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chad chalya -
29th January 2008, 05:42 PM
main bulbula si ik pani da,
do pal jee k muk chalya. main raat di akh da athru si, suraj di kiran payi te suk chalya. aas rakhde si suhave mausam di, aaj hanerian de wich luk chalya. ik sapna dekhya si akh meri ne, jehda adh vichale tut chalya. main jag rusa ke yaar manaya, te aaj oh v chandra chad chalya. my favorite by shiv kumar |
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29th January 2008, 11:07 PM
bhut achha lagea roop ji ek hor purana shyar mud aya
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30th January 2008, 10:22 AM
Roop ji bahut achaa laggaa. Kadey kadey koi ohnaa mahaan shayraaN nu yaad karvaa devey taaN rooh ch jaan pai jaandee hai.
Wasdey Raho tilak... |
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31st January 2008, 02:54 PM
thanx ji.........
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16th February 2008, 03:41 PM
roop jee.....tuhanu bahut der baad padiya aaj, sabto phela eh daso ki tusi kithe busy ho gaye c, aaunde reha karo te dil de ahsaasa.n nu sab naal share karde reha karo.
Shiv Batalvi jee di har poetry dil nu hilla jaundi hai, be-inthaa dard ci una di kalam vich...! aapni likhi poetry v pesh karo....bahut intjaar hai tuhadi poetry da  kush raho .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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17th March 2008, 05:09 PM
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17th March 2008, 05:14 PM
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17th March 2008, 05:24 PM
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17th March 2008, 05:31 PM
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hi dear.thanks for reply.i am busy in ias studies.i don't have so much time.i'll post my own poetry soon. take care |
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