
fir bhi pata nahi chalegi zindagi aakhir hai kya ..?

apna khayal rakhiye
mahfil mein aate rahiye

DuaoN ke saath

Diya
Diyaa jee:

namaste!

Ghazal ki pasaNdagee ke liye bahot bahot ShuKriyaa'h..! yuuNhi saath dete raheN aage bhee... paRhte raheN..!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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ZiNdagee kyaa haii ko'i bataaye to sahee
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pal meN detii KhuShi to pal meN detii hai Ghum
maamalaa kyaa haii ko'i sunaaye to sahee

sach ko deKhe ik arsaa beet gayaa hai ab
JhooTh kaa pardaa ko'i haTaaye to sahee

log kehte hain haNs ke jeelo ziNdagee
Khud ke Ghum pehle ko'i Bhulaaye to sahee

taarifoN se rauShan hum ho gaye hai.n bahot
daaG hum par bhee ko'i lagaaye to sahee


Aaj aap ki yaha shayri phir se paDhne ko jee chaaha, Dhaval Bhaiya...!

Aapne ne isse bahut saadgi aur masoomiyat ke saath likhaa hai jo hamein behad pasand hai...!

taarifoN se rauShan hum ho gaye hai.n bahot
daaG hum par bhee ko'i lagaaye to sahee


Upar quoted misraa to bas kamaal ka hai...!

Aise hi likhte rahein aur apna khayaal bhi thik se rakhein, ok...?

Aashirvaad ke saath

Jai sHree KrisHna






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Dhaval Ji....Namaste ! bahut kamaal ka likha aapne kalaam.....sabhi ashaar zindgi ke aas-paas reh kar bahut kuch keh jaate hai....aur bahut kuch dhundne ko mazboor bhi karte hai.....har sher taarif ke kaabil hai....aise hi likhte rahiye....

itna khubsurat likhne ke liye......tahe dil se daad...hazir hai...

khush rahiye...
duaaon ke saath...
NareSh bhaa'ii:

namaste!

koShiSh ko paRhne ke liye dil se samjhne ke liye maiN aapka be-Had ShuKraGuzaar huuN... paRhte raheN aage bhee...!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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Kya baat hai Makhta padhkar yu laga mano isse behtar aur koi sher nahi hota is kalam ko mukammal karne ke liye........Good work Dhaval saheb


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bahut achee agzal huyee hai sada asie hee likhte raho
Maasoom bhaiya:

namaste!

kaise hai.n aap? aapko yahaaN deKh kar baRii KhuShii hu'ii.. aapne apnaa Qeemtee waQt diyaa maiN aapka be-had ShuKraGuzaar huuN!

yuuNhi saath dete raheN...! KhuSh raheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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jai shree krishna, dhaval bhai

bahut din bad aapka likha huva padha. bahut hi acha laga..aapne hamesha ki tara bahut hi acha likha hai....aur aishe hi likhte raihna.....

aapki choti behan
Dear saNdhya :

namaste!

kaisii hoN? Shaadi ke baad baRe hi vyast ho gaye hoN ab tou aap! jab bhee waQt mileN aa jaayaa keejiye! saath dene ke liye bahot bahot ShuKriyaa'h!

KhuSh raho!

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Uljhe hue ho miyaaN.. isi liye sawaaL hi sawaal hai kyuN,... khair sawaal hi sahi .. ghazal acchi lagi mujhe.... aise hi likhte rahoo

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Kunaal bhaa'ii:

namaste!

ziNdagee iisi kaa naam hai jo har moD par hameiN aik naye hi sawaal ke saamne KhaRaa kar detee hai bhaa'ii.. aapne apnaa Qeemtee waQt merii koShiSh ko diyaa bahot bahot ShuKriyaa'h... yuuNhi paRhte raheN aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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